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The Lillycove Chronicles By Chaka27 (advanceshipping & gymshipping)

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Chaka27

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The Lillycove Chronicles (advanceshipping & gymshipping)

Okay everyone...I post all the new chappy's on the first page AND the last now......enjoy (Edit-12/17/05)


;025; THE LILLYCOVE CRONICHLES;238;
By:Chaka27




“Human Talk”
[Pokemon Talk]​
………………………………


THE LILLYCOVE CHRONICLES


“Human Talk”
[Pokemon Talk]


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CHAPTER 1 The Start of Something Else


“I can’t believe it” Ash Ketchum said “I won the Hoenn League!”

“I Know I’m so happy for you Ash, my eyes were glued to the match the whole time.” His best friend May said.

[Please, you had your eyes glued to Ash] Pikachu said.

“Quiet you” May growled. But it is partially true, she thought, she was in love with Ash but misty was always around him to keep her away.

“Hey May, Why are you strangling Pikachu?” Misty smirked

“Wh-What are you talking about!” May said dropping Pikachu and Sweat dropping.




“Whatever” misty said.

“Would you guys hurry up,” Max Yelled “were almost home.”

“Coming” the others yelled.

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May and Max’s House

The next Morning Ash and friends are eating breakfast when Ash gets a call

“Meet My Dad!!!” Ash Hollered.

“Yep he’s Archie of Team Aqua” Delia said.

“What, his dad is one of the best Known Trainers in Hoenn and you didn’t tell him?” May askedloudly.

“Wellyeah” Delia said.
Everyone Face faulted.

“Maybe I can explain.” A voice said on the screen.

“You’re Archie!” Max said

“Yes I’m Archie Ketchum,” Archie said “We didn’t want you to get hurt so while you and your mom stayed in Pallet Town, me and all your brothers and sisters stayed in Lillycove City.


“Brothers and sisters!!!” Brock Gasped.

“Yeah there’s Sean at 19, Shelly at 16, Matt at 15, you at 13, and lastly the twins Nick and Vicky at 9 until next week when they turn 10.” Delia Explained.

“So Ash, you’re one of six.” Caroline said.

“We’ll be half way there soon.” Norman Smiled as he looked at his pregnant wife.

“Really, I thought she was just fat like May.” Misty muttered. May Glared at her. Just then five faces appeared on the screen.

“Hi Ash.” They said smiling. It was all his siblings.

Meanwhile as Ash caught up with his Family. Somebody was watching from the outside

“Maxie sir, we have located Ash Ketchum.” Courtney said.

“Good,” Maxie smirked “Continue the plan as ordered, if all works out we will be one step closer to Archie.”

“Yes sir.” Hank smirked

“The Fall of the all Hoenn approaches.” Maxie gleefully announced.




“We made it!” Ash cheered getting off the plane. And by Plane I mean Huge Team Aqua Party Jet.

“Do we really have to get off?” Groaned Max “It’s so fun.”

“Oh quit whining!” Yelled May “I can’t wait to see the Mall of Lillycove. It’s the biggest mall in Hoenn, Kanto and Jhoto,”

“Is shopping all you care about?” Misty Smirked.

“For your Information there is someone!” May replied


“Don’t you mean something?” Max Smirked

“Uh, Oh yeah right, that’s what I meant.” May said sweat dropping.

‘Who was she talking about?’ Ash thought.

“Well anyways,” May said “we better go to Archie’s House first.”

“Yeah I can’t wait” Caroline said (She and Norman came to celebrate Christmas).

“Hey Brock something wrong?” Norman asked “You haven’t said a word since we left Petalburg.”

“Its just Archie said Ash lived with his mom to keep him safe, but from what?” Brock replied as they entered the Pokemon Center.

“That’s because he is next in line to control Team Aqua and Team Magma wants to capture him, but they couldn’t because Team Rocket was there to stop them.


“Team Rocket is good! Well it’s a shame they disbanded.” Ash replied.

“Yep, they joined Team Aqua to protect the world from devastation, to uni-

“WE KNOW, WE KNOW!!!” they all roared.

“Well now that we learned about Team Rocket” Brock said “why don’t I learn about youuuOUCH!”

“Get over here Brock!” Mist Yelled as she pulled him by the ear for the umpteenth time.

“Say aren’t you real close to the Petalburg Joy?” Norman asked.


“Why yes, and aren’t you that man she said she was dating since your wife left you?” Nurse Joy Replied.

“WHAT” Caroline roared “I thought you were over that affair!?” (From when she thought Norman was having an affair with her).”I think I’ll go have a ‘private’ conversation with her.”

