Scriptor Scorpio
Science Hero
Hello guys,
I'd like to say a few words before I start this story off^^
First of all, like Pokémen: season 1, it's already been finished a while ago and so it may not be as serious as coherent as later stories of mine, which I do hope they are
There's also little chance at a schedule slip since you guessed it, it's already finished. It quickly evolved into a quirky and at times very random comedy with lots of references and me trying out my weirdest ideas that hopefully turn out to make you grin a couple of times.
It is also the first true fanfic I wrote and I hope I have improved my further writings since posting this one (though it has been reworked a couple of times to do away with script talk and stuff like that). It's been on Crater and Dox, but those both shut down and you can no longer see it there. Yet, why post it then?
Well, first of all, I like it and I laugh at my own comedy fanfic, because it's my kind of humor so that makes sense.
Secondly, it's my first fanfic which turned out to be longer, but not that long as I anticipated, so somewhere in between.
I like to share it since it got me into writing and into improving my writing through using an existing world but with original characters and plot, for a lot of useful practice (and heaps of fun).
Also, I'd like to thank nya_chan, if she's out there somewhere, for inspiring me to write this with her truly work of art 'APRIL', because it got me into writing Poké fanfics, especially this one^^ Thanks nya!
I do however have no intention of extending or rebooting this story because it wouldn't just be the quirky and utter random comedy it unexpectedly turned out to be. The plot is relatively solid, given the strange world and characters, but the characters' interaction is what I got a lot of practice in writing dialogue and stuff. Hope you guys like it and hope I haven't lost something good along the way writing more serious and dark stories, but we'll see about that
Word of warning: the chapters start out small, but grow rather quickly To comply to the rules and not to leave you with a little tidbit when you were expecting more to eat in a week, I'll add a chapter or two to the first post to keep it a bit filling^^
And so we begin!
The Game Pack- I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy
Part 1: I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...
"Why do I always have to go to get the water bottles?" Casper wined.
A 15 year old boy was complaining about him being always the one that had to
'Go get the water bottles'
And he didn't like it. At all.
Certainly not when he was playing
'STAR WARS TRILOGY'
On his brand new gameboy advance sp.
He didn't have much choice,
so he went down the stairs, into the basement, wining and complaining as he went.
The basement was not so different or special from other basements, although it’s a bit dusty and if you don’t count:
-The endless row of empty bottles that fill most of the shelves
-The pieces of wood that come falling down, every time you move, from the rotten roof
-And some old roof plates, for possible, future use…
When he was about pick up a bottle, he suddenly saw something shining under a pile of dust… He blew the dirt away, which formed a huge cloud in the cramped space… A few coughs and sneezes later, he saw that underneath the grey particles there lied a piece of plastic, in a square form. He recognized it, because it looked like the game he was playing earlier... On the GAME PACK, what it probably was, it said
POKEMON: Special Collection.
He heard a few times about it,
POKEMON,
when his father was talking about 'when he was young' and 'those days' when it was a cold November evening, just like this one... His father had tried multiple times to make him try a game, but without success...
Suddenly,
An idea popped into his head: Why not try it? He had more then enough of most of his games
AND It would make his dad much happier (And less whining) About his okémon...
In the mean while, that same dad asked his wife were young Casper was. Casper’s mom replied with "He’s getting the water bottles out of the basement."
His father panicked for a strange reason and ran down the stairs…
Casper was about to turn the power on, when his father suddenly came running down the stairs, saying "No Casper, no..." But it was already too late...
Part 2: Pixel dudes!
The screen lit up and blinded Casper and his father. A few seconds later, there was no sign of Casper or... It took a while before Casper was brave enough to open his eyes, and when he did, he was shocked by what he saw: Casper opened his yes and screamed, "Aaaaaah! I'm a pixel dude," After which he screamed some more…
Dad (?) said: "Look what you've done! I told you not to touch anything!"
Casper screamed to an even higher tone and then said: "... Uh, you didn't..."
