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The Mutations

Psychic

Really and truly
This is the first Fic I have ever posted on Serebii, but it's been going strong for a very long time, as you can tell from the fact that this was posted in November of 2004. But believe me when I say I have improved a lot from then.

Here are the current chapters:

Prologue: Outcast
Chapter 1: ‘Death Never Came’
Chapter 2: ‘Tolerance is Rare’
Chapter 3: Part 1: Omens
Chapter 3: Part 2: Omens and Death
Chapter 4: The Messenger
Chapter 5: The First Steps

There is more than one part to some chapters simply because I wanted to leave my readers in some suspence as to how things would play out, though the chapter itself wasnt finished.


Note: All Pokémon will be ‘speaking’ English in this tale, but otherwise, they would be talking in their own language.

Rated PG for content, some blood later on and a few other situations not meant for everyone (not written as of yet). Read only if you don't mind sadness and intollerence.

Disclaimer: Many characters in this fic are thanks to the very talented Dragonfree, who first created the sprites, which I made into a few characters.
And obviously, I don't own Pokémon.


Now please sit back and enjoy...



Prologue: ‘Outcast’​

A lone Grovyle caught his breath in the high branches of one of the tallest sycamore trees in a forest. So close together were the trees that only a few shafts of light penetrated the light green canopy. It was, to any passerby, a wondrous sight, wild Taillow and Spearow swooping and diving in flocks, the sweet aroma of the spores of Oddish and Butterfree filling the air, the odd Trapinch poking its head out from the ground, but the forest’s beauty was lost to the creature. One of his arms supported the rest of the green body upright in a standing position on the thick sycamore branch. The two arms and legs were humanoid, though a pointed reptilian head with two intelligent yellow eyes rested atop it. His stomach and lower jaw was a bright ruby red. From the top of his head grew a long, blue-green leaf, similar to two others growing from his back.

He cast a fearful eye back towards the way he came. He could still hear the shouting of those of his very own species, who had run him out of their nesting area, but just barely. Kendar was lucky to have speed on his side, lucky, yet cursed at the same time.

He looked at his arm, the normal shape and colour of that of a Grovyle, but instead of the few normal leaves used for camouflage in the trees growing from it, there were enough of the dark green leaves to form a bird-like wing, allowing him extra speed and distance when jumping, and even the ability to fly using the wind when well enough, and warm thermals that radiated off the leave strewn ground.

Flight had always seemed like such an amazing thing to him when he was a young Treeko, he reflected, and when he grew older, his wish for flight had started to become a reality.

Kendar remembered quite clearly the day he had finally evolved from his Treeko from; a nasty little male Spearow had picked a fight on his little brother for a reason unknown to him. The simple bird was of strong build, fierce for one so small, he recalled. It had stood in a small opening in the trees, where a ring of sunlight was able to burst through the forest’s protective roof. A black body, cream chest, red wings and sharp pink talons. Two beady black angry eyes were almost lost within the brown feathers that covered its head, and a jagged beak, used for ripping and tearing, Kendar recalled. He had been lucky to have stumbled in on them at that moment. His brother had been close to dying from blood loss, it seemed. When Kendar saw his brother, bloody scratches all over his body, lying spread-eagle on the ground, and face contorted in agony, Kendar had attacked the pesky bird in rage. He had rammed it, while it wasn’t watching, all rational thought leaving his mind. He wanted to make that bird pay! Only Kendar was so young back then, so inexperienced in the middle of his first battle, and it was a fierce one at that.

He remembered fighting with all his might, scratching and kicking and biting, but it had made little difference. In no time at all, the fierce bird had him pinned to the ground, sharp, hooked beak poised to make the final blow while smiling in triumph, something amazing happened; he had evolved. Kendar started to glow a pure, bright light, and grew and grew and grew until he felt he was the size of the sun, when the glow died down and he suddenly was able to kick the Spearow off him with a new found strength.

Newly reborn, Kendar attacked the bird with a will. The battle was finally going his way until it took to the sky. He had glared up at it angrily, soaring and dipping, like the show-offs Spearow were. It was ready to dive bomb him at any moment, Kendar could tell. Finally, the Spearow shot down at him like a falling star, and Kendar only wished he had had a chance to experience flight himself before meeting his end. But he had jumped backwards in the nick on time, merely by reflex, nimbly avoiding collision. He had swept his arms forward when doing this without realizing it, and it was then he noticed the new wings.

