Whirly Swirls
Ice-Cream warrior
This is my first story so I hope its ok, please tell me if I make any spelling or grammar mistakes.
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CHAPTER ONE: THE GANG
Another perfect Sunday morning in Goldenrod City and the market is bustling with buyers, sellers and traders. Starting at six o, clock and ending at midday the market fills with impulse buyers, collectors, trainers, breeders, illegal firework dealers and tourists all who buy and sell items at cheap prices. Except some go unnoticed, they are the ones who are masters of disguise, they are the ones who are as swift as the wind, they are pokemon.
Always the sellers have wondered how the pokemon managed to steal and get away with it every time, they only knew the culprits were an Aipom, a Teddiursa and a Bulbasaur. But they also saw a Totodile, Charmander, Cyndaquil, Pichu, Plusle, Minun, Togepi, Squirtle, Cleffa, Zubat, Sentret, Two Eevees, Torchic, Azurill, Igglybuff and a Psyduck accompany them from time to time.
This Sunday the three casualties Whirly the Aipom, Tula the Teddiursa and Sweela the Bulbasaur hid in a guttering next to a fireworks and cushion stall. They were waiting for the person who was running the stall to take his attention away from the counter so they could carry out their plan. Finally he left to show a few customers different types of fireworks and Whirly, Tula and Sweela sprung into action. From below Sweela’s bulb two vines slithered out and wrapped themselves around one cushion each, she then made them come up and dropped them into the sack tied to Tula’s back.
Once she had seven cushions in the bag Tula and her left to go down to food section leaving Whirly to steal the fireworks. Whirly slid silently down a pipe and began loading packets of fireworks into his own sack. When the sack was full he scampered back up the pipe to hide in the guttering and to wait for Tula and Sweela who were still stocking up on snacks. Once Tula and Sweela returned they set of home, down the alleyways so they could not be seen.
Having lived in the city most of their lives, Whirly, Tula and Sweela knew Goldenrod City like the back of their paws. So it was no trouble when they tried to find there way home, after twenty minutes or so they were streaking down an alleyway which had a wall at the end. Whirly easily scaled it and Sweela lifted herself up using her vines, then she lifted Tula up by the vines as well.
They jumped down on the other side of the wall and found themselves on the outskirts of Goldenrod City and entering the forest of National Park that people were not allowed to enter because it is a nature reserve. After a short walk they came upon a big, old Oak tree which Tula approached and called “Hey guys open up”. And just after she said that a round camouflaged door opened under the roots that Whirly, Tula and Sweela all clambered through and Whirly closed behind them.
They walked up a spiral passageway and entered their home in the middle of the tree. Since the old Oak was so well grown it made their tree house very spacious, but it wasn’t only they the tree accommodated. To the left were four beds made out of baskets, one for Sweela, one for Tula, and the other two held the Eevee twins Kima and Yula. On the right there were five cosy mattresses for Chomper the Totodile, Blazza the Charmander, Felix the Cyndaquil, Scorch the Torchic and Jetto the Squirtle.
There was a ladder that led up to a hammock that Orala the Psyduck slept in and the ladder continued higher to another hammock that was Whirly’s. Where that ladder ended another ladder was there that went past another hammock that was Fuzzy the Sentret’s and ended at seven little cradles suspended from the roof by rope. In those cradles were Spock the Pichu, Soi the Plusle, Yoi the Minun, Spike the Togepi, Bella the Cleffa, Rollo the Igglybuff and Bouncy the Azurill. And in the shadowy corner of the roof hung Fang the Zubat.
“What took you guys so long” Blazza asked Whirly, Tula and Sweela “I’m starving”. “Sorry Blazza but we were waiting for the owner to look away and he took his time” Tula explained while taking the sack from around her back “But we got you some sausages”. Tula threw seven sausages to Blazza who roasted one on his tail and then began to chew it absent-mindedly. “We got some packets of Pokecereal and Pokechow as well” Tula went on “We were also able to get some Pecha and Oran berries”.
“Did you get any headache tablets” mumbled Orala from his hammock, “Sorry Orala but we forgot” apologised Whirly “But I got some pretty cool fireworks”. “Wob uns” said Blazza and everyone stared at him until he swallowed the sausage in his mouth and said again “What ones”.
“Well I got seven packets of Butterfree blast and Beedrill bash, four Charizard chomps and two deluxe packs,” Whirly said while counting the fireworks. “And we got a cushion each for Spock, Soi, Yoi, Spike, Bella, Rollo and Bouncy” said Sweela and Whirly threw the cushions up to the baby pokemon in the cradles.
The Pecha and Oran berries were eaten for lunch by all except Blazza, who had eaten four of his sausages raw and had a bad stomach ache. When they finished with the berries Orala waddled back into his hammock to have a nap and Spock, Soi, Yoi, and Spike versed Bella, Bouncy and Rollo in a cushion fight. Whirly, Tula, Sweela, Chomper, Jetto, Kima, Yule and Fuzzy went down to the stream for a swim while Blazza, Felix and Scorch joined in the cushion fight with the babies.
Jetto tested the stream water with a quick dive and told the others that it was pleasantly cool, so without further ado they all jumped in. They raced each other and played tag but they walked back home when it started to get dark, after saying goodnight to Fang who was going out for his night fly around the city they found the others already asleep so they climbed in to their beds as well. They stared into the darkenes and one by one they all drifted of to sleep.
