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The Three Stalkers 2~Revenge of The Matchmakers (Pokéshipping)

~Mist~

revolutionary~
The Three Stalkers 2~Revenge of The Matchmakers (Pokéshipping)

The 3 Stalkers 2: Revenge of the Matchmakers: Pokeshipping One-Shot

Rating: PG

Genre: Romance/Comedy

Shippings:
Pokeshipping
DragonMaster13 X May
Stacee X Tracey

Summary:
Ash forgot about his anniversary so he ends up having a big argument with Misty! What’s worse is that he got amnesia thanks to someone! Can the Pokeshippers get them back together and make up?

"I'm so bored today..." Kristell stated.

The others nodded as they all continued walking. They had recently visited Slateport City for supplies and then went on their way. The three planned to have some fun on their day off from all of their adventures.

Kristell wore her topaz-orange tie dyed top along with her blue shorts along with a white belt. Her short, black hair was loose and free as her brown eyes that were covered by her thin glasses looked down at the dirt ground. The teenager’s yellow shoes kept kicking a tiny rock in front of as she continued to stroll.

Chelsea was smiling with glee as she wore her hot pink baby T-shirt along with her might night blue pants with a black belt. Her brown hair shined greatly, her neon colored bracelets glowed with delight and her heart shaped necklace always sparkled just the way she liked it. Her high-top sneakers were black and white, classic but retro colors.

Dylan wore his usual blue T-shirt along with his black pants that were a great combination. His blue ball cap matched perfectly with his stylish black Rebooks. His dark brown hair was blown lightly by the wind as he continued to walk. His dark, cerulean eyes narrowed at the two girls once again, as usual.

“Isn’t this bag so cute?” Kristell squealed.
“It sure is!” Chelsea replied excitedly as she held her necklace. “I just love my new necklace!”

Kristell nodded with delight while Dylan’s eyes narrowed.

“I can’t believe you both took me shopping back there. Guys don’t shop!”
“I wouldn’t say that…” Kristell stated.

~*~*~*~

The three walked along the busy city of Slateport. Vendors were selling items, there was a museum of art, even ferry rides. The day was just right. The three walked passed a small thrift store. Kristell stopped right in her tracks and gleamed dreamily at it.

“Oh wow!” Kristell shouted as she pointed. “Look at that store!”
“The stuff there looks really cute!” Chelsea added.
“Let’s all go and take a peek!” Kristell stated as she started to head towards the store.

The two girls noticed their friend sitting there at a red bench, minding his own business. The young women walked over to their friend.

“Aren’t you coming with us?” Chelsea questioned.
“Nope. I never go shopping.”
“Well then, you should give it a try!” Kristell relied gleefully as she pulled Dylan. Chelsea followed with joy.
“Hey, what are you doing?!”
“We’re all going so you can have your first experience shopping!”
“I don’t want to go!” Dylan shouted as he held onto the bench.
“Yes you are, now let go!” Kristell cried as she and Chelsea pulled the him harder.
“No, you can’t make me!”
“Let go of that thing! We’re wasting precious shopping time!” Chelsea cried as she continued to pull.
“Let go before you both and that bench get half of me!”
“Keep pulling!” Kristell shouted.
“What part of no do you both not understand?! I’m not going!”
“You never know if May’s there.” Chelsea sang loudly.

The name of May’s voice perked Dylan’s attention.

“Huh? May?” Dylan asked.

Kristell chuckled a bit. Chelsea continued.

“But if you don’t want to go, that’s okay! You can stay right here while we end up talking to May. It’s your choice.”

He then put up a smile and dragged his two friends. “Let’s go!”

The two girls sneakily made a thumbs up signal and smiled evilly. Dylan was the first to enter.

“Alright everyone! Stand aside as I will look for the lovely May!” Dylan affirmed as the people gave him a strange look.

Many people sweatdropped as Chelsea and Kristell smiled nervously.

“Not again…” Chelsea mopped.
“Let’s just enjoy the time we have to go shopping! Maybe we’ll find something really cute!” Kristell said with excitement.
“Yup, we’ll leave lovesick Dylan alone to mope after!” Chelsea stated.
“I heard that!” Dylan shouted. “Just you wait, I’ll find May!” Dylan mumbled as he turned around and sweatdropped.
“Look at that!” Kristell affirmed.
“It’s so cute!” Chelsea squealed as she held the silver, heart-shaped necklace and hugged it. Chelsea squealed. “I’ve got to have it!”
“Will you both stop squealing for once and listen to me?!” Dylan yelled as he tightened his fists. “Huh?”
“Look at this handbag!” Kristell stated as she held it and put it on her shoulder.