He examined them carefully, excitement shining in his bright eyes, and flapped them experimentally. He barely rose an inch. He tried again and again to no avail. Annoyed, Kendar searched his surroundings for something that might assist him, and saw exactly what he needed; a tree with a branch just low enough to get to in a hurry, thick and high enough for his other needs. He scampered over, climbed to the branch and jumped off the end without hesitation, just as a gust of wind was able to pick him up.

For a moment, Kendar had doubted if his plan had worked, seeing as he was already losing altitude. But Kendar quickly learned how to steer; it was quite simple once you understood the basic principals of flight, as he did. This had to do with his obsession with flight ever since he had caught a glimpse of his first Pidgey, not long after his Hatching Day.

And oh, the joy of flying! It was truly wonderful, better than anything he had ever done, floating on the wind like that. The Spearow too, noticed Kendar’s new ability and took to the air with a few strokes of his wings and shouted to Kendar in anger.

“Bacrawww! No earth-crawling Worm is able to fly! You have broken the law of Normalicy! You are an abnormal land-worm! You will pay for this!” and so the little bird started dive bombing him relentlessly, non-stop. It was all Kendar could do to dodge it. The Spearow’s determination scared the Grovyle, but as he floated in the sky, flapping his odd wings, he saw his little brother, lying on the grass, a bruised and bloody mess, just coming round. The Treeko sat up, and began to rub the back of his light green head dizzily. Kendar too, remembered what he was fighting for, and flew towards the bird. He slashed it once with the long blue leaf on his head and the Spearow, in its already weakened state, fell to the ground with a thud.

Glad to be finished, Kendar floated down to his astonished brother. After he landed, he approached his confused brother, and put his hand out to help him up However, instead of taking the hand, the tiny Treeko crawled backwards away from him, long dark green tail dragging along the ground.

“G-g-get away f-from m-me, y-you, y-y-you…freak!” he shouted, his fear showing in his large tearful eyes. Never, in his entire life, would Kendar ever forget the look on his brother’s face; surprise, fear, confusion and agony from his battle prior to his brother’s evolution, shaping his face into one that scared him.

“B-but -” Kendar stuttered in disbelief, trying desperately to understand this sudden fear.

“L-l-leave me alone! You’re no brother of mine!” he cried out. He suddenly sprang up, adrenalin his only source of strength, and ran off, a bloody and bruised mess, back towards the nests.

“But I’m you’re brother. I, I just saved you.” Kendar had whispered to the wind.

Never would Kendar forget that day, not a year ago. When his brother had reached the nesting grounds, he had told everyone, including his own mother, about the entire affair. When Kendar had returned home, he remembered everyone eyeing his odd wings and him with the uttermost loathing. Then they had chased him away, and was pronounced ‘Outcast’. He still heard the steady chant of ‘Outcast, Outcast’ in his darkest dreams at night, as shadowy figures chased him. He had hoped that this news would not reach other colonies, but it had. And so every time he found a new colony that he hoped he could remain with, he was chased out to the steady chanting of ‘Outcast, Outcast’ by young and old alike.

This was the fifth nesting ground he had found, but was once again chased out to the all too familiar chanting. He didn’t know for how much longer he could take it! He pressed onward still, even after the chanting had died down.

“Why must they torment me so?” he questioned to what would seem to any passerby, like an invisible companion. After traveling alone for so long, he, like many lone ones before him, had taken to the habit of talking to himself. “What have I done to them?” he wondered, temper suddenly rising. “I have not hurt them! Never did I do anything wrong!” It was then that a voice at the back of his mind spoke, repeating the words he hadn’t heard in what seemed like eons.

“You have broken the Law of Normalcy! You are an abnormal land-worm!” The words of that Spearow. They had meant nothing to him before, just gibberish. Now, it did mean something.

“I have broken the Law.” he murmured miserably. “The Law of Normalcy, whatever that is.” Kendar tried to imagine in what way he was breaking such a Law, but such reasons eluded him.

Luckily for him, his stomach had other things to think about, such as hunger.

“At least food will keep my mind off such troubling matters.” Kendar thought with a sad smile. He looked up at the sun, noticing how it was right above his head, signifying lunch time.