“Nurse Joy Speak-“

“You perverted little B*tch! Get your S*utty little hands of My Husband, or I’ll Jam your horny head up you’re a**!!!”



The Next Day after a huge family reunion, Ash and May woke up to a camera flash to find Ash was lying on the couch and may was lying next to him with his head on his shoulder and max took a picture of them.

“Max give me that camera!” May roared.

Max Screamed, “Ah! Mommy Help!”

“Well okay,” Caroline said “but only because that picture is so cute.”

“Mom!”

“Sorry May, but it is.”

Hey May, can we talk?” Misty asked

“Sure.” May said. They went into the hall and Misty turned around.

“Okay,” Misty said, “I don’t know how you got away with sleeping like that, but back off because Ash is MY property!”

“PROPERTY!” May Yelled.
“Yeah.” Said Misty.

“Well I Love him so I won’t back down.”

“Have it your way Maple!”

“Maybe I will Waterflower.”

“And maybe you won’t.”

“We’ll see about that” Then May walked back into the other room, while Misty walked out to Ash. May went into the room to see it was empty except for her Dad and Ash’s Dad who both had huge smiles. “What” May asked.

“We heard your fight.” Archie said.

“And your mothers and us think you and Ash belong together.” Norman added.

“Thanks” May said trying to hide her beat red face. Meanwhile Misty was walking to Ash’s room when shelly stopped her to tell her to back off May and Ash because she overheard the fight too. Misty ignored this and went to talk to Ash.

“Ash” she said

“Yeah Mist?” Ash replied.

“I-I Love you.” She said as she went in to kiss him.

“Whoa! Hold it Misty, I only like you as a friend.”

“But you said May was your BEST Friend,” Misty whimpered” how can you Love her when we’ve been friends longer, I’ve known you longer and you like her more.”

First, I don’t Love her she’s my BEST FRIEND,” Ash said “second we’re more alike and I taught her everything I knew about pokemon. When she loses a contest I feel like I lost to.


“Fine, but she better be careful, because she might wake up one morning chained to the ocean floor.” Misty growled. Ash gulped and decided to warn May and let her sleep in his room tonight.


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Next Chappy coming soon^^ Read and Reply!!!
 
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Okay, this is your first story, for a bigginer it's alright :)

But here is some things to make it better...

First, try to make it longer. Take your time, and you'll have a decent story!

2nd, don't put 2 chaps together. It's a little better when you seperate chaps by diffrent posts ^^

3rd and finnaly, try to explain things better. It's easier to picture the story when youu describe things

Those are the only things you need work on, use them and you'll make a great story! And I'll post my opinion about the story later ;)
 
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dragonmaster5000

Guest
For a beginner, this story is pretty good! You could be just a little more descriptive, but otherwise it's good. :) And it's definitely original.
 
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jinxie

Guest
GYMSHIPPING!!! yay!
I like it.
it seems to have an interesting plot
work on description, punctuation, and grammar
But it's good
and don't make all of the events so sudden
But please do continue...GYMSHIPPING! yay
 
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Crane

Guest
this first story of youres is good, no and I MEAN MARVELOUS AND THE BEST EVER,
 

Anikin

Rebel
Hummmmmmm...... this story seems very good. Are you shure you're a beginer.
 

Chaka27

Banned
Thanks to everyone who posted I was sure you all would hate it. I did add more detail and that was technicly all Chapter 1, it was divided into parts.

Expect the next chapter later today.

YES, I am a beginer.

See Ya
 
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Anikin

Rebel
Realy... well you gotta have more fayth in youreself then.
 

Chaka27

Banned
Okay here is the Next chapter!


___CHAPTER 2- Love, or maybe not.

[Ash] Pikachu shouted, happy to se his trainer.

“Hey Buddy.” Ash said as the yellow mouse’s fur tickled him gently. Meanwhile May was talking to her Blaziken about how the Lillycove contest hall was having a Coordinator demonstration and they wanted her to come.

“May, I love you!” a voice said

“Oh Ash I-Ack! Drew what the hell was that about?” May said as she realized who it was and slapped him.

“Oh so you like that A-hole Ketchum? Drew grunted.
“Screw you, and I Love him!!!” May replied. And with that Drew left saying he had a job to do

“Hey May, are you okay? She turned around, it was Vicky and her Linnone.

“Oh Vicky, I love Ash but Misty wont let me tell him” May sobbed “besides, I’d be to nervous.”


“Well Misty is no longer your competition,” Nick Said as he walked up with his shinny Furret, gleaming like a brand new bike, (’which Ash still owes me’ May thought) “Misty told Ash she loved him and he rejected her.”