It was a long, white bag was on her right shoulder. It was designed with black and white boxes for the handles, and on the pack were six people, shaped like a pyramid with their hats.

“Does it look good?”
“It doesn’t look good, it’s grreat!”
“Women are so unbelievable! Is there something you both don‘t squeal about?” Dylan muttered as he crossed his arms.
“Of course,” Kristell replied while closing her eyes.
“Icky stuff.” Chelsea answered.

Dylan sweatdropped.

“Did you find May?” Kristell questioned.

Dylan sighed with agony and sulked down at a corner, leaving the girls stupefied.

“I don’t think you should have asked that question.” Chelsea whispered.
“Oops.” Kristell stated. “Sorry about that!”
“Why don’t we look for something for you?”

Kristell and Dylan sweatdropped.

“But this is a women’s store!” Dylan complained.
“Oh, right!” Chelsea said nervously while her right hand was behind her head.
“Let’s just pay and keep on going.” Kristell suggested.
“Yup, good idea!” Chelsea agreed as she, Dylan, and Kristell headed to the cash register.

Dylan then sulked to the bottom of the counter.

“May’s not here…”
“Quiet! Sulk in your head!” Kristell yelled.
“Sorry.”
“Eh heh heh.”

~*~*~*~

“That was really fun though!” Chelsea stated with glee.
“Sure was!”

Just then, a flash appeared coming from Dylan’s belt of pokeballs. The flash took shape of a blue dragon with red wings.

“Salamence!”

The dragon started to burst out laughing. The three put up a blank face of confusion.

“What are you laughing at?” Dylan mumbled.

“I’m laughing at how two girls made you go shopping,” the dragon stated.

“Not funny.” Dylan muttered while it continued laughing. He then put up an anger mark. “Cut it out and get back into your pokeball!”

The pokeball revealed a red light that poked the hysterically, laughing dragon and transported back inside the pokeball.

“Stupid dragon. It’s not fair! Why wasn‘t May there? It was the ideal place for any girl to be!”
“Maybe that’s because she’s a coordinator!” Kristell shouted.
“Which means she could be competing with Drew!” Chelsea affirmed as her eyes sparkled.
“Ah! Drew…” Kristell stated dreamily.
“So hot…”
“Come on you two! Stop drooling and start walking!” Dylan snapped.
“Kay…”

Hours passed as the three continued walking. The sun sizzled the poor trio. Their eyes became more sleepier by the minute from the hot sun.

"I'm sick of getting lost!"
"But we're at Slateport Beach!"
"Oh...yeah, we are."
“Let’s get our bathing suits on!” Kristell squealed as everyone headed towards the dressing house close by.
“Right behind ya!” Chelsea cried as she ran.
“Don’t forget about me!”

Minutes later, the three were in their bathing suits, ready to have fun. Kristell was in her red bikini top along with her red boy shorts. She smiled as she approached the water. Chelsea was in her striped blue-green bikini top along with her boy-shorts, the same color of her top. She jumped with joy as she ran to the water. Dylan was in his blue-black trunk shorts that had a Hawaiian flower print. He ran past his two friends, making them dizzy and jumped into the water.

"CANNONBALL!" Dylan cried excitedly as the aqua-green water made a tremendous splash. His head appeared from the top of the water, relieved by it.

The two girls were on the sand, with swirls replacing their eyes. They both got up and headed to the water.

“The water’s just right!” Dylan said, relaxed by the soothing water.

Kristell dipped her foot in the water and immediately took it out.

"Brr! It's cold!" Kristell shivered.
"Yeah, I'm freezing!"
"Sisses." I laughed.
"What did you just say?" Kristell questioned as she pulled his ear.
"OUCH! Sorry. I've been building a resistance to cold since I was ten!" I explained. "This is nothing!"

The two girls put up a blank face.

