Thanks for the reviews! (Although I've only had two). I've had 50 views so far,though. Please review when you read! (Not all 50 of you, though!!!!!!) Anyway, here's the 3rd chapter! (Yes, it IS longer!)
Chapter 3:The Legendary Team
After a while (Kris, Ash, and Maxie shivering in the rain), two girls came bolting toward the temple. One, adout 14, had orange hair in a ponytail and wore yellow shorts and a top. The other, a little bit younger than the orange- haired one, had brown hair that came down in two ponytails on the sides with a red bandanna on top. She wore a red shirt and a white skirt and looked completely miserable in the rain. These two girls were Misty (orange- hair) and May (brown- hair). Kris and Ash had known both for a long time.
"Sorry we're late!" Misty said, hardly shivering in the rain at all, being a water- type. "I got caught up at the gym!" Misty was the Cerulean Gym leader.
May didn't like the rain as much as Misty did. She had the same expression on her face as Maxie had. She was also a fire- type, but she was the only co-ordinator in the group. "I was training for my next contest with Max!"
Right on cue, a boy about 8 years old bolted out of the rain. He had dark blue hair and wore glasses. As he skid along a rain puddle, it turned to ice. This was Max, May's little brother. He was an ice-type and knew almost everything you would need to know adout Pokemon. He enjoyed these cold winter days just as much as Misty.
"Where have you been?!" May yelled at him.
"Getting here! You left me on the outskirts of Ever Grande! Shesh May, you were running like the Shadow itself were after you!" he replied and got a swift punch on the shoulder that told him to shut up.
A couple of minutes later, two more figures appeared out of the rain. A tall boy, about 16, with brown hair that stuck up in spikes and a younger boy with white hair. The boy with white hair had a Plusle and Minun purched on his shoulders. The older boy was Brock, a breeder, leader of the Pewter Gym, and a rock- type. The younger was Tory, a boy from Larousse city and a psychic- type.
"Hey!" Tory waved as they made it to the others. Tory had been afraid of Pokemon for years until a freak attack from Deoxys caused him to become more confident and brave.
Just four more people to go, Kris thought as she counted the already gathered members. The rain had stopped, a blessing, and the sun was out.
The temple overlooked the coast and Kris stared out at the waves, lost in thought. Suddenly, she spotted a speeding boat near the shore.... or on the shore for that matter...
A girl with blond hair with lighter highlights in it and wearing a miniskirt (it was the middle of winter) got out and yelled at the driver of the boat, a man with a blue bandanna on his head that had an "A" on the front. Archie!
"Next time, I'm flying!" the blond- haired girl yelled. Another girl, this one with bright red abd dressed more appropriatly, climbed out of the boat and said, "Taylor, you are a fighting- type!"
"Exactly Sarah!" These two were two of Kris' friends from Ever Grande. Sarah, the red- haired girl, was an elite co-ordinator and a grass- type. Taylor, the blond, was a skilled trainer who had been invited to join both Team Magma and Aqua, So Kris invited her to join the legendary team instead. Oh, and I'm sure you know who Archie is! (Leader of Team Aqua)
The last member of the team stepped out of the boat, her raven black hair picked up in a breeze. This was Shia, Kris' only living relative.
Oh yeah, she's also a demon.
Anyway, we all assembled around and Kris called order. (With 11 members, she had to).
"Ok, now first item of business, the Shadow Pokemon! We've successfully purified all of the Shadow Pokemon (except Lugia) that the Cipher have made! Now, we need to turn our attention to a different matter, stopping the Shadow Forces!" Kris yelled.
"We've been doing that already!" Taylor said.
"But we need to cover every aspect of the Forces! Come New Year's, the War will become much worse!"
Everybody murmered as Kris watched on in silent grief. Greif for the human race. Greif for her lost family.
Greif for the world.
Please review! I'd also like to say, I based Sarah and Taylor on two of my best friends. Thanks guys! Couldn't do it without you!!!!!!