Meg Is Hoenn's Champ
Meg Is Hoenn's Champ
Your story's awesome,Right now I'm on around chapter 4 and it's hilarious too,Keep it up Bobandbill!
Thanks for that. I've sent you a PM, BTW...OMFG!! THIS is so much EPIC ****ING WIN!! (i only joined a few minutes before finding this! I LOVE IT!! so much win i don't know where to start! XD funny as hell mate, funny as hell! can i put that banner-link thing in my sig?
It's part of my 'world domination' plan - it's also now on Pokecommunity and DragonFlyCave... and partly on TPT. Hehehe.This is a very nice story, i only read the first 3 chapters on fanfiction.net but i didn't know YOU were the author of the story on both sites, COOL!
Thanks - and you've been added.Ah yes...there is nothing quite like a bad guy losing to a Magikarp... although the strategy you showed is about the only decent one for Magikarp. Loved Tom, and still lovin Miror. B.
Yes, this is a lame review. So sue me.
Could you add me to the PM list? Please?
...are you dead then (it's been a while...).This.is.the.best
Make the next chapter soon or i mite die!
Thanks, Meg. Hope you like this next one.Your story's awesome,Right now I'm on around chapter 4 and it's hilarious too,Keep it up Bobandbill!
Hey,I'm just waiting for your next chapter now,You're writing is awesome!
Why do half of my readers almost fall out of their chairs? Confuses me...this is reely funny i almost fell out of my chair(partly cause i was laughing and partly cause im dum)
“I thaught it is was me hise!” answered Tom indignantly
“… and then I said ‘Let mer be… jammy tarts! And then there there there was… there something, and I was happy,” concluded the rambling Tom.
All those people in the other regions kept on bugging me for autographs, and free hugs, and a piece of my hair…
“NO! That’s my book – no, not the tel-” Miror B shouted, just before the book made contact and split the screen into a million glistening fragments. The music disappeared with it, as Rui slumped to the floor and gave a sigh of relief.
She has a nice smile, he thought.
Miror B laughed at the question. “Fair enough - I got that a lot already. Well, my name came about as a typo when it was written by some inept person on my birth certificate - instead of ‘Mirror Ball’, it ended up missing an ‘r’ in ‘mirror’, and ‘Ball’ - my family’s last name, was shortened to B. For some reason or another, it never got changed back.”
Stupid dancers… why do they have to make so much noise? One would think that they were having a massive Pokemon battle, not a dance lesson… pondered Doken
“Aha, I told you… you!?!” Doken exclaimed in surprise as Tom came up the stairs and into view.
“Ayeiei… look at all the antsys!” slurred Tom
“Oh, confident are you?” asked Miror B amusedly. “Maybe this will make you think twice!” Miror B danced off the screen for a moment, and appeared again with a radio in hand.
“W-What are you going to do?” asked Rui nervously.
Wordlessly, Miror B opened a slot in the radio, inserted a tape, and closed it. Then he hit the play button. Music blazed from the radio instantly, with an all-too-familiar tune. Smiling, Miror B began singing.
I want to be the very best,
That no one ever was,
“Es. Pi. On.” (Oh. GOD. No.)
To catch them is my real quest,
To train them is my cause!
“Make it stop!” shouted Rui, but to no avail.
I travel across the land,
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that’s inside!
Just before Miror B got any further with the song however, Tom came charging into the room.
“More any not much too fir stand up with this I not will! Die singing this!” he shouted, as he picked up a book titled ‘Dancing and You! How to dance the steps to the top!’ from a bookshelf and hurled it at the screen.
“That’s Miror B’s music!” she exclaimed. Wes nodded absentmindedly.
She has a nice smile, he thought.
“Wes?”
Well, we’ll just have to beat him the old fashioned way, Wes thought. “So,” he began to Miror B, “may I ask before we battle - what is with your hair anyway? And your name?”
Miror B laughed at the question. “Fair enough - I got that a lot already. Well, my name came about as a typo when it was written by some inept person on my birth certificate - instead of ‘Mirror Ball’, it ended up missing an ‘r’ in ‘mirror’, and ‘Ball’ - my family’s last name, was shortened to B. For some reason or another, it never got changed back.”
“But… why would your parents name you Mirror Ball?”
“That… I still don’t know. As for my hair - well, strangely enough - it’s natural.”
“N-Natural?” asked Rui uncertainly, eyeing the red and white ball of hair.
