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The Legend of Celebi

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THE LEGEND OF CELEBI​

Ahhh... I told myself I would post this here in May so I guess I will now... *sigh*

I've been working on this fic since October 2004 and I guess it's about time to start sharing it with people. I posted it on FF.net (my username on there is blossomi) a couple months ago, so if you want to read ahead or anything, feel free... though it's only a few chapters ahead. As of today (5/21) I have written thirteen chapters so far.

I'm extremely shy about my work, so please don't bite my head off with reviews or anything. xD This is my very first Pokemon fanfic. Just so you know, there are a lot of characters and it is pretty long, I'm not exactly sure on this, but I'm thinking it will end up being around fifty chapters. And each chapter averages about 4200 words (and in later chapters, probably even more) so... yup.

This is an OT fic. Yeeah. It is set in my made-up (YES, made-up :O) region, Dione. The trainers do not go after badges, instead in order to compete in the Pokemon League they must obtain six gems that are scattered in certain places all over Dione. In many of the towns there is a Gym, to be exact a TEST Gym, in which they must battle the leader to prove they are worthy of the gem. If they win, the leader tells them where the gem they must get is, and then it's up to the trainer to find it. (For example, one of the gems is in a cave.)

Overall, I just want to improve my writing a bit and FINISH this freaking story that I've been working forever on. I'm making a promise to myself that I WILL finish this story even if it takes me years. XD I have it all planned out, and I really want to write it all the way through. Anyway, getting better is what it's all about isn't it?

RATING: I'm giving this story a rating of PG-13. In early chapters it's mostly PG, but I'm making it overall PG-13 because in the later chapters it gets really dark, and there is a LOT of swearing. So yeah.

Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon, blahblahlabla.

Synopsis: Five thousand years ago, Celebi foresaw an event that could devastate the world forever...
Fourteen-year-old Kendal Hutton is just like any normal trainer, but once she discovers that she and nine other people are involved in a Legendary prophecy, she and her friends struggle to realize their destinies and their purpose in the revelation. While fighting off Team Rocket and Squadron C, they must deal with every issue that comes with being a trainer... and a teenager, for that matter. Whether it be relationships, training, dealing with a mysterious person who seems to be stalking them on-line, or even living... their lives will change in ways they never thought possible.

This fic basically fits into all genres... but for the most part I'm putting it into the General category.

OH and another thing. There are Legendaries. A lot of them appear in the first chapter. XDDD But don't worry, they go away...

Chapter Index
Chapter 1: Runaway

*Note: A couple of the chapters have different names than they do on FF.net.



Well, here it is, the first chapter. Ew. I hate the first one. *barfs* Well, enjoy. xDD
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The Legend of Celebi

Chapter 1: Runaway



She awoke suddenly, her forehead burning and sweat dripping from her face. She turned her head to the side to catch a glance at the clock. It was three o'clock in the morning.

She had been thinking about it for a long time. At first jokingly, but now she was seriously considering it. It would be dangerous, and maybe even worrisome to the people in her life, but she didn't want to continue living like she was for who knew how long.

The girl rubbed her eyes hard with both of her hands, listening to the sound of the water in great big fountain splashing down endlessly from outside in the back yard. The dim green light that was being produced from the digital clock was enough to help her make her way across her room and out into the hallway. She pondered about what she was about to do for a few moments, and then she decided she would do it.

She got out of bed silently, not making a noise from even the mattress, which usually squeaked when she moved around on it. The hard wood floors were cold on her bare feet as she slowly tiptoed across her bedroom. She didn't know why she was being so careful, since there was no way anyone would hear her, but she wanted to make sure. She bent down at the doorway, picking up a backpack full of everything she would need. She had thought ahead, as she always did. Now the only thing left to get was some money. And she knew exactly where she could find it.

Opening the door was the tricky part, since the house was old and everything in it looked like it was about to break. She turned the knob and opened the door extremely fast so it would make hardly any squeaking noise. She made her way down the hall; the only sound was the sound of her feet softly thumping against the floor. She started down the stairs, grabbing onto the railing tightly with both of her hands. She couldn't risk making any noise now. With a backpack on her back and her stealthily going down the stairs, if someone were to come out of their bedroom, she would get in trouble… Perhaps more than just trouble.

When she finally got all the way downstairs, the turned left and went down a hallway. The floors were carpeted there, so she didn't have to be so cautious while walking. She went past several rooms until she came to the end of the hallway, where one last room stood in front of her. The door was opened, so she went right in, and spotted a file cabinet in the far corner of the room. She tried to pull it open, but it was locked. This was no problem, for she knew exactly where the key was located.

The girl walked over to a desk on the other side of the room, pulled it open, and dug around in it until she found a tiny silver key. Then she went over to the file cabinet and unlocked it. Inside was cash - lots of it. She didn't know whom her father knew or what he really did at his 'job', but she knew whatever he did was somehow illegal and that he got lots and lots of cash for doing it. She grabbed a handful of one hundred dollar bills and stuffed them in her pocket. Her father would never notice they were missing.

She locked the file cabinet back up and then let out a deep sigh. She was ready to go. There were so many things she couldn’t bring with her that she wanted to. After taking a good long look at the house she would probably never see again, she slowly opened the window in the office and slipped out into the cold dark night.

The girl bounded behind some bushes and zipped open her backpack, taking her normal clothes out. She was still in her nightgown, so after dressing properly for the cold night weather, she took out her cell phone and dialed a number she knew too well. After a few rings, she heard a voice on the other end of the line.

"Yeah, what is it?" a tired voice yawned.

"Zach, it's me... I'm ready. Now come and meet me, I'm right outside of my house!" she hissed.

There was a pause, and she heard shuffling in the background. "Oh, Kendal... all right, I'll be there in a minute. Hold on, I've got to get dressed."

"Okay, hurry!" Kendal replied, and she then ended the call, sticking her phone back into her backpack. She ran her fingers through her straight and long light brown hair, which she had forgotten to comb. As she waited for her friend to come, she suddenly heard a noise coming from the bushes around her. She almost screamed, but fortunately held it in. She jumped back, looking at the bushes hard, trying to make out what was making the sound. When she thought whatever it was had gone away, a small fox Pokemon jumped out of the bushes.

"Eevee!" it said, wagging its tail playfully. It looked up at Kendal with its big black eyes, smiling as it always did.

"Oh, Eevee, it's just you," Kendal sighed, as she crouched down, patting him on the head. "I'm sorry, but I'm leaving." Eevee frowned and started to whine. "I know, I know... but it's for the best. I can't keep living here with John and Mary, I just don't feel right here. It's time I go out on my own and do things that I want to do."

