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The problems of journey comics

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Because of the mass amounts of journey comic's I have decided to help you people and show what is needed to be improved with them. I will also be showing, and updating this page with examples

1. The problem with starting a comic
For some reason everyone decides to start in the starting town with a starting trainer, or a recolor of him/her and let him start their quest. This is an exact copy of nearly every pokemon game, please be more original.

2. The text under panel problem
Many journey comics have text under the panels, which is a bad thing. If the maker of the comic decides to show two or more people in the comic at once the reader might get confused on which new person is which. Also we have the problem of the mysterious person, and if there is two mysterious people the author will have one named "Other ???", which makes it even more confusing.

3. Those big panels
Beco did this in his first few comics, all your panels really need to do is focus on the action, not on everything else. It is distracting and annoying.

4. Bad effects
Some journey comics use paint and just slap on a few pixels and call it an attack. Try to put some work into it, go to a sprite website and just take a sprite that resembles the attack. The sprite doesn't even have to be from a pokemon game!

5.Recoluring is not a good idea
Some comic's, just use recoloured sprites, even ones that are not journey comics. But either way try to edit them a bit. If you do not someone might actually say this about your comic. But if you don't even bother recoluring they expect your comic to end very fast.

6. Cameo's can be a bad thing
Sometimes cameo's can be a very bad thing. If you get too many you might get complaints from someone because their cameo hasn't been seen yet. Try to limit cameos and doesn’t give one to every person who gives your comic 5 stars.

7. We already know
This is a pokemon forum, we have all played a pokemon game here, and you don't need to tell us how it goes all over again. Try to do something more, surprising.

8. Those bad towns
Some people decide to make their own towns for there comic. Sometimes it works, other times it doesn't. If it doesn't look like it would be in a pokemon game make another town or use one from the game.

9. Overused Jokes
Many of us know the end to this joke, and I’ve seen in used quite often in journey comics due to the fact Nurse Joy frequently appears in the Pokemon Centers. Please do not do this you would not steal someone’s wallet, nor would you steals someone’s belongings so please do not steal someone’s creativity.


This will be updated, and if you have question about helping with your journey comic please ask here. If you want to submit a rule please PM me.

Sprites from the great spriters resource
 
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Goatman56

Paras is the shiz!
Awesome! Finally someone makes a thread like this. What about the size of the pokemon, I mean come on there humongous in these comics.
 

Blueray

Wario = PWN
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Why not post this in the comic guide thread...
NO MORE STICKIES!
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It's a good guide though...
just... no stickies...
 
Teachy TV
Not a journy comic
yet it's a Pokemon Comic.

Originality plz.
 
and noticed like almost every journey comic starts in ether Pallet town, New bark town and littleroot town. Why cant people start in different cities such as cinnibar or something and make it seem like you are going to any one of the professors labs for a starter Pokemon.

;003;DV;003;
 

Infinity

Gone...
I'm not going to be as harsh as I was on TSC, but one thing that irks me is there are journey comics that have are just completely random that lacks grammar and humor. Bah, I'm actually considering reviving MCT...
 

Mastercougar

The Infinite Fire
When reading a comic strip, there's always one central question any author has to answer for it to get legitamate fans. The question is:

WHY SHOULD WE CARE? You've got to show people why they should care about reading your comic.

Most journey comics fail to answer that question.

Ultimately, because of their tiresome plot, the best answer they can give is

"Cause you wanna see them win! Like...Ash n'stuff."

No we don't. We're tired of seeing a group of trainers trying to become the best. Think about it. There are tons upon tons of other things that can be done about the Pokemon World. Most people probably aren't even trainers. Show a side of the world we've never seen before. And then, we'll say to you:

"We do care!"
 

Rinrei

<- Kawaii ^^
Hm... You got a point there... I hate it the way they put text under the pictures -.-;;; So annoying... Anwyays, this is a good guide ^^
 
Thank you all, I know Davis your Teachy is by far the most original of them all, you don't need to remind me

and talking about reminding

7. We already know
This is a pokemon fourm, we have all played a pokemon game here, you don't need to remind us how it goes all over again. Try to do something more, suprising.
 

Anton_91

Comic Trainer!
Okey, your makeing a really good point here. So that good. just two things:

1. you should probably insert an 8 as well, where it says something like "Not using confusing text for example: Y"o, I gona str my pOKemen jOurny noOw!" or something, :p Not saying that you MUST just a tip. So what I mean is improve spelling..." (yeah, I'm a bad "speller" to I know, but not that bad...)