His dad thought for a moment, then decided:
"Don’t touch anything from now on!
Aah!"
He screamed as he saw Casper pushing a button near him, "what did I tell you!"
Casper replied with saying that since he is a pixel dude, he can do anything I want... Which led him to saying: "Yeah freedom!"
"So what I'm still your father, even worse your pixel father!!!" his dad said to tease him.
"Oh man, well easy come, easy go," sighed a disappointed Casper.
"You call opening an interdimensional gate 'easy come'???" his dad asked amazed.
Casper couldn’t reply to that, when suddenly, he remembered something:
"Hey, wait a minute, how do you know all this intersomething stuff?"
Then his dad revealed something unbelievable…: He made the Game Pack...
Casper gasped, because of the startling news and replied with "What?!"
His dad said it once again… But Casper said he heard him the first time, He wanted to know what he was talking about.
"Well, when I was young..." he commenced…
"Oh no, here we go again..." Casper interrupted.
His dad was very angry and silenced him quickly.
After that, he went on with his story…: "Well, as I was saying, when I was young, I was a huge fan of Pokémon and I wanted to live the adventure myself, be in it... So I made The Game Pack. Unfortunately, the experiment failed and I hid it in the basement, where you found it... Casper gasped, for the second time, "WHAT? Why couldn't you hide it in a top secret vault, like everyone else?!"
Dad gave a real lame excuse, "Uh... I ran out of money..."
Casper sighed, whispering ‘typical’, when he remembered another thing… Didn’t he say that the experiment failed? Indeed, he did. Then how did they become pixel dudes?
"All will be explained in time...," his father wisely replied, "but for now, I must show you something..."
Part 3: The close call
Casper followed his dad upstairs, wondering what he was about to see... When they were on the ground floor, his dad told him to look out the window, what he, impatient as he was, immediately did (Wow, that's quite a change...) and what he saw would amaze anyone...
He watched as he saw somebody that looked awfully familiar, about to be attacked by a grey monster that looked a little like a dog... Heroic as he was, he ran out the door, before his dad could say something about his reaction... Casper ran towards the kid, saying: "Hey, leave him alone, get off you grey hound or something!"
But the kid said: "What are you talking about? He's my pet!" Casper gasped again, but silently, then exclaimed, "Your pet?!"
"Yeah," the kid went on, "It's a [pk]Poochyena[/pk], I got it for my birthday, isn't it cool?"
"Hello?"
"Er... hello?"
Casper, who has been speechless for a while, is scared by the yell. "As I was saying, don't you think my [pk]Poochyena[/pk] looks cool?"
"Er... yeah, very cool..." Casper replied.
Casper’s dad had reached the two and took over: "I'm sorry for my son; he's a bit startled by... the environment..."
"Oh sorry, I didn't introduce myself, my name is Joe, I live next door," Joe apologized.
Casper suddenly snapped out of his gaze and introduced himself too. "Nice to meet you, Casper, did you move in here?" Joe asked curiously.
Dad answered in his place: "Yes, we did, we're new here."
"But dad..." Casper uttered.
"I'm sorry", Casper’s dad interrupted,
"But we have to go now; Casper and I have some work to do,
If you don't mind…"
"Off course not, well see ya around Mr...." Joe said.
"Pack," Casper’s dad filled in.
Joe thought for a while, then said:
"See ya later Mr. Pack and… Packman," while pointing at Casper.
Dad and Joe laughed, while Casper still remained petrified...
when they were back inside… Casper’s dad sighed: "Whew that was close..."
Casper, while still gazed, asked, "What is going on here, what was that... that... Poochyena?!
Was it a..."
"Pokémon?" his dad filled in.
"Pokémon..." Casper whispered.
"I think you'll probably want some kind of explanation, right?" his dad asked.
"Yes, please..."
"Well, do you know what the Game Pack did?"
"Yes..."
"Well tell me."
"We're in a videogame?"
His dad made a beep sound and said: "Wrong."
