Hehe, I know the feeling.Chibi Pika said:Hello.
When I read this, it was past midnight in my time zone and I had to wake up at five in the morning the next day and yet I spent two hours getting caught up on almost two years of not reading this fic.
Sure thing. ^^Chibi Pika said:In any case, one thing that I did not make up and would like permission to use is the fact that four moves are permitted in official battles. I thought it was a really clever way to incorporate that aspect of the games.
:3 Thanks. I love themes.Chibi Pika said:Without a doubt the one thing that leaves me in awe about your fic right now is the themes. The plotline is great, but the themes just leave me stunned continuously, from the overall presentation to the way they're emphasized without repetition...it's all so perfect.
I'll only say one thing there: The Destroyer is going to surprise you all. Quite a lot.Chibi Pika said:One thing that I find interesting is the fact that it seems like the Destroyer is far more powerful than the legendaries, almost in control of them (or is it just that taking their power is his sole ability, and there is no way for them to battle him?)
All the Pokémon and humans had to be either resurrected or recreated; as the Pokémon were mostly mutilated beyond the possibility of resurrection (because they had been the ones attempting to battle, so they had been more severely attacked) most of the Pokémon species ended up being created from scratch again, but a lot of humans were saved. The legendaries are different from the ones that used to exist, yes, except where Mew deliberately decided to attempt to recreate one that existed before. Essentially, the fact that Mew was the survivor caused it to gain the ability to create.Chibi Pika said:Either way, I have a rather confusing question…if Mew was the only survivor of the last War of the Legends, and he had to recreate the Legendaries, does that mean that the Legendaries in existence now are completely different species that the ones that died? And if, say, some other Legend had won, then they would have the ability to create life?
Edit: Wait...did the whole world get destroyed? That's the way Chaletwo made it seem in Chapter 30. Did all the Pokemon and humans have to be recreated?
It will actually happen at a certain point in the future of the story, but I wouldn't say it has any real serious effect on it other than the fact it means Mewtwo has disappeared off the face of the Earth.Chibi Pika said:Hey, you know...when I made that flurry of theories about Chaletwo, I wasn't far off. I kept on asking if it involved Mewtwo getting taken back in time. Now my question is--you probably can't say when Mewtwo got taken back, but will it affect the future of the story in any way?
Thanks. I'm afraid I don't have Mystery Dungeon yet, so I don't know what the legendary battle music is like. ;_;Chibi Pika said:That said, like everyone else, that Thunderyu battle was one of the most awesome things I’ve ever read. Makes me wish that all the Legendary vs. normal Pokémon battles in my fic weren’t so far in the future. Oddly, while reading the battle, the Mystery dungeon Legendary battle music kept playing in my head. xP It certainly added to the whole battle’s feel.
It's pronounced "Owen". Hehe, I should really make a pronunciation guide for this fic...Chibi Pika said:Random question: How do you pronounce "Ouen"? It's been bugging me that I don't know how. ><
I just had to quote quote that....is the Destroyer a random Leta? (Those things look so insanely cute and innocent... it HAS to be able to destroy everything! )
Hehe, I think I can safely answer no to that without giving anything of worth away....is the Destroyer a random Leta? (Those things look so insanely cute and innocent... it HAS to be able to destroy everything! )
The Sinnoh legendaries will definitely be in the IALCOTN. Dunno if they'll come in here with just allowing for a continuity error in their sudden existence. :/Out of curiosity, are the Sinnoh legends within the continuity of the story. I mean, they could all basically be put under "Caught" category, but I was just curious.
Especially considering Arsues being the "creator"(or at least in Sionooh "lore") of all pokemon and being all teh uber(what with his super stats and type varity), and that'd be interesting.
My inference from this is that basically, May thinks Mark sucks. ^_^ Heheh.“Well,” Fury replied with a smile, “that depends on whether I feel I can battle after the first one.”
“Oh, all right,” May said thoughtfully. “Mark, you can try first.”
...it reminded me of this great fic I read where the guy froze up under pressure and his 'mons had to fend for themselves, which was quite cool.“You’re too slow,” Fury repeated. “It’s what made you lose. Your Pokémon battle better without you than with; they have to wait for you to tell them an order or act on their own accord. You’re too slow making the orders.”
*nods*EDIT: By the way, would anybody be interested in a PMing thing so you get PMed when I post a new chapter?
oops...Okay... um, guys, if somebody else is going to be on the list, just PM me, okay? I just realized it's kinda spammy here in the thread... =/
Thats quite a cool idea, the whole abra thing.until two doctors in white coats teleported there with an Abra
Heehee, I read the spin-off thing, so I already knew this stuff. ^^“Stormblade.” Scyther looked at the lighter one with a small nod and turned to the dark one. “Shadowdart…”
Wow, thats an interesting revelation. *waits for poké-portal to appear right next to self*They went to wars, blew each other up and made the animal world into the radioactive wasteland it is now. Thankfully the portal between the worlds had been opened and refugees fled into the Pokémon world…”
*Snatches year-old cookie off of floor and eats it*In celebration, I'm throwing confetti everywhere and handing out free cookies to everyone.
