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the riegon of onfai

nattydbzmaster

Well-Known Member
banner.jpg

comic
in the boat
inro 1
intro 2
bye mom
its so cute

new
thereigonofkonfe.jpg

trainer cards
trainercard.jpg
trainercard-1.jpg



credits
new001
d-man
kyledove
coronis
fred
momogirl​
 
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ΩOmega WeavileΩ

Skinning every bears
Okay, im going to be as nice as possible about this.

1. It would skyrocket the quality to use capatalizations and punctuation.
2. Always put the caption bubbles left to right, in the order we read. The 5th panel is kinda out of order.
3. We haven't gotten anywhere near to the meat of the comic, there is no need to have those cliffhanger questions at the bottom. Better yet, its best to not to have those cliffhanger questions at the bottom at all. Keep it subtle, if you know what i mean.
4. Don't use more than one punctuation mark! only one ? will do.
5. Keep the sprites at least two pixels away from each other. They look like one big sprite.
 
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Reign G

Roggen and Rolan
Besides what was pointed out before there's one major thing I see...JPG. Change to saving as a PNG, it makes it more clear. JPG messes Sprites up.
 
where did you get the ash sprites, from pokesho??? if you did, you should give credit
 

nattydbzmaster

Well-Known Member
new001
and my parents arent in town so im at my friends house so ill make the next episode tomorow
but i feel so sory that you have to wait so ill tell you 1 panel in the comic
"go cyndaquil" said jake as he threw a pokeball.cyndaquil came out of his pokeball sleeping
 
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Iron Lugia

Orange Champion
Okay, first the .jpg format. No one likes .jpg. It's hideous. Next, it's not smart to change names mid-comic for the Sinnoh characters. Last thing, I doubt you made all of those sprites. Give credit to who made them if they are someone else's.
 

Black

Well-Known Member
It looks ok cant say much becouse you've only made like 1 real comic so I'll keep looking.
 

nattydbzmaster

Well-Known Member
you know what i think imm only updating monday,and thursday because it takes a long time and somtimes i need sprites so sorry(not including this thursday
 

zacker72

New Member
I lOVe this onfai comic

i like it how about wally falls in the water and starts to drownd and he doesnt know how to spin now that would be funny!;444; ;078; ;328; ;165; ;292;


This Comic Rulez And It Is Funny I Think It Will Get Even Funnier Then Ever[IMG200]IT Rulez like crazy[/IMG200]
I Love This Comic people ;444;
 

youngster34268

youngster34268
Okay. You really shouldn't be getting this from me, since I'm bad at comics too, but... dude, it's huge. And what's even the point of this? And to mention-GRAMMAR. 0/10. Plus, it's .JPG. Anything other than .PNG ruins the color. All the way at the bottom: how does jake know brendan?????????????? Useless. That doesn't need to be there. Plus, too many Question Marks. Fourteen. If you're gonna put that there(which I don't recomend) put one (ONE, 1, UNO) question mark.
 

Fred

SUPER TRAINER!!!
It not bad but it not so great I'll keep reading to tell you what I think.
 
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