The lost heroes

[stoopidmahn]

Ok, this is my first comic... Its about the heroes 12 years ago that suddenly disapeared, and Max is going to find them. Why? Well, i cant tell you yet... here's the first comic:

Spoiler: Episode 1: Strike of the Unknown!

Spoiler: Episode 2: Charizard??!!

Spoiler: Episode 3: To Viridian

I know it isn't the best, but give me feedback please...

 

[Frenzy boy]

hmmm...i like ill keeop a eye out 4 this comic

 

[stoopidmahn]

thanks!!! Im almost done episode 2 rite now

 

[Pearl Manyula]

Hmm... That;s actually... Really good stoopidmhan. I didn't know you were this good... Well Actually I never came to ur comics til now.

 

[stoopidmahn]

lol thanks! well, heres episode 2, ill be putting it on the front page... i know it aint that good, but oh well...

Spoiler: Episode 2: Charizard??!!

 

[stoopidmahn]

Well, Episode 3 is done... in the second day... And not really anybody's coming rite now... If nobody comes, im gonna be sad... waaa....

Spoiler: Episode 3: To Viridian

 

[pit-fall]

I like it! Keep up the good work

 

[stoopidmahn]

Thanks! Episode 4 will be out either later, or tomorrow

 

[.Bright Side.]

There are a couple things wrong

1)Don't use effing paint default colors!
2)Recoloing was horrible
3)Jokes are weak
4)Connect the speech bubbles to the talker

Please correct these, then it will be good.

 

[stoopidmahn]

ok, ill connect the speech bubbles,
i think the recoloring was fine
and it's not supposed to be funny, its supposed to be a semi-serious
and semi- funny comic... And I didn't use pain colors...

Thats my reply

 

[Reign G]

Well, comic two the darker yellow looked black. but it was fixed in issue 3. The one thing I see wrong is that it's JPG. Make it PNG, as JPG messes Sprites up.

 

[stoopidmahn]

ok, thanks, i just started making them JPG, but i'm actually moving this comic, and redoing it all. It will soon be called Pokemon: Juggernaut, and it will sort of be like this, with the attacks on cities, and with the heroes