“Yes, even the hair colour, and the equal divide of the two colours. It’s true!” he cried, noticing that Wes and Rui didn’t quite seem to believe him. “It’s a rare hair condition I was born with - so I decided to make the most of it and turn it into an afro! It is, as you can see, plainly afro-tastic!” Wes and Rui cringed at the joke - Johnson on the other hand, laughed at it.
“Oh, breadcrumbs.”
bobandbill said:“Because you’re stupid,” answered Silva. He knew that the key to surviving interrogations was to deny everything.
“Fine then, Silva, what are we going to have to do with you?” continued the woman.
“That’s not it,” retorted Silva.
“What’s not it?”
“My name’s not Silva,” said Silva with a grin.
“Oh, I give up!” exclaimed the woman in exasperation.
“No you don’t,” continued Silva.
bobandbill said:“…but thenss the was this hig duck called Simon! And le wemp ‘quack mack dack’ and…” he slurred.
“Oh, confident are you?” asked Miror B amusedly. “Maybe this will make you think twice!” Miror B danced off the screen for a moment, and appeared again with a radio in hand.
“W-What are you going to do?” asked Rui nervously.
Wordlessly, Miror B opened a slot in the radio, inserted a tape, and closed it. Then he hit the play button. Music blazed from the radio instantly, with an all-too-familiar tune. Smiling, Miror B began singing.
I want to be the very best,
That no one ever was,
“Es. Pi. On.” (Oh. GOD. No.)
To catch them is my real quest,
To train them is my cause!
“Make it stop!” shouted Rui, but to no avail.
I travel across the land,
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that’s inside!
Just before Miror B got any further with the song however, Tom came charging into the room.
“More any not much too fir stand up with this I not will! Die singing this!” he shouted, as he picked up a book titled ‘Dancing and You! How to dance the steps to the top!’ from a bookshelf and hurled it at the screen.
bobandbill said:Wes nodded absentmindedly.
She has a nice smile, he thought.
bobandbill said:“As for my hair - well, strangely enough - it’s natural.”
“N-Natural?” asked Rui uncertainly, eyeing the red and white ball of hair.
“Yes, even the hair colour, and the equal divide of the two colours. It’s true!” he cried, noticing that Wes and Rui didn’t quite seem to believe him. “It’s a rare hair condition I was born with - so I decided to make the most of it and turn it into an afro! It is, as you can see, plainly afro-tastic!” Wes and Rui cringed at the joke - Johnson on the other hand, laughed at it.
“Please don’t say that again…
bobandbill said:I too, bumped my head at a young age,” declared Johnson unexpectedly. “Only, I don’t think I suffered any ill effects…”
All in the room exchanged glances.
bobandbill said:A different, yet still enjoyable disco-themed music started playing.
I don't get why so many people hate the theme song! It is one of the best pokemon theme songs! Either that, or I just have no taste in music.“More any not much too fir stand up with this I not will! Die singing this!” he shouted, as he picked up a book titled ‘Dancing and You! How to dance the steps to the top!’ from a bookshelf and hurled it at the screen.
Jhonson being funny by being himself!“I too, bumped my head at a young age,” declared Johnson unexpectedly. “Only, I don’t think I suffered any ill effects…”
Wow, Mirior B seems to have a family that wouldn't be able to spell cat if you gave them the C and the T.Well, my name came about as a typo when it was written by some inept person on my birth certificate - instead of ‘Mirror Ball’, it ended up missing an ‘r’ in ‘mirror’, and ‘Ball’ - my family’s last name, was shortened to B. For some reason or another, it never got changed back.”
Including Doken's own Pokemon during the battles
The girl didn’t seem all that intimidated by Doken's self-assurance however
Doken's fears were confirmed as another figure came into view as well,
“Um…” sounded Miror B, at a loss for words.
as they quacked in response and took a protective stance around him.
That he certainly does, though I can't decide if his salsa or disco theme is better - both are in heavy rotation on my MP3 playerAt least the weirdo had a good choice of music.
I would actually like to meet Simon the Duck - could he be one of Miror B.'s Ludicolo? xD“…but thenss the was this hig duck called Simon! And le wemp ‘quack mack dack’ and…” he slurred.
Despite his inability to use his brain, he somehow got this right LOL! Then again, it DOES take a certain amount of skill to win a battle with a Magikarp...“I know that you don’t know, you idiot. That’s why I was asking them. So shut up. And use your brain for once.”