"Kendal!" Came a voice from behind her. She looked behind her shoulder and saw that it was Zach. He smiled at her as he approached her and Eevee, his blonde hair ruffled and his shoes untied as usual.

"Eevee, I know you'll miss me, and I'll miss you. I probably will never see you again, but I'll always remember you! I have to go now, Eevee... bye," Kendal whispered, waving to the little Pokemon, as she ran off into the darkness with Zach.

Zach smiled, looking out into the dark street ahead of them. He was glad that he lived next-door to her. Their neighborhood was a nice one, with plenty of beautiful flowers and trees planted everywhere. It certainly was a pleasant one to walk through, even in the middle of the night. "So, you finally decided. I knew you would sooner or later."

"Yeah, I finally got fed up with John and all of his 'work'... it just started to freak me out, so I wanted to get out of there," Kendal explained.

"Oh. Yeah, he always seemed suspicious to me. Wonder what he really did... Hmm... Anyway, are you still bummed about ditching school? I know it's your life and whatever," Zach said, his lips curling into a smile, as he looked over at Kendal, whose face suddenly looked sorrow. "Oh. All right, I guess I shouldn't talk about Westport Pokemon Academy anymore," he smirked.

Kendal frowned. School was very important to her. She loved learning about Pokemon; she wanted to know as much as she could. She had the top grades in her class, and always went out of the way to do extra credit or do something extraordinary for a big project. She was also a very skilled battler, whenever the class had matches she nearly always won. She was convinced that she knew almost everything there was to know about Pokemon. After all, she checked-out information books about Pokemon from the library ever since she was a little girl, and read them just for fun. To Kendal, learning was a very fun and important thing. To Zach, it was a joke.

Kendal admitted that she was going to miss her classmates, the Pokemon she trained, and the professors. But she knew that running away was the best choice at this point, as silly as it sounded. She just didn't need school anymore, as far as she was concerned. She was brighter than even the smarter students a couple grades ahead of her.

Her parents, John and Mary, wanted her to finish Pokemon School completely, which meant she would have to stick around in the town of Westport for two more years, but she couldn't wait that long. She had to get out now. She didn't think it was fair anyway, that she had to finish Pokemon School, since it was only optional to take classes for that long. The most the students needed to learn before going on a journey of their own was four years, and she had already had five. She had been going to the Pokemon Academy since she was eight years old, a year earlier than most trainers started attending Pokemon Schools, which meant that most trainers started their journey when they were thirteen years old. She and Zach were fourteen.

"I decided that this was the best thing," Kendal finally said. "But anyway, changing the subject... where are we going?"

Zach coughed. "Well... first, we should get out of Westport and get to Redgrove so we can get our trainer ID's and all that stuff. Then, we can get catch some Pokemon and we'll be well on our way. Sound good?"

Kendal nodded. She could hardly wait to challenge the Test Gym Leaders and finally become a trainer. She learned in school that in order to participate in the official Dione Pokemon League, one must collect six gems of Dione by challenging the Leaders at Test Gyms. If they win, the Leader tells them where one of the gems of Dione is and they must go and get it for themselves.

In order to get out of Westport and into Redgrove, they would have to go through a small forest, where there would be lots of Pokemon. She knew it was dangerous to go into places where Pokemon could be without your very own Pokemon to protect yourself, but the forest was small, and she had to take a chance. After all, it would be impossible to catch a Pokemon in Westport because the wild Pokemon population was so scarce you probably wouldn't be able to find one anyway.

They continued down the street until they came to the end of the neighborhood. This was where they would have to go through the mile-long forest to Redgrove. There was a tall fence in front of them, but it could easily be jumped. After climbing over it, Zach grabbed a flashlight out of his backpack and shined it in front of him as Kendal hoisted herself over the fence as well. She got out her flashlight too, and then they continued on into the dark forest where freedom awaited them.

Kendal looked over at Zach as they walked together in the darkness, lighting their pathway with the flashlights they grasped in their hands. His blonde hair was messy but cute and freckles were splattered on his cheeks. He was wearing a black sweatshirt and blue jeans, and was shivering as they walked. Kendal always saw him as cute, though she never actually liked him more than a friend. He was her first friend when she moved to Westport, and he had always been there for her when no one else was. They were as close as she had been with anyone ever before.

The forest was quite eerie. All the dark trees around them made shivers run up and down Kendal's spine as they went through the trees, hoping that they were headed in the right direction. After a while, Zach pulled out his compass just to make sure they were headed towards Redgrove, and they were.

The squishing sound of the damp ground made Kendal's stomach turn with every step she took. She grabbed a hold of Zach's arm when they started to get farther away from Westport and the light of the small town. The forest was indeed getting darker and more frightening by the moment. Kendal's heart was beating rapidly, as she waited for a Pokemon to pop out at her at any moment. But if one did, she was sure that she would be able to fight it off with a stick or two-- as long as the Pokemon didn't attack her in a group. But she put her studies to use and remembered that powerful Pokemon usually don't live in tiny forests like the one they were in.

They walked for a while longer, making their way through the trees with the only source of light coming from their small flashlights. After a few more minutes of walking, Kendal was quite sure that they must have almost been all the way through the forest. Only a little longer until she was free from all of the problems she had in her life. Only a little longer until she was able to make her own choices and do what she wanted. Only a little longer until she could start an adventure of her own.

Kendal nearly screamed when she saw that a small green caterpillar with large yellow eyes was right in front of her path. It had a red Y-shaped antennae growing from its head, right between its piercing eyes that were staring hard at her. Startled at first, by the fact that it could have been a powerful and more frightening bug Pokemon, Kendal realized that it was just a Caterpie, a virtually harmless Pokemon to humans, as long as they didn't make the tiny caterpillars mad. She walked around it and then continued through the forest with Zach.

They both were pleased that their journey through the small forest had been quite a safe one when they could see the lights of Redgrove City illuminating the starry sky in the distance. They were just a mile or so away from the city that would mark the start of their new lives. Kendal could hardly wait, and Zach went a bit farther ahead down the path just to make sure they were nearing the end of the forest, while Kendal stayed behind, not wanting to run in the muddy mush on the ground just to catch up with him.

"Oof!" Kendal groaned. She had tripped on a tree root, which was sticking up from the ground. She landed flat on her face, and her flashlight flew out of her hands, landing a few feet away from her, also turning off in the process. Feeling around the damp and mossy ground, in the pitch-black darkness, she tried to locate her only source of light. She felt around for a few seconds, until she put her hand on something right in front of her. She froze, and rubbed her hand against the vertical object. It was long and had sharp hairs sticking out of it. She moved her hand up a little. It felt like some kind of leg… She screamed, and kicked around, then managed to find the flashlight just in time. She snatched it and scrambled up to her feet. She then ran as fast as she could, straight ahead. She was shaking in fear, and had no idea where she was going, as she couldn't see Zach anywhere ahead of her, but she just wanted to get away from whatever she had just been touching. Suddenly, she ran into something sticky. Her hands were glued to it, and she couldn’t move. She screamed again, trying to break free of the gooeyness she was stuck to. "ZACH!" she screamed. "HELP!"

