Hi. This is my first posting and story.
Join Rixec, a boy aspiring to be the Pokemon Champion with many secrets, Hikari, a girl who wants to learn everything about Pokemon, and Elvis, a boy with street smarts aiming to surpass his father. Join all three as they battle evil, catch Pokemon and learn more about each other.
Rated PG-13 for violence, cursing, and blood.
Chapter List
Prologue
Chapter 1: The Meeting
Chapter 2: The Attack and Pokemon of the Lake
Chapter 3: The Choosing
Chapter 4: Three Way Fight? The Battle in Hell
Chapter 5: Sayonara
Chapter 6: Friendship
Chapter 7: Twins! Double Battle!
Chapter 8: Three vs. Three, the Battle for Rixec
Chapter 9: Jubilife City, Get the Poketch! A Dark Day for Rixec.
Chapter 10: Siege of Jubilife
Chapter 11: Memory Road
The Story Begins...
Tonight was the night. Volkner was working on his traps at the gym, it was the middle of the night, and the best guards were on vacation. It had to be tonight. Just a few more seconds. All of a sudden the lights went out everywhere in the city and the boy ran. “It’s now or never!” A Pokemon suddenly jumped out of nowhere and the two headed toward the gates. The alarm rang and the Houndoom were unleashed.
These Houndoom were trained to catch the anything from the fastest Rapidash to the sneakiest Kecleon, but they weren’t trained for the two of them. The boy thought to himself, Yes, they’ve hidden themselves quite well. Let’s see now… “Old friend, there are two Houndoom five meters behind us, three three meters to the left, and one a mile ahead. Take them all out with Close Combat.”
Yes, Master. The Pokemon took off and returned five minutes later. Just as you said.
“All right, now comes the hard part.” The guards started rushing out to catch the boy, if they didn’t, they might be asked to go into “retirement”. Ten minutes later everything was smoothed until… “Gah! Psycho Cut at that tree now!” The Pokemon did so and a well hidden Kecleon fainted.
I am sorry Master, I didn’t expect...
“No, the one at fault was me; I didn’t expect this to happen. I guess this means there are still some good guards here.” If Kecleon was here then that means…
Master! We must go back now!
“NO! This is my only chance in a lifetime to escape, I trust you enough to get me out.”
Can’t we use Teleport?
“What time is it?”
Uh, 11:45 p.m.
“It’s no good; the Alakazam will be out around the city with a psychic barrier to prevent any means of escape.”
But then, why are we still going?
“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you sooner old friend, but that a surprise that will have to wait until midnight.”
You mean… Ugh! At that moment the Pokemon was frozen from the inside out. The boy knew what this meant, this icy feeling of death surrounding him like the dementors in Harry Potter. Froslass and its trainer, the head of the guard, had found them.
“You put on quite a show, you and your slave, but it’s over now.”
“Bill, Bill, Bill. First of all, he’s not my slave, he’s my best friend. And second, I’ve already won.”
Bill just smirked and said “Kid, despite your faults you’re pretty amazing. But with your Pokemon frozen, possibly dead, you can’t escape.”
“Look again.” Bill turned around and saw the Pokemon inside disappear; Substitute.
“Froslass, above us!” Bill had shouted and the two of them dodge the Psycho Cut in time. Damn, the kid expected this and had a decoy lying in wait, I’ve should’ve expected this from a ***** boy and a psychic Pokemon. “Froslass, use Ominous Wind! Aim at its $#@%%$# heart!” The Froslass took aim but it never got the chance to attack, for the green Pokemon was faster and used Psycho Cut on its back, fainting it. “Ahh!”
“Bill, my friend is faster, so a better move would have been Ice Shard, which always strikes first. If you survive “retirement”, I hope you remember that. Close Combat, send him back 100 feet,” the boy said smoothly. The Pokemon obeyed and after he landed, Bill didn’t wake up for a long time. “Ahh, time, now!”
11:59 p.m. Master
“One more minute.” One more minute until his escape from Hell, and to his 13th birthday. When the clock struck twelve it happened. The barrier disappeared.
Master…
“I put Wiki berries in the Alakazam’s food today. So when the clock struck twelve the barrier fell when the fell under the confused status,” the boy said quite pleased with himself. His Pokemon chuckled at this, to have thought of such a plan, maybe he would be a great Pokemon Trainer. “Now then, Teleport if you please.” His Pokemon then teleported them to a new beginning.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A young woman paced in her office waiting for news. The door suddenly opened and Bill entered. “Well.” It was a statement, not a question.
“I’m sorry Madam, but he has escaped,” he said to her dreading what would happen.