“Really,” May said perked up “were is she? I want to rub it in her face.” May said with a boost of confidence. Just then Blaziken walked out of the ladies room with a smirk on his face, but before may could ask why Misty stormed out soaking wet and hair a mess, as if she was swallowed by a Wailord.

“That Overcooked Chicken gave me a swirly!!” Misty scowled as everyone burst into laughter. And Misty was so mad she shoved May with all her strength from her jealousy and embarrassment and ran out the door with Brock not far behind her. May on the other hand, was pushed over the couch and into the glass coffee table. As Ash ran across the lobby he panicked, his mind was full of questions; What happened to May? Is she hurt? Why was Misty so Jealous? Why was I never this worried about Misty? Does May Love me? How bad is she hurt? Why did Brock follow Misty? Does he like her? Why the hell is this lobby so damn long?
He finally reached May he saw what he had feared, she was unconscious

and badly bleeding.



“Ahhhhh!!!” May screamed when she saw what she was covered in “My shirt is covered in Fruit Punch!!!”

“See Ash you shouldn’t worry to much, you didn’t loose tour girlfriend.”

“She isn’t my Girlfriend, were Best Friends!!!” Ash yelled at Max as his face turned redder than a Vulpix.


“Well then as a Best Friend then I guess you’ll come help me buy her new outfit.” May said winking.

“WellerrummI” Ash stammered.

“Great! I’ll go get changed.” May grinned.

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Later May and Ash are walking in the mall. May has her arm linked with Ash, dragging him along from store to store like a puppy, or a CUTE puppy May thought. “May,” Ash groaned “Are we going to stay in a store for more than ten seconds.”

“Yes, this one w-Omigosh! I LOVE THIS SONG!!” May screamed as she heard the music play in the dance floor in the middle of the store. “Come on Ash dance with me” she said as she dragged Ash to the floor.

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On a Monday, I am waiting
Tuesday, I am fading
And by Wednesday, I can't sleep
Then the phone rings, I hear you
And the darkness is a clear view
Cuz you've come to rescue me

Fall... With you, I fall so fast
I can hardly catch my breath, I hope it lasts

[Chorus:]
Ohhhhh
It seems like I can finally rest my head on something real
I like the way that feels
Ohhhhh
It's as if you've known me better than I ever knew myself
I love how you can tell
All the pieces, pieces, pieces of me
All the pieces, pieces, pieces of me

I am moody, messy
I get restless, and it's senseless
How you never seem to care

When I'm angry, you listen
Make me happy is your mission
And you won't stop til I'm there

Fall... Sometimes I fall so fast
Well, I hit that bottom
Crash, you're all I have

[Chorus:]
Ohhhhh
It seems like I can finally rest my head on something real
I like the way that feels
Ohhhhh
It's as if you known me better than I ever knew myself
I love how you can tell
All the pieces, pieces, pieces of me

How do you know everything I'm about to say?
Am I that obvious?
And if it's written on my face...
I hope it never goes away... yeah

On a Monday, I am waiting
And by Tuesday, I am fading into your arms...
So I can't breathe

[Chorus:]
Ohhhhh
It seems like I can finally rest my head on something real
I like the way that feels
Ohhhhh
It's as if you've know me better than I ever knew myself
I love how you can tell
Ohhhhh
I love how you can tell
Ohhhhh
I love how you can tell
All the pieces, pieces, pieces of me
All the pieces, pieces, pieces of me

…………………………

As the song continues girls would start to walk towards Ash but mat would stand between them and glare at the girls and they would back away. Ash saw this and smiled at the fact that May might be claming him, and if anyone was going to claim him he would want it to be May, he then started thinking about him and May in the shower(yes this Fic has turned PG-13). After the song, May went to try on clothes while Ash waited outside on the benchtrying to see through the 3 inch wide gap between the wall and the end of the curtain May “accidentally” left.

[Trying to look at May’s arse?] Togepi said (him and Pikachu came along)

“Ye-NO!!!” Ash stammered.

“Well Ashy, how do I look?” May asked (She was wearing her Emerald outfit).

“Damn Hot!” Ash muttered as something in his pants began to harden, which May secretly noticed.

“What did say?” May said, very clear of what he said.

“You look great” Ash replied as he went back to his shower fantasy. May smirked and grabbed a bunch of boys clothes she had picked out (Brendan’s Emerald outfit) and Pushed Ash in the booth to try them on. A few minuets later Ash walked out of the booth in the new clothes.

“You look so cute!” May said as Ash blushed.