“That’s not possible,” answered Johnson.
I suppose that, in a drunken stupor, seeing some guy in a sparkling gold suit and a giant Pokeball afro on his head could scare the living daylights out of you... Now if Tom can make it home...“It’s…. arrghh! Scary wary! SAFE ME, MUMMSY!” he screamed, diving for cover from the abomination into a wall, before running out of the room.
That's his natural hair color? LOL Also, Mirror Ball would be a name just as strange as Miror B., IMO.“But… why would your parents name you Mirror Ball?”
“That… I still don’t know. As for my hair - well, strangely enough - it’s natural.”
I remember when, I remember, I remember when I bumped my head
When I tripped and fell down a flight of stairs.
I had been running to get to dinner
in record time.
And at the time
when I fell,
From my dad’s stereo,
This addictive salsa beat was playing through the house,
And then I blacked out.
Mum rushed like crazy,
She thought I’ll turn crazy,
Would I become crazy?
Possibly.
Luckily I awoke but there was something not quite right,
For I needed, to hear a marvellous beat.
I’m afraid, said the doctor, that you have, that you have, that you have an sickness,
What? What? What? Asked my mom - he said,
He can’t endure no music.
Now,
Normally I’m not crazy,
Music stops me turn crazy,
I have not turned crazy,
Music is my remedy.
My heroes were the kind, that break-danced on T.V,
And all I remember is thinking, I wanna dance like them,
Ever since I was little, ever since I was little I’ve been dancing for fun,
And I’ve been listening to these tunes since I bumped, my head,
And I can dance when I'm done.
But maybe I'm crazy,
Maybe you're crazy,
Maybe it’s just me,
Probably.
At the end of the song, Miror B spun thrice, and struck an unorthodox pose, with his two Ludicolo joining with a loud ‘quack’.
“Um... there are ghosts ahead!’ he tried. “Oohhh!” He backed up his statement by making wild scary gestures.
“Um… I’m Wes.”
“…Who?”
What - they don’t know who I am? Despite that I had disrupted their plans, to put it plainly? Wes contemplated.
“Pineapples,” commented Tom.
“You spokes funnis,” said Tom suddenly. “Ikes a Robert.”
Wordlessly, Miror B opened a slot in the radio, inserted a tape, and closed it. Then he hit the play button. Music blazed from the radio instantly, with an all-too-familiar tune. Smiling, Miror B began singing.
I want to be the very best,
That no one ever was,
“Es. Pi. On.” (Oh. GOD. No.)
To catch them is my real quest,
To train them is my cause!
“Make it stop!” shouted Rui, but to no avail.
I travel across the land,
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that’s inside!
Just before Miror B got any further with the song however, Tom came charging into the room.
“More any not much too fir stand up with this I not will! Die singing this!” he shouted, as he picked up a book titled ‘Dancing and You! How to dance the steps to the top!’ from a bookshelf and hurled it at the screen.
“That’s Miror B’s music!” she exclaimed. Wes nodded absentmindedly.
She has a nice smile, he thought.
afro-tastic!
“I too, bumped my head at a young age,” declared Johnson unexpectedly. “Only, I don’t think I suffered any ill effects…”
All in the room exchanged glances.
“What, wait, that’s the wrong song…” mumbled Miror B, fixing his error. Soon enough, the previous and familiar salsa music blazed from the radio. “Aha! That’s it! Let the music play!”
“I told you that something was going on downstairs Reath…” one of the women began.
“Oh, shut up Ferma!” Reath retorted angrily.
Win.“Oh, breadcrumbs.”
Deny everything! Everything, I tell you!“Oh, I give up!” exclaimed the woman in exasperation.
“No you don’t,” continued Silva.
Another top contender that nearly went in my post title. And yay for the Pastry of the Chapter!“… and then I said ‘Let mer be… jammy tarts! And then there there there was… there something, and I was happy,” concluded the rambling Tom.
Sudden exclamations of random words amuse my simple mind. xP“Pineapples,” commented Tom.
He got something right for once! Irony ftw.“I know that you don’t know, you idiot. That’s why I was asking them. So shut up. And use your brain for once.”
“That’s not possible,” answered Johnson.
Tom pronouncing an actual word? :O“H...H...Hypotenuse!”
I love Sherles' blunt dismissal there.“Hyperbolela! Heppolehitutas!”
“Tom, go home,” Sherles ordered shortly.