“Perfect timing too.” he muttered.

Kendar spied an apple tree not too far from him, causing him to smile at his luck. He jumped nimbly over and plucked a few of the riper looking apples from the tree. After eating his fill, he sat himself down on one of the branches while leaning against the tree’s trunk.

“Mmmmm, those sure were good apples!” he said happily, troubles temporarily forgotten. He was in the process of patting his stomach in content, but instead of seeing a ruby coloured stomach, he saw his stomach had taken on an orange-ish pallor.

“What the heck is happening to me?!” he asked aloud.



Hope you all liked it!

Disclaimer: Yup, Kendar was created by Dragonfree. She has the rights to him. I just gave him his character.
 
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Psychic

Really and truly
Chapter 1 up!

Here’s Chapter 1, enjoy!


Chapter 1: ‘Death Never Came’​

“Awww, is da widdle fweak huwt?” asked one of the Ghosts mockingly.

Heekali bit his lower lip, trying in vain to hold back the tears that threatened to escape his eyes. One of the Gengar pulled him up by his single little white tail, allowing his four tiny paws to dangle limply.

“Leave me alone!” the tiny Vulpix cried weakly, but to no avail, for the Gengar ignored his plea completely.

“Hey Batarek, do ya think that if I yank out ‘is tail, all da uders’ll finally grow out?” the Gengar who was holding him by the tail asked the gang’s boss. The others, who were all off to the side laughed heartily, patting each other on spiked purple backs.

The biggest and most frightening ghost gave his minion an evil grin, showing two rows of sharp, fang-like teeth. “Oh ya, sure, keep at it!” he said gleefully.

He then shoved his ugly face into Heekali’s whole line of vision and said maliciously “Hey, don’t worry squirt, we’re helpin’ you’se become Normal again!” his grin grew wider, showing off more of the large, gleaming fangs.

Heekali couldn’t help but let out a tiny whimper, which only made the gangsters laugh harder.

“What’s da matter? Miss yer mommy?” an observing Gengar asked cruelly.

This couldn’t help but bring memories flooding back to the white Vulpix. He recalled his mother’s anxious face the day he had been born. He had been a great deal paler than his brothers and sisters at birth, and had been very weak too. He had seemed to only get paler as time went on, causing him to be teased quite often.

After two and a half years he had gotten no darker, nor had he grown any more tails. The elders had a large meeting which Heekali had to attend with his mother, and had decided that he was not a Vulpix; not one of them. He remembered being ‘escorted’ out of their territory, and being told never to return, unless of course, he could become Normal. After that, Heekali had to fend for himself; find his own food, search for a place to live, and defend himself from all threats. This was because no Pokémon in their right mind would want to help one who was not like their parenting species. He had been living like this for six months, wandering the forest, a scratched and bruised mess. He had been attacked more times than he could count. Sometimes he would just lie down on the ground and wait for death, but pain would still be there, and death would never come.

“Ya know boys, I don’t thing ‘ee wants ta become Normal.” the leader said loudly, bringing Heekali back to the present.

“Righto boss, ‘ee looks too d’feated ta go on, maybe ‘ee just wants ta die.” said the Gengar who was holding him by his tail. He suddenly let go, dropping the poor fox onto the ground. Heekali fell in a sad heap, not even bothering to try and get up.

‘Maybe they can put an end to my misery.’ he thought with a sad smile.

“That right squirt? Too d’feated ta go on?” asked pack’s the boss.

Heekali wanted to say ‘yes, please just finish me off’, but he felt as if he barely even had the energy to nod.

The large Gengar shrugged. “Fine den, see you’se in dee After-life, mate.” the Gengar leader raised its right arm over its head, preparing to make a long, downwards sweep to end the poor fox’s life.

Heekali squeezed his eyes shut and waited for death’s pitiful touch to ease his pain. He could almost see the Gengar make the downwards sweep of its arm in a painstakingly slow motion. But once again, death never came.

A whooshing sound suddenly filled the fox’s ears, and Heekali ‘saw’ an odd, white blue shape make contact with his would be killer. Then the sound of one object hitting the other reached his ears, followed by much yelling, and soon screeching.

The white Vulpix opened his eyes a tiny fraction, and saw the Gengar fighting savagely with an odd, cold blue flying creature. Heekali saw the odd blue thing, using a sharp stinger on its tail to lash out and stab the ghosts. Each time they were stabbed, they let out a deafening screech.

