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blueguy

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Hmm... Using plain text against a background makes it difficult to read. Try to place your text in boxes (or speechbubbles) so that they're more easily viewed. Secondly, your grammar is very poor. I suggest running your speech through Word so that it shows you your mistakes, and how to fix them. I would also reccomend you use "é" in pokémon. Here's how:

1) Hold down the Alt key
2) Type in 0233 in the number pad
3) Release Alt
4) "é" Voila!

In the second and third panel you have stretched the images. This distorts them and makes them look odd. What you can do is simply zoom in for a closer shot. You can even do this on paint, by zooming in and pressing "Print Screen", then pasting it and using the enlarged image. Also, the comic ends at an odd point and leaves a lot of blank space. The solution would be to have two panels on top and two on the bottom for this particular edition. The sprite you made for the camera is a bit off... Try to study the style of other pokémon O/Ws when creating them or else it won't fit the style. Last but not least, the plot seems a bit off to me...
 
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