The Quest To Find Dad

[Modem X]

Hey all! NeoFighter here.
Just started a new comic call The Quest To Find Dad. It's about a kid called Conrad who sets out to find he long lost father. Also weird stuff may happen so be warned.

Comics
Comic 1:

Specials



Sprite Sheats



Credits
The Spriter's Resource
VG Maps
The Shyguy Kingdom
Avatar for bases for sprites
Silver Fusion for heads
And the people who just spend there time to look at this thread



Trainer Cards



Notes
Mild Randomness

 

[Controller of Flames]

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Are you kidding me? A quest to find Dad? The mother not even caring? I also didn't understand half of it.

The comic so far is boring and unoriginal in many ways, but everything else is fine.

 

[Modem X]

Okay he father is is nowhere to be found in Kanto, and the mom thinks the dad is dead. But Conrad thinks his father is alive somewhere. Hope that explains it.

 

[Magical Trevor]

well mum not even caring is a bit stupid and fix the speech bubbles some parts there white and some parts they are transperent

 

[ForeverFlame]

Speechbubbles are almost perfect. All they need is all that non-white stuff to be erased.
I don't really like recolored (or spliced) Heroes. Even if it's VERY well recolored, I still don't like them.
Try not to turn this into a regular 'journey' also, try to make some bumps and turns. Most good journey comics are set in the same region (Kanto, Johto or Hoenn) but they have MANY different side-quests added to them.
The title of your comic is VERY, VERY, VERY sappy. I don't know, it just seems weird that a whole comic is about a child looking for his dad.
I'll keep a look out, to see if it improves any.

 

[Joe Vega #4]

...Okay, this just plain sucked. I'll tell you why.

1. The characters are too flat.

2. How the heck did the scene change so fast from panels 1-3?

3. Since when did speech bubbles extend outside of the panels?

4. What kind of title is "The Quest to Find Dad"? Sounds like a comic from a kindergartner at first sight.

5. Ever heard of commas?

6. You didn't even abbreviate your own comic right. If I recall correctly, "Quest" is a word that isn't omitted from abbreviations, so it'd be TQFD.

That's all I can think of.