You know what? I've extremely impressed. This could be compared with some of the best comics. I enjoyed reading it, and it even made me smirk! This is one of the best beginning comics in these past few months. I'll be sure to stay tuned, as I believe you when you say it'll get better.

With all of my respects, and the best of luck. ~FF
By the way, I have a Fakemon that I created a few months ago. I was feeling very miserable (for a very personal reason) and I decided to create a Pokemon that was trapped in it's misery. It's name is Turtrot, and it DOES have an evo, but I don't really like it currently. >_< Anyway, he's a depressed little Ghost Pokemon that can spread sadness with every breath. He often droops his head and stares at the ground, hence the current pose.