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The lost heroes

Ok, this is my first comic... Its about the heroes 12 years ago that suddenly disapeared, and Max is going to find them. Why? Well, i cant tell you yet... here's the first comic:

episode1.jpg
Episode2.jpg
episode3.jpg

I know it isn't the best, but give me feedback please...
 
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Pearl Manyula

Well-Known Member
Hmm... That;s actually... Really good stoopidmhan. I didn't know you were this good... Well Actually I never came to ur comics til now.
 
lol thanks! well, heres episode 2, ill be putting it on the front page... i know it aint that good, but oh well...
Episode2.jpg
 
Well, Episode 3 is done... in the second day... And not really anybody's coming rite now... If nobody comes, im gonna be sad... waaa....
episode3.jpg
 
Thanks! Episode 4 will be out either later, or tomorrow
 
There are a couple things wrong

1)Don't use effing paint default colors!
2)Recoloing was horrible
3)Jokes are weak
4)Connect the speech bubbles to the talker

Please correct these, then it will be good.
 
ok, ill connect the speech bubbles,
i think the recoloring was fine
and it's not supposed to be funny, its supposed to be a semi-serious
and semi- funny comic... And I didn't use pain colors...

Thats my reply
 

Reign G

Roggen and Rolan
Well, comic two the darker yellow looked black. but it was fixed in issue 3. The one thing I see wrong is that it's JPG. Make it PNG, as JPG messes Sprites up.
 
ok, thanks, i just started making them JPG, but i'm actually moving this comic, and redoing it all. It will soon be called Pokemon: Juggernaut, and it will sort of be like this, with the attacks on cities, and with the heroes
 
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