The Pokémon Scriptures...

[Night Avenger]

The Pokémon Scriptures...

OK this is kinda a Two Shot to explain how and why Pokémon were created, In some time I'll write the Apocalypse (end of the world) part.
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In the beggining of time there was only energy in the infinite space... This energy was put together by a mysterious force creating Mew, his brother and the planets in the newborn galaxy. Mew was then put onto the newly formed Earth were he could now live, without want of food, water or in fear of pain. But there was one thing that Mew wanted, and it was love, he wanted more company than the one his brother could give him.

To be loved other Pokémon should exist, so he started using all his power to create Pokémon. He lost all of his imunities by doing this. The first Pokémon that appared was a Ditto, his complex DNA could make him change in what he wanted. But Mew suddenly realized that they couldn't be shape-shifted for all their lifes. Then came Eevee and at last, Castform.

Mew started to give form to rocks, magma, water, ground, air, darkness, mental waves and physical power. This forms took live, becoming different types of Pokémon.

Mew was satisfied but soon wars begun to occur. For stoping this he created three guardians. Celebi, the guardian of time; Groudon, the Lord of the Land and Kyogre, the Lord of the Seas. Some time passed as the last of these two begun starting a new war, but a big one. All water living Pokémon against all the land living Pokémon.

Celebi came back in time to warn Mew, who created Rayquaza, guardian of the skies and protector of the peace. Groudon and Kyogre begun a war, as Mew and Celebi were expecting, but Rayquaza was there to stop it.

One day Mew had a son, a real son, not a creation. It was a grayish purple bodied Pokémon, with a star shaped head, his name was Jirachi. Jirachi had the ability to grant wishes.

Mew had a brother, Rukario. Rukario had the ability of the wave guidance. He appeared from the beggining of time but wasn't revealed until everything was on peace, probably Mew feared for his safeness.

Rayquaza had a son and a daughter too, their names were Latios and Latias, the two twins, representing the illusions and emotions respectively.

For protecting the skies, along with Rayquaza, Mew created Ho oh, and then he created Lugia, two more guardians to protect Pokémon.

Mew decided to create three more guardians, the Regis (or kings) first of the poles he took some ice and vreated Regice, then he took some Mountain rocks and created Regirock, and at last to protect them he created Registeel, leader of the Regis.

Mew created a triad, Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres to protect the sky along with Rayquaza and to protect their elements, when these three would get together to fight, Lugia would be summoned to stop it.

The other triad was created by Ho oh. Suicune, prince of water; Entei, king of magma and Raikou, lord of thunder. All this guardians have protected the world since then.

Some time passed as mew started thinking of new beings, capable of comunicating between themselves and with a great intelligence, so they could keep the world safe. This beings were humans...

 

[Yami Ryu]

In the beggining of time there was only energy in the infinite space... This energy was putten together by a mysterious force creating Mew and planets. Mew was putten on Earth were he could habitate, without having hunger, thirst and pain, but there was one thing that Mew wanted, and it was love.

Putten? I do not think Putten is a word. Put, yes, Putten? No. Unless you badly typoed Pudding but I don't think so. Lets see what some rewording can do. Also there's some other things that could be done;

This energy was put together by a mysterious force creating Mew and the planets in the newborn galexy. Mew was then put onto the newly formed Earth were he could now live, without want of food, water or in fear of pain.

To be loved other Pokémon should exist, so he started using all his power to create Pokémon. The first Pokémon that appared was a Ditto, his complex DNA could make him change in what he wanted. But Mew suddenly realized that they couldn't be shape-shifted for all their lifes. Then came Eevee and at last, Castform.

If he was this all powerfull, why was he created by this mysterious force, and not everything else vice versa? Pokemon usually doesn't support catholic/christianic/buddahist/etcisticnicwhateverics views, as it's most believed Mew/Jirachi/whatever created everything or something else did/why Pokemon were seen as gods and etc. Not saying your idea is bad... but a little more thought could have made it better.

And how was he lonely? How did he know he was lonely and needed love? If he never was around anyone, never knew anything outside of now, why would he desire company? You failed in going into emotional depth and continued to make Mew a two dimensional character. What you did could easily have been twice as long, not about description or whatever people say I always yell out, but for more detail to everything, emotion/feeling, the character, what does Mew look like, how did he feel, why was he put on Earth and not somewhere else?