"What?"
“Nothing.” Chelsea answered.
"C'mon in!....Wait....is that....no, it can't....guys...is that...."
"Huh?" Kristell questioned.
"What?"
"Over there!" he pointed. "That woman with the brown hair.”
"It's...May!"
"I knew it by the look on your face."
“MAY!!!”

He immediately raced out of the water and a fast trail of fire followed.

"Men, always chasing after women." Kristell muttered.
"I know..."
"I HEARD THAT!"

Kristell laughed nervously.

"Uh oh.....I can't stop! Oof!" he landed in the sand.

Kristell and Chelsea sweatdropped, then sighed.

"Help....anyone?"
"Sure thing!" Kristell replied as she started to run to him.
"Yeah, we're coming!"
"Pffft! Blech!"
"You okay? That was a total crash and burn!" Kristell observed.
"What do you mean blech?" Chelsea questioned.
"The sand! It tastes nasty!" Dylan complained.
"Oh...yeah."

Kristell waved at the girl. Dylan had hearts floating around him while Kristell and Chelsea’s eyes narrowed. They both snickered to each other. Kristell and Chelsea pinched the hearts away with annoyance. Dylan then looked left and right for the hearts.

“Where’s my hearts? My love mood is gone!”

The two shrugged while they snickered in their thoughts.

"Hi May! Remember us?" Kristell asked.
"Hiya!" Dylan waved.
"Hi!!" Chelsea cried with glee.
"Hi guys, long time, no see." May stated.

He was bouncing on the balls of his feet, just itching for another chance. "How’s life?"
"It's been great so far! How are you all?" May asked with a friendly face.
"I'm okay."
"I'm great, too!"
"Just great!"
“So what have you been up t-?”

Beep, beep, beep!

"Hum?" Kristell asked herself as she reached into her bag to reveal a PokeGear which looked like a mini communicator. She then pressed a small, red button that revealed a familiar face. The others looked with curiosity.

"Hello, is this the Pokeshippers I'm talking to?” he questioned and immediately turned red.
“General John?”
“Oh! D-d-did I call at a bad time? P-p-please excuse me!"
“Don’t worry General John! We’re just at the beach, not getting naked!” Chelsea explained.
"Hey, Master!"
"H-hello, all." The general stated nervously.
"Plus one."
"Hi!" May cried happily.
"Are you May?" he questioned.
“Yes. I'm May. Nice to meet you."
"Pleasure. Now, I called you all..."
"Yeah?" Kristell and Chelsea asked in accord.
"Because...." Dylan started.
"I-I-it's very urgent! I'd like you three to come right away back to the school!" the general cried.
"Oh...okay! We'll be there!" Chelsea agreed.
"What? Cafeteria food gone bad?" Dylan questioned.

The three girls sweatdropped.

“I-I-I-I need you all here right away!”
"Right now? But we're-" Kristell started.
"What is it?" May interrogated.
"No clue..." Chelsea answered.
"I-I-I-It has to do with Pokeshipping so I need you all here, pronto!"
"Uh, no." Dylan mumbled.
"Kay..." Kristell stated, still unsure.
"Alright!" Chelsea replied with glee.
"Okay, we'll head there." May added.
"I-I-I look forward to seeing you all."
"See ya later!"
"See ya soon!"
"Bye!" Chelsea and May shouted.
"Bye for now!" General John stated as the screen went black.

Dylan grabbed a pokeball from his belt and raised it into the open air.

"Salamence! Get out here!"

"You had to wake me?" Salamence questioned.

"It's urgent!"

"It always is." It replied.

"Are you sure Salamence can lift us all?" Kristell asked while pointing at the dragon.
"Sure! If not, I also have Altra."
"Sounds good to me!"
"Yeah!"
"Let's go!" May cried happily.
"Say....can you two ride Altra?" Dylan questioned his two friends.
"I know what you‘re thinking! You want some alone time with May right?" Kristell teased.
“Wha, what?!”
“Yup, we know what you’re thinking!” Chelsea added.
“What are you talking about?” May asked, clueless.
“Nothing! Now everybody get on!”
“But first, we all have to get dressed. You can’t expect us all to go to Poke Shipping Academy with our bathing suits on!”
"Oh yeah. Oops."

After a few minutes, everyone was dressed in their usual clothes again.

"Good, we‘re all ready. Come on out, Altra!” Dylan cried as his pokeball flashed and out came a light, blue dragon with white, puffy wings.