2. ... Never mind, I'll take that later...
 

jellsprout

Well-Known Member
Blueray said:
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Why not post this in the comic guide thread...
NO MORE STICKIES!
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It's a good guide though...
just... no stickies...

I think that there should be two stickies:
1. How to make a comic.
2. How NOT to make a comic.

The second one should also include the "Authors are not a good idea. Yes, you heard me." thread and also this one.

Anyway, this is a good guide. I just hope people will read this before they make a new comic and that they actually take the advise.
 

Bu†cH

Braaiiiiiinss......
How about something like one of these?

Crappy speech bubbles with crooked text.
Putting yourself in a comic.
Crappy backgrounds.
 

Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
CoF wins at life (Or the Comic forum)

But seriously, give us all a break and come up with a journey comic that DOESN'T suck.

Like MC said, why should we care? But lets put it in Outlaw terms

Making a comic is like writing an essay: Right off the bat you have to show us a reason to give a rat's ass about your comic. You fail the first comic, you're screwed for the rest of it.
 
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Eric

Guest
Ahh you seem to have alot there for journey comics. I would add things to do that would make a comic better visually. Things like:
Zoom ups to show actions or emotions
How to edit/scratch sprite good

I would also add:
That overworld sprites should never be used anywhere outside of a battle scene because
a) It doesn't make the up down world since it's a side scroller
B) There is only one sprite and limits the use of it

I'm glad to see people not accepting **** anymore.
 

Matt Silver

Rest My Chemistry
I'd like to add one:
People always do the Nurse Joy thing.
EG: Nurse says: I hope to see u again!
Then a character goes nuts at her.
I'm sick of that joke being used OVeR and OVER.
 

blueguy

used Metronome!
Pokefan26 said:
Finally, I sent Serebii a PM about this, and he didn't reply.
Soon they'll ban Journey Comics, I wish.

That kind of remark is pure idiocy. You can't ban a comic simply because a comic is about a "journey". That's what the entire pokémon franchise is based upon, and though there are other facets, it is arguably the most important. It's really rude and narrow-minded to assume that every journey comic will be unoriginal and subpar. There are, believe it or not, fanfictions and fancomics and fan<insert here>s, that feature journeys, which are excellent.

Of course there are some journey comics, of which I won't name, which are COMPLETE garbage, but to automatically judge a comic because it focuses on a journey is ignorant.

Anyways... CoF, you've done a good job in humorously illustrating some of the downfalls of fan comics, these days, but I beseech that you do not make a "Grammar" one, because your grammar is really terrible, and it would make you a hypocrite. If there's one thing that annoys me more than people being prejudiced toward creative works featuring journeys, it's someone who has terrible grammar who asks others to spell correctly...

*grumbles*

Toodleoo.
 
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Goatman56

Paras is the shiz!
Blueguy you may have a point. Your comic changes the perspective a little. What with the new gym leader's and all that. But even so the way I see is your saying people might give your comic, or any other journey comic a bad grade solely based on that. You can change alot of things about journeys, but the whole trying to collect the badges thing gets annoying.
 
Why thank you Outlaw, but there is one thing I wish I could win.

blueguy said:
Anyways... CoF, you've done a good job in humorously illustrating some of the downfalls of fan comics, these days, but I beseech that you do not make a "Grammar" one, because your grammar is really terrible, and it would make you a hypocrite. If there's one thing that annoys me more than people being prejudiced toward creative works featuring journeys, it's someone who has terrible grammar who asks others to spell correctly...

*grumbles*

Yes my grammar is not the best, I do try to make my writing readable unlike idiots who write "LOL ZOMG j00r Jurny comic iz da bestst!11111" which also seems to be seen in certain journey comic's which I refuse to speak of. Also your expectations in grammer are higher due to your age. But let's not dwell on this any longer.

Wait a second, humorously illustrating, I never thought these would be meant for humour, just to show visually what not to do.

9. Overused Jokes
Many of us know the end to this joke, and I’ve seen in used quite often in journey comics due to the fact Nurse Joy frequently appears in the Pokemon Centers. Please do not do this you would not steal someone’s wallet, nor would you steals someone’s belongings so please do not steal someone’s creativity.
 
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