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The Review Game

Discussion in 'The Authors' Café' started by Firebrand, Oct 6, 2011.

  1. Firebrand

    Firebrand Indomitable

    As a note for the future: a writer need only read and review one chapter of a fic to request a review. While they may do more if they like, it isn't really polite to ask for reviews on multiple chapters. That's what the review exchange is for.
     
  2. EmphaticPikachu

    EmphaticPikachu A tired little girl~

    I have done Dormant's review of chapter 2 and such.
    remember don't hesitate to ask me to do more. I got pushed on the edge of time left so...

    http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?591861-Reverse-Reverse-(PG-14)

    If someone could, I would like a much more indepth (it doesn't have to be THAT indepth but...) review of chapter 2 and possibly if they want to chapter 3. focused more on the story and characters, but I'll take any type of review honestly. I'm just already aware of the grammar issues that are there...(most of them.)
     
  3. Blue Saturday

    Blue Saturday too fly

  4. An Enemy Spy

    An Enemy Spy Well-Known Member

    I've already reviewed Doryuzu's story, and since it's been this long without anyone else reviewing it, could somebody please do New World.
     
  5. Firebrand

    Firebrand Indomitable

    That's not how this works. Doryuzu is up until someone comes and reviews The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons by way of the Review Game. Doryuzu reviewed Reverse Reverse, and fair is fair. Until they get the review they deserve, Doryuzu is up next with The Girl Who Knows the Hearts of Dragons.
     
  6. ChloboShoka

    ChloboShoka Writer

  7. pokesimmo

    pokesimmo Well-Known Member

    Reviewed chapter 1 of The Other King by ChloboShoka.
    Could the next person please review any chapter/s they like in my story 'Swim Good'. Link in banner (in signature) - Thank you :)
     
  8. An Enemy Spy

    An Enemy Spy Well-Known Member

    Review posted for chapter 1. http://www.fanfiction.net/r/9049174/

    I'd like a review done for New World..
    I would like it to be a fairly detailed review of the whole shebang, with a comparison between the quality of the first half and the second half of the story so far.
     
    Last edited: Mar 13, 2013
  9. Skiyomi

    Skiyomi Only Mostly Dead

    Hmmm... thought I got ninja'd before posting my own review for "Swim Good," but now I'm just confused because there is no review for "Swim Good" posted by the above poster. Sooo... I'm just gonna go ahead and assume until someone tells me otherwise that I got the review in for "Swim Good" and should disregard the last post since you don't get a turn if you don't review. Eh? Confirmation? *shrug*

    Anyway, for the next poster, I'll give you a choice between reviewing: There is a Madness to My Method (Pokemon - Oneshot, PG-13, ~1,700 words) and Diplomacy (Slayers - 26 Chapters, R, ~3,500 words per chapter). Of course, if you choose Diplomacy you don't have to read all the chapters. Thanks in advance.
     
  10. An Enemy Spy

    An Enemy Spy Well-Known Member

    Since the link goes to his fanfiction account, that's where I put the review. I guess I forgot to link it.
     
  11. Skiyomi

    Skiyomi Only Mostly Dead

    Ah, that makes muuuuch more sense now (I followed the banner link, so I hadn't even considered it being posted off-site). Well, my loss for being slower. Disregard my post. An Enemy Spy's New World is up next.
     
  12. ChloboShoka

    ChloboShoka Writer

    I reviewed New World (Focused on chapter 4) by Enemy Spy.

    Next reader has a choice between Carry On, Blissey or The Other King. Whichever story you choose, can review any chapter you wish.
     
  13. An Enemy Spy

    An Enemy Spy Well-Known Member

    I didn't want to do this immediately after having mine done, but since it's been a few days now, I guess it's ok. Here's my review of chapter one.

    I'd like a review of Chapter 21 of New World.
     
    Last edited: Mar 16, 2013
  14. Firebrand

    Firebrand Indomitable

    Okay, dude, you're got to read the rules. You can request reviews for ONE chapter. If someone feels so inclined, they can review more, but you cannot request more than that.

    Not to mention, your review does not meet the review requirements. You have 24 hours to make sure that it does, or until someone else reviews any of ChloboShoka's fics.
     
  15. An Enemy Spy

    An Enemy Spy Well-Known Member

    Fixed it. I'm sorry for being the scummy piece of trash that I am. I'm a terrible reviewer and an even worse person. I hope that rectifies it.
     
  16. Skiyomi

    Skiyomi Only Mostly Dead

  17. The Teller

    The Teller King of Half-Truths

    Here is my review of "There is a Madness to My Method."

    I'd like someone to review "Happenings Between Goals." You're free to choose any chapter (please refrain from choosing to review one of the filler chapters, however), but Chapter 5 is probably the latest chapter that is also the most representative of the story in its entirety.
     
  18. Blaziken10285

    Blaziken10285 The Dojo Master

  19. ChloboShoka

    ChloboShoka Writer

  20. LadyLady

    LadyLady Well-Known Member

    I've reviewed Carry on, Blissey

    Could someone please review 'Zizi's Moogobling Events In Flumplop

    Its only two chapters in and theyre fairly short so nothing too drastic, thank you hunni's x
     
    Last edited: Mar 24, 2013

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