"Good afternoon." Salamence greeted.

“Already polite, dear?" Altra interrogated.

"Your pokemon looks a bit frightening." May told while shaking a bit.
"It has an Intimidate ability." Dylan answered.
"If you say so."

"Just hurry up." Salamence stated with boredom.

"I'm glad we're not the ones riding..." Kristell observed as she got on Altra.
"Me, too..."

Dylan sighed. "C'mon. It‘ll be okay."
"Okay.."

He helped her up, then jumped on Salamence in front. "Yah! See ya there!"
"See ya!"
"Bye bye!"
"Bye!" May shouted as she waved.

"Next stop, PSA!" Salamence announced.

"Go too fast and no food for a week." Dylan warned him.

"Alright, calm down…" Salamence stated with a sweatdrop.

"I wonder why General John wanted us to get back so soon..." Kristell wondered.
"I know, me too...its kind of weird, since they're together and all..." Chelsea stated.
"Hmm, there's something going on but we'll find out."
"Yeah, you're right."
"Pokeshippers to the rescue!" Kristell cried with pride.
“Yay! Go Pokeshipping!” Chelsea squealed as she waved her tiny flags.

"Who is 'Master'?" asked May.
"John. I'm his apprentice."
"Well, why did he call you if Ash and Misty are married?"
"My thoughts exactly...."
“So, what have you been up to?” May questioned.
“Not much…what about you?”
“I recently won another contest over at the Orre Region. It was really tough but I won in the end,” May told.
“Really? That’s great!”
“I came over to Slateport by the ferry so then I wanted to go to the beach and then I met up with you guys.”
“Cool.”
“Did I mention how pretty you look now?”

May blushed pink.

“That’s sweet.”

“Yuck, mushy stuff! If you both plan to make out or anything please tell me so I can leave before I barf!” Salamence complained.

“Shut up, you idiot.” Dylan muttered as he smacked his pokemon on the head.

May looked confused as if a question mark were to appear above her head.

“Why did you smack him?”
“Oh! Uh…it’s my way of showing him that we’re good friends!” Dylan told as he smiled as his dragon and rubbed his head.

“Yeah, right.”

Why me? Dylan questioned in his thoughts.

~*~*~*~

“You guys really make a cute couple together!” Chelsea complimented.

“Do we? Well, let me tell you the story…” Altra answered.

“Uh…” Kristell sweatdropped.

“Well, it all started when I was a Swablu and he was a Bagon. At first, we didn’t get along much when we first met. We often fought each other when we weren’t supposed to, we played jokes on each other, you name it. Eventually we both evolved. But then after, there was a competition when it required two pokemon to compete in double battles so we were both selected by our trainer. We could stand it at first. It was terrible that we almost lost our first match.” Altra stated.

“That must have been bad,” Chelsea remarked.
“What happened next?”

“We then discovered the art of teamwork so we tried it and won our match easily. It was then that we noticed that we were meant to be a team. We both protected each other from any harm possible and when any of us got hurt, we were both there to increase our stamina. That made us powerful enough to win. It was then when I started to have feelings for him.” Altra continued.

“Aw…” Chelsea squealed. “That’s so cute!”

Kristell smiled as she stared into space, daydreaming at the cerulean sky.

“Kristell?”

Chelsea waved her hand in front of her friend.

“Hello in there! Kristell! Earth to Kristell, this is Chelsea, over.”

“Is she daydreaming?”

“I guess so. I wonder what she’s daydreaming about…”

“Beats me.”

“Hello! Kristell!”
“Huh? What?” Kristell asked with confusion.
“Finally! We were starting to get worried about you!”
“Oh sorry.” Kristell apologized as she sweatdropped.

“What were you daydreaming about?”

“Pokeshipping,” Kristell answered in a zombie voice.

Chelsea and Altra sweatdropped.

“I thought you were daydreaming over a guy!” Chelsea stated.
“Huh?” Kristell asked.
“Stop playing you tricky thing, now tell me!”
“But I was not!” Kristell demanded.
“I know that look on your face! You give that look to Drew now you must have dreaming about some guy!”
“But I was thinking about Pokeshipping!”
“Start talking.”
“Okay, I was thinking about my ideal guy. Are you happy now?!”
“No, not yet. Tell me more.”