“Ari,” Kendal heard something whisper in her ear. She gasped, and wiggled around in the sticky stretchy goop again. She figured she had got trapped in a bunch of String Shot from the bug Pokemon. Kendal heard several other mysterious cries as she tried to break free, awaiting Zach's help. Tears started to stream down her face. She sat down on the ground, her hands still hanging up, attached to the sticky wall in front of her. Just then, she saw a blinding flash of light run through the forest at an incredible speed. She squinted, looking around, as her eyes adjusted to the light, wondering what it could have been. She looked up and caught a glimpse of what she was caught on to. It was just as she had predicted it had been: a thick, gooey clump of spider web. She groaned, and another light flashed. She looked around, noticing many Pokemon around her. The light went off again before she could make out what kinds of Pokemon were there.

"ZACH!" she screamed with every ounce of energy she had. "ZACH!"

"Kendal, where are you?" she heard his voice coming from somewhere behind her, and the squishy footsteps getting closer to her.

"Over here!" she called, hoping that he would hear her voice and run in the right direction.

She heard the Pokemon moving around again, and she cringed, shutting her eyes tightly. After a few moments, she opened her eyes a little, and the light flashed around her again. About twenty gigantic spiders with long, hairy purple and yellow striped legs crowded around her. They had red bodies, with two black stripes strung across their lower abdomen and neck. They also had a long horn sticking out of their foreheads, and two sharp fangs growing out of their mouths. Kendal shrieked, and the light went off again. She realized that what she had felt that was long and hairy were those Ariados’ legs. She shook, and chills ran up and down her spine. The light came on again, and she looked up into the top of the trees, trying her best to ignore the Ariados around her. There were hundreds of round little brown owls, perched up on the thick branches of the trees. Their eyes were glowing red, and they had only one foot. Their eyes stopped glowing suddenly, and then light went away once again. The light came right back on, once the owl’s eyes glowed red again, and this time it stayed on.

Kendal looked behind her shoulder. Hundreds of Pokemon were crowded around her. A couple of rats with one big whisker on either side of its nose scampered over to her. They were a dark purple color, and white on their tummy, nose, and face. They also had two large teeth bulging out from their mouths. Rattata. The two rats freed her from the spider web’s grasp by using their huge sharp teeth to chomp the web in half. Kendal got up to her feet, and looked around at all of the Pokemon around her, trying to break the spider web that was still connecting her two hands together like handcuffs. The Rattata soon took care of that one too.

The Pokemon in the middle of the crowd moved to the side, and Kendal walked down the path they had made for her, and gasped when she saw what was lying on the ground. She stepped up to it, and kneeled down beside it. Blood trickled down its chest, from a large hole where it had apparently been shot. The beast was a giant yellow dog with two black stripes on each of its hind legs, and going down the rest of its body. It also had a strange shaped silver tail, with a little spiked ball at the end of it. It had white fur on its chest and face, and two large fangs and two big whiskers on either side of its nose. A big purple feathery puff of fur grew out from the back of its neck. Its eyes were screwed shut, and it looked like it was in a lot of pain. Kendal was surprised when she remembered that this Pokemon was one of the three Legendary Dogs, which she had learned about in her Legendary Studies class in school. Kendal looked up, and was shocked to see two more gigantic dogs standing behind the injured one, looking down at her.

One of them had fluffy brown fur, and red spikes sticking out from its face. It also had a black heavy brace on each of its four legs. It had a white shiny puff flowing out from behind its neck, and two sharp white feather-looking parts poking out from each side of its body. She recognized it as Entei.

The other one was light blue in color, and it had a big diamond shape growing on top of its forehead. On its back was what looked like a giant purple cloud, and one silky white ribbon flowed gracefully around it on each side of its body. It had a small mouth, which was white. The dog was taller than Kendal by about a foot and a half when she was crouched down. It scowled at her. She stood up hesitantly and backed up, bumping into some of the large Ariados. The blue dog’s face softened, and it looked down at the injured yellow dog, and back up at Kendal. She cocked her eyebrow.

“You want me to help it, don’t you?” she asked the blue dog. It nodded. She kneeled down in front of the injured Pokemon, grimacing at its wound. “But… I don’t know how… I don’t have much experience with Pokemon,” she explained. “How did this happen?”

“Sui…” The blue dog whined, looking up into the sky. It howled loudly, and the injured dog’s eyes started to open. It howled as well, and so did Entei. All of the Pokemon surrounding them started to cry as well.

“Kendal!” Zach breathed, running up to her and the other Pokemon. “What’s going on?”

“I… don’t know… I don’t know how to help it… What should we do?” she inquired, pointing to the wound on the yellow dog. It looked like a bullet wound, but Kendal had no idea how to help it. She had never had much experience in nursing Pokemon, let alone a gigantic Legendary one. Zach shrugged, and kneeled down beside her. The Pokemon’s cries echoed through the forest. Kendal heard rain start to pound on the tops of the trees. Suddenly, a bright beam of light flashed right by Kendal, and a few seconds later, a Pokemon appeared in its place. It was very tiny, and was a white color, with a big yellow crown-looking item on its head, with three spikes coming out of it, one on the top, and one on each of the left and right sides. On top of each of these spikes was one small rectangular teal-colored ornament, hanging from the peak of the spike. It had a pair of tiny beady black eyes, and had a small lower body, with teeny arms and legs. It also had two golden silky wing-looking objects flowing behind it from its back. Kendal learned in school that this Pokemon was Jirachi, yet another Legendary Pokemon, and was amazed to see it floating right beside her.

“Chi…” The Pokemon said. It appeared to be sleeping, but was still hovering in front of the injured dog, beside Kendal. “Jira… CHI!” It screeched. All of a sudden, it got dark, and it started to glow. The injured Pokemon started to glow as well. Then, millions of lights that looked like twinkling little stars appeared throughout the forest. Kendal felt something moving behind her. She turned her head, and saw a creature, about two feet in height, floating there. It was green, and had two blue antennae growing from its forehead. It had a pair of big amazing blue eyes, with a thick black color lining around them. Big feet stuck out of its small body. Its arms and hands were small though, and it had a pair of tiny white wings on its back. Kendal knew that it was Celebi. It floated beside Kendal, next to Jirachi, who looked like it was still asleep.