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Later on their way home Ash and May decided to stop and get something for lunch. May wanted to eat at a fancy Seafood restraint.

“Please Ash.” May begged, lip quivering and pulling her puppy dog eyes.

“Fine.” Ash groaned (he only gave up because she looked so frickin’ cute).

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Later Ash and May were waiting for their food when someone was spying on them

“All right,” Hank said “We’ll take the girl too, we don’t want any witnesses.

“Here is your Calamari” the waiter said.

“Holly Sh*t it’s Squid!” Ash shouted and attacked the food.

“This can’t end well” May said as bits of Squid flew everywhere.
_________

Taa Daa! well how was it? please R+R,also if you didn't know the song was "Pieces of Me" by Ashlee Simpson (I changed it 12/15/05) and when I say gymshipping I mean Brock and Misty...................In Bed :-0.

See Ya
 
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Chaka27

Banned
Okay heres a spoiler. *Yay,my first one ever!*

[SPOIL]"Uh Oh, I know that face....." Max said nervously.[/SPOIL]

Also do you think somebody could make a banner or pictures for this story???
 
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jinxie

Guest
like I said before, try not to make the events so sudden
it's going well
...gymshipping!...
there's nothing wrong with the song but it's just not...fic-like
Where was my beautiful, beautiful Brock? i missed him
welll
yes. Continue
 

Anikin

Rebel
Chaka27 said:
Okay heres a spoiler. *Yay,my first one ever!*

[SPOIL]"Uh Oh, I know that face....." Max said nervously.[/SPOIL]

Also do you think somebody could make a banner or pictures for this story???
I wonder how this story will turn out to be. Boy is that some spoiler or what.
 

Chaka27

Banned
Hey dont dis the song Its MY favorite *goes and dances to it* Also My next chap is about [SPOIL]A big fight and a HUGE shopping spree[/SPOIL]

Also the score is:

May-6

Misty-0

Also Brock will be there and lets just say him and misty have fun.......in BED!!!
 

Anikin

Rebel
I think I might know in what you're saying. Lets hope that this story doesn't turn out to be a Pokeshipping story.
 

Chaka27

Banned
Hell no! I am keeping this andvenceshipping. And lucky for you guys I'm done with capter 3 and there will be at least 7 chapters but hopefilly (and probably) more.
 
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Chaka27

Banned
Here it is.......

CHAPTER 3- Love is in the Air

“Sorry I got us kicked out and still have to pay for the meal.” Ash said sadly. “I guess only one of us can eat. I think it should be you.”

“That’s okay Ash,” May replied “and thanks.” May decided to go to Dairy Queen and have a “Brownie Earthquake”. As she was about to eat it she heard Ash’s stomach growl, so she got an idea. “Hey Ash,” May said grinning evilly “open up.” And before he could react she stuck a giant spoonful of Brownie in his mouth, causing him to blush.

“Errthanks.” Ash said while still blushing. May just giggled and finishes the sundae and Ash went back to his shower fantasy


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Afterward, May was watching “Full House” when Misty walked up and sat down on the couch next to her. “Well Miss Maple” Misty Smirked “How was your, date?”

May remarked “Great, I made Ash blush about five times.”

“I doubt it” Misty sneered. “I haven’t made him blush once ever, and you expect me too believe you could make him blush 5 times in 2 hours.

“Well then maybe he likes me more than you.” May grinned.

“Please, why would Ash not like me?” Misty bragged

“I can think of 12 good reasons.” May snickered. Just then Misty pinned her to the ground and punched her in the jaw but May kicked her off and b*tch slapped her. Misty kicked her in the knee but May pushed her into the wall and Misty spit on her. All the time they were yelling ‘he’s mine’, ‘no mine’ and swearing at each other. Then Ash, Max, and Shelly walked in but Max ran away crying for his Mommy at the sight of the Catfight.

“Meeeooww!” Shelly said in shock. But Misty ignored her and threw May a few feet away.

“Hold it guys stop!” Ash yelled.

“Ash!” Misty said sweetly “Oh I-HEY!!!” she shouted as he pushed her aside and ran towards May. As he was helping her up Luvdisc and Blaziken popped out of their Pokeballs.
[Well now who’s the girl?] Luvdisc asked May’s Blaziken Blaze (Luvdisc had been at the Cerulean City Gym and didn’t know May but knew Blaze from breakfast).

[That’s May, Ash’s True Love and My Trainer] Blaze said.


[I believe ya Blaze.] Luvdisc said as it started hopping around Ash and May (that’s a sign of that the two are soulmates, but only Misty and Shelly knew that).

