The rise of pokemon weirdness: the inner sin

[English Avatarman]

Pokemon Wierdness: the inner sin
Here's a comic I've not seen before, a comic of the adventures of May (Pokemon: Neo)
no I mean Brendan and May (Brendan on crazy adventures)
got it wrong again, how about May, Brendan and Ash? (3 freinds in Hoenn)
Thats not it! it's Brendan, May, Ash and T Aqua! (Pokemon Weirdness: the inner sin)
finaly, I got it right, here are the comics:

Chapter 1: In the beggining (only gods spirit existed)
Episode 1: Nag, Nag, Nag!
Episode 2: Pokemon ranger Ash
Episode 3: Shininess
Episode 4: The first battle(the battle graphics are not so good)
Episode 5: April, May, June
Episode 6: May's house
Episode 7: Catching Liloone part 1 (battle grapics iproved)
Episode 8: Catching Liloone part 2
Episode 9: Beauty and the beast, Aqua and the egg (Aqua's first appearence)
Episode 10: Brendans search: Free samples!
Episode 11: Brendans Search: House option
Episode 12: Brendans Search: Black belt

Chapter 2: Once upon a time team aqua tried to wreck this comic
Episode 13: Elsewhere?
Episode 14: Back at Oldale
Episode 15: The twin!
Episode 16: Mastercard

Specials:
Special 1: Pointless (in between comic 6 annd comic 7)
Special 2: Which May? (100% of the credit foe Neo goes to Neopolis3) (in between comic 9 and comic 10)
Special 3: What happenned? (inbeetween comic 12 and 13)

Fan stuff:
Evil by Neopolis3
Stupid Brendan by castiboy

Adverts:
Chapter 1

Charecter Bio's

Credits:
Image hoster: Image shack
Substitute Image hoster: *******
Sprite and map hoster: Spriters resorce
Substitute Sprite hoster: Pokemon Forever
Substitute Map hoster: The online video game atlas
Owner of Neo: Neopolis3

 

[Dark Venusaur]

Okay there is alot of things wrong here.
1.torchic cant learn tri attack
2.Linnone does not evolve al level 4
3.you did not put boxes on your battle scene
4.Mudkip cant learn Splash
5.Linnone nor Zigzagoon can not learn Earthquake

;003;DV;003;

 

[English Avatarman]

Okay there is alot of things wrong here.
1.torchic cant learn tri attack
2.Linnone does not evolve al level 4
3.you did not put boxes on your battle scene
4.Mudkip cant learn Splash
5.Linnone nor Zigzagoon can not learn Earthquake

;003;DV;003;

It's meant to be funny, not 100% correct
1. meant to be a bit funny
2. joins with the joke at the end
3. I don't have the sprites for it
4. I just wanted people to see my battle animations
5:"

 

[Anton_91]

Okey, okey. Not really needed to make a new thread for your return but I let's not nag about that. The new episode's are quite good. Hehe, Lol. You mentioned my comic in the first page, Yay! ^_^0 Maybe I should update that comic soon... I have made updates I just never got in a mod to update em. Anyway, don't get bored cause you don't have that many fans yet. Not untill now, there's quite many people at my comic. Anyway, Make sure to update soon.

 

[English Avatarman]

Originally Posted by Mutanton_91
Okey, okey. Not really needed to make a new thread for your return but I let's not nag about that. The new episode's are quite good. Hehe, Lol. You mentioned my comic in the first page, Yay! ^_^0 Maybe I should update that comic soon... I have made updates I just never got in a mod to update em. Anyway, don't get bored cause you don't have that many fans yet. Not untill now, there's quite many people at my comic. Anyway, Make sure to update soon.

There is a rule about posting in dead threads, and the last thread had 1,000 odd veiwers!
anyway, chareccter bios coming o wednesday!

edit: C Bios' here

 

[Anton_91]

okey, Character Bios could be better but they are okey. Update soon.

 

[English Avatarman]

okey, Character Bios could be better but they are okey. Update soon.

I have an idea but it's seven scenes not nine!

 

[Anton_91]

That's okey, they don't have to be as long all the time. If some is shorter it doesn't matter as long as their not two boxes or anythin.

 

[English Avatarman]

probably have the next two later today (england) I won't be on tomorow but I will be on Friday!

Edit: Ep 16 up

 

[Mastercougar]

Just a tip (done in song).

Ohhh, a line ain't a speech balloon trail
A line ain't a speech balloon trail
They may look the same to yew
But tails are ten times better, it's true!

Ohhh, a line ain't a speech balloon trail
A line ain't a speech balloon trail!

That's my major issue here. You would also be well advised to touch up your spelling and grammar a bit, which will make people respect you more.

It's kinda funny that Brendan's a murderer-type...

 

[Flaze]

Just one question (No intetion of making you angry) : Is team Magma appearing in this comic?

This comic is not bad. I give it three stars.

 

[English Avatarman]

Just one question (No intetion of making you angry) : Is team Magma appearing in this comic?

This comic is not bad. I give it three stars.

I'm not sure, [spoil]The blue might betray, but I'm still not sure[/spoil]