correct. this shouldn't even be in the fan-fic section. this fic is just a little joke i can tell! and you made this to get negative posts on it. I'll try getting a mod to close this fic down as it is not a fic. we post longer replies than your ficThe Dark Knight said:This ain't a fic at all. It's a joke. I daresay you could give Polifan692 (or whatever his name was) a run for his money. This had to be typed in the Quick Reply Box, I'm sure of it, for it to be so lame. I would've expected a lengthy, descriptive one-shot, but no. Try reading a successful fanfic, like Breezy's Hoenn League:A Brendan and May Adventure, to see what the readers these days want. What you've bestowed upon us could not even please an amoeba.