“Celebi!” The green Pokemon cried, and several yellow balls spun around it. It aimed its hands at the injured Pokemon. The golden spheres flew at the dog, and started to spin around it. Soon the balls started to shrink, and what was left of the spheres got absorbed into the injured dog.

“Rai…” The yellow dog groaned, moving around. Kendal realized that Celebi had healed Raikou a little. Just then, all of the little stars that had been in the air, aimlessly wandering about, moved in towards the dog, and stuck right on its wound. After a few moments, the lights faded, but Kendal could still see the shadow of the giant beast stand up. All of the Pokemon cheered, and then the lights turned back on. Kendal looked behind her shoulder to see that Celebi and Jirachi had disappeared. Then, the red and yellow dogs ran away. The blue dog stayed back, and looked at Kendal hard in the eye. It murmured its name, and smiled at her, then bounded off into the forest.

“What the hell just happened?” Zach said, standing up.

“I don’t know… But whatever it was…” Kendal started, but was interrupted by the sound of a gunshot racing through the woods. All of the other Pokemon scurried away, leaving Kendal and Zach alone.

“Hey, you,” They heard a voice say.

“Run!” Zach shouted, and dashed through the woods. The lights suddenly turned off, though Kendal was still pondering about what was producing them, leaving her with no light, as she had lost her flashlight in all of the commotion. The two teens could hear people running after them in the darkness. Kendal looked behind her shoulder and saw that the people chasing them had lights. The two friends kept on running, until they suspected they had lost them.

“We lost ‘em, Zach… Zach?” She breathed, leaning against a tree trunk, frantically looking around for her friend, who there seemed to be no trace of. “Where are you?”

“Help!” Kendal heard Zach shout. She looked from behind the tree at where Zach was. Three people in black suits were carrying him away. The suits had a big red ‘R’ on the front of them, and other people with the same uniforms were shining flashlights through the forest, obviously looking for Kendal. She hid back behind the tree.

“Did you see a giant yellow dog?” Kendal heard one of the people ask Zach. She couldn’t hear what anybody else said, because the people started to run out of the forest, carrying Zach with them. Kendal gasped, breathing hard. She didn’t know what to do. She didn’t have a flashlight anymore, and she was alone. She slumped down to the ground and started to cry.

“Mew.”

Kendal gasped, looking around.

“Mew,” She heard the voice again. It was very high-pitched and sounded as if it was coming from a tiny person… or Pokemon. It was getting closer to her.

“Who are you?” Kendal demanded, standing up, trying to look through the pitch-black darkness.

“Mew!” The voice said again. Suddenly, a bright light started to glow right in front of her. Kendal could see a small pink feline Pokemon floating with the light illuminating around it. It had a very long tail, but was very small. It had two big light blue eyes, and a pair of pointy ears that grew on the top of its head. The light got brighter around it. “Mew,” It said again.

“Mew?” Kendal asked, touching the Pokemon slightly. She knew all about Mew, and from the previous events that had just happened, she admitted that she wasn’t as shocked to have seen it as she would have if she hadn’t have just seen five other legendaries before it.

“Mew,” it nodded, playfully pointing to itself.

“C-Can you help me get out of here?” she questioned, shaking slightly.

“Mew!” Mew smiled, and put its hand on hers. It kept a tight grasp of her hand as it led her through the forest, a small supply of light illuminating around it. It seemed like forever to Kendal, walking through the forest in the darkness, with a strange Pokemon holding on to her hand, and leading the way. Kendal kept walking, and Mew kept floating, and suddenly Mew’s light died. Kendal took another step forward, and tried to look around in the darkness, to see where they were.

“Where are we? Why are we stopping?” Kendal asked, still grasping Mew’s arm.

“Mew,” Mew said, and floated down to the ground, breaking its grip on her arm. Its light came on again, and Kendal saw that it had picked up a small berry with its other hand. It popped it in its mouth, and picked another berry off of a bush. It held it up to Kendal, who took it and stuffed it in her mouth, thanking Mew with a grateful smile.

Mew grabbed her hand again, and this time it was flying through the forest very quickly. Kendal had to almost sprint to keep up with it. Soon, Kendal and Mew had made it out of the forest. Mew giggled and flew around her.

“Thanks a lot,” Kendal said to the little Pokemon.

“Mew,” it responded, and pointed over to a city in the distance. The few lights in it were glowing like stars in space. Kendal smiled at Mew, and looked over at Redgrove. “Mew, Mew, Mew Mew!” Mew said.

“I hope I see you again… thank you,” Kendal grinned. Mew smiled once more, and then flew up into the dim sky, its long and skinny tail trailing behind it, whipping around in the wind.

Kendal had no idea what had just happened, or why, or how, for that matter. She was astonished to have encountered six rare Pokemon in just one night. She read in all of her textbooks that to see a Legendary Pokemon was a blessing, and that there had only been a few sightings worldwide of Mew, Celebi, and Jirachi. Maybe she was just lucky? Or maybe it was fate… Kendal wasn’t sure she believed in fate, though the whole situation was quite mind-boggling for the girl. She wondered what had happened to Zach as she walked towards Redgrove city, and how she was ever going to find him. That is, if she was ever going to find him at all. She sighed, as she knew that evil organizations like Team Rocket usually killed the people they questioned. But she tried to push it out of her mind as her heart beat faster, knowing that she might possibly lose her best friend in the world. But all she could do was pray. Pray for his safety and pray that Mew and all of the Legendaries had blessed her. Maybe they would look after Zach?

Kendal had nearly reached the big sign that read “Welcome to Redgrove City” in big bold crimson letters when she heard something whining on the side of the road. She spun around, trying to make out what – and where – it was with the light that was being shed upon her from the city lights, and then she saw it. Kendal ran towards it, immediately recognizing it as a Charmander. She scooped it up off of the ground, inspecting it. It had scratches on its face and all down its body, and Kendal wondered what it had been beaten with. The flame on its tail was hardly burning, and she learned in school that in order to stay alive, it had to be kept aflame. She gasped, and started to walk quickly towards the entrance of the city, where she saw a Pokemon Center just outside the gates.



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Yay, there you go! Please review, don't be shy! ^_^
 

Hahahabvc87

Always watching...
Wow, that's really long for a first chapter (8 screens!)

First, the bad stuff...

So, basically Kendal ran away from home because she suspected John was running some illegal business for cash? That's it? Seems kinda unlikely since she had to leave so much behind!

She had an Eevee with her back home, so why didn't she bring it along with her? It doesn't make much sense to start a pokemon journey without any pokemon in the first place... I'm guessing that the charmander she just found would be her starter, won't it?