“Are you both done?”

“Well, he‘s got to be…smart, handsome, dreamy, caring, romantic…” Kristell told as she blushed.
“Wow, he sounds hot, like Drew!” Chelsea mentioned. “But really, who’s the guy?”
“Nah, his name’s not important.”
“Tell me, K-Chan! Please, I’m begging you!”
“All I can say is that we met…a long time ago. We haven’t talked in a very long time,” Kristell admitted.
“About how long ago are you saying?”
“Six and counting.”
“I’m sorry.”
“It’s okay, I got over him. I’ve got more important things to think about.” Kristell stated as she turned around, facing a different view.

Poor Kristell. Love really must get to her, Chelsea thought.

~*~*~*~

"Here we are!" Salamence affirmed with boredom.

"Darn it! The ground! The GROUND! Not the roof!"
"Yikes!"

Kristell, Chelsea, and Altra observed the others from the ground. They noticed that they landed on top of a building, like always but this time it was Poke Shipping Academy.

"There they go...again..."
"Yeah.."

“He’s always very clumsy.” Altra observed.

“I see what you mean…”

"Sorry 'bout that." Dylan apologized. “Idiot…” he mumbled to his pokemon.

His pokemon wasted no time to fire a Flamethrower attack at his trainer. Dylan took a small step back, huffing out smoke then collapsed.

“Dylan, are you okay?” May cried as she came to his aid. “Shame on you! You don’t fire any attacks and you shouldn’t talk to your pokemon like that!”

Dylan blushed red with embarrassment. His pokemon was startled but then snickered.

“Sorry about that…uh, should we jump?"
"Not really.....we're on the second floor...."
"Good point....hey! A trapdoor!" Dylan exclaimed. "Ladies' first!" he said while opening the door.
"Thank you!"

He beamed a bright smile as Salamence rolled his eyes. "Not a word." Dylan told him as he recalled him.

They were all outside of Poke Shipping Academy, looking terrific like it always did with a few new features that were added. There stood a beautiful, white fountain with many Pidgey cooing and taking their baths. There were more trees and many species of flowers nearby the fountain such as roses, daisies, lilies, and violets. A man stood in front of the building, looking a bit nervous about the situation.

"About time you all came! I-I-I was beginning to worry…" A man stated with concern.
"Sorry Master." He apologized as he bowed. "What's the problem?"
"Well, you see...we…we have a situation."
"What kind?" Kristell and May questioned in accord.
"What happened?"
"It's something bad, right?"
"I'm afraid so."
"Oh don't tell me..."
"You see, Ash and Misty are in a very difficult time right now..."

Dylan slapped his forehead. "Can I call 'em or can I call 'em?!"
"WHAT?! How?!" Chelsea shouted.
"No way!" Kristell said, not believing the words that she heard.
"Argument." sighed May and Dylan in unison.
"Indeed..."
"Well, they argue all the time...don't they? Or it's...different?" Chelsea interrogated.
"It's not good...at all."
"While I'm on a roll, I'd like $1000." Dylan announced.
"Not now..." Kristell muttered.
"T-T-This time they're separated." General John told quietly.
"NO WAY!" Dylan said in doubt.
"No..." Kristell replied in concern while looking down at her sneakers.
"NOOOOOOOOOOO!" Chelsea shouted, very unhappy about this situation.
"That's terrible!" May cried.
"Yes, and your job is to get them back together."
"Master, what was the argument?" Dylan asked.
"Yeah, what really happened?" Chelsea added, anxious to know.
"Rumor has it was over an anniversary…"
"Oh, god." Dylan affirmed while putting his hand under his chin.
"Can't Ash ever remember anything?" Kristell questioned to herself as she put her hands on her hips angrily.
"Ash probably messed up...great..." Chelsea mumbled.
"I need to talk to him....big time." Dylan told.
"No, no, no! T-T-That’s not necessary!“ General John stated nervously. “Last time that happened, you almost k-k-killed him but this mission will be harder since they don't even want to see each other."
"There’s got to be a way!" Kristell encouraged.
"Aww...they have to want to see each other, at least a little!" Chelsea said cutely as her fingers on her left hand made the shape of a tiny circle.
"I doubt it."
"What are we waiting for? Let's go!" May cried.
"Wait!" the general cried, while the others suddenly stopped.
"Huh?" Kristell asked.
"What is it?" Dylan added.
"You-you…might want some more help." The general told. "Stacee can help you all since she specializes in romance problems."
"Stacee-Chan!" Dylan cried with joy.
"The more the better!" Kristell agreed.
"Yeah!"