“Well then, it’s time I got serious.” She started walking toward her desk when Bill spoke up.
“Does this mean I’m free to go?” She turned, looked at him and smiled.
“Oh my. I almost forgot. I think… it is time you went into “retirement” Bill.” She looked quite happy now.
“N-No!” Bill screamed turning ghostly white. Suddenly, a trap door opened underneath and he fell in, and then a crunching sound could be heard.
The woman sighed. If the boy has escaped this could mean problems. Should she contact Team Galactic? No, they were too busy, so she would have to send her toughest body guards. “Mack, Tammy, Ronald!” she called out. Suddenly, two boys and a girl around seventeen appeared.
“You rang?” Mack asked. The woman looked at them. Mack, an athletic young boy with blood red hair, Tammy, a young girl with blond hair and a poisonous smile, and Ronald, a muscle body-builder with long black hair.
“I want you to capture the boy. Bring him back alive and go unnoticed.” she told the three of them. “Take one Pokemon each, your strongest. Am I clear?”
“Loud and clear,” Tammy answered. The three took off. While walking down the hall Ronald asked a question, “Where did the kid even go?”
“Heh, I’m sure his plan will tell us,” Mack said with a sly smile.
“Plan? But he can’t-,” Tammy started to stay.
“It’s so that Pokemon of his will get it,” Mack replied. They went down to the furnace and met up with Mack’s Pokemon, Magmortor. “Do you have it?” Magmortor handed a piece of paper to them. “Because Magmortor controls all the fire here, he doesn’t burn important things.” They all looked at the plan.
PART 1
Find night Volkner works on traps and good guards are on vacation.
PART 2
Put wiki berries in Alakazam’s food.
PART 3
Escape.
PART 4
The three of them looked at the last part carefully and smiled. The boy was going to the place they knew best, the town they started their journeys seven years ago.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
The boy and his Pokemon looked at the town below them. In the morning they would head over to the lab and start the journey of a life time. “Twinleaf Town looks beautiful, doesn’t it Gallade?” the boy asked his Pokemon.
Yes Master Gallade replied.
“Um, Gallade?”
Yes Master?
“Don’t call me ‘Master’, call me by my name. Kay?”
This is the prologue to my story. Tell me what you think and any advice to make it better.
Join Rixec, a boy aspiring to be the Pokemon Champion with many secrets, Hikari, a girl who wants to learn everything about Pokemon, and Elvis, a boy with street smarts aiming to surpass his father. Join all three as they battle evil, catch Pokemon and learn more about each other.
Rated PG-13 for violence, cursing, and blood.
Chapter List
Prologue
Chapter 1: The Meeting
Chapter 2: The Attack and Pokemon of the Lake
Chapter 3: The Choosing
Chapter 4: Three Way Fight? The Battle in Hell
Chapter 5: Sayonara
Chapter 6: Friendship
Chapter 7: Twins! Double Battle!
Chapter 8: Three vs. Three, the Battle for Rixec
Chapter 9: Jubilife City, Get the Poketch! A Dark Day for Rixec.
Chapter 10: Siege of Jubilife
Chapter 11: Memory Road
The Story Begins...
Tonight was the night. Volkner was working on his traps at the gym, it was the middle of the night, and the best guards were on vacation. It had to be tonight. Just a few more seconds. All of a sudden the lights went out everywhere in the city and the boy ran. “It’s now or never!” A Pokemon suddenly jumped out of nowhere and the two headed toward the gates. The alarm rang and the Houndoom were unleashed.
These Houndoom were trained to catch the anything from the fastest Rapidash to the sneakiest Kecleon, but they weren’t trained for the two of them. The boy thought to himself, Yes, they’ve hidden themselves quite well. Let’s see now… “Old friend, there are two Houndoom five meters behind us, three three meters to the left, and one a mile ahead. Take them all out with Close Combat.”
Yes, Master. The Pokemon took off and returned five minutes later. Just as you said.
“All right, now comes the hard part.” The guards started rushing out to catch the boy, if they didn’t, they might be asked to go into “retirement”. Ten minutes later everything was smoothed until… “Gah! Psycho Cut at that tree now!” The Pokemon did so and a well hidden Kecleon fainted.
I am sorry Master, I didn’t expect...
“No, the one at fault was me; I didn’t expect this to happen. I guess this means there are still some good guards here.” If Kecleon was here then that means…
Master! We must go back now!
“NO! This is my only chance in a lifetime to escape, I trust you enough to get me out.”
Can’t we use Teleport?
“What time is it?”