Another thing... Kendal didn't know how to treat the injured Raikou, and it was treated by Jirachi and Celebi instead, so why did the pokemon want her to be there anyway? Hopefully this will be revealed soon enough!

Erm... during the escape from Team Rocket, why did Mew have to stop to eat? ^^;;

I can understand why you don't quite like the first chapter... XD

Ok, enough of the bad, now for the good stuff :)

You sure are creative, using completely original settings for your fic! The number of legendary pokemon which appeared to Kendal also begs the question: "Why?" , thus drawing the attention of the reader, myself included. Nice job!

That's pretty BIG for a first chapter! 8 screens! And 50 chapters total? That would mean about 4200 X 50 = 210,000 words! OMG! To be able to write that, you sure possess no small amount of talent!

Nice start for a story, but since you said this isn't the best part yet, I'm gonna hold my vote for now. Please do update it soon, I really want to continue reading this fic! Bookmarked!

Peace out
Hahahabvc87
 

Shrike Flamestar

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Well, that’s certainly odd; you say you started this in 2004? There are quite a few similarities between this fic and mine, though... Blond haired guy named Zach/Zack (they’re both the same to me, I just prefer the spelling with a “k”)? Check. A 14 year old who went to a Pokémon Academy but left with around two years of school left? Check (although Kendal lived elsewhere while Shrike was in a dorm. Yours also starts at a younger age while with mine people have to be around 10-12 to enroll). Parents want them to stay in school? Check. Save a Pokémon from death (I’m assuming the Charmander doesn’t die)? Check.

Similarities aside, this is looking to be very good, and there’s not much bad I can see about it (I’m guessing that Eevee is a family pet, and that’s why she didn’t take it, right? The Mew stopping to eat seemed to me to just be a way to show off its carefree personality...) there are a few typos I need mention, though...

listening to the sound of the water in the great big fountain splashing down endlessly from outside in the back yard.
I’m guessing you forgot that “the” unless the fountain’s name is actually “Great Big Fountain” in which case it should be capitalized.

Now the only thing left was to get was some money.
Forgot the “was.”

When she finally got all the way downstairs, she turned left and went down a hallway.
“The” should be “she.”

Both of the main characters you’ve introduced so far look to be interesting, although hopefully you can add a few more character quirks to both as right now both Kendal and Zach seem to be fairly straightforward. This is only the first chapter, so it’s not like there was much chance for you to go into detail about what they’re like anyways...

The whole legendary thing is intriguing for sure, and I’m looking forward to finding out more about what it all means. Hopefully Mew reappears, it being my favorite legendary along with Lugia :D

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Hahahabvc87 said:
So, basically Kendal ran away from home because she suspected John was running some illegal business for cash? That's it? Seems kinda unlikely since she had to leave so much behind!
Heh, that's not all... more will be revealed later, through flashbacks and the like. And this isn't very spoilerish, but I might as well put it in spoiler tags, [spoil]they aren't her real parents.[/spoil]

She had an Eevee with her back home, so why didn't she bring it along with her? It doesn't make much sense to start a pokemon journey without any pokemon in the first place... I'm guessing that the charmander she just found would be her starter, won't it?
Well, the Eevee is intended to be more of a household pet than a fighting Pokemon. I guess I should have said something about that... XDD

Another thing... Kendal didn't know how to treat the injured Raikou, and it was treated by Jirachi and Celebi instead, so why did the pokemon want her to be there anyway? Hopefully this will be revealed soon enough!
Yes, this will of course be revealed soon ^_^ it has a lot to do with the plot...

Erm... during the escape from Team Rocket, why did Mew have to stop to eat? ^^;;
Why, Mew was hungry of course. XD

Well, that’s certainly odd; you say you started this in 2004? There are quite a few similarities between this fic and mine, though... Blond haired guy named Zach/Zack (they’re both the same to me, I just prefer the spelling with a “k”)? Check. A 14 year old who went to a Pokémon Academy but left with around two years of school left? Check (although Kendal lived elsewhere while Shrike was in a dorm. Yours also starts at a younger age while with mine people have to be around 10-12 to enroll). Parents want them to stay in school? Check. Save a Pokémon from death (I’m assuming the Charmander doesn’t die)? Check.
I KNOW! x_x When I first started reading TFC, I was like... WHOA. This is freaky. XD In the very first drafts of this story, they lived in an orphanage, and Kendal's name was Jade (changed because that seemed to be an overused name in fics XP)... she originally rescued a Jigglypuff (XDD), but other than that, the first chapter has basically stayed the same since the beginning. Very weird. I hope you don't think I was copying your story or anything... o_O (Oh, and this chapter has yet ANOTHER small similarity... x_x yet it is a very important part of the fic. I'm relieved to say that that's all that's the same between yours an mine however. =P)

Thanks for catching those typos Shrike... gah, hate those things... :p

Both of the main characters you’ve introduced so far look to be interesting, although hopefully you can add a few more character quirks to both as right now both Kendal and Zach seem to be fairly straightforward. This is only the first chapter, so it’s not like there was much chance for you to go into detail about what they’re like anyways...
Well, you won't be seeing much of Zach anymore, actually hardly at all, but if you want quirks let me tell you, you are going to get quirks. Chapter 2 in a matter of fact, introduces a new character... you'll just have to see for yourself. XDD

And yep, count on Mew being back. Can't really say that about Lugia though... D:

Anyway, thanks for the reviews guys! Here's chapter two.



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Chapter 2: Cayleigh


Not wanting to run too fast, as she was afraid that the flame on Charmander's tail might get put out if she ran with it, Kendal held the Pokemon close to her chest, almost guarding it as if something were to attack it. She kept a close watch on the flame, making sure it didn’t go out. She finally arrived at the Pokemon Center and then ran inside with Charmander. "Help!" she called. "This Charmander needs to be treated!"

A woman with strawberry blonde hair cocked her head in the direction of Kendal. She was standing behind the counter and wore a white nurse uniform. She quickly walked towards Kendal, holding out her hands for Charmander. Kendal gave it to her and her eyes widened.

"Thank you," the nurse said quickly, and turned around, running back behind the counter and into the back room. A few moments later, she came back out, with no Charmander in her hands.

"Will it be okay?" Kendal questioned, leaning her body against the counter, trying eagerly to see what was going on behind the slightly opened door. She then glanced at the nurse who just shook her head.

"I'm sorry, but you won't be able to see Charmander for a little while longer. It will be okay, though. Charmander is suffering from a few minor scratches, though it hasn't had food or water in days... once we get it hydrated, fed, and the wounds treated, you will be able to have it back. May I see your ID?" the nurse asked, as she typed frantically at the computer keyboard.