Finally, Heekali heard one of the Gengars suddenly shout over the din,

“C’mon guys, lets get outa ‘ere, that mad beast fights like ten! An’ Batarek’s been hurt real bad, poisoned maybe! Fall back!” he cried, grabbing the leaders rather limp body with him, and draped him over his shoulder. He didn’t have to repeat himself, for his command was backed by numerous shouts, and one Gengar shouting “Every ghost for ‘imself!” in agreement.

“Ooo, you’ll pay for dis, see if’n ya don’t! We’ll be back, oh we will, we will…” shouted Batarek, just before going completely limp and falling unconscious.

In no time at all, there wasn’t a trace left of the fox’s tormenters. Heekali closed his eyes, hoping the flying monster would just leave him alone to die. But no such luck for the tiny Vulpix, for he heard the creature approach him.

“Hey kid, are all right? You got a pretty nasty beating there, you know.” the voice was rather deep, but gentle. Heekali decided whatever it was, it wouldn’t harm him. Besides, there was no harm in answering it. He opened his eyes and hoped he was right.

The creature that stood before his was icy blue in colour, with two triangular ears sticking out of an oval head. Its body was simple enough, with two stubby arms that ended in clawed pincers and two feet, each with a single nail. A sort of webbing connected the arms and legs, a slightly lighter blue than the rest of the body, that looked as strong as the rest of its body. The tail was like that of an Onix, like a few rocks joined together, tipped with a ball. From this ball grew a long horn-like needle, that, for some reason, made Heekali nervous.

“What would you know about savage beatings?” he asked with all the energy he could muster, and gave it a small smile.

The funny creature smiled back. “When you’re, different, not every beast wants to keep you around.” he offered Heekali a pincer, which the Vulpix gladly accepted.

“Thanks.” he muttered thankfully, though at the same time he felt rather disappointed.

The cold blue creature smiled and seemed to read his mind, for he said “You don’t seem too thankful, you seem to want to simply lay down and die.”

Heekali avoided the steel blue eyes and nodded in silence.

“It isn’t all that simple you know. Life, I mean. Sometimes we tend to see only its darker side, and when we do, we think there’s no good left for us, and feel like giving up. But we must look at the bright side, and find a reason to keep going on living. See what I mean?” he commented.

Heekali looked up at him, and cocked his head to the side. “You know, I guess I’ve never really thought about it that way.” he admitted with a shrug. “Oh, I’m Heekali by the way.”

The creature smiled, showing off two large fangs. “Pleasure to meet you Heekali. I’m Shazaro.” noticing Heekali’s puzzled look, Shazaro added “I’m a Gligar, by the way. Or at least, I suppose I was a Gligar.” He added thoughtfully, seemingly with little regret.

“What do Gligar look like?” Heekali asked in confusion.

Shazaro smiled fondly at the innocent looking fox. “I once found a colony of them, though they were not too happy to see me. They are, unlike me, very purple, Aipom purple. Their webbing-like wings are a bright blue, and their stinger is not quite as long as mine. Their fangs are a great deal shorter, and weaker too. And of course, they do not have these.” he said, pointing out the three long, thin claw-like nails growing from the top of each of its pincers.

“Why are you so different?” Heekali inquired.

The Gligar’s eyes clouded over, but he blinked twice to clear them and frowned.

“I used to live near a place called Ice Path, which is a cave really. It has that name for a reason you know; it is freezing there, even a mile away from the actual cave the cold cuts into your skin like a blade. I lived there most, if not all of my life, for I don’t recall ever living anywhere else, or with anyone else for that matter. Of course, I had to learn to adapt, so whether it was at birth or not, I was able to change, to adapt to my surroundings and harsh climate. My skin became hard and smooth, with enough insulation to keep warm, and my body had turned this metallic blue, perfect for camouflage since the walls of the Path are lined in ice. My odd wings, if you wish to call them that, have taken on the same shiny hue for the same reason, and my stinger, well, when one is different, one gets attacked quite often. The Pokémon in that cave have rather tough hides, so it pays to have a stronger, more powerful stinger. If I so desire, I can inject a small, but very powerful poison into an enemy’s bloodstream, that ironically freezes the victim’s blood-flow and stops all organs from operating. Don’t worry, I didn’t poison all the Gengar, just stabbed them a few times for good measure.” Shazaro added earnestly, after seeing the look on Heekali’s anxious face.