The door then opened to reveal a girl standing there with a huge grin on her face. She wore a sleeveless light blue top with a white streak in the middle. She had her tight black shorts that shined a bit along with her blue-purple runner sneakers. Stacee had four tiny earrings in each ear that sparkled.

"Hello! I haven‘t seen ya all in a very long time!" Stacee stated with happiness and jumped for joy. “How are you all?”
"I’m okay.” Dylan replied.
“Me too!” Kristell added.
“Same here!” Chelsea finished.
“Hi, I’m May!” May said in a friendly tone.
“So you’re the one who Dylan lo-” Stacee told as Dylan rushed to her and shut her mouth.
“Don’t say anything!”

May, General John, Kristell, and Chelsea sweatdropped.

“Say, where's Tracey?"
“He’s here?” Stacee asked as her ears perked up. “Where?! I must know!” she cried as she shook Dylan, making him dizzy.
"And Daisy! And the rest of Misty's sisters!" Chelsea added with pride.
"C-C-Calm down. They'll meet up with you five at your destination."
"Fine with me." Dylan said.
"All right! We're gonna get them back in whatever way possible even if that means controlling them!" Kristell stated with determination and her eyes flashing fire.

Stacee sweatdropped.

“Just what are you planning to do if you do get to control them…?” Stacee questioned.
“Uh…stuff beyond our wildest dreams!” Kristell replied nervously.
“Just like in the Poke Shipping Exam where we had to make a short story based on Ash and Misty!” Chelsea told with happiness.
“Um…you should all get going…the others will meet you there.”
"May and I can handle Ketchum! You guys get Misty!"
"Yeah, let's go find her!"
"Okay then, as long as you don't kill the guy..." Kristell replied in a sing-song voice.
"Hey, that was one time!"
“Good luck,” General John told.
"Thanks!” Kristell replied.
"Thanks! We'll need it!" Chelsea admitted.
"See ya Master!"
"Let's go!" May cried.
"We can do it!" Stacee added. “I can’t wait to see Tracey! Here I come!”
"See you later!"
"Bye bye then!"
"See you! C'mon, May let's go!" Dylan said excitedly as he grabbed May’s hand.
“Okay.”

~*~*~*~

“We’re here!” Chelsea announced as everyone stared at the window.
“Really? Hooray!” Stacee cried with glee.
“All right! We get to see our favorite couple again!” Kristell stated with happiness and excitement.
“I can’t wait to knock some common sense into Ketchum’s head!” Dylan told himself.
“I hope we can fix their problem…” May said with concern.
“Don’t worry, it’ll be fine!” Dylan comforted.

May put up a happy smile. Dylan smiled back.

“Come on, you guys! Everybody else is already out unless you both want to stay…” Kristell interrupted.
“Oh, right!” May replied with a sweatdrop and rushed right out.

I’ll get you…

“Try to keep your focus in, okay?” Kristell advised her friend.

Dylan sighed. “Fine…”

Dylan stepped out of the blimp to find himself with others who were around his age. There was Tracey, a guy with black hair, brown eyes who was wearing a green shirt with a pink headband, blue sneakers, and brown shorts.

Violet stood there too, a tall girl with blue wavy hair showed up from the shadows. She had a red dress covered by a light yellow-brown jacket.

Next to her was Brock. He was dressed in a brown jacket with a green shirt underneath. He also had his brown pants with his brown sneakers with some white.

Daisy was in her usual outfit that was a pink jacket with a dark, green shirt underneath and her skirt. Lily, was dressed in her lime shirt with her blue skirt. The five greeted them all with glee.

“TRACEY! I’m here at last, my love!” Stacee cried as she hugged the helpless man.
“Who are you again?”
“I’m Stacee, your future wife! You‘re so hot in person!”

Tracey blushed.