“LUVDISC YOU IDIOT POKEMON!!!” Misty screamed “You wouldn’t know what you were doing if I told you! Go away!” And with that Misty broke Luvdisc’s Pokeball, causing it to cry.

“Luvdisc, don’t cry” May said “I’ll be your owner.”

[yay] luvdisc cheered [I’m loved]

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Later on everyone was watching MTV when May and Shelly walked in with huge grins on their faces.

“Hey guys what’s up?” Ash said.

“Well” May replied almost bursting with excitement “Shelly gave me Ash’s shopping card and we haven’t been to the Mall yet sooo”

“Uh Oh, I know that face.” Max said nervously.

Ash, were goingSHOPPING!!!!!” May screamed in joy.

“Hold it, I think its my turn to spend time with Ash.” Misty growled.

“Well since May has my card I guess I should take her.” Ash replied secretly happy to be with May alone again.

“How much money is on the card?” Brock asked.

“100,000 dollars.” May said.

“Holly Sh*t 100 grand!” Ash roared.

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“Ash, hurry up!” May said.

“Well May I had to have a van deliver all your stuff back to the Mansion.” Ash complained.

“Okay but I was going to let you pick the movie but” May said.

“Well then, ‘The Exorcism of Emily Rose’ here we come!” Ash said excitedly.

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“Ash, I’m scared.” May said clinging to him

“Don’t worry May, I’m here.” Ash Said.

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Later the two teens had gone to; Macy’s, Target, Kohl’s, Old Navy, Gap, Limited Too, Victoria’s Secret (May asked if she should try the clothes on but he got a nosebleed from overexcitement), and Marshall’s.
And it came to their attention that they were both turning 13 on the 24 of December (which was in one week) along with Nick and Vicky who were getting starting their journey and they have not gotten each other anything

‘What should I get May?’ Ash thought.

“This looks good huh Pikachu.” Ash said as he saw the perfect gift.

[She’ll love it] Pikachu replied. It was a beautiful Sapphire necklace
with the shape of a heart and a gold border.

“Hey what’s in the bag?” May asked in a Turn-On voice.


“It’s a surprise.” Ash said as he went back to his shower fantasy AGAIN!!!

“Well time to buy our party clothes Ashy.” May snickered.

“Oh that’s right. Ash said. There was going to be an annual Team Aqua Christmas Ball. This year Ash and co. would be here for it. Ash was going to wear a black tuxedo but ay wanted him to wear a light blue jacket.

“It will match what I’m wearing.” May said suggestively

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Misty is sitting in a bench by the waterfall, crying about May and Ash when Brock walked up to her and sat down with his arm around her.

“Hey Misty, you okay?” Brock asked. Misty then leaned against his chest causing him to blush, but Misty blushed when she realized she never knew he was so muscular and strong and handsome.

“I’m better now Brock thanks.” She said.

“M-sty,” Brock stammered “I just want you to know even if you like Ash I still love you.” And then he went in to kiss her and Misty surprisingly didn’t stop him. They shared a passionate kiss for about 30 minuets long.

“Oh Brock,” Misty said lovingly “I love you too but I still love Ash. Its so hard to decide, when I first met Ash I thought he was the one but when I first saw you flirt with a girl I pulled you away and I thought it was because It was annoying but now I know I was just jealous.”

“Misty, if you choose Ash I will still Love you.” Brock said blushing madly.


“Well you won’t have to worry baby,” Misty said in a Sexy voice “I choose you over Ash.”

“Really, Misty that’s great but first you should go apologize to May,” Brock said “you were really hard on her.”

“Okay but only if you give me the best kiss you got.” Misty growled playfully. And with that Misty pinned him to the bench and they started making out big time with lots of tongue action and then Misty went to apologize to May.

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“Okay then,” May said “I forgive you”

[So do we!] Blaze, Toto, Rose, Angel, and Skit said.

[And Especially me!] Lovely (Luvdisc) said.

“Thanks.” Misty Said gladly.

“I knew he liked you Misty,” May said “so I told him to tell you and I bought you guys matching pink outfits for the Ball”

“Wow thanks May” Misty said. And with that she went off to find Brock

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“Oh Brock, You’re sooooo sexy!”

“Misty you angel, take me

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“Hey Mom, Dad,” Max Asked “What are Brock and Misty doing?

“Wellumthey”

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Well how was it? Told ya about Brock and Misty

See ya!
 
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Chaka27

Banned
Thanx guys :) Btw I fixed the first post a little but its basicly the same. Also it might be a couple days before the next chappy but thats not a long wait.
 
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