“Of course, it would have been no more than they deserve, and don’t worry, I didn’t inject the leader with quite enough poison to kill him, just knock him unconscious until someone warms him up a little.” he added carefully.

“Oh.” said Heekali, quite relieved. “So, er, you still haven’t told me about those.” he said, pointing to his long nails with a white paw.

“Ah,” said Shazaro, also looking at his odd deformality. “let’s just say I’m not very picky in the way of food. When there’s a limited amount of variety, you just eat what you can find…”

Heekali suddenly got an image form in his head of a thin, starved looking Shazaro, looking under rocks and digging in the ground for anything edible…but he quickly shoved such thoughts aside.

“So, what brings you here, why did you leave?” Heekali asked.

“You know, I’m no really sure why I left. Perhaps I felt the need to go off adventuring, or maybe I just wanted to get away from that place…” he said thoughtfully, then shrugged, leaving a rather awkward silence.

“So, why did you help me?” Heekali inquired, trying to break the odd moment.

“You needed help, and not everybody would seem so anxious to help one who is different.” Shazaro replied simply.

“I looked that pathetic?” mumbled the Vulpix.

“You looked beaten, not pathetic. You just didn’t feel the need to stop that gang, or continue living for that matter.” said the Gligar in a strong, determined voice. “And now, you still haven’t told me how you came to be here.” Shazaro finally said.

So the Vulpix told the Gligar about being born weaker than his siblings, becoming whiter and never growing his other tails, then being exiled to the harsh outside world.

“You’re story sounds no better than mine, worse if your own mother did nothing to stop them making you leave. And you don’t even seem upset about it.” the Gligar pointed out.

“I suppose I was too young to really understand what was going on at the time, so it’s just never bothered me.” Heekali said.

“Hmm, perhaps. Ah, well I think it’s about time we hit the road.” Shazaro finally said.

“We?” asked Heekali, clearly surprised that he, a mere child, could go with one of what seemed to the young Vulpix to be one of a much higher class than he.

“Of course, I couldn’t leave you all alone like this! Besides, I thought you wanted to be friends!” the Gligar exclaimed with a chuckle.

“Oh, you really mean it? I can really ‘hit the road’ with you, whatever that means?” he asked excitedly.

“Yup,” he replied, then added “and I once heard a human telling his Pokémon to. It means, ‘let’s go!’ I believe.” He said.

“Great! But, where will we go?” Heekali wondered. “Nobody wants to have a couple of ‘freaks’ around.” he asked, hanging his head dejectedly.

“Wherever we feel like, my young friend! To the highest mountain, in the deepest ocean, to the coldest wasteland, or to the hottest desert!” he said happily.

“Ok, as long as we don’t go into the ocean, we Fire-types don’t like the water.” Heekali said seriously.

“Hahaha! Don’t worry, we won’t go there if you don’t want to!” the Gligar shouted gleefully.




Claimer: I own Heekali and Shazaro, not to mention the Gengar gangsters.

~Psychic
 
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Spirit_of_Auron

Water Pokemon Lover
It's really good so far, I've seen few to no errors and it's written quite well in the perspectives. I can't wait for the next chapters.
 

Psychic

Really and truly
^^

Yay, a reader! ^-^
Glad you like it Kas! I have no idea when the next Chapet will be up, nor do I have any ideas for the next Chapeter. Meh, I guess things'll just have to fall into place, but if you want to see a certain Pokemon in it, just say so!

~Psychic
 
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Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
I've been trying to read some fanfics lately but none really kept my attention.

For some reason this one did and I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to see more.

though :p you are at a lack of female freaks, but it is early in the story. Leave it to me to notice that.

Well yay vulpix! I'd take him... XD keep it up.
 

Psychic

Really and truly
see Lady Myuu, I noticed that too, and I don't know why, and it has been driving me CRAZY! but soon two sisters will be introduced, though how and when I havn't a clue...
the thing about the 'Mutants' if you want to call them that, well, humans are intollerant, see? We always have been, and I'm sure that even in the Pokemon world in like, 1000 years, we still will be. Anyways, what kind of (tollerant) softie would want to own a freak, and be ridiculed and possible be beaten up? Nobody! They're not wanted by anyone (there are NOT my opinions, just how one of this time period may think, or even a Pokemon for that matter).

