The Lone Dragon's art thread!

[*Silver Pheonix-Dragon*]

Hi people! I do my stuff on MS Paint, for it is all I have.
Bulbasuar, Ivysaur, Venasaur
~ Here is the Bulbasaur line. nothing much, but I'll do different pics. this was just a "starter". heh, starter...
don't complain that they look wierd; this is my drawing style.Plus, this is TEMPORARY!I'll fix them up good.
EDIT: I'll never draw this style for quite sometime again...i'll never revamp this pic...

The Kecleon PRE: Kelon
~ EDIT: i've finished thenew pic! check it out!

Houndupi
~ Lastly here is my Houndupi, the Houndour Pre-evo. the feet are big. yes i know, and the white things near the eyes are called TEAR-DUCTS.

I'll eventually post more poke and fakemon.
Check out my Sprite thread!

 

[Spriteman]

Personally, I LOVE the last one, the hounder prevo, 'tis kawaii ^^ The bulbasaur line is flat, nails are too long and bulbasaur has short, stubby legs, your looks like its been bred with a giraffe or something. Keleon is just ugly and should burn. Again, the hounder pre is lovely, but there are a lot of tiny little flaws you could try and fix with it.

 

[Tyger-san]

I totally agree with Spriteman, The Hondour pre- evo is the cutest . Your style is so cute <3 Make sure to watch how you draw feet though, sometimes it seems a bit unpreportional. But I totally understand. In the pics I draw, I usually cut off the feet to avoid a problem, lol. Feet and arms can sometimes be hard to draw...

But very cute artwork, quite nice for MS Paint; its all I have aswell.

Keep up the great art

~ Tyger-san

 

[*Silver Pheonix-Dragon*]

Thanks for saying "your pictures' feet suck"!
I don't care for how Spriteman said my Kelon sucks! EVIL!
bitlord1, I got those sprites from the FRLG avatar section.
Though, you probably dod not see, my Houndupi tis a GIRL. no boys. Houndevil, or the houndour PRE of P.J., i believe are all male.

 

[Torkoal]

This is good. Houndupi's eye looks kinda funny though, and the saur line's legs are all too long. These are minor problems, which if fixed will greatly impprove the quality of your work. Good job!

 

[*Silver Pheonix-Dragon*]

New pics!

Wassup!
i'm back with stuff wrapped up with bows for christmas. i'll be getting my fakemon up and going.... Christmas pics.; etc.

First, I have some poke pics.:
Megainum
~ I love Meganium... but this pic I scribbled first, so I had to go over it with big, black lines. Turned out good... except the hed is a little too small...

Latias!
~I have falled head-over-heels for the Lati@s...Trial run as well to see how people like my work. I may set up a request thread if so.

Ho-oh
~ This is good too. It as well is part of my experiment.

Manyula & Perap!
~.... enough said...

Now several of my fakemon
Chikorquil, Quileef, & Typhlonium
~ the drawn version.... I have several sprites of these... READ THE BOX ON THE PIC FOR MORE INFO!

Yoni & Yoshi!
~ Everyone ....(you know you do) thinks Yoshi deserves to be a Poke... so I made him mine! In Super Mario World, Yoshi had a smaller, armless, saddle-less, and scale-less version before he /she turned into a Yoshi....Mine yoshi PRE makes it true.
What is this? 17 different Evolutions....

More info will eventually be given....
Check the rest of my stuff...
Catch ya on the flip side!

 

[Clockworkz]

Apparently, your brain didn't develop as much as ours did. You apparently couldn'tve... I dunno... Made THIS thread a poll? And asked HERE?
And also... You can't tell that that Spriteman is clearly giving you what's known as "criticism"?
See, if you sucked, and weren't a "holier-than-thou" person in saying "I don't care", I'd be a helluva lot nicer.
Get off paint, and a buy a scanner. MSPaint does not qualify as serious art unless you're damn good at art, and you're clearly not.

For Gods' sakes, fix those clawed feet. Looks like bandages around their toes. Their necks are too long, and generally, the proportions are pretty bad. References are always a good thing, y'know.
Kleon is ugly as sin. Piss-poor proportions and nubs for limbs doesn't make a baby Pokemon cute.
Houdupi... What is that white crap coming out of your eyes? An infection? May wanna see a vet. I also don't know how it can walk with feet that big.
The Meganium needs surgury. Badly. Its limbs are scrawny, the petals are enourmous, and its eyes are bigger than its head.

I didn't look at the rest. I don't want to. Clearly, you're trying too hard to be cute by making the feet, hands, claws, eyes too massive. Knock it off. It's like, "I can't draw with any real skill, so I'll make some features big on an otherwise scrawny subject! Cuuute!"
-_-

 

[EmberGryphon]

^ o0.... Christ, Clockworkz...

But, y'know, making a poll asking about a seperate thread might come across as... ah, advertising your art thread, or trying to draw as much attention to yourself as possible. And that tends to make people annoyed at you, because there seem to be more people making threads than replying to them these days, and making pointless threads bumps down other people's art. So try not to do it, alright? ^_^ That said.

I'm not gonna comment much on the first couple pictures you did... 'cause I don't have any critisism that Clockworkz didn't already point out. (And by the way, he might have been a little harsh, but there's some good advice there. And Spriteman was pretty nice about it, on the whole; you might wanna listen to him, too. If you take the good comments with the bad, it'll make you a better artist overall. :3) Latias and Ho'oh are pretty good, too- the smaller outlines make them look a little less... ah, 'drawn with a crayon during recess,' to put it bluntly. Manyula and Perrappu, too, although Perrappu's eye sticking out over its head like that is a little creepy. ^^() Houndupi is a cute design, but once more your thick outlines screw you over- the details make her look cluttered and less attractive.

All in all it's not bad- but lighten up; not everyone's gonna come in here and say your art is fantastic, and taking critisism, and using it to get better, is one of the hardest but more important parts of doing art and sharing it with other people. ^_^

 

[Infinity]

Ah don't mind clock too much Ember, he'll always be like that

Try not to be overzealous with the thickness of your lines. If you are working on just MS Paint you probably should dither a bit for shading.

If you are just starting out I would advise against posting art here because some people will tear you to shreds. Happened to me here ere a little over a year ago when I first began this thing called "art".

Get GIMP and practice, practice!

 

[^^torpedo^^]

I checked out yr other work and those legendary bird dogs really are SO cool.. post them here