The Secret Life of Team Rocket...

[Silent Conversation]

Three things I need to say before the story.

1. These are not chapters; they are just small sections

2. I'm admitting that the grammer is terrible

3. Can you please review my story? I like it when people say what I did right and wrong.

Now, here's my story so far:

Prologue:​

You know about Team Rocket, right? Well, you don’t know everything about them. You want to know more about Jessie, James and Meowth? Well, read this story?

Jessie – The Belle Family​

“Oh my gosh!” shouted Mrs. Belle. “What is it?” shouted Mr. Belle. Mr. and Mrs. Belle was a very poor couple. They lived in a tiny house and could barely afford a loaf of bread. “I think I’m getting a baby!” said Mrs. Belle. Some people in the Belle’s neighborhood thought that the Belle family was the most unlucky family since they had almost no money. “Oh my g-d! This is very serious!” Mr. Belle shouted. “Pidgeotto, go!” Mr. Belle’s Pidgeotto was not an ordinary Pidgeotto. This Pidgeotto was not more special than the Pikachu we all know, but it was very special. This Pidgeotto stopped crimes all over town. Unless, you called the Belle’s the “unlucky family” you would probably hear the Belle’s being called the “no – crook family”. But all that was about to change in a few years.

James – The Ribar Family!​

“Oh my gosh! I think I’m getting a baby!” shouted Mrs. Ribar. Mr. and Mrs. Ribar were totally different from Mr. and Mrs. Belle. The Ribar couple was very rich and only cared about themselves. “Oh my g-d! We better go to the hospital!” shouted Mr. Ribar. “Let’s go, Maene”. Now a Maene was a very rare pokemon. Mr. Ribar had to pay a million dollars to a man to get that Maene (not that Mr. Ribar cared that it was a million dollars). Mr. Ribar loved that Maene and took it with him wherever Mr. Ribar went. Mr. Ribar was so excited that his precious Maene was going to meet another Ribar. Maene loved humans, no matter what type of person the human was. Mr. Ribar’s Maene was a very rare and very nice pokemon. Now, like I said before, the Ribars only cared about themselves, but they never did bad things. Now, all that was about to change in a few years.

Meowth – True Love!​

An ordinary Meowth lived in the town called Tibera. Now, Tibera was known for having many Meowths. One day, the Meowth we’re talking about was walking down the street. Suddenly, it saw a dance class for humans. Then, Meowth saw something beautiful; the Meowth next to the instructor. “Ok Meowsy, you can come” said the dance instructor to the Meowth that the Meowth we’re talking about loved. “Meow, meow” said Meowsy, as it went up the steps to the dance instructor. “Meow, Meow, Meow” said Meowsy to the kids. “That’s it!” thought Meowth. “To impress Meowsy and make her love me, I’ll learn English!” But we’re not going to talk about that yet. We’re going to talk about something else…

Jessie – Elizabeth or Jessie?​

Now, Mr. and Mrs. Belle ran to the hospital (by car, of course). Once they got there, Mr. Belle went to the front desk. “Excuse me, but my wife is going to have a baby any moment” Mr. Belle explained to the person at the front desk. “I’ll get a wheelchair for her and bring her in” replied the man at the front desk. The man got a wheelchair. Mrs. Belle went inside it and Mr. Belle pushed Mrs. Belle into a room where they met a doctor. “Now, I’m going to do this as easily as I can” explained the doctor. “Okay” replied Mrs. Belle. The doctor took some special tools, leaned onto Mrs. Belle and out came a baby. “It’s a girl!” shouted the doctor. “I’m going to name her… um…. Elizabeth! Ya, Elizabeth!” said Mrs. Belle. “No, I like Jessie better” said Mr. Belle.

Jessie – Jessie Sounds Nicer!​

“I still think Elizabeth is better” said Mrs. Belle. “It’s a bad name. Jessie is better” said Mr. Belle. So, they argued and argued and they couldn’t figure out which name was nicer: Elizabeth or Jessie. “I’ve got it! We’ll ask a doctor!” said Mrs. Belle. “Great idea!” said Mr. Belle. Mr. Belle went out of the hospital bed room and found and doctor. Then, Mr. Belle brought the doctor into the hospital room. “Which name do you like best?” Mrs. Belle asked the doctor. “Elizabeth or Jessie” “I’m going to have to agree with Jessie. It’s a better name” said the doctor. “Ha Ha!” Mr. Belle said to Mrs. Belle. “Okay, Okay” Mrs. Belle said. Then she turned to the baby. “I now pronounce you: Jessie”. And so there was a new member of the Belle family. Jessie Belle.

