Lost but Seeking
Yeah, that was, uh, definitely me being really clever and witty and not just forgetting to finish my sentences again. >>;That is easily the single most clever bit of humor I've ever come across in a review.
I think you got the point, anyway. Anyway, making the deranics more of a tantalizing hint than an immediate threat makes sense. The way they're introduced at the moment just made me think the payoff was going to happen sooner rather than later: "beware," "don't forget," etc.; it makes the deranics sound like the big bad (which they might be; don't remember) who's going to be messing with the characters for most of the story.
Man, Animorphs sure has a lot to answer for, most of it good.I think Animorphs is probably mostly to blame for my attention to detail there, particularly with regards to the noises involved.