Uh, 11:45 p.m.
“It’s no good; the Alakazam will be out around the city with a psychic barrier to prevent any means of escape.”
But then, why are we still going?
“I’m sorry I didn’t tell you sooner old friend, but that a surprise that will have to wait until midnight.”
You mean… Ugh! At that moment the Pokemon was frozen from the inside out. The boy knew what this meant, this icy feeling of death surrounding him like the dementors in Harry Potter. Froslass and its trainer, the head of the guard, had found them.
“You put on quite a show, you and your slave, but it’s over now.”
“Bill, Bill, Bill. First of all, he’s not my slave, he’s my best friend. And second, I’ve already won.”
Bill just smirked and said “Kid, despite your faults you’re pretty amazing. But with your Pokemon frozen, possibly dead, you can’t escape.”
“Look again.” Bill turned around and saw the Pokemon inside disappear; Substitute.
“Froslass, above us!” Bill had shouted and the two of them dodge the Psycho Cut in time. Damn, the kid expected this and had a decoy lying in wait, I’ve should’ve expected this from a ***** boy and a psychic Pokemon. “Froslass, use Ominous Wind! Aim at its $#@%%$# heart!” The Froslass took aim but it never got the chance to attack, for the green Pokemon was faster and used Psycho Cut on its back, fainting it. “Ahh!”
“Bill, my friend is faster, so a better move would have been Ice Shard, which always strikes first. If you survive “retirement”, I hope you remember that. Close Combat, send him back 100 feet,” the boy said smoothly. The Pokemon obeyed and after he landed, Bill didn’t wake up for a long time. “Ahh, time, now!”
11:59 p.m. Master
“One more minute.” One more minute until his escape from Hell, and to his 13th birthday. When the clock struck twelve it happened. The barrier disappeared.
Master…
“I put Wiki berries in the Alakazam’s food today. So when the clock struck twelve the barrier fell when the fell under the confused status,” the boy said quite pleased with himself. His Pokemon chuckled at this, to have thought of such a plan, maybe he would be a great Pokemon Trainer. “Now then, Teleport if you please.” His Pokemon then teleported them to a new beginning.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
A young woman paced in her office waiting for news. The door suddenly opened and Bill entered. “Well.” It was a statement, not a question.
“I’m sorry Madam, but he has escaped,” he said to her dreading what would happen.
“Well then, it’s time I got serious.” She started walking toward her desk when Bill spoke up.
“Does this mean I’m free to go?” She turned, looked at him and smiled.
“Oh my. I almost forgot. I think… it is time you went into “retirement” Bill.” She looked quite happy now.
“N-No!” Bill screamed turning ghostly white. Suddenly, a trap door opened underneath and he fell in, and then a crunching sound could be heard.
The woman sighed. If the boy has escaped this could mean problems. Should she contact Team Galactic? No, they were too busy, so she would have to send her toughest body guards. “Mack, Tammy, Ronald!” she called out. Suddenly, two boys and a girl around seventeen appeared.
“You rang?” Mack asked. The woman looked at them. Mack, an athletic young boy with blood red hair, Tammy, a young girl with blond hair and a poisonous smile, and Ronald, a muscle body-builder with long black hair.
“I want you to capture the boy. Bring him back alive and go unnoticed.” she told the three of them. “Take one Pokemon each, your strongest. Am I clear?”
“Loud and clear,” Tammy answered. The three took off. While walking down the hall Ronald asked a question, “Where did the kid even go?”
“Heh, I’m sure his plan will tell us,” Mack said with a sly smile.
“Plan? But he can’t-,” Tammy started to stay.
“It’s so that Pokemon of his will get it,” Mack replied. They went down to the furnace and met up with Mack’s Pokemon, Magmortor. “Do you have it?” Magmortor handed a piece of paper to them. “Because Magmortor controls all the fire here, he doesn’t burn important things.” They all looked at the plan.
PART 1
Find night Volkner works on traps and good guards are on vacation.
PART 2
Put wiki berries in Alakazam’s food.
PART 3
Escape.
PART 4
The three of them looked at the last part carefully and smiled. The boy was going to the place they knew best, the town they started their journeys seven years ago.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
The boy and his Pokemon looked at the town below them. In the morning they would head over to the lab and start the journey of a life time. “Twinleaf Town looks beautiful, doesn’t it Gallade?” the boy asked his Pokemon.
Yes Master Gallade replied.
“Um, Gallade?”
Yes Master?
“Don’t call me ‘Master’, call me by my name. Kay?”
END
This is the prologue to my story. Tell me what you think and any advice to make it better.
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