"Um, I don't have one..."

The nurse's head perked up and she stopped dead in the middle of whatever she was typing. "Excuse me? But it's illegal to own Pokemon without identification..."

"Yeah, but I just found it on the side of the road. I'm not a trainer," Kendal explained.

The nurse nodded. "Oh, yes. That will be quite fine, then. Please, don't worry. Take a seat, and I will be sure to inform you when Charmander is healthy again." She prodded the seating area, and Kendal headed over to it and sat down on a stiff and uncomfortable chair.

There weren't many people in the Pokemon Center, Kendal saw, but then again it had to be about four in the morning. She glanced at the clock on the wall in front of her, which read three forty five. There were one or two people who had probably just gotten up to train, but other than that, there was no sign of anyone anywhere. She was all alone in the quietness of the building as she sat there, waiting.

Kendal pulled her cell phone out of a pocket in her backpack, and dialed Zach's number, hoping he would pick up. After five or six rings, it went dead. She bit her lip and leaned her head against the wall. "Dammit," she sighed.

"Espeon! Espeon, come here right now!"

Kendal's eyes wandered around the Pokemon Center, and caught sight of a girl who looked about seventeen years old, chasing a giant green cat, whose tail was split in two. It bounded towards Kendal and sat down on the chair next to her, purring contently at the sight of its enraged trainer.

"I'm so sorry," the girl said, jogging over to Kendal and Espeon. "Espeon is a bit excited this morning..."

"It's all right," Kendal smiled. "But hey, isn't that Espeon a 'shiny' Pokemon?" Indeed, Espeon wasn't colored normally compared to other Espeons Kendal had seen in her textbooks. Normally, the shade of Espeons' fur was a dark purple. This one's fur was almost a lime green, and had a slight sheen to it.

"Yeah, Espeon's my special shiny friend," the girl laughed, sitting down next to Espeon in the chair. "By the way, I'm Heather." She stuck out her hand, and Kendal shook it.

"Kendal."

"Are you a new trainer? I usually see newbies around these parts," Heather said, stroking Espeon's back with one hand, and straightening out her short, choppy blonde hair with the other. She was wearing a light blue and navy trainer suit, with a fanny pack around her waist. Her legs were long and skinny, as was the rest of her body. "I always have to get up early whenever I'm here, so I don't get bombarded by fans..."

Kendal shrugged. "Actually, I'm not even a trainer... yet. But I plan on getting an ID soon. Do you know any place nearby where I can get one?" she asked.

Heather cocked an eyebrow. "Wandering around with no ID, eh? Sounds weird, but hey, it's none of my business. There's a Pokemon Mart just down the street where you can register yourself as a trainer. You should also stock up on Pokeballs and other stuff... that is, if you don't already have some." She looked at Kendal up and down, and spotted a few one hundred dollar bills sticking out of her pocket. "Looks like you're pretty loaded, so you shouldn't have any trouble starting up," she chuckled.

Kendal pushed the money deeper in her jean pocket. "Heh, yeah, I jacked it from my... dad. I actually ran away," she said, not entirely sure why she was telling this to a complete stranger. Heather just nodded.

"Yeah, sometimes you have to get away for a while... I've got nothing against it, but wouldn't your parents be worried? Ah, it's none of my business," she bit her lip, looking down at the ground. "I've been trying not to be too nosy lately. Haha, anyway, where ya headed?"

"Wherever I can go," Kendal responded. She didn't know what else to say. There was a silence between the two of them for a few moments, until Kendal spoke up again, "Do you know anything about Legendary Pokemon?"

Heather didn't say anything at first, but then nodded slowly. "Yeah, quite a bit. I've been a trainer for a long time now, and I guess you could say I know quite a few things about them. Why do you ask?"

Kendal shrugged. "You're probably going to think I'm crazy, but... I saw six of them tonight."

Heather gasped. "What?! ...Seriously?"

Kendal nodded her head, looking at Heather very seriously. "I saw all three of the Legendary Dogs, and then I saw Jirachi, Celebi and Mew. Freaky, I know..."

Heather didn't know what to say. "I... wow, I don't know if I believe you, and I don't know why Entei, Raikou and Suicune would be wandering around Dione, but... wow, that's remarkable, if you're telling the truth. You must be very lucky."

Kendal had never thought of why Raikou, Entei, and Suicune would be in Dione until that moment, since she knew that they roamed around Johto. It was very odd, but she just shrugged it off, since nothing else that had happened in the past couple hours could have a very good explanation anyway.

"Excuse me," a voice said from behind Kendal. She spun around and saw the nurse standing there, her hands laced together as she bowed. "Charmander is in a good condition now, you may take a look if you want," she explained, and signaled for Kendal to follow her.

"What?" Heather asked. "You have a Pokemon, but you have no ID? Huuuh?"

"It's a long story," Kendal sighed, as she followed the nurse into the back door, which led into a long hallway. The nurse entered room number seven, and Kendal joined her.

Charmander was sitting on a small bed, the perfect size for a Pokemon. It had been bandaged up, and its flame was burning steadily. Its emerald green eyes lit up when it saw Kendal enter the room. It must have remembered that she had been the one that saved it.

"This Charmander has no trainer from what we found, so if you wanted, you could have her as your own. Of course, you'd have to get an ID first, but you are still eligible to be its trainer. What do you say?" the nurse asked, smiling hopefully at Kendal.

"Sure," Kendal replied instantly, without even stopping to think. She had always dreamed about raising a cute Pokemon like Charmander, and now she finally had the chance. "I'll go and get my ID now..."

"Hold on, hold on," the nurse chuckled. "You need to sign these forms first..." She held a few papers and a pen at Kendal, who took them and signed them hastily. "Now you may go. Please return soon, Miss Hutton!"

Kendal nodded and exited the room. She made her way down the hallway and back into the main area of the Center, but was disappointed to see that Heather was nowhere in sight. Kendal shrugged, figuring that she must have gone out already to start training her Pokemon.

Kendal stepped out into the streets of Redgrove, where the sun was now beginning to rise. She walked further down the street, where she saw a big building with a blue roof, and a sign outside that read "PokeMart". She smiled and went right in.

The shelves in the PokeMart were lined with all sorts of Pokemon goods. She grabbed a shopping basket from the pile by the entrance and walked over to a shelf full of Pokeballs. The tiny spheres were about the size of a golf ball and were red on the top and white on the bottom. In the middle of the two colors was a button, and Kendal knew that if you pushed it once, the ball would enlarge to about the size of a baseball. If you pushed it again, it opened. She grabbed about ten or so of the Pokeballs and dumped them all into her basket. Next, she threw in a couple of potions, which were in little blue spray bottles, and a few antidotes. The antidotes were in long but small tubes and held a purple liquid.

