VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
(Literate) Art, human spirit hybrid: accepted
(Xinkc) Lazarix, Demon: accepted
The RPG is UP!!!
(Xinkc) Lazarix, Demon: accepted
The RPG is UP!!!
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The Ruin (warriors of days past) sign-up
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~Alexis Laistenna~
<Aren't I cute?
Form:
Name: Charlotte Scarlett
Species: Human/Elf
Gender: Female
Age or Appearance age: 19
Personality: Charlotte is quite clever, and achieved high marks at school. She has a fiery temper, and can get angry really fast. She is always outgoing, ready to lend a hand, and is a good friend to those in need. When upset, she will never tell anyone what it's about, and will run away. Despite her good traits, she is always lonely and wishes for a few more friends. She sometimes confuses her peers with her vast vocabulary and language skills. She is also very shy, and sometimes reclusive.
Appearance: Charlotte is six feet tall. She has light blue eyes. Her hair is nutbrown, with black and blonde streaks, and a heart-shaped hairclip is in it. She wears jeans with holes in the knees, and a white polo T-shirt with a denim jacket over it. She wears a blue felt hat with a feather sticking out of the ribbon, and leather boots. Her ears are slightly pointed and her tongue is not yet golden, but bronze.
Recent History: All Charlotte can remember is running through a lake to a golden object on the other side. She was discovered in a dark alleyway by a street gang, and only escaped through quick wits, and flirting with the gang leader. She then got caught by the police, being accused of being rowdy, and sent to live at a half-way house for orphans. She stayed there until she got her driving license, at which she started living by herself. She also had to take school again, apparently the amnesia had erased most functions. She went into the top year, and immediately took the role of Teacher's Pet. She became loathed by the previous winners of the 'Top-of-The-Class Award', and loved by the people who were too lazy to do their own homework.
During a problem with the plumbing, she realized that water was appearing out of thin air in water cups, and also she became a lot better at riding horses and donkeys. She spent a lot of time gazing in the mirror, looking at her tongue, and taking pills regularly to try and 'fix' her ears and tongue.
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Alt. ID: Saturday's Dawn
Species: Half Elf, Half Angel
Gender: Female
Age or Appearance age: 20; immortal
Personality: Saturday's Dawn is the same as Charlotte personality-wise, and the only thing that has majorly changed is her wisdom, she now is a lot wiser. Her powers are heavily amplified on Saturday mornings, meaning that a lot of the time she does not want to fight. She is fiercely protective of her few friends, and if anyone dares insult her, they can expect a heavy punch to the head.
Appearance: Saturday's Dawn is six feet and seven inches tall. She wears a peach-coloured riding habit with sapphire buttons, and sharkskin riding boots with gilt spurs. Her waist-length brown hair hangs awkwardly over her golden wings, the wingspan is as long as her whole body. She has a riding crop made out of the elongated tail of an albino alligator. Her tongue is golden. Her ears are pointed. She wears the same hat as before, apart from it now has jewels on the ribbon.
Other: She's a lot more powerful on Saturday mornings. She also has an affinity for riding, and is more adept in the water.
OOC:
. If she sounds too uber, just tell me to edit. Nearly everyone else was posting their powers, so I just jumped on the bandwagon. And can she, at one point, have power over water?
Name: Charlotte Scarlett
Species: Human/Elf
Gender: Female
Age or Appearance age: 19
Personality: Charlotte is quite clever, and achieved high marks at school. She has a fiery temper, and can get angry really fast. She is always outgoing, ready to lend a hand, and is a good friend to those in need. When upset, she will never tell anyone what it's about, and will run away. Despite her good traits, she is always lonely and wishes for a few more friends. She sometimes confuses her peers with her vast vocabulary and language skills. She is also very shy, and sometimes reclusive.
Appearance: Charlotte is six feet tall. She has light blue eyes. Her hair is nutbrown, with black and blonde streaks, and a heart-shaped hairclip is in it. She wears jeans with holes in the knees, and a white polo T-shirt with a denim jacket over it. She wears a blue felt hat with a feather sticking out of the ribbon, and leather boots. Her ears are slightly pointed and her tongue is not yet golden, but bronze.
Recent History: All Charlotte can remember is running through a lake to a golden object on the other side. She was discovered in a dark alleyway by a street gang, and only escaped through quick wits, and flirting with the gang leader. She then got caught by the police, being accused of being rowdy, and sent to live at a half-way house for orphans. She stayed there until she got her driving license, at which she started living by herself. She also had to take school again, apparently the amnesia had erased most functions. She went into the top year, and immediately took the role of Teacher's Pet. She became loathed by the previous winners of the 'Top-of-The-Class Award', and loved by the people who were too lazy to do their own homework.