I find the prospect of being ordered to get arrested - and obeying - rather amusing.“Yes, very nice,” drawled Wes offhandedly. “Please proceed to the cave entrance, and get arrested by Sherles. Then follow his instructions.”
I swear shipping in fanfiction exists to make me laugh. You have an interesting power, though - you can make a couple of the shippers here squeal in delight, if you so choose. (For the record, I'm not one of them. Shipping just amuses me for some reason.)She has a nice smile, he thought.
HIS HAIR HAS MAGICAL POWERS :O“Umbre!” (I told you - there’s something about his hair!)
No problem - I knew you'd like that story.After a few problems, a distraction in the form of an FAQ guide I really needed and an attempt to log in as Garxeboir Girl, I finally managed to read this and get around to reviewing. BTW, thank you for that PM yesterday.
Indeed...A piece of his hair? He's certainly got plenty to give.
I thought I needed something 'somewhat' funny to put there, and then thought I might as well... 'develop' it further... I can say though it's unlikely there will be any people/poke romance however... sorry.Ooh, romance. I'm liking this. (Although generally I find human/human romance boring... but I think I can live with this.)
What are these 'other' explanations you've seen? I've based mine on the logical possibility here, BTW. (Miror B = Mirror Ball)Oh, that's how he got the name? It certainly makes more sense than any other explanation I've seen.
Thanks. Although maybe *that's* what another person's computer meant by my fic having 'dangerous content'...Well, it's good to see this alive again, and I don't need to say that I choked on my drink because I do it every time I read a new chapter.
~GG~
Thanks - I gave Tom a few more lines than last time.Tom is legend, end of story.
What he did here clearly marks itself as godly, and this chapter is as hilarious as ever.
What, colosseum shipping? Never!Colosseumshipping, much?
Thanks for that.Ah, a brilliant chapter as always.
I take it you liked it?EPIC. WIN. ROFLMAO.
Hooray for my favorite ship!
Yep, natural. Glad you liked it, and a score of over 9000? yay.Gee, it's been commented upon a fair bit...
Natural? And lol, afrotastic.
XD Miror B. Theme cameo, amirite?
In conclusion: OVER 9000/10
TOM IS THE HERO
Yay, Colosseumshipping!
And, lol, Pokemon 1st season theme song.
Yeah, you have no taste in music. Then again, judging by the other Pokemon theme songs...I don't get why so many people hate the theme song! It is one of the best pokemon theme songs! Either that, or I just have no taste in music.
Don't be silly - it's kat, right?Wow, Mirior B seems to have a family that wouldn't be able to spell cat if you gave them the C and the T.
Thanks once again.Wow, this is one of the funniest chapters yet, besides the one where Johnson's Magikarp wins!
Well, I used this formula - Awesome + Awesome = more Awesome. And be thankful I didn't do every separate battle either (I never planned to... would have been boring and annoying). Cheers.Great! Just great! I don't know why, but the combination of Tom and Miror B. is just brilliant. I also love how you dealt with the problem of all the guards in the building and Pyrite Cave.
Err... thanks.Fantastique.
Glad you picked those out for me. Three of them were practically the same... I blame it on Doken's odd name (which I had forgotton, and had while writing referred to him as 'Guard's name' for a large part... stupid Doken. )*insert mistakes here*
For me, the salsa is better. Although I like both.That he certainly does, though I can't decide if his salsa or disco theme is better - both are in heavy rotation on my MP3 player
That actually is an in-joke between me and friends as well - there's a guy at my school called Simon who is called a 'duck' at times...I would actually like to meet Simon the Duck - could he be one of Miror B.'s Ludicolo? xD
Indeed. Wonder how his life was at school... but it does fit in with the weird Orre names. And as the name is based on Mirror Ball... that's one part of Colosseum canon I'm sticking with.That's his natural hair color? LOL Also, Mirror Ball would be a name just as strange as Miror B., IMO.
*Grabs quote*One thing I need to bring up - a number of the guards in the cave have Shadow Pokemon, yet Wes doesn't take any of theirs away when he takes control of their mind. So I'm wondering if Sherles is the one who retrieves the Shadow Pokemon when they all arrive at the entrance, as you don't explain how Wes gets hold of those Pokemon.
So basically, it does kinda hint that Sherles is the one who does when he arrests them beforehand, as they have to, as Wes tells them, to obey Sherles. Also makes more sense as Wes already has a full team. See where you're coming from though.“Hang on Sherles, I’ve just had a thought,” interrupted Wes. “Ferma and Reath, do you have any Shadow Pokemon? If so, hand them over.” To Wes’s delight, the two nodded, and handed two Pokeballs from their belts to Wes.