Kendal didn't see anything else she wanted in the store, as most of the other things were just souvenirs and PokeDolls. She went up to the checkout line, where a tall man with jet-black hair was waiting to check her items out for her. She set the basket on top of the counter and grabbed a one hundred dollar bill out of her pocket. While she waited as the man totaled up the cost of her items, a sign on the wall behind the counter caught her eye. It read "POKEPALS: ON SALE FOR $99.99 NOW!"

Kendal knew a lot about PokePals. They were the newest handy Pokemon devices to hit Dione since the PokeNav. PokePals were a PokeDex and a PokeNav all in one. Not to mention it even had its own keyboard and you could chat with other trainers within a five-mile radius with its chat system. Kendal knew that she had more than enough money to buy one, and she had wanted one ever since they came out, even though she had no use for one at the time. But now that she was about to become a trainer...

"Excuse me, sir," she said. The man looked up at her. "I'd like to buy a PokePal..."

"Okay, what color you want?" he asked, as he put all of Kendal's items into a plastic bag. Kendal looked up at the sign, where it showed all of the colors of the PokePal. It came in black, red, blue, pink, turquoise, green, yellow, and orange.

"Hmm," Kendal pondered. "I guess I'll take a turquoise one."

"Okay," the man said. "I'll be right back." He went into the back room and came out a few seconds later, holding a PokePal box in his hands. He slid the box on the counter while he punched a few numbers in on the cash register. "That'll be a hundred and twenty-eight dollars..."

Kendal gave the man two one hundreds, and he gave her the change back. She stuffed it in her pocket, grabbed the shopping bag and then remembered that she still needed to get an ID. "Oh," she said, turning back to the cashier. "Where can I get an ID?"

The man didn't seem to be interested in why she had just bought all of those items when she wasn't even a trainer. He probably just wanted to be in bed, asleep. "Oh, there's a machine over there in the corner," he yawned, and sat down on a chair, opening a newspaper.

"Thanks," Kendal said, spotting the machine. She went over to it, and pressed enter on the keyboard, looking at the big screen to see what to do next.

"PLEASE ENTER YOUR NAME" it read. Kendal punched in the letters 'Kendal Hutton', and pressed enter.

"PLEASE ENTER YOUR HOMETOWN"

Kendal typed 'Westport', and pressed enter. After answering a couple more questions, like her birth date, height, and weight, the machine told her to smile, and she did. A flash of light shot out at her, and she squinted a little. Then, the machine started to print out the ID card, and Kendal hoped that her picture hadn't been messed up. When it came out, she was pleased to see that the picture wasn't of her squinting and making a gross face. It had actually come out very nice.

She put the ID into a safe pocket in her backpack, and then exited the PokeMart. Kendal sat down on a bench just outside of the building, setting her bag of supplies down next to her. She grabbed the PokePal box and opened it hastily. She knew she should be getting back to the Pokemon Center to claim Charmander, but she was too excited about the PokePal. She noted to herself that she was weird for being more excited about a machine than a Pokemon while she took out the turquoise handheld, which was about seven inches in width. It was like a mini-laptop, the top half of it being the screen, and the bottom half was the keyboard. She turned on the power, and the screen lit up.

"Welcome to PokePal," the machine said in a robotic voice. "Please enter your information below."

NAME:

ID NUMBER:

AGE:

Kendal filled in the information and pressed enter, where she was taken to the next screen. The keys were smaller than those on a regular keyboard would be, and she did admit that it was quite hard to type with the small keys. The screen now read, "Welcome to PokePal. Please select your destination below:

PokeDex (you have 0 new Pokemon seen)
Map
Mailbox (you have 0 new e-mails)
Pals (0 pals are online)
Chat (0 trainers are online within range)


Kendal sighed, seeing that she couldn't do much at the moment with her new PokePal, so she put it away safely into a pocket in her backpack that she could quickly get to if she needed it. She stood up from the bench after stuffing the Pokeballs, potions, and Antidotes into her backpack, and went back down the road to the Pokemon Center. It was now probably almost five in the morning, and still there were no trainers outside, yet the sun was beginning to rise. Once Kendal got back to the Pokemon Center and went inside, she was surprised to see about five trainers up already, getting their Pokemon healed and preparing for the day. She never thought trainers got up that early, as she always imagined herself as a trainer sleeping in late, but she just assumed that these people must have been very serious about what they did.

She walked up to the front counter, where the same nurse was still on duty. She smiled at Kendal, recognizing her, and went into the back room. She came out a few moments later with a healthy-looking Charmander in her arms. "Please tell me your ID number?"

Kendal nodded, and pulled her ID out of her pocket. "It's 15387," she said. The nurse began to type at the computer very quickly, and then she smiled.

"Ah, Kendal Hutton, thank you very much. After you sign this paper, Charmander is yours..." she went to a table against the wall behind the counter, grabbed a sheet of paper, and brought it back for Kendal to sign. The girl did so, and the nurse thanked her. "Here is Charmander's Pokeball. Please take good care of her." She handed Kendal a Pokeball that dangled from a black necklace string. Kendal thanked the nurse, and put the necklace around her neck, then picking up Charmander.

"Thank you!" Kendal said.

"Good luck," the nurse called, smiling. Kendal looked at Charmander, who she was cradling in her arms like a baby, and grinned.

"So, you're my first Pokemon," Kendal said to the tiny red lizard as they exited the Center. She set Charmander down on the ground. "Well, apart from Eevee. But I guess he doesn’t count… And you’re female, huh?

"Char!" Charmander nodded, beaming up at her trainer.

"Okay, so I've got that down. How about we go and, er, train? For the Test Battle?" Kendal suggested. But to her surprise, Charmander did not follow her when she started to walk off down the street. "Charmander, come on!"

"Char," Charmander replied, looking away from Kendal with a stern look upon her face. Kendal rolled her eyes and started to walk towards her Pokemon.

"Please," Kendal asked, picking up Charmander. But the Pokemon squirmed around in her arms, trying to break free from her grasp. Charmander scratched and kicked, and eventually it slashed a deep gash on the back of Kendal's hand. "Ouch!" she screamed. "What'd you do that for?"

Charmander stuck her tongue out and started to run away from Kendal, who bounded after her. Charmander was surprisingly not that slow, as Kendal thought she would be, as she was just a small Pokemon that hadn’t evolved yet.