During a problem with the plumbing, she realized that water was appearing out of thin air in water cups, and also she became a lot better at riding horses and donkeys. She spent a lot of time gazing in the mirror, looking at her tongue, and taking pills regularly to try and 'fix' her ears and tongue.
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Alt. ID: Saturday's Dawn
Species: Half Elf, Half Angel
Gender: Female
Age or Appearance age: 20; immortal
Personality: Saturday's Dawn is the same as Charlotte personality-wise, and the only thing that has majorly changed is her wisdom, she now is a lot wiser. Her powers are heavily amplified on Saturday mornings, meaning that a lot of the time she does not want to fight. She is fiercely protective of her few friends, and if anyone dares insult her, they can expect a heavy punch to the head.
Appearance: Saturday's Dawn is six feet and seven inches tall. She wears a peach-coloured riding habit with sapphire buttons, and sharkskin riding boots with gilt spurs. Her waist-length brown hair hangs awkwardly over her golden wings, the wingspan is as long as her whole body. She has a riding crop made out of the elongated tail of an albino alligator. Her tongue is golden. Her ears are pointed. She wears the same hat as before, apart from it now has jewels on the ribbon.
Other: She's a lot more powerful on Saturday mornings. She also has an affinity for riding, and is more adept in the water.
OOC:
. If she sounds too uber, just tell me to edit. Nearly everyone else was posting their powers, so I just jumped on the bandwagon. And can she, at one point, have power over water?
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
(~Alexis Laistenna~)Charlotte, Human/Elf: accepted
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
Name: Sephiroth
Species: Werewolf/Dragon
Gender: Male
Age or Appearance age: 16
Personality: Doesn't talk much. wanders around, wondering about things. He is loyal to his friends. He is, however quick to anger and quicker with his sword. He is agile and strong. Can breathe Ice, water, lightning, and fire. Can turn into a werewolf at will and can control himself when a werewolf.
Appearance: Pale white skin. Fangs, like a wolves, not a vampires.Usually dressed all in black. Dark, messy black hair. Pure red pupils. He has his sword slung behind is back.Tall. About 6'2. However, he is thin. he wears light armor. he does not have a helmet, but he has spiked knuckle gauntlets. He does nto make any sound when walking, though his armor should Jangle around, it seems to stay in place and stay quiet.
Recent History:He came here a lot. He liked this place. He had never gone in the building itself. He just never felt like it. He then saw others going in. He decided to say hello. He wanted to see inside the building, but wondered what would happen. He was heartened by the fact that others were here though. He walked inside. Then he forgot. He found himself in a strange place; and he wandered through it. He looked and saw others......he ran towards them......
He does not remember. Like everyone else he has forgotten. He walked into the woods one day. He got lost....And he found a building. He entered, and then he forgot......He then found himself in new surroundings. he was in a different place. All the others think he is a warrior, as why would they think otherwise, though he is not.)
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Alt. ID:Cloud
Species: ???/dragon
Gender: Male
Age or Appearance age: 16
Personality: Usually acts stupid. He is bored and tired. always saying random things and likes to talk. He is however loyal and strong. He always seems to avoid trouble; whether by luck or something else, none know. He can create or shoot fire, water, ice, rock, electricity, or steel from his hands.
Appearance: Deep blue eyes. Always smiling. Dark black hair that seems like it doesn't fit him. Dressed in blue and white. Pale white skin. Sword slung behind back. He usually doesn't wear armor. He doesn't pick fights, so he doesn't usually get in them. He wears blue metal shoes, however.
Sephiroth is the bad guy, and Cloud is the good guy. simple as that eh? not really, no. Though that is a story for another day.
Is it fine now? >_> If this doesn't get through, i'm just gonna stop trying.
Species: Werewolf/Dragon
Gender: Male
Age or Appearance age: 16
Personality: Doesn't talk much. wanders around, wondering about things. He is loyal to his friends. He is, however quick to anger and quicker with his sword. He is agile and strong. Can breathe Ice, water, lightning, and fire. Can turn into a werewolf at will and can control himself when a werewolf.
Appearance: Pale white skin. Fangs, like a wolves, not a vampires.Usually dressed all in black. Dark, messy black hair. Pure red pupils. He has his sword slung behind is back.Tall. About 6'2. However, he is thin. he wears light armor. he does not have a helmet, but he has spiked knuckle gauntlets. He does nto make any sound when walking, though his armor should Jangle around, it seems to stay in place and stay quiet.
