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The pokemon journey, _Ice_or_Peace_

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-~*Escense*~-

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This RPG is a multiple choice for starting, you can be a few different types of people/pokemon, this will be explained in the further parts.​

The Scenes

You have multiple choices in witch race to be, these are your choices,
Type in this color if you are a ranger,
Type in this color if you are an endangered pokemon (see list of pokemon)

The Main Plot.

Ranger: The world is being tooken over by an evil team, Team Tundra, this band of evil people think that everything and everyone that doesnt respect the pokemon types water and ice, and they are trying to set up hundreds of lunar beams using the power of ice pokemon to send ice bolts to the moon, holding it in place so it will be forever dark, cold and icey, they plan to capture the over powerful legendary pokemon; Regice, Rayquaza, Articuno, Suicine, Lugia, Kyogre, and Manafi. your job as a ranger is to stop these people from taking over the northern hemisphere from complete darkness, by using your capturing lead and experience, when you start pokemon will be level 5 when you temporarily capture them, for every level you level up, the pokemon's will vary from the level before you leveled up, and the level you are, Eg if you were level 2, pokemon would vary from level 1-3, if you were level 3, pokemon would vary from level 2-4, gettit?

Endangered pokemon

the plot is basically the same as the ranger, but you are the pokemon in danger of getting killed for not being ice/water type, so your job is to fight off enemies and try and find safe places to hide, build up packs with other players, build dens, find food etc, you can be any BASIC pokemon, but not water/ice type.​


Aftermath or Twist.

I'm sorry, but you'll have to wait untill the end of the year, or untill all the members complete the RPG to find out the ending.​

Also, a quick note, you must also PM me if you are going to join,
heres the form​

Ranger name:
Description: (3-5 lines)
Starting pokemon: (Growlithe, Poliwag, Bellsprout, Spinarak, Totodile, Houndour, Seedot, Lotad, Numel)
Gender:
_________

Pokemon: any basic, no fossils/rare
Gender:
description:
fusion: Provide sprite
Recolor: provide sprite
reelement: provide sprite​

ONLY FIVE PEOPLE MAY REGISTER FOR EACH OCCUPATION, SO ONLY TEN MEMBERS ALLOWED​

Members:

LEON:

Ranger name:Leon
Description: shoulder length black hair, pair of all star converse boots, baggy dark blue jeans with rips on the knees, black pokeball print t-shirt, black beanie cap with pokeball print.
Starting pokemon: Houndour
Gender: Male
 
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RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
-~*Escense*~- said:
This RPG is a multiple choice for starting, you can be a few different types of people/pokemon, this will be explained in the further parts.​

The Scenes

You have multiple choices in witch race to be, these are your choices,
Type in this color if you are a ranger,
Type in this color if you are an endangered pokemon (see list of pokemon)

I shouldn't have to point out that those colours wont show up on every style. What would be better is making people start their posts with a title. The name of the character and what they are, for instance:

Joe Bloggs / Ranger or Sparky / Vaporeon

The Main Plot.

Ranger: The world is being tooken over by an evil team, Team Tundra, this band of evil people think that everything and everyone that doesnt respect the pokemon types water and ice, and they are trying to set up hundreds of lunar beams using the power of ice pokemon to send ice bolts to the moon, holding it in place so it will be forever dark, cold and icey, they plan to capture the over powerful legendary pokemon; Regice, Rayquaza, Articuno, Suicine, Lugia, Kyogre, and Manafi. your job as a ranger is to stop these people from taking over the northern hemisphere from complete darkness, by using your capturing lead and experience, when you start pokemon will be level 5 when you temporarily capture them, for every level you level up, the pokemon's will vary from the level before you leveled up, and the level you are, Eg if you were level 2, pokemon would vary from level 1-3, if you were level 3, pokemon would vary from level 2-4, gettit?​


Have you ever heard of a full stop? It's just next to the comma, it's used for stopping sentences. You may want to learn about them, so you don't have an entire paragraph of run on text. Team Tundra, another generic 'Type Team', incredibly cliché, over done, and the most unoriginal thing to have in an RPG these days.

You've also failed to explain the levelling system. How do you level up? Does the person decide it in their posts? What's to stop them reaching level 50 in their first 5 posts? Do you decide it? What is it based on?

Endangered pokemon

the plot is basically the same as the ranger, but you are the pokemon in danger of getting killed for not being ice/water type, so your job is to fight off enemies and try and find safe places to hide, build up packs with other players, build dens, find food etc, you can be any BASIC pokemon, but not water/ice type.

This seems totally unrelated to the rest of the plot.


Aftermath or Twist.

I'm sorry, but you'll have to wait untill the end of the year, or untill all the members complete the RPG to find out the ending.​

Well duh.

Also, a quick note, you must also PM me if you are going to join,
heres the form​

Ranger name:
Description: (3-5 lines)
Starting pokemon: (Growlithe, Poliwag, Bellsprout, Spinarak, Totodile, Houndour, Seedot, Lotad, Numel)
Gender:
_________​


Why PM? What's the point of this topic if you want everything in PM?

Pokemon: any basic, no fossils/rare
Gender:
description:
fusion: Provide sprite
Recolor: provide sprite
reelement: provide sprite
ONLY FIVE PEOPLE MAY REGISTER FOR EACH OCCUPATION, SO ONLY TEN MEMBERS ALLOWED​

Members:

This isn't the Fanart Forum. The point of having a description field is that you use it, not cheap out with a poorly edited picture.

LEON:

Ranger name:Leon
Description: shoulder length black hair, pair of all star converse boots, baggy dark blue jeans with rips on the knees, black pokeball print t-shirt, black beanie cap with pokeball print.
Starting pokemon: Houndour
Gender: Male
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Age, Gender, History, Personality? Surname? Reason for trying to stop 'Team Tundra'?

And double posting much? Have you read the rules at all? I suggest you do.
 
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