Mew started to give forms to rocks, magma, water, ground, air, darkness, mental waves and physical power. This forms took life, becoming different types of Pokémon.

How did Mew do all of this? He might have been created and everything but only a god could have held such a power as this. You could have gone into more depth of what he did to give items without souls, breath, life, thought, being, self awareness a form, a shape. Something more. And also how did Mew create Ditto? How did he know about DNA manipulation and then do so to Eevee and Castform, how did he make those two too?

Mew was satisfied but soon wars begun to occur. For stoping this he created three guardians. Celebi, the guardian of time; Groudon, the Lord of the Land and Kyogre, the Lord of the Seas. Some time passed as the last of these two begun starting a new war, but a big one. All water living Pokémon against all the land living Pokémon.

There you go twisting about everything. Wouldn't those three have already been created when Mew created the others? And what about Ky and Grou's abilities? Why would Mew give them such abilities and not realise sooner or later they would begin to battle too? And what about the myth that Groudon and Kyogre made the land and the seas? How would that have gotten around when infact they did nothing?

Celebi came back in time to warn Mew, who created Rayquaza, guardian of the skies and protector of the peace. Groudon and Kyogre beguna war, as Mew and Celebi were expecting, but Rayquaza was there to stop it.

Why didn't Mew try to stop the war before it began, using Rayquaza as a mediator, and not letting the two titans appear as savage creatures. And once again, another rushed paragraph.

One day Mew had a son, a real son, not a creation. It was a grayish purple bodied Pokémon, with a star shaped head, his name was Jirachi. Jirachi had the ability to grant wishes.

How did Mew have Jirachi as a son. What was Jirachi's mother. Did Mew like, suddenly become pregnant and give birth? What about Jirachi being tied to that comet that appears every thousand years, how did that come about? Why?

Mew had a brother, Rukario. Rukario had the ability of the wave guidance. He appeared from the beggining of time but wasn't revealed until everything was on peace, probably Mew feared for his safety.

So Mew wasn't the only one created by that mysterious force? So infact your first paragraph or whatever is false? Or is this one false?

Rayquaza had two sons too, their names were Latios and Latias, the two brothers, representing the illusions and emotions respectively.

Latias is FEMALE and like with Mew, did Rayquaza suddenly get a Male Pregnancy attack and give birth to them?

For protecting the skies, along with Rayquaza, Mew created Ho oh, and then he created Lugia,a guardian of the water Pokémon.

Ho Oh is supposedly the Guardian of life. Lugia is supposedly the Guardian of Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres.

Mew decided to create three more guardians, the Regis (or kings) first of the poles he took some ice and vreated Regice, then he took some Mountain rocks and created Regirock, and at last to protect them he created Registeel, leader of the Regis.

How exactly did Mew create the Golems? What did he do to make it where Regice would never melt, Regirock could regenerate with rocks from the surrounding are or whatever, and whatever it is Registeel can do.

He created two more triads, Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres to protect the sky along with Rayquaza and to protect their elements, when these three would get together, Lugia would be summoned.

Actually, when the three fought, Lugia would arise to quell the fighting. As the second movie provided info to/towards. And how can Rayquaza protect the elements, when it's ability basically cancels out any sort of weather? It would be a hazard to anywhere if it stayed too long. No rain, no hail, no nothing...

Then Mew created Suicune, prince of water; Entei, king of magma and Raikou, lord of thunder. All this guardians have protected the world since then.

... um, I think it's also been said Ho Oh created those three...

Some time passed as mew started thinking of new beings, capable of comunicating between themselves and with a great intelligence, so they could keep the world safe. This beings were humans...

And why didn't Celebi warn him about humans like he did about Groudon and Kyogre?

Basicaly ... you have potential... but you lost it along the way in trying to make Mew an all powerfull god.

 

[Luxuria]

I liked this fic but the only a few things that bugged me were that mew seemed to be God. I'm christian and that kind of offends me.pokemon don't really have genders but its a good idea. And you used he to much. You could use the pokemon's name more or people will yhink ypur talking about some thing else.
other than that a pretty good fic

 

[Night Avenger]

I'm christian too, but this is some kind of mythology. It's for explaining how Pokémon were created (and they don't really exist) so sorry if I offended you...
And if no one noticed:
[SPOIL]Deoxys didn't appear! He was created by the mysterious energy too, but he escaped from Earth into the distant galaxies. He will appear in the Apocalypse part.[/SPOIL]