“Good thinking, Wes,” praised Sherles. “We better do the same for any other guards we encounter - after I arrest them, of course.”
Ah, Mirakle B. Well, in the game they never got arrested (only Ferma and Reath in fact), so it is a dilemma... but one I think I can explain away, and in a humourous fashion as well. You are on the right track...And remember:
If Wes goes back to fight Mirakle B., all the guards except for Reath and Ferma are back. Do they stage some sort of mass prison outbeak?
Glad you liked it. I'm planning to request people to play it before I release the chapter as well. (Oh, this reply is also the same to yours on serebii...)Overall, great chapter with more of Johnson's stupidity and Tom's random slurring. But next chapter's what I'm looking forward to - the big Miror B. showdown! I'll be sure to play the Miror B. salsa theme on repeat as I read the battle xD
Gee, thanks!By far the best chapter yet(as with all of them).
Thanks for that. Was curious on how I went with it.Now before i get to my proper highlights, just needed to comment on this: *insert song here*
Loved it. Words fitted, thought out well, and hilarious to boot. Well done!
And the other song worked too... good question though - will he remember? Probably, but the datails might be a bit messed up.I laughed for about a minute straight after that. GO TOM!
Actually i'm starting to wonder, will Tom remember any of this when/if he gets sober?
Truth be told, I'm still not sure... odd that this gets so much attention. But then again, it's Wes and Rui...This could be interesting, wondering what exactly you have in mind for this.
Indeed - seems to be a craze...Yay for putting your favourite Tom-ism in the post title. =D Tom was once again awesome in this chapter.
Thanks - and glad you too liked the song. It came about when I played Crazy at the same time as writing an eariler chapter - my mind moved to Miror B, and I realised I could do something. Quickly threw together some words for it, and stored it away, and came back to it in this chapter and changed it up (mostly the second verse).I like how you gave Miror B. some history and made sense of why he's, well, himself. 'Specially like your choice of song - it fits him perfectly and is as an added bonus a song that I've been wanting to know the title of for ages. If Miror B. ever needed a theme song with lyrics, that should totally be it. Also interesting to see how he's not particularly enthusiastic with all that Cipher's doing. I'm looking forward to see the way you portray the other Admins who have a bit more dedication towards their goals.
Glad you liked it - I'm always a bit uncomfortable at times with how I start a chapter... it was more a set-up.Also liked Doken's scene at the start for the comedic flavour you managed to give the whole thing despite there being not many lines that stood out as jokes.
Yay, some critique now!Grammar time. Because there's a simple mistake you seem to be making quite a bit.
Ah... ok then. New a bit about it, but didn't know it was actually meant to 'always' happen, especially with the before part. Oh well, I'll edit that out sometime later. Thanks for that.Commas always go before and after a direct address - i.e., when someone is addressing another person by name, title, degrading nickname, etc. I think you know to put commas after them as I haven't noticed any problems there, but in some cases, such as here, you didn't put any before. There should be a comma before both "Reath" and "Ferma" here - and there's similar mistakes in other places in the chapter that I couldn't be bothered to pick out.
Bleh. Still havent gotten the balence yet for saids and not-saids... (did add some more, but probably not enough) - even more saids shall be placed then.Also on the more negative side, it seems you still haven't gotten over your phobia of the word "said". I'm not going to lecture you about it again as I've already done so once, but just a heads up that the problem is still there.
Indeed.So, everyone else seems to be doing highlights. Who am I to break with tradition?
Well, it was meant to be slightly amusing there... I do have a position of power with it, but frankly haven't given much thought about it.I swear shipping in fanfiction exists to make me laugh. You have an interesting power, though - you can make a couple of the shippers here squeal in delight, if you so choose. (For the record, I'm not one of them. Shipping just amuses me for some reason.)
P.M. List me Please. Awesome.
Done and done.P.M list me as well.
Wait, WHAT?quick question:
Have you played Colosseum?
Why you have to wait? Because I haven't done it yet! It'll be a while - have tests coming up and all in the near future, so progress shall be slow, and for now on hold. Bleh.Aww why do we have to wait till next chapter to read the battle!!? I even had Miror B's battle music ready on youtube for when the battle came up!!
...dont ask.....
EDIT: Rank Up!! Woot!