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The Noctowl Comic Chronicles

Hows The Comic So Far?

  • MY FAVORITE COMIC EVER!!!!!!!!!

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Its ok

    Votes: 1 16.7%
  • ........just plain bad

    Votes: 5 83.3%

  • Total voters
    6
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Hikari Tenshi

erghh... hungry...
You can't see the comics. There are just X's for me. Nothing for me to say.
 

Capt.Miko

Flapjacks!
Interesting concept, but runs into some major problems:

1. The background changes a bit each time (no clouds 2 panels later, ground changes height). Save a template background to paste into a panel and when needed again, it will be consistent

2. The shade of blue in the sky: It's too deep of a color to be in the daytime. Use a lighter blue

3. Bad effects: The attacks and other effects don't have any depth to them (for light-based attacks, make the inside part of the beam lighter than the outside using a smaller brush, and for the ground breaking, use the same color as the ground)

But on the bright side: it has a nonstandard plot and the Blazecune looks good (except for the red pixels around the edges. Replace those with blue shades you used for the rest of the sprite)
 

Bu†cH

Braaiiiiiinss......
The backgrounds improved, but still are too low-detailed and they suck.

Plus, YOU STOLE MY BLAZIKUNE SPRITE!
 
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