Dun, dun, duuuuun...He looked at Mark again. “Ouen is in grave danger.”
I think I have no choice but to delay my work now.So anyway. Chapter 31 is coming along, slowly but surely. In this chapter you will (finally) get to know Spirit's role in the fic, who the heck she is and why she is on my banner.
Heh, I always forget my age. I've been 15 for the best part of a year, but I still have to think about the answer when I'm asked. ^^He blinked again. Twelve. He had looked forward to turning twelve. It was a much nicer number than eleven, somehow. Now he’d have to remember to answer twelve when asked about his age.
XDMay turned around and raised an eyebrow. “He ‘sorta’ broke into your dream? Did he or didn’t he?”
He's getting better!“Okay, Fly!” Dan ordered, and Clare shot upwards in the air. Mark had one of those rare sparks of old Battling lessons that had sunk in:
...maybe not then.“Umm, Leta, try to dodge it, like by hiding under a tree or…”
Mark shut up when he realized that Leta showed no signs of noticing that he was talking at all, let alone doing what he said. She sat there on the ground in plain view where she would be extremely easy to hit, and looked innocently upwards at the Pidgeot while swishing her tail back and forth.
Oooh, nice weakness-logicing.Her metallic armor would most likely continue to echo the waves like a chiming bell for several seconds afterwards.
XD. Senseless violence ftw. ^^She got elbowed rather harshly by Alan again and kicked his leg hard in retaliation.
Ooh, Suicune and Entei picked Ninetales and Gyarados. Shame an electric type can't get picked.“You are the other,” Spirit said softly. “You were chosen by Suicune and have only yet to receive his final blessing and become marked with light instead of dark…”
Not for her...“Come on, May,” Alan said. “No need to be paranoid. Pokémon thefts are ridiculously rare,
The double-curiously doesn't seem to work very well. Y'could decribe Lapras' staring at it as transfixed, mebbe'.The wispy light then curiously detached itself from Lanturn and floated lazily in the air, causing Lapras to watch it curiously.
Haha. ^_^“Oh dear,” Sparky said with an amused grin, voicing exactly Mark’s thoughts. “He’s still under the influence.”
This is just one example of why, but I really like that Sparky guy. I think he should join them on their quest. ^^Mark suddenly realized as Sparky let go off his hand that a small object was left in it. He stared at his palm in astonishment to see a shiny silver badge with a bolt of lightning engraved on it.
I was right! I throught I remembered having guessed it, but I actually did get it right. o_o Wow... Although after that I went off about crazy theories involving Ricks clones having been the ones that got killed to explain why there are still Legendaries today.myself said:If there isn't another Mewtwo look alike, then is it possible that another Pokémon transformed into Chaletwo before the prologue? And if there isn't and Mewtwo isn't alive present day, could he somehow have been time-travelified by another Pokémon and killed then? Or could that have happened in the future of the story for us, but him taken to the past???
Heh, I remember that. I was thinking "...Damn, they're better than I thought."Chibi Pika said:I was right! I throught I remembered having guessed it, but I actually did get it right. o_o Wow...
Yup.Chibi Pika said:Hey, I just noticed the significance of Mew and Mewtwo being the only Legendaries described in the Prologue. 8P If the others hadn't been so mangled, it would reveal the fact that they were totally different Legendaries long before the Creator/recreation-after-war thing was explained. Yeah, I'm Captain Obvious, I know. xP
Hehe, I loved those too.Chibi Pika said:I love the irony of Mark's last words to his parents before leaving. xD
It was pretty much just mass memory-erasure and records removed, although I have to admit I never really put any thought to the records part. xPChibi Pika said:Random Question: Are there any...records, I guess, of past Legend wars? It seems like there would be accounts of what happened, unless the whole world was totally fried. But then there would be a random gap in the history of things that people would probably wonder about. Or more--destruction of any records prior to the war, essentially throwing the previous years into a sort of "prehistory," where all records randomly begin at that one point. Or have I just missed some subtle clue to it all? (I probably should have reread that chapter with the Legendary-book-thing...)
Actually, that was in the pre-HMMRCIG where those random boys from May's class were there and she was yelling at them and about boys in general, among other things that she wished humans had the same system as hyenas where the females are always higher than males.Chibi Pika said:Oh yeah... The other day I was reading a fact card thingy about hyenas how the females are highest in rank and it reminded me of a line in an old revision. I think it was May ranting about how male Mightyena had to bow down to female Poochyena. xD
Of course. I'm the Queen of the Monostar! *boasts*Chibi Pika said:On another note: My God, you've been hit by the monostar a lot. oO I've been hit three times. But you must have been hit a lot to get dragged down that far, considering the likely huge amount of fives. =P