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the other one's pokemon comics

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the other one

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hi everyone here's all my comics so far

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon2.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon3.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon4.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon5.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon6biggie.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon7.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon8.png

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon9.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon10.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon11.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon12.gif

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f236/lbocaj/jacobsfancomicofpokemon13.gif
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
I LLLOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE this comic. I love this comic for some reason. please keep it foing. Oh and please tell me where you got the barney sprite from
 
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Red_Apple_Can

Guest
Ok. It seems rushed. The backgrounds are bland. The EVIL BARNEY! joke is overused. It's okay just work on it a bit more.
 
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the other one

Guest
Red_Apple_Can said:
Ok. It seems rushed. The backgrounds are bland. The EVIL BARNEY! joke is overused. It's okay just work on it a bit more.
Click to expand...
barneys not evil... everyone just hates him
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Average, average. A few tips.

White background = teh sux.
Add facial expressions, and make their legs move. Don't make Larvitar fly like when talking to Chikorita.
Don't use sprites of Pokemon doing a pose (PIkachu/Chikorita), use their Emerald Sprites.
Make text boxes.
Puncuation, and capitals.
Why did Pikachu change in color, shape, and shading in the last panel?
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
Man I laughed at the at episode 2. But When you stretchd them out it didn't look good. But all the rest I love
 
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MaskedManAbsolkid

Well-Known Member
Speech bubbles, better spellings, better-looking areas and better grammar (sp? I know, ironic, isn't it?)
 
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Dafearo(svensk)

Voodoobear
It's actually a little strange that Mutten always says "I LOVE this!" when he sees a new comic...(Absolutly NO OFFENCE!)

On-topic: Ep1: Well what could I say? U really need to work on your backgrounds, dude...
Ep2: Still bad bg... AND TOO RANDOM!

I don't know why but for some strange reason I think you're gonna be a great comic-maker...
 
ForeverFlame

ForeverFlame

Well-Known Member
I see a flame war starting. :eek:
Anyway, back on-topic.
I think we all have the right to call your comic sloppy, messy and rushed. But I still couldn't help laughing at your jokes. xD
I don't care how sloppy, messy or rushed your comic is, JUST MAKE MORE!!!
 
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the other one

Guest
well, I've already made 12 comics cause I made them a while ago
 
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the other one

Guest
ok I put all my comics so far in the first posts

I'll put a sky in 13
 
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Matt`

r u srs?
uh...
-Use the edit button-
Click to expand...
You know how to use the edit button, right?

Anyways, the only sprite that looks good is the Kirby one, the rest of them just stay in one position the entire time.
 
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MaskedManAbsolkid

Well-Known Member
Why are your comics so big? If you shortened them to 4 panels a comic, you may have near 50 comics. You could shorten them to Chapter, then all the parts of that comic.

Also, make the backgrounds and stuff better.
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Still very messy and sloppy and bad textboxes, but the part with Dora the "Explora" was funny XD
 
ForeverFlame

ForeverFlame

Well-Known Member
Wow. The Barney thing is old, but Barney VS Dora is another story... xP
I just loved how you introduced Dora. At first with the mask thing I was clueless, but the next comic... I felt very duped when I first saw the Dora Sprite. I was never duped by a Comic ever. Great Job!
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Lol, at Wobbufet. XD He's like the stupidest Pokemon ever.

(check the first post people that don't know what I'm talking about)
 
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