On a lighter note, YAY, ANOTHER MEWTWO LOVER, WHO'S ALSO FEMALE!!!!

Glad you also like it, Elemental Charizam, though it isn't all my idea, as I mentioned, I got the idea from Madam Dragonfree's sprites. But I'm glad you like Shazaro! Few people use Gligars in fic, and he...worked.

~Psychic
 
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Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Well they may be seen as shinies, you know? and with different abilities like flight for the Grovyle could add for a advantage... I noticed in pokemon you kinda want the oddballs :p oh if you ever need ideas just PM me since you said you were having probs.

Anyway, yay I am a mewtwo fan XD oh and yay girls! :p Oh and yeah few people use poor old Gliger! I used him before I think @.@ oh well...
 
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Giga Groudon

Guest
Wow this is an unusual story, but a good one at that. Mutations, huh? I wonder if all of them mutants are gonna meet up with each other and be friends. Their family and friends seem to be mean to them, even though they had no control over all this. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing.
 

Psychic

Really and truly
...well

Giga Groudon said:
Wow this is an unusual story, but a good one at that. Mutations, huh? I wonder if all of them mutants are gonna meet up with each other and be friends. Their family and friends seem to be mean to them, even though they had no control over all this. I will keep reading as long as you keep writing.
Yay, more readers! Now I have 4! *grins*
I'm glad you also like it Giga Groudon, but like I said before, nobody is very tollerant. I pride myself in looking at the world, and life, slightly more different than others. You have to grab life by the tail and examine it like a lab rat (haha, grab by tail, lab rats are often mutated). Look at what you see every day and try to see it differently, in a new light. But meh, that's just me. Oh, and yes, a group of mutants will band together (not as a rebellion or anything). Oh, if you want to know along the lines I'm going, take out a book called 'The Chrysalids' from your local library. No, it's not a stupid, boring novel, it is SUCH a great book! But don't take my word for it, read it and judge it for yourself, cause I am not giving anyone a summary. (That can be found here→ Chrysalids Site explore the site, but more importantly, READ THE ACTUAL BOOK!)
And Lady Myuu, Shinies are diferent, they're, well, I call it a 'glitch in the DNA'. A Shiny will appear in a later chapter, she will be prissy and rather snobby, and will be very condescending to the main characters. She'll say how shinies are much more 'special', and any trainer would die to have one. and she's just waiting to find the 'perfect human' to catch her. she won't hang around for long, mind you, so don't get too excited.
And sure, a flying Grovyle has advantages, but imagine; you're in the Elite 4, who pride themselved in fighting fairly, and one sends out a Gligar with the powers of an Ice type! So in a way, it has 3 types! Maybe none of your Pokémon can deal with that! But, if it's the Ice trainer, and the Pokemon mutated into part ice, it counts! Let's just say it's immoral, and collecting mutants isn't what training is all about.
Besides, soon Team Rocket, Magma or Aqua will get ideas; start purposely mutating Pokemon to be as strong as possible! and so, Pokémon cruelty begins! You can still build on this topic, and see for yourself where it goes.

~Psychic
 
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astrangeone

Guest
Whoa! That's good, really good. The perpectives are written really well, with not too many mistakes in spelling and what not. I wonder if you could throw in a third person narration to make the intolerance of the "mutants" a little more obvious? Keep on writing....

I mean, like a scene written from the perpective of the another human/pokemon and how they feel. But maybe later in the story.
 
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Psychic

Really and truly
huh?

A third person narration? *looks bewildered*.
The intollerance is not supposed to be too plain yet, and it is already written in third person *points*
But I'm still glad you like it!
Hmmm, that makes 1...2...3...4...5 readers! Yay!

~Psychic
 
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Psychic

Really and truly
Hooray, it's Chapter 2!!!

Ladybas and Gengars, I am pleasesd to present to you...Chapter 2! Enjoy!


Chapter 2: ‘Tolerance is Rare’​

The two friends walked happily along, not quite knowing where they were headed, but were sure wherever it was, they would find fun and adventure there. But as the Vulpix jumped and pranced about with newfound energy in the evening sun, and the Gligar hovered lazily over his head, they were oblivious to the green and brown blur that had been marking their every move for ten minutes.

