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-~*The New Champion*~-

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*~Puru-Ryuu~*

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Hi everyone this my first Fan-fic so please I would Love your Comments

-~*The New Champion*~-​

-~*Prolouge*~-
4 years after Gary Oak Became the Champion of the Kanto League, Jimmy became Johto league's Champions & Branden Birch became the Hoenn Leagues Champion. A new 12 year old boy decided on his dream to to the same and his name was John Birch. His first Pokemon was Squirlte, and he started on his journey on his 12th birthday.


Chapter one will be up later

Thank you
~M-P XD
 
Dragonfree

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Go read the forum rules, will you? -_- It's obvious from both your spam replies and this excuse for a prologue that you haven't. This is not a prologue; this is a brief summary, the type you'd put in the Summary box on FanFiction.Net. A chapter should be at LEAST a page long in Word. Additionally, you could really use some spellchecking (it's Brendan, not Branden, and Squirtle, not Squirlte) and you should really write out the numbers ("four" and "twelve") instead of writing 4 and 12.

Now, please go read the sticky thread called "FanFiction Rules". If your chapter one does not comply with them, I'll have to close this thread. This is your first and only warning.
 
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*~Puru-Ryuu~*

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THis is a Short Chapter
Chapter#1

John is first at Professor Oak’s Lab in Pallet Town to get his Starter Pokemon. He was supposed to get started on his journey 2 years ago but he decided to wait and go to the Pokemon School in Pallet Town, where he studied as much as he could about pokemon. When he entered the Lab he found Professor Oak and his assistant Tracey waiting for him and the other young trainers. John took the longest out of all the boys and girls to choose his starter, but in the end he chose ;007;. He got a PokeDex and six pokeballs. Then, Professor Oak and Tracey waved good bye and he was out of Pallet town into Route1.

In Route1 he almost caught a ;019;.
“Squirtle Water Gun attack.” ordered John. Rattata dodged with Double team. Than, used a surprise tackle to make Squirtle faint. John returned Squirtle and said “You did your best and that was an awesome first fight, now take a good long rest.” Just then he got attacked by wild ;021; and ;022;.

Chapter#2 should be up by tomorrow.
 
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You didn't read the rules like I told you, dear.

I said it was your first and final warning, and I meant it.
 
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