"Huh?"
I'd like to say a few words before I start this story off^^
First of all, like Pokémen: season 1, it's already been finished a while ago and so it may not be as serious as coherent as later stories of mine, which I do hope they are
There's also little chance at a schedule slip since you guessed it, it's already finished. It quickly evolved into a quirky and at times very random comedy with lots of references and me trying out my weirdest ideas that hopefully turn out to make you grin a couple of times.
It is also the first true fanfic I wrote and I hope I have improved my further writings since posting this one (though it has been reworked a couple of times to do away with script talk and stuff like that). It's been on Crater and Dox, but those both shut down and you can no longer see it there. Yet, why post it then?
Well, first of all, I like it and I laugh at my own comedy fanfic, because it's my kind of humor so that makes sense.
Secondly, it's my first fanfic which turned out to be longer, but not that long as I anticipated, so somewhere in between.
I like to share it since it got me into writing and into improving my writing through using an existing world but with original characters and plot, for a lot of useful practice (and heaps of fun).
Also, I'd like to thank nya_chan, if she's out there somewhere, for inspiring me to write this with her truly work of art 'APRIL', because it got me into writing Poké fanfics, especially this one^^ Thanks nya!
I do however have no intention of extending or rebooting this story because it wouldn't just be the quirky and utter random comedy it unexpectedly turned out to be. The plot is relatively solid, given the strange world and characters, but the characters' interaction is what I got a lot of practice in writing dialogue and stuff. Hope you guys like it and hope I haven't lost something good along the way writing more serious and dark stories, but we'll see about that
Word of warning: the chapters start out small, but grow rather quickly To comply to the rules and not to leave you with a little tidbit when you were expecting more to eat in a week, I'll add a chapter or two to the first post to keep it a bit filling^^
And so we begin!
The Game Pack- I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy
Part 1: I wish I'd never asked for a gameboy...
"Why do I always have to go to get the water bottles?" Casper wined.
A 15 year old boy was complaining about him being always the one that had to
'Go get the water bottles'
And he didn't like it. At all.
Certainly not when he was playing
'STAR WARS TRILOGY'
On his brand new gameboy advance sp.
He didn't have much choice,
so he went down the stairs, into the basement, wining and complaining as he went.
The basement was not so different or special from other basements, although it’s a bit dusty and if you don’t count:
-The endless row of empty bottles that fill most of the shelves
-The pieces of wood that come falling down, every time you move, from the rotten roof
-And some old roof plates, for possible, future use…
When he was about pick up a bottle, he suddenly saw something shining under a pile of dust… He blew the dirt away, which formed a huge cloud in the cramped space… A few coughs and sneezes later, he saw that underneath the grey particles there lied a piece of plastic, in a square form. He recognized it, because it looked like the game he was playing earlier... On the GAME PACK, what it probably was, it said
POKEMON: Special Collection.
He heard a few times about it,
POKEMON,
when his father was talking about 'when he was young' and 'those days' when it was a cold November evening, just like this one... His father had tried multiple times to make him try a game, but without success...
Suddenly,
An idea popped into his head: Why not try it? He had more then enough of most of his games
AND It would make his dad much happier (And less whining) About his okémon...
In the mean while, that same dad asked his wife were young Casper was. Casper’s mom replied with "He’s getting the water bottles out of the basement."
His father panicked for a strange reason and ran down the stairs…
Casper was about to turn the power on, when his father suddenly came running down the stairs, saying "No Casper, no..." But it was already too late...
Part 2: Pixel dudes!
The screen lit up and blinded Casper and his father. A few seconds later, there was no sign of Casper or... It took a while before Casper was brave enough to open his eyes, and when he did, he was shocked by what he saw: Casper opened his yes and screamed, "Aaaaaah! I'm a pixel dude," After which he screamed some more…
Dad (?) said: "Look what you've done! I told you not to touch anything!"
Casper screamed to an even higher tone and then said: "... Uh, you didn't..."