That chapter was just introducing the characters but I hope it was good anyway.;190; ;001; ;216;
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CHAPTER ONE: THE GANG
Another perfect Sunday morning in Goldenrod City and the market is bustling with buyers, sellers and traders. Starting at six o, clock and ending at midday the market fills with impulse buyers, collectors, trainers, breeders, illegal firework dealers and tourists all who buy and sell items at cheap prices. Except some go unnoticed, they are the ones who are masters of disguise, they are the ones who are as swift as the wind, they are pokemon.
Always the sellers have wondered how the pokemon managed to steal and get away with it every time, they only knew the culprits were an Aipom, a Teddiursa and a Bulbasaur. But they also saw a Totodile, Charmander, Cyndaquil, Pichu, Plusle, Minun, Togepi, Squirtle, Cleffa, Zubat, Sentret, Two Eevees, Torchic, Azurill, Igglybuff and a Psyduck accompany them from time to time.
This Sunday the three casualties Whirly the Aipom, Tula the Teddiursa and Sweela the Bulbasaur hid in a guttering next to a fireworks and cushion stall. They were waiting for the person who was running the stall to take his attention away from the counter so they could carry out their plan. Finally he left to show a few customers different types of fireworks and Whirly, Tula and Sweela sprung into action. From below Sweela’s bulb two vines slithered out and wrapped themselves around one cushion each, she then made them come up and dropped them into the sack tied to Tula’s back.
Once she had seven cushions in the bag Tula and her left to go down to food section leaving Whirly to steal the fireworks. Whirly slid silently down a pipe and began loading packets of fireworks into his own sack. When the sack was full he scampered back up the pipe to hide in the guttering and to wait for Tula and Sweela who were still stocking up on snacks. Once Tula and Sweela returned they set of home, down the alleyways so they could not be seen.
Having lived in the city most of their lives, Whirly, Tula and Sweela knew Goldenrod City like the back of their paws. So it was no trouble when they tried to find there way home, after twenty minutes or so they were streaking down an alleyway which had a wall at the end. Whirly easily scaled it and Sweela lifted herself up using her vines, then she lifted Tula up by the vines as well.
They jumped down on the other side of the wall and found themselves on the outskirts of Goldenrod City and entering the forest of National Park that people were not allowed to enter because it is a nature reserve. After a short walk they came upon a big, old Oak tree which Tula approached and called “Hey guys open up”. And just after she said that a round camouflaged door opened under the roots that Whirly, Tula and Sweela all clambered through and Whirly closed behind them.
They walked up a spiral passageway and entered their home in the middle of the tree. Since the old Oak was so well grown it made their tree house very spacious, but it wasn’t only they the tree accommodated. To the left were four beds made out of baskets, one for Sweela, one for Tula, and the other two held the Eevee twins Kima and Yula. On the right there were five cosy mattresses for Chomper the Totodile, Blazza the Charmander, Felix the Cyndaquil, Scorch the Torchic and Jetto the Squirtle.
There was a ladder that led up to a hammock that Orala the Psyduck slept in and the ladder continued higher to another hammock that was Whirly’s. Where that ladder ended another ladder was there that went past another hammock that was Fuzzy the Sentret’s and ended at seven little cradles suspended from the roof by rope. In those cradles were Spock the Pichu, Soi the Plusle, Yoi the Minun, Spike the Togepi, Bella the Cleffa, Rollo the Igglybuff and Bouncy the Azurill. And in the shadowy corner of the roof hung Fang the Zubat.
“What took you guys so long” Blazza asked Whirly, Tula and Sweela “I’m starving”. “Sorry Blazza but we were waiting for the owner to look away and he took his time” Tula explained while taking the sack from around her back “But we got you some sausages”. Tula threw seven sausages to Blazza who roasted one on his tail and then began to chew it absent-mindedly. “We got some packets of Pokecereal and Pokechow as well” Tula went on “We were also able to get some Pecha and Oran berries”.
“Did you get any headache tablets” mumbled Orala from his hammock, “Sorry Orala but we forgot” apologised Whirly “But I got some pretty cool fireworks”. “Wob uns” said Blazza and everyone stared at him until he swallowed the sausage in his mouth and said again “What ones”.
“Well I got seven packets of Butterfree blast and Beedrill bash, four Charizard chomps and two deluxe packs,” Whirly said while counting the fireworks. “And we got a cushion each for Spock, Soi, Yoi, Spike, Bella, Rollo and Bouncy” said Sweela and Whirly threw the cushions up to the baby pokemon in the cradles.
The Pecha and Oran berries were eaten for lunch by all except Blazza, who had eaten four of his sausages raw and had a bad stomach ache. When they finished with the berries Orala waddled back into his hammock to have a nap and Spock, Soi, Yoi, and Spike versed Bella, Bouncy and Rollo in a cushion fight. Whirly, Tula, Sweela, Chomper, Jetto, Kima, Yule and Fuzzy went down to the stream for a swim while Blazza, Felix and Scorch joined in the cushion fight with the babies.
Jetto tested the stream water with a quick dive and told the others that it was pleasantly cool, so without further ado they all jumped in. They raced each other and played tag but they walked back home when it started to get dark, after saying goodnight to Fang who was going out for his night fly around the city they found the others already asleep so they climbed in to their beds as well. They stared into the darkenes and one by one they all drifted of to sleep.
That chapter was just introducing the characters but I hope it was good anyway.;190; ;001; ;216;