She was just about a foot away from Charmander, and about to grab her, when she heard a scream. Kendal froze, turned around, and saw a girl who looked about the age of thirteen running towards her. She was skinny, with short wavy brown hair, and a pair of dark brown eyes. She wore a green cap on her head, and a tight brown shirt with green shorts she also had a Pokeball belt wrapped around her waist. It held a single Pokeball. A small black backpack was flailing around on her back as she ran. "Help! Someone stole my Pokemon! He went that way!" She pointed in the direction she had been running from, looking at Kendal with helpless and sad eyes. "You've gotta help! I'm too weak to do it myself!"

Kendal spun around, looking for Charmander, who was nowhere to be seen. "Err, I'm really sorry, but I can't find my Pokemon either..." Kendal murmured. She looked down at the girl’s feet, and saw that she was wearing a pair of bright rainbow colored rocks that went up to her knees.

"What! But... but... OH NO! YOU CAN'T JUST ABANDON ME LIKE THIS! BULBASAUR IS MY ONLY FRIEND! WAAAAAAAAAAAH!" the girl screamed, looking around frantically, appearing to be searching for the person who took her Bulbasaur.

Kendal gave a weird look to the girl. She didn't know what to say. She didn't know what was wrong with her, she didn't know if she had a problem or if she was just crazy. And to make matters worse, she didn't know where Charmander was. She didn't know what to do at all.

"CHAR!"

Kendal spun around, relieved to see Charmander standing there, looking up at her and the girl. The Pokemon jumped up into Kendal's arms, her emerald green eyes glistening in the rising sun. Kendal grinned. "Okay, lets go get Bulbasaur back."

"YAY!" the girl shrieked. "Okay, we've got to hurry... he went just behind the Pokemon Center..." she explained, running behind the huge building. There was a large field behind it, and Kendal spotted a dark figure about one hundred yards away.

"There he is," she said, running faster towards the shady figure. "Charmander, go and get him!"

Charmander leapt out of Kendal's arms and charged towards the bandit at full speed. Kendal didn't think she had ever seen a Pokemon run that fast, especially a small one like Charmander. As they ran after Charmander and the thief, Kendal looked over at the girl, whose chocolate eyes were widened at the sight of Charmander sprinting towards the man. "Your Charmander's real fast," she murmured. "Did you train it?"

Kendal shook her head, and saw that Charmander had now jumped onto the thief's back and was shooting him in the head with a series of Ember attacks. "Holy cow," she murmured. A few moments later, the thief had dropped onto the ground, and Kendal and the girl ran up to him. "Great job, Charmander," Kendal said, quite astonished at her Pokemon's unexpected prowess.

"Hey, you mean thief, give me my Bulbasaur back!" the girl demanded, kicking the man in the stomach. He appeared to be unconscious, so she grabbed the ball out of his hands, and smiled back up at Kendal. "Thank you SO MUCH for helping me get my Bulbasaur back! I'm forever in your debt!" She enlarged the Pokeball, and clicked the button again, releasing the Pokemon from the ball. It jumped onto the ground as a red morph of light, and soon the light faded, and a dinosaur-looking Pokemon with green colored skin and a giant bulb on its back stood in its place.

"Oh, uhh, it was no problem," Kendal shrugged. After all, it really wasn't, considering that she had done nothing. "It's all thanks to Charmander." She glanced down at her Pokemon, who was grinning back up at her.

"Oh, by the way, my name's Cayleigh," the girl said.

"I'm Kendal."

"Say, you got a PokePal?"

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"Wow, thanks thanks thanks for adding me to your Pals list!" Cayleigh exclaimed, hugging her pink PokePal close to her chest. "You're my first pal! And first friend on my journey so far! Oh my gosh, do you want to get on the chat and see if anyone's on? Huh, huh?"

Kendal's eyes widened as Cayleigh begged her. She couldn't wait until she was away from her, and free to go on her journey alone. "Sure, I'll go in the chat room..." she brought up the chat room screen on her PokePal.

POKEPAL CHAT ROOM -- 23094 CURRENT MEMBERS: Jayson, Chad, Karissa

*Kendal has joined the chat
*Cayleigh has joined the chat


Jayson: wow omg, what a loser hahaha
Chad: I know...
Karissa: Hey Kendal and Cayleigh.
Cayleigh: Hi! Dose ne 1 want 2 batle?
Jayson: ... stop typing like an idiot.
Kendal: Sorry... she's a bit weird.
Chad: LOL. By the way, how old is everyone here?
Karissa: It's ok... everyone is a little weird sometimes XD where are you? I'm in the Test Gym right now.. about to battle Serena once the battle before me is finished. and I'm 15.
Cayleigh: HEY! Im not weird. i'm 13...
Kendal: me and Cayleigh are in the Pokemon Center. i'm 14.
Chad: oh yeah, Karissa, I beat Serena yesterday. she's pretty easy. And I know where the ruby is, I know where the ruby is! Bwa ha ha ha! *brick'd*
Jayson: stfu -_- ... i'm 14.
Karissa: so Jayson, I think we should battle after I beat up Serena! what kind of Pokemon do you have?
Jayson:Munchlax and Elekid.
Chad: =D Munchlax kicks ***
Karissa: Oh, sweet... I have a Totodile! He's soooo cuute! oh, and a pidgey. what kind of Pokemon do you guys have? (Kendal and Cayleigh...?)
Kendal: Charmander.
Cayleigh: Bulbasaur and Growlithe! yaaa! whee he heee!


"Hey, I didn't know you had a Growlithe," Kendal said to Cayleigh, looking up from her PokePal. Cayleigh nodded.


Jayson: Cayleigh, stop being such an idiot or I will hunt you down and kick your ***.
Chad: LMAO XDDD
Cayleigh: ... ;-;
Kendal: Geeze, you're nice...

*Kendal has exited the chat room
*Cayleigh has exited the chat room


Kendal sighed, closing her PokePal. She looked up at Cayleigh, who was trying to cover her eyes with her green cap, but Kendal could see her eyes watering anyways. "Cayleigh, don't listen to those jerks..."

"No, it's true! I'm an idiot! But all I wanted to do is make some friends, and now they go all psycho on me! I don't know what I do wrong! WHAT DO I DO WRONG?!" she leaned against her PokePal, causing it to dig into her legs as she sobbed.

"Cayleigh, calm down... you're not an idiot! I mean, I'm your friend, aren't I? I added you to my PokePals list! I helped you save your Bulbasaur! Come on, don't cry like this... Maybe I can help you even a little more? I'll battle you so you can get ready for your Test Battle, how's that?"

Cayleigh's face suddenly perked up. Her eyes were still puffy and watery, but she wore a happy expression. "Really? You'd really do that? Oh, yay! First you save my Bulbasaur, and now you're going to train with me! Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy!"


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There it is. Expect the next chapter in a couple days. =D *pies for everyone*
 
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