The Mixed-Up Adventures of Red

[Blazin' Blaziken]

The Mixed-Up Adventures of Red/Roy (call him whatever)

This is my 2nd comic (1st one sucked) and I hope it's good. (This comic is rated PG or G)
Well, here they are.

Speech Bubble Key (as of Comics 3+):
|Color|Person|
|Red | Red |
|Black|Benny |

Chapter 0 (Intro): Hoenn? I thought Kanto!
Comic 1- A Panel!
Comic 2- Benny and His Hoenn Explanation
Chapter 1: Pokemon, Gyms, Red, and Benny!
Comic 3- Fishin' at Route 103


Remakes
Comic 1 Remake- A panel!
Comic 2 Remake- New Title:Hi Benny!
Comic 3 Remake- Fishin' at Route 103
Special 1 Remake- New Title:Ritual of X-Mas and Kissing?

Banners
I will make some banners that you can use to attract people here and sometimes, just for fun! Here is a list of banners I made:
1. The 1st banner. Made February 12, 2006. Title: The Mixed-Up Adventures of Roy/Red: Roy/Red's & Benny's Pokemon

2. The Valentine's Day Banner. Made on Valentine's Day of 2006. Title: We wish you a Happy V-Day!


Questions/Contests
PM me the answers to me to get a prize!
1. What Pokemon is the mysterious Pokemon in Banner 1? Prize: You can choose from the Guesser Award or a preview of new characters in the comic w/ their pokemon on a Trainer Card! Contest DONE! Benny's Pokemon is Mew!

Fan Stuff
Tc's by me!: Roy's TC
Benny's TC (SPOILER ALERT!)
Specials
Special 1- Mistletoe Mishap
Special 2- The April Fools Comic!

Coming Soon
Comics (Working Titles): Comic 4- Benny and His Pokemon (Description: We find out what pokemon Benny has!)
Comic 5- Colored? Why am I Colored? (Description: Roy finds out he's colored XD, and asks why he is.)

Credits
Credit to The Spriter's Resource for most of the stuff.
Credit to Beco, SecretMew, Mastercougar, blueguy, and Sindakwil for making comics that have inspired me to make this comic. Everyone, give them a round of applause! *clap**clap*

Other Notes
Hope you like it, give me tips, and people who rate 1 star, please don't post. Also, people who critizise me, dont be too harsh to me. You can critizise me, but don't be harsh.

 

[+Erin+]

its bit too short and the spech bubles are messy
keep it up thou

 

[hikari_blaze]

^ I agree with him, but I LIKE IT!!! ^______^

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

I should have comic 2 up tomorrow, and some comics are 4 panels, some are 6, some are 7-8, and some can be 1-3 if specials.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

Sorry to DP, but I made 2 more comics! In the Special, Mistletoe Mishap, you find out who the guy Roy is with by reading the other new comic, Benny and His Hoenn Explanation. Maybe I'll redo the Special.

 

[Socrates With A Lobotomy]

I like the comic itself, but the speech bubbles could use A LOT of work. 9/10

 

[Nintendo Master]

This is a good comic but you put The Adventures of Roy instead of The Adventures of Red.

 

[Feity]

DOES NOT WANT
crappy speechbubbles, copy and paste jobs, grammer, crap anti-aliasing, sucks.

 

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

Fierce Deity is right, everythings messy, theres weird speech biubbles, andom bits of red and blue, an the copy and paste job...lets not even go there. Ive got a pretty crappy comic meself, but i KNOW a bad comic when i see it. You can DEFINETLY IMPROVE!

 

[jellsprout]

Comic 1: Nice comic.
Only in the speech bubbles, there is no white background and sometimes the text comes out of the bubble. Also the warp tile changes from place between panel 2 and 3 and Roy doesn't look at the warp tile when he notices it.

Comic 2: Good humour.
The bad points are pretty much the same as the first comic. But now there are some pieces of white in some of the speech bubbles. Two of those pieces also come out of the bubble.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

I made a remake of Comic 1. If it is still bad, I will re-remake it.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

Sorry to DP (again), but someone please post! I might sound n00bish, but I need people posting in this comic! I'll make more comics later. I enrolled in the comic makers academy and I have a feeling I am going to be better at these comics! So, if you want to help me improve in speech bubbles, you can PM me speech bubble tutorials. If I improve because of the tutorial that you might send me, you will be in the comic credits! So all I want is the following:
1. More posts (or this place is gonna die if no one posts!)
2. Tutorials about speech bubbles (remember, PM them and you will get credit for them if they are effective.)
3. Anything that will make this a good comic.
Sorry I sound like some guy who nags and a bit n00bish, but my comic can really use help!

 

[SerenadeSP]

It's okay,I'm kinda having trouble getting to post in my thread too.(Click the huge thing to see what i mean)

anyway,It's pretty good.You just need to remake episode 2 and you'll be fine!

 

[Neopolis]

Ugh... Those text-bubbles are scary. They need a solid white background without holes. And why do people comment on the humour? I don't see any humour (Not like that is neccesarily a bad thing) Finally: Add the background first, then the text, or you get ugly gray pixels.

(By the way, I accidently clicked "Yes" =P)

 

[Magneto]

Well, I try to never be negative...but the text bubbles are messy, messy messy everywhere, the color is kinda funky, the large episode panel detracts from the panels...You can must certainly do better.

 

[ForeverFlame]

Uhhh...
With the speechbubbles you shouldn't make it see-through. Make the backround of the bubbles white. Also you should kind of 'clean up' your comic. There are blabs of random stuff all over the place.
You should use custom sprites of things, too, instead of making your own. Like the Mistletoe.
Other than that, it's pretty good.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

I took a 2 days of my vacation, and made another comic. What do you think of the speech bubbles?

 

[OmegaDragon]

The speech bubbles are MUCH better now. Your comic is much better now.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

The speech bubbles are MUCH better now. Your comic is much better now.

Thank you! I think I have improved, too! I'll make remakes/re-remakes of the other comics with the better speech bubbles.
EDIT: I made a banner and a question section on my 1st post. See the topics for detaiis.

EDIT 2: I made another banner and remade the first comic.

 

[Blazin' Blaziken]

Sorry to DP (for the 3rd time) but I made a remake for Comic 2. After I make the remake for the X-mas Special, I will finally reveal the Pokemon Benny has in Comic 4. Anyways, Comic 2 has a new name, format, and speech bubbles! I have a feeling this is gonna be a godd comic in the next few months (hopefully).