His dad thought for a moment, then decided:
"Don’t touch anything from now on!
Aah!"
He screamed as he saw Casper pushing a button near him, "what did I tell you!"
Casper replied with saying that since he is a pixel dude, he can do anything I want... Which led him to saying: "Yeah freedom!"
"So what I'm still your father, even worse your pixel father!!!" his dad said to tease him.
"Oh man, well easy come, easy go," sighed a disappointed Casper.
"You call opening an interdimensional gate 'easy come'???" his dad asked amazed.
Casper couldn’t reply to that, when suddenly, he remembered something:
"Hey, wait a minute, how do you know all this intersomething stuff?"
Then his dad revealed something unbelievable…: He made the Game Pack...
Casper gasped, because of the startling news and replied with "What?!"
His dad said it once again… But Casper said he heard him the first time, He wanted to know what he was talking about.
"Well, when I was young..." he commenced…
"Oh no, here we go again..." Casper interrupted.
His dad was very angry and silenced him quickly.
After that, he went on with his story…: "Well, as I was saying, when I was young, I was a huge fan of Pokémon and I wanted to live the adventure myself, be in it... So I made The Game Pack. Unfortunately, the experiment failed and I hid it in the basement, where you found it... Casper gasped, for the second time, "WHAT? Why couldn't you hide it in a top secret vault, like everyone else?!"
Dad gave a real lame excuse, "Uh... I ran out of money..."
Casper sighed, whispering ‘typical’, when he remembered another thing… Didn’t he say that the experiment failed? Indeed, he did. Then how did they become pixel dudes?
"All will be explained in time...," his father wisely replied, "but for now, I must show you something..."
Part 3: The close call
Casper followed his dad upstairs, wondering what he was about to see... When they were on the ground floor, his dad told him to look out the window, what he, impatient as he was, immediately did (Wow, that's quite a change...) and what he saw would amaze anyone...
He watched as he saw somebody that looked awfully familiar, about to be attacked by a grey monster that looked a little like a dog... Heroic as he was, he ran out the door, before his dad could say something about his reaction... Casper ran towards the kid, saying: "Hey, leave him alone, get off you grey hound or something!"
But the kid said: "What are you talking about? He's my pet!" Casper gasped again, but silently, then exclaimed, "Your pet?!"
"Yeah," the kid went on, "It's a [pk]Poochyena[/pk], I got it for my birthday, isn't it cool?"
"Hello?"
"Er... hello?"
Casper, who has been speechless for a while, is scared by the yell. "As I was saying, don't you think my [pk]Poochyena[/pk] looks cool?"
"Er... yeah, very cool..." Casper replied.
Casper’s dad had reached the two and took over: "I'm sorry for my son; he's a bit startled by... the environment..."
"Oh sorry, I didn't introduce myself, my name is Joe, I live next door," Joe apologized.
Casper suddenly snapped out of his gaze and introduced himself too. "Nice to meet you, Casper, did you move in here?" Joe asked curiously.
Dad answered in his place: "Yes, we did, we're new here."
"But dad..." Casper uttered.
"I'm sorry", Casper’s dad interrupted,
"But we have to go now; Casper and I have some work to do,
If you don't mind…"
"Off course not, well see ya around Mr...." Joe said.
"Pack," Casper’s dad filled in.
Joe thought for a while, then said:
"See ya later Mr. Pack and… Packman," while pointing at Casper.
Dad and Joe laughed, while Casper still remained petrified...
when they were back inside… Casper’s dad sighed: "Whew that was close..."
Casper, while still gazed, asked, "What is going on here, what was that... that... Poochyena?!
Was it a..."
"Pokémon?" his dad filled in.
"Pokémon..." Casper whispered.
"I think you'll probably want some kind of explanation, right?" his dad asked.
"Yes, please..."
"Well, do you know what the Game Pack did?"
"Yes..."
"Well tell me."
"We're in a videogame?"
His dad made a beep sound and said: "Wrong."
"Huh?"
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