The Kanto Region Reloaded

[RiverStone]

The Kanto Region Reloaded!! AKA: KRR

Main Characters:
Alisha

Silver

Riku

Villans
None yet!


Prolouge:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Prolouge-Intro.png
Episode 1-The New Trainer:[url]http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode1-TheNewestTrainer.png[/url]
Episode 2- Meeting Silver Stone:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode2-MeetingSilver.png
Episode 3-Viridian City! We're Here!!:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode3-ViridianCityWerehere.png
Episode 4- Devon Corp.:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode4-DevonCorp.png
Episode 5-Off Through Viridian Forest Pt. 1:http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode5-OffThroughViridianForestPt.png
Episode 6-Off Throguh Viridain Forest Pt. 2: Comming Soon!
Episode 7: Comming Soon!
Episode 8: Comming Soon!
Episode 9: Comming Soon!

Credits:
Silver92
VGMaps
Seberii Fourms-Spriters Recource
PokemonElite2000
Pokesho

 

[SamsGFX]

It's okay, the prolouge is wierd though. If this is set in the Kanto region, how come there's a Skitty??
The speech bubbles are confusing to read, but apart from that, it's cool xD

 

[RiverStone]

Skitty is the Prof.'s Pokemon... Hes origanally from Hoenn...

 

[SamsGFX]

I see, ^_^

 

[Celeste]

Does Riku have any pokemon?

 

[jellsprout]

Oh great. Another "I don't know you, but let's go on a journey" comic.
There is many wrong with this comic.
-Two persons who don't know eachother decide to go on a journey together before even knowing eachother's name? I don't think Aisha ever told here name to Riku anyway.
-Getting to choose from Jirachi, Celebi and Mew for starters? Nobody, I repeat, nobody in the Pokémon world has one of those except for some scientists on Cinnabar who have a Mew. So why would the Professor just go around and give them away for free?
-Mr. Stone flies over Silver for an important meating, but all he does is give him an upgraded Pokédex and Town Map. That just isn't right.
-Then there are off course the regular grammar mistakes and beginner mistakes. I'll give you one tip if you want this comic to succes: don't make this a regular journey comic. We all played the games here, most of us watched the Anime here and some of us red the Manga here, so why would we want to something identical to that again? Try to make it original.

 

[Electrode]

So lets see whats wrong with this comic:

-ever heard of grammar
-its freakin' hard to see who's talking first
-since when is pewter city the second city it's viridian ~*duh*~
-how the hell did pidg (purposly spelling mistake) get to pidgeo (same) at level 4
-and hello it's an adventure comic its been done like a million times
-so would you like to explane how prof. Birch got to Kanto
-one last thing episode 2 panel 3 is an invert never never never nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr invert coulers ( basic spriter training)

 

[Zero Nexus]

hmm,not bad!

 

[RiverStone]

1. Jirachi, Celebi, and Mew are starters for one reason... ORIGINALITY!!!
2. Professor CLEARWATER(not Birch) is from Hoenn... He's Not Professor Birch... He just has his sprite... (Durr...)
3. It is Viridian... Take a harder look...
4. Its common sense to see who's tralking 1st... Unless your stupid... then you wouldnt say Lets battle, then Hi...
5. My Grammar is fine... Whats wrong w/ it???? Do tell...
6. Adventure commics are interesting... no one wants a fat bumb Pokemon Trainer sitting at their house all day in a comic...

 

[~Jeremy~]

Well I like it alot! Plz keep on making them. I tried to make a comic before but the first 3 posts were critics and blahblahblahblahblah. BTW The link for comic 1 doesn't work.

 

[Chaotic Houndoom]

I like it so far! ^^

 

[~Jeremy~]

Hey aren't you gonna update soon? I have been waiting for the exciting conclusion.

 

[Dean]

I like your comic. very good.

 

[shadowofdreams]

i can't view the links!

 

[RiverStone]

Ahh! I gforgot i posted these! But anywasy, i really didnt like these comics.. Im in the process of making a new comic... So a MOD/ADMIN can close this...