James – Passing Maene Over!​

Mr. and Mrs. Ribar went into their care and rushed to the hospital and went to the front desk. Blah – blah. You already know what happened. You encountered it with the Belle family. “It’s a boy!” shouted the doctor once the Ribar’s were in a hospital room. “I’ll call him James” said Mrs. Ribar. “That’s a great idea” agreed Mr. Ribar. Then, Mr. Ribar turned to face little James. “James” Mr. Ribar said to little James. “You might not understand this now, but I want to give you my Maene when you grow older”.

 

[Silent Conversation]

Here are the next 2 sections of my story:

Meowth – Tongue Twisters Are Hard!​

Meowth walked away from the dance class, thinking of how to learn English. Then, he passed a tongue twister academy, where kids learn tongue twisters. “I know! I’ll learn a tongue twister!” thought Meowth. He listened closely. The Meowth heard the kids. “She sells seashells by the seashore, and the shells she sells are seashore shells” said the kids. “That’s hard” thought Meowth. He tried to say the tongue twister, but all that came out was “Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow”. “It’s no use. I should just give up now” thought Meowth. And he walked away from the academy.

Jessie – Happy Birthday and Meet Ekans!​

Jessie grew older, learning to walk, to talk, and starting going to school. On Jessie’s seventh birthday, Jessie ran to the kitchen table, as soon as she woke up. Mr. and Mrs. Belle were already at the table. “Happy birthday, Jessica!” Mr. and Mrs. Belle said to their daughter. “Ooh, what did you get me for a present?” Jessie asked her parents. Mr. and Mrs. Belle looked at each other. “Your first pokemon!” they shouted at the same time. Mr. Belle then handed a small, red and white ball, to Jessie. “Just say ‘Pokemon, I choose you!’ and throw the poke ball. That will make the pokemon come out” Mr. Belle explained to his daughter. “Okay!” Jessie replied. “Pokemon, I choose you!” Suddenly, the poke ball flashed in midair. When the poke ball landed on the floor, a purple snake – like pokemon appeared. “Meet Ekans!” Mr. and Mrs. Belle said to Jessie. “Ah! That’s gross!” shouted Jessie.

 

[Captain Murkrow]

cool, but by maene i suppose u mean manene

 

[Silent Conversation]

cool, but by maene i suppose u mean manene

I figured out that it was manene but I was too lazy to change it.

 

[Joe Vega #4]

And apparently, you don't seem to understand that fiction has CHAPTERS to it and that you're telling us stuff that we pretty much already knew. You're only summarizing the lives of Jessie, James, & Meowth, as far as I can see.

 

[Silent Conversation]

And apparently, you don't seem to understand that fiction has CHAPTERS to it and that you're telling us stuff that we pretty much already knew. You're only summarizing the lives of Jessie, James, & Meowth, as far as I can see.

I made sections, not chpaters, ON PURPOSE! Also, some of my story is true, but the story's not over yet, more stuff that doesn't have to do with the real story about T.R. will come.

 

[Silent Conversation]

I know that I abandoned this around 4 months ago, but it's back! Here's the revised edition.

Prologue:
You know about Team Rocket, right? Well, you don’t know everything about them. You want to know more about Jessie, James and Meowth? Well, read this story!​

Jessie – The Belle Family!​

“Oh my gosh!” shouted Mrs. Belle.

“What is it?” shouted Mr. Belle.

Mr. and Mrs. Belle was a very poor couple. They lived in a tiny house and could barely afford a loaf of bread.

“I think I’m getting a baby!” said Mrs. Belle.

Some people in the Belle’s neighborhood thought that the Belle family was the most unlucky family since they had almost no money.

“Oh my g-d! This is very serious!” Mr. Belle shouted. “Pidgeotto, go!”

Mr. Belle’s Pidgeotto was not an ordinary Pidgeotto. This Pidgeotto was not more special than the Pikachu we all know, but it was very special. This Pidgeotto stopped crimes all over town. Unless, you called the Belle’s the “unlucky family” you would probably hear the Belle’s being called the “no – crook family”. But all that was about to change in a few years.

James – The Ribar Family!​

“Oh my gosh! I think I’m getting a baby!” shouted Mrs. Ribar.

Mr. and Mrs. Ribar were totally different from Mr. and Mrs. Belle. The Ribar couple was very rich and only cared about themselves.

“Oh my g-d! We better go to the hospital!” shouted Mr. Ribar. “Let’s go, Maene”.

Now a Maene was a very rare pokemon. Mr. Ribar had to pay a million dollars to a man to get that Maene (not that Mr. Ribar cared that it was a million dollars). Mr. Ribar loved that Maene and took it with him wherever Mr. Ribar went. Mr. Ribar was so excited that his precious Maene was going to meet another Ribar. Maene loved humans, no matter what type of person the human was. Mr. Ribar’s Maene was a very rare and very nice pokemon.

