The Super Epic/Poorly Wrtten FanFic

[metagrody6]

Chapter 1 Part 1

Hi. My name is metagrody6. In 6th grade we were taught to not open up a story like that, but whatever THIS ISN'T 6th GRADE LOLOL. Anyway. I woke up in my bed because there was a bomb blast outside. I was thinking "Please just go away Charles." I walked downstairs to eat some fruit salad for my delicious breakfast, but I was interrupted by my wonderful mother saying "metagrody6, can you please go get some more fruit salad? You ate all of it and I want some you jerk." I was like "Okay mom omg lol!!1!" I hippity-hopped all the way to the outside of my house, got on my bike, and rode off to the fruit salad store called "The Fruit Salad Store". However. Before I could even get out of the driveway a Pikachu thunderbolted by bike so it was it became a pile of ash. Looks like I was going to be walking to The Fruit Salad Store.

Should I continue? Feedback please

 

[Sgeckledorf Spoongeblorb]

Write at least two pages in Microsoft Word, specifically size 11 in Times New Roman or Arial.

 

[Psychic]

Should I continue? Feedback please

Well you should not continue until you have read the Fan Fiction Rules, that's for sure. The rules state that your chapters must be at least two pages long on Microsoft Word and written properly. You should be starting a new paragraph every time a new person speaks, for instance.

Also, this may not be 6th grade, but your teachers did have a point. Just because you wrote it, doesn't mean you should post it. Please look at other fics here to get a better idea of what to do, and be sure to read the rules.

~Psychic

PS: Sgeckledorf Spoongeblorb, please don't minimod.