Recent History:He came here a lot. He liked this place. He had never gone in the building itself. He just never felt like it. He then saw others going in. He decided to say hello. He wanted to see inside the building, but wondered what would happen. He was heartened by the fact that others were here though. He walked inside. Then he forgot. He found himself in a strange place; and he wandered through it. He looked and saw others......he ran towards them......
He does not remember. Like everyone else he has forgotten. He walked into the woods one day. He got lost....And he found a building. He entered, and then he forgot......He then found himself in new surroundings. he was in a different place. All the others think he is a warrior, as why would they think otherwise, though he is not.)
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Alt. ID:Cloud
Species: ???/dragon
Gender: Male
Age or Appearance age: 16
Personality: Usually acts stupid. He is bored and tired. always saying random things and likes to talk. He is however loyal and strong. He always seems to avoid trouble; whether by luck or something else, none know. He can create or shoot fire, water, ice, rock, electricity, or steel from his hands.
Appearance: Deep blue eyes. Always smiling. Dark black hair that seems like it doesn't fit him. Dressed in blue and white. Pale white skin. Sword slung behind back. He usually doesn't wear armor. He doesn't pick fights, so he doesn't usually get in them. He wears blue metal shoes, however.
Sephiroth is the bad guy, and Cloud is the good guy. simple as that eh? not really, no. Though that is a story for another day.
Is it fine now? >_> If this doesn't get through, i'm just gonna stop trying.
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VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
ashkid1993: Not accepted, Your discriptions are too vauge in history, personality and appearance. Try putting subjects on some of those sentences. (Something like this. Pure red eyes> He has pure red eyes including the pupil.) I'm out of warrior slots, but there were other people in the building, so you have found your way there without Percy. And I can't allow you to be god-like powerful...
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
I'll edit it. Though, the god-like power is only on Cloud. He wouldn't use it at all unless needed. Kind of like mew, playful and happy, but very powerful. As well, I have some cool history..... Sephiroth wouldn't be god-like. Strong, but not god-like.
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
ashkid1993: Not accepted, please reread my last post, your sentance structure needs work, and there are no "villans" in this game.
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
Why not? they're warriors. They must have been fighting something. Also, how do my sentences need structuring? They seem fine to me, so it is your opinion and so I need it to improve and get accepted. It would create more conflict if there were a villian......
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
I'm not doing this to be personal, there have to be standards so that all the players understand each other. I'm not going to accept a bunch of fragmented setances.
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
Hello? you haven't evauated my new post.
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
You can't be "the villian", there is no player character villain, though there may be fighting within the game. Your appearance setences are still fragments. And it would be nice to know what type of clothes he wears not just the colors. I also don't really like the idea of him having hung out by building in the recent past.
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
Ill fix the clothes, but why no being near the building? it's kinda stupid for him to have just randomly walked there, but it makes sense that he was there but he didn't want to tell anyone and didn't wanna go in alone. And he's not the kind of guy who would follow them, so..... meh. Also, it'd be better to have a player character villain. It would add more suspense, the heross finding that their friend is a villain and Sephiroth himself finding it.
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
No, it wouldn't be better to have a player villain, just go with me on this, ok? I've got my reasons. And, sense he wasn't with the reincarnate warriors, I perfer if he just lost his way in the woods and just happened to have found a building. (I'll assign you a past occupation when we get the sign-up in order.) I don't care why he decides to enter, maybe he thinks they'll have phone... seriously if a creepy guy was always hanging out around the building Percy has sworn to protect, Percy would have offed him, you know?
ashkid1993
Well-Known Member
Fine, but still, he was there first. In your first post it said that they wandered there one day. He did too, except he was there first. He stayed around there for a while, then saw you guys, making him go in as he was afraid to go alone, but figured he could see what was inside with others there. Then he goes in a second after you guys, but is transported to somewhere else. Then he meets up with you guys. >_> Also, I want him to have a knowldge of the place that could bring about a new area, as that would be kind of cool. But the villain thing......OK. Ill edit my post for all of it though.
VampirateMace
Internet Overlord
I'm sorry, but you don't seem to understand what I'm saying. You are a late sign-up, initally I wasn't going to exept any, but then I changed my mind and decide i would under the circumstances that they, arrived late and were not part of the group. You do not get to have any special knowlage of the building.
And based on you previous posts, I'd like to approve/disapprove any areas you come up with before they get posted.
And based on you previous posts, I'd like to approve/disapprove any areas you come up with before they get posted.