The Great Journey

[Flareon22]

This is my first sprite comic so here we go:

Episode 1-
Episode 2-

If you would like to be in my comic please give me the sprites of your characters, give them a personality, say what they want from life and what pokemon they will start off with.

 

[Red_Apple_Can]

What journey? Did he just decide to go on a journey?

 

[PK]

Call me a hypocrit if you must but. DON'T START OFF IN LITTLE ROOT. And a comic is supose to have talking charcters not a narrator that talks all day. So you might wanna change the comic a bit, And where are the credits for sprites.

 

[Flareon22]

PK, I am not having thew characters talk as it is somthing that will hopefully make my comic unique. I do not want it to be somthing that is just a repeat of somthing before, even though I did start of in Littleroot, hehe. And I forgot about giving credit, I will do this as soon as I can.

 

[Matt Silver]

Wow, this must be the most generic, boring version of journey comics EVER. Its so damn unappealing, the sprites suck, the narration is just stupid and hell it is no different then any other Littleroot comic.
Give it up before u get chewed on and spat out like a raw piece of meat.

 

[SoulGuardian]

This is my first sprite comic so here we go:

Episode 1-
Episode 2-

If you would like to be in my comic please give me the sprites of your characters, give them a personality, say what they want from life and what pokemon they will start off with.

Yes that is BORING! I agree with Matt. Please make the characters talk and redo the sprites! Don't do the same mistakes I did!

 

[Capt.Miko]

The plot is way too generic and doesn't stand out in any way, and the title isn't that spectacular either. Try adding some twists to your comic such as having the characters start in another town, give them reasons to start their journey or even use different starters (or even use made-up Pokémon!) are just a few ways to spice up an otherwise plain journey comic. The narrator thing is alright in moderation, but with too much it gets boring. The recolors are good though.

 

[Matt`]

Did you even read the stickies? Especially post #2
Do's and Don'ts: Makings of a Comic

Wow, this must be the most generic, boring version of journey comics EVER. Its so damn unappealing, the sprites suck, the narration is just stupid and hell it is no different then any other Littleroot comic.

That pretty much sums it up.
Though, don't give up too easily. You just need some changes. A LOT of changes.

 

[Controller of Flames]

I guess post three isn't good enough "Name", just bescause it only has 1 guidleine!?!

The sprites how long did it take you ten minutes? Why I could have sworn they looked alot like Brendan and May!

 

[Flareon22]

Well done controller of flames it did take me 10 minutes, as they are recolors you idiot not new sprites.

To everyone you will be pleased to know that I am quiting this comic already, I know I suck big time so I will keep away from this. I think I should concentrate more on my schoolwork than silly little pokemon comics and stories anyway.

 

[PK]

Then why did you post this thing in the first place.

 

[Davis the Gamer]

Well done controller of flames it did take me 10 minutes, as they are recolors you idiot not new sprites.

To everyone you will be pleased to know that I am quiting this comic already, I know I suck big time so I will keep away from this. I think I should concentrate more on my schoolwork than silly little pokemon comics and stories anyway.

Recolors take 2 minutes to do. -_-;