The Kanto Region

[Marioman]

Just a little comic i came up with. Its about a trainer named Matt's journies in the Kanto Region. I hope you like it!

#1: Beginning Trainer
#2: First Lesson
#3: No Offense
#4: Counter Attack
#5: Free Pokemon Right In Front Of You
#6: An Urgent Letter
#7: Stupid Bird

Newest Issue: Stupid Bird

I will soon make character bios. Until then, enjoy.

I'm using photobucket now, so they shouldn't be blurry anymore.

Credit:

TSGK- Pokemon R/S Overworld Sprites
tSR- Pokemon Trainer Sprites and Backgrounds
Coronis- Overworld Pokemon Sprites

 

[Edo~Taku]

um......not really a full out laugh but more a chuckle ^^. Make it a bit longer, a few more sprites, and....mabye....someone who comes along and laughs at the person? Also it is a bit fuzzy for me, mabye use photobucket?

 

[Bu†cH]

Cliched, but yet it has some barely used jokes.

But don't use Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald overworlds in Fire Red/Leaf Green environments. It'll look really bad like the last comic that did that.

Overall Score: Average

 

[Marioman]

I'll try to take all of your advice. Until then, #4 was added.

 

[Capt.Miko]

The spriting is good and it's pretty funny, but the title doesn't stand out very much. Besides that, it's a good comic.

 

[Marioman]

thanks, and i added the 5th issue. enjoy!

 

[Bu†cH]

The fourth issue was a bit funny, but the fifth was HILARIOUS and the best one so far.

 

[blueguy]

It's not terrible... but it's not all that great either. Somehow I don't find the comic funny, and the jokes using a violent member of the pidgey family seem oddly similar to my own comic. I'm not claiming you're copying or anything, but they are slightly similar. You need to work on the bubble order and your grammar.

 

[Marioman]

to blueguy:

no, the pidgey is only this issue. i thought i was copying too, but wasnt sure... sorry if you thought i was though. im not.

to butch:

thanks. i liked the holy miltank thing (instead of holy cow)

EDIT: #6+7 are up.