“Hey Shazaro, can we take a break? I’m getting hungry.” the white Vulpix asked tiredly.

His companion smiled fondly at the innocent fox. “Of course, we’ll stop for awhile and find something to eat.”

So, the two set about looking for something to munch on. The creature in the trees watched the Vulpix search the ground and lower branches of the trees for anything edible, seeming to jump and let out a squeal every time it saw something it had never seen before. It also spied the blue Gligar fly up to look in the higher branches, and when it noticed this, it curled up into a tight ball for camouflage. Just in time too, for not a second later the Gligar flew past it in search of food, oblivious to the stalker in the trees.

Finally, the Gligar gave up and floated down to his nervous looking companion and showed him the few fruits he had found, and the Vulpix did likewise sorrowfully. They ate their meager meal in silence, and the Gligar said he would look again for something to eat. Then the Vulpix pointed to where the creature was watching.

“Hey Shazaro, what kind of fruit is that?” he asked curiously, pointing a white forepaw at it.

“Dunno, hope it isn’t poison though. I’ll go check it out, we can split it between us.” the Gligar replied thoughtfully.

It watched the blue Gligar approach, and looked for a stem of some sort to cut. The creature carefully watched the one called Shazaro look and thought he found what he was looking for; a small, thin part of a branch that looked a part of the creature. He was just about to cut the ‘stem’, but as his odd claw was about to slice it, the creature in the tree suddenly uncoiled itself and, with a hiss, used it’s long, green claws to slash at the Gligar. He was taken completely off guard, and tumbled to the ground, landing with a thump.

“Shazaro!” the Vulpix cried, eyes wide as the monster of the trees jumped off its branch and landed gracefully on the ground on two simple dark brown legs. The rest of its body was the same shade, as well as it’s two arms. It had a light yellow stomach, and what looked like leaves coming out of its back. Its face was pointed, like an aardvark’s, with two beady eyes and ears of similar shape of its leaves.

“Shazaro, get up!” The Vulpix whined, and was rewarded with a grumble from his friend.

“Hey, what was that f-” but the Gligar didn’t finish his question, for when he saw what the creature was, his eyes widened and he took an involuntary step back.

“H-how, w-w-why?” He stuttered. “B-but your kind-you don’t-how long?” he finally finished asked in an astonished voice.

The creature smiled sadly. “No, you would not expect one of my kind to take to living in trees.”

The fox looked from one Pokémon to the other. “What am I missing here?” he asked nervously.

The two looked at the Vulpix as if noticing him for the first time.

“Oh, right, sorry Heekali, you didn’t know. She’s a-“

“Sandslash.” the creature finished matter-of-factly in a feminine voice. “Lumerah the Sandslash. Well, I’m not really considered a Sandslash, anyways.” she said pointedly.

“Neither of us are really Vulpix or Gligar.” Shazaro replied bitterly.

“That is the way we are, I guess. You two were forced to leave your homes too, I suppose?” Lumerah asked inquisitively.

Heekali nodded. “I had to leave. Oh, I'm Heekali by the way, but Shazaro…well, he can tell you.” he finished lamely and took to biting his lower lip and keeping his eyes lowered.

Shazaro explained about where he had lived, and Heekali told her about himself shamefully, having taken an interest in a round pebble by his left paw.

Lumerah sighed. “I guess that’s how it is everywhere. I’m not surprised. Tolerance is rare nowadays.”

Her statement was followed by an awkward silence that made all three of them feel uncomfortable, and shift from one claw, or paw, to the other.

Being the curious fox he was, Heekali looked up from the pebble and broke the silence. “So, I’ve never seen a Sandslash before, what do they look like, and why are you different?” he asked anxiously in a tiny voice.

Lumerah’s head snapped around to look at him. “I,” she said matter-of-factly, “Was a ‘Normal’ Sandshrew, but I absolutely hated living underground, and preferred the surface, climbing the trees, the sun shining merrily on my face…” she stopped suddenly, and looked as if she had said too much. “Anyways, when I evolved, I was, well, different.” she said, indicating her deformalities.

