Nice chapter MM would scan for errors but CBA. I take it this will be like Emerald and have both teams?
Also will Max be getting any Pokémon and will Jack get a gulpin/swalot?
loving Max's denial that he's in a fabric. Just get 3.3 to talk and sow him (standing back so he doesn't get sick at Motor B drinking pop up blood!)
Both teams will certainly be involved in one way or another, though I have yet to make a final decision as far as Team Aqua's involvement.
Max MIGHT get a Pokémon. It's something I'm considering.
As for Jack, Gulpin is a definite possibility. I won't say any more than that at this point.
And don't worry, Jack's not finished trying to convince Max that he's in a fanfic.
Haven't had time to work on the next chapter, and my weekend might be pretty busy. It's hard to say at this point when the next chapter will be out, but rest assured, it'll get done.