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The gate of Schartzchen

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007pikachu

ohhhhhhh yeah
Welcome to the gate of Schartzchen sign up

here is what it's all about
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A long time ago their was an immortal named Xavier the mighty. He lived in buzzing metropolis of his home in Schartzchen a place most people call London in the 1800's. Most think that can't be killed, but that's wrong. An immortal can be killed by another immortal which their was one other in Schartzchen, Roosevelt the terrorious and his group "the Santehio".


A few years later Xavier went missing and was pronounced dead from Roosevelt.


Now day the city of Schartzchen is under crysis so the wizard of the town named Leo gave six random people a sword which each one defied a charectaristic of a great man or so called immortal. The sword of strength, The sword of agility, The sword of intelligence, The sword of bravery, the sword of power and the sword of careness. When the person gets that charectaristic the sword go's into the gate of Schartzchen

your job is to sign up on one of those swords. When all of the are in the gate Xavier the Mighty comes out to save Schartzchen.


Format



Name: Not your name the name of person that gets the sword
Occupation: If your person is in school just put school if they're a stay at home mom or any other way that they don't go to school or work keep this blank
Age: older then 15 younger then 50
sword: Just choose one of the swords. swords not availabe: none
Home: I don't care if it's real or not


History: say the past of your person.

hopes: Say your hopes of your person

appearence: tell a brief example of how he appearence

personality: tell a brief example of what their personality is

sword description: tell a brief description of the appearence of the sword

sword element: what elemental power does your sword have choices: fire shadow water psychic sky and ground

sword power: have a power that has relations with your element

Dragon name: every sword can turn into a dragon just put the name of your dragon here.

Dragon description: appearence personality and power of the dragon still the dragon has to be related to your element


Rules
All Serebii rules
if your people get denied three times you cannot sign up again
At every sign up ending but mocharobotmaster so I know you read the rules

banned list
_________
_________
_________


Post ahead and remember the fate of Schartzchen lies on your hands.
 

/Exiled/

EternallyParadoxical
Plots are required to be between 400-600 words in length... This plot so happens to be 190 in length... The plot seems ok, but is altogether lacking in all areas of description....

How does Leo tie in? Why did he give super powerful weapons to random people? Wouldn't he want to make sure these blades got to wielders who could use them well? How can they summon dragons?... You need to elaborate on things so they make sense.

You have a decent idea here, but there's A LOT! To work on here.

I shall refer you to the rules...

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=107376
 
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RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
When you say "Follow Serebii Rules" in your own RPG Rules, not following the basic RPG Rules really counts against you. Write a proper plot please.
 
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