Shazaro nodded. “You see, other Sandslashs’ skin is a much lighter brown colour, with white bellies. Their claws are colour-less, and the spikes they have on their backs are the dark brown of tree bark.” he explained to his companion sagely.

“The second I evolved, they knew I was different. My skin was the colour of their spikes, my belly a yellower shade. And my spikes, like leaves; same colour, same shape. My claws too, look like long, hardened blades of grass. So, they decided that, because I was not a Sandslash, I should not be able to live with them.” Lumerah explained sadly.

“No, they didn’t!” Heekali said horrorstruck.

“Oh yes they did, but it was worse than that. They forbade me from living on the ground. And so, I was forced to take to living in the trees. Living in the places I used to love, but have come to resent. Now that I have been banished, if anybody from my tribe sees me on the ground, no matter where, they have the right to slay me.” Lumerah said, grinning weakly.

“But that’s horrible! How, I mean, it’s just, terrible!” Heekali cried.

“But they did. Didn’t regret it one bit either.” she said bitterly, eyes hardening.

"So why're you on the ground now?" Heekali asked.

"We're about three days away from my tribe, and they didn't bother to even try and follow me. Besides, jumping from tree to tree is much faster than walking anyways." she replied, vaguely waving her claw in the opposite direction of the sun.

“Well then, er, you seem to be another one in need of company. Would you care to accompany us on our adventure?” Shazaro asked politely.

“That sounds like a nice idea, besides, what else am I to do with myself?” she asked thoughtfully as her eyes glazed over, as if he was asking her the meaning of Life.

“Er, nothing I suppose.” Shazaro replied with a confused shrug.

“Ok then, I’d love to!” Lumerah suddenly said happily, taking the pair completely off guard.

“Great, but the big question is, ‘do you know how to find food’?” Heekali asked her anxiously.

To this, the Sandslash grinned and instructed her new friends in the proper way to find food.



-_- No, it's not my best chapter, I'm really rather ashamed of it, but it will get better! comments are gladly appreciated!

Claimer: I own Lumerah. Enough said.

~Psychic
 
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Giga Groudon

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It's a little too short for a chapter, but still good. I wonder how many of these mutants are going to be in this story.

As for that book, 'The Crysalids", I'll read it if it actually IS in my library. You see, my school has a library in it, but not a humungeous (is that how you spell it) one. I live in Orange, N.S.W., Australia (yes I know that that isn't anything anyone is interested in), and I never go to the town library, because I couldn't be bothered to do so. But believe me, if I do find that book, I WILL read it to find what interests you in it.
 

Psychic

Really and truly
yes...

haha, yep, the crysalids is my new obsession! ^-^
In English NOW we have to make it into a project: build a Mutant, or give the book a Porlogue + new title/cover, or make a virtual museum, or make a board-game (my choice). Dunno why I just mentioned that, but yes... -_-'
Wait a sec, AUSTRALIA? ahh! is it nice there? how's the weather? 'Cause Canada is seriously COLD!
SWEET!
Yes, it was a short Chapter, that I found very rushed...
 
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Ho-oh Lover

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Wow, this is really good, I'll be reading this one. *pulls out popcorn from back and starts eating it* popcorn? ^^

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bird_master

Guest
Wow, this is a pretty good fic. I've never read any fics like it. I noticed a coupld spelling mistakes but very few. Now, I'm gonna say this, and you don't can pretty much just ignore it. But it doesn't seem likely to me that all these mutants would meet up. But that's just me. You could have different groups, 'cus then you wouldn't have to do so much in just one story-line. But like I said...
 

Psychic

Really and truly
Meb

Meh, I've never really thought about having more than 1 group. plot, sure. group, nope. all well, I'll think about that...But, this group does not consist of every single mutant Pokémon onthe planet...
There will be a 'Good' VS Evil thing going on though...
and sibling rivalry! that'll be there too...
PS: Pics of the characters will be up soon! ^-^

~Psychic
 
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Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
hmmm well it was a alright chapter, could use more discription here and there. Alot of talking. It seems all the weirdo pokemon are very accepting of each other and stuff, I find it a tad odd though.

You could use with a tad personality difference for some of them, if you don't mind me saying. They all seem a tad care free and 'oh who cares!'

there can be alot more emotion and drama, yeah your introducing characters but they seem to be a littght black and white to me.

Keep up the work though :p looking forward to more and the more your write the better your kills.
 
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