Now, like I said before, the Ribars only cared about themselves, but they never did bad things. Now, all that was about to change in a few years.

Meowth – True Love!​

An ordinary Meowth lived in the town called Tibera. Now, Tibera was known for having many Meowths.

One day, the Meowth we’re talking about was walking down the street. Suddenly, it saw a dance class for humans. Then, Meowth saw something beautiful; the Meowth next to the instructor.

“Ok Meowsy, you can come” said the dance instructor to the Meowth that the Meowth we’re talking about loved.

“Meow, meow” said Meowsy, as it went up the steps to the dance instructor.

“Meow, Meow, Meow” said Meowsy to the kids.

“That’s it!” thought Meowth. “To impress Meowsy and make her love me, I’ll learn English!” But we’re not going to talk about that yet. We’re going to talk about something else…

Jessie – Elizabeth or Jessie?​

Now, Mr. and Mrs. Belle ran to the hospital (by car, of course). Once they got there, Mr. Belle went to the front desk.

“Excuse me, but my wife is going to have a baby any moment” Mr. Belle explained to the person at the front desk.

“I’ll get a wheelchair for her and bring her in” replied the man at the front desk. The man got a wheelchair. Mrs. Belle went inside it and Mr. Belle pushed Mrs. Belle into a room where they met a doctor.

“Now, I’m going to do this as easily as I can” explained the doctor.

“Okay” replied Mrs. Belle. The doctor took some special tools, leaned onto Mrs. Belle and out came a baby.

“It’s a girl!” shouted the doctor.

“I’m going to name her… um…. Elizabeth! Ya, Elizabeth!” said Mrs. Belle.

“No, I like Jessie better” said Mr. Belle.

Jessie – Jessie Sounds Nicer!​

“I still think Elizabeth is better” said Mrs. Belle.

“It’s a bad name. Jessie is better” said Mr. Belle.

So, they argued and argued and they couldn’t figure out which name was nicer: Elizabeth or Jessie.

“I’ve got it! We’ll ask a doctor!” said Mrs. Belle.

“Great idea!” said Mr. Belle.

Mr. Belle went out of the hospital bed room and found and doctor. Then, Mr. Belle brought the doctor into the hospital room.

“Which name do you like best?” Mrs. Belle asked the doctor. “Elizabeth or Jessie?”

“I’m going to have to agree with Jessie. It’s a better name” said the doctor.

“Haha!” Mr. Belle said to Mrs. Belle.

“Okay, Okay” Mrs. Belle said. Then she turned to the baby. “I now pronounce you: Jessie”. And so there was a new member of the Belle family. Jessie Belle.

James – Passing Maene Over!​

Mr. and Mrs. Ribar went into their care and rushed to the hospital and went to the front desk. Blah – blah. You already know what happened. You encountered it with the Belle family.

“It’s a boy!” shouted the doctor once the Ribar’s were in a hospital room.

“I’ll call him James” said Mrs. Ribar.

“That’s a great idea” agreed Mr. Ribar. Then, Mr. Ribar turned to face little James.

“James” Mr. Ribar said to little James. “You might not understand this now, but I want to give you my Maene when you grow older”.

Meowth – Tongue Twisters Are Hard!​

Meowth walked away from the dance class, thinking of how to learn English. Then, he passed a tongue twister academy, where kids learn tongue twisters.

“I know! I’ll learn that tongue twister!” thought Meowth. He listened closely. The Meowth heard the kids.

“She sells seashells by the seashore, and the shells she sells are seashore shells” said the kids.

“That’s hard” thought Meowth. Here tried to say the tongue twister. But all that came out was “Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow, Meow”.

“It’s no use. I should just give up now” thought Meowth. And he walked away from the academy.

Jessie – Happy Birthday and Meet Ekans!​

Jessie grew older, learning to walk, to talk, and starting going to school. On Jessie’s seventh birthday, Jessie ran to the kitchen table, as soon as she woke up. Mr. and Mrs. Belle were already at the table.

“Happy birthday, Jessica!” Mr. and Mrs. Belle said to their daughter.

“Ooh, what did you get me for a present?” Jessie asked her parents. Mr. and Mrs. Belle looked at each other.

“Your first pokemon!” they shouted at the same time. Mr. Belle then handed a small, red and white ball to Jessie.

“Just say ‘Pokemon, I choose you!’ and throw the poke ball. That will make the pokemon come out” Mr. Belle explained to his daughter.

“Okay!” Jessie replied. “Pokemon, I choose you!” Suddenly, the poke ball flashed in midair. When the poke ball landed on the floor, a purple snake – like pokemon appeared.

“Meet Ekans!” Mr. and Mrs. Belle said to Jessie.

“Ah! That’s gross!” shouted Jessie.