“Wife?”
“That’s right!”
“AAAHHH! Kristell, Chelsea! You precious angels have come back to me!” Brock cried. “My, do you both look exquisite today!”
“Eh heh heh.”
“Thanks for the compliment!” Chelsea replied.
“How about I take you both out for coffee later so we can discuss our future love?”
“But I don’t even like-” Kristell started.
“You again! You’re flirting with K-Chan and C-Chan!” Dylan demanded, “What did I say…?”

Brock hid behind Daisy in an instant.

“Once again, torture sets us apart.” Brock sulked.

Dylan glared while Kristell and Chelsea sweatdropped.

~*~*~*~

After half an hour, everyone was already planning their schemes.

“Let’s all think! Put those brains to the test everybody!” Kristell cried.
“Oh, how about the talk again? I guess Ash matured enough to listen.” Chelsea suggested.
“It’s worth a shot.” Stacee agreed.
“I think it’s a good idea,” May complimented.
“Really? Thanks May!” Chelsea squealed with joy.
“Women…” Dylan muttered.
“But who will talk to who?” Tracey questioned.
“Like, good point. We can convince our little sister to do whatever we want.” Lily told.
“Yeah, like, we’ll talk to Misty!” Violet added.
“There’s ten of us so five of us to talk to one of them each.” Brock reminded.
“I’ll go with you three to talk to Misty.” Kristell affirmed.
“Me too, so that means the rest of you talk to Ash.” Chelsea stated with a smile.
“Great…” Tracey mumbled.
“Hopefully, it’ll work.” Brock added.
“Yup or else…” Dylan announced.
“Or else what?” Stacee asked.
“He’ll face the wrath of my dragons!”

Everyone sweatdropped.

“What are we all waiting for? Let’s go!” May uttered as everyone lifted their hands into the air together.

~*~*~*~

“Wow, nice place.” Kristell observed.
“I’ll say.” Chelsea added.

The anxious people stood in awe in front of a glamorous hotel called Lovers Dream with its slogan underneath saying, “Where Your Dreams Come True“. The building was a glorious white with custom designed windows that were in the shape of a heart. It had five beach palm trees on each side. Lovers Dream even had a tremendous black fountain that shined with the bright sun. Everyone was amazed by the beauty.

“Like, this would be a great place for a spa treatment!” Violet exclaimed.
“Not now!” Stacee muttered.
“We better find Ash and Misty. I‘ll go ask,” Brock stated as he walked to the receptionist.
“Hello, how may I help you?” she asked with a huge grin on her face.

Brock held her hands with caution.

“My name is Brock and I’m wondering if you’d like to make my dreams come true!” Brock cried romantically as she sweatdropped.
“Uh…”
“Brock, Brock, Brock, when will you ever learn?” Chelsea questioned as she dragged him away by pulling his ear.
“Goodbye…my love.”

Everyone else smiled nervously. They all approached the receptionist.

“Hi, could you tell us where Ash and Misty are?” Stacee asked.
“I’m sorry, but that information is classified. Our policy here is to give our customers total privacy.”
“But we have to find them!” May cried.
“It’s an emergency!” Dylan added.
“Please let us in!” Stacee pleaded.
“We’re their only hope!” Tracey affirmed.
“I’m sorry but you all can’t. Besides, only lovers can be here so I’m afraid I’ll have to ask you to leave. Security!” she cried.

Three, large, and strong men appeared behind the group. Everyone sweatdropped.

“Urk!”
“Is there a problem?”
“Please export them from here.”
“Consider it done.” the guard told as he and several guards grabbed everyone.
“Let go!” Kristell yelled.

The three guards walked to the entrance and threw them. They all fell in front of the building with swirls replacing their eyes.

“Ouchies…” Chelsea stated.
“Those crooks! How dare they throw us out?!” Kristell snapped.
“Calm down Kristell, we’ll get in…” Stacee told.
“How?” May asked.
“I get a bad feeling about this…” Dylan told.
“Don’t worry, it’s perfect.” Stacee reminded.

~*~*~*~

“Everybody ready?” Stacee asked.

The others nodded as one shook their head.

“Like, wait! I need my makeup!” Violet cried.
“Can we go now?” Kristell asked with annoyance.
“Like, I’m ready now!“ Violet told.
“Everyone, remember what to do!” Stacee blurted out excitedly. “I’m so happy we’re paired up!”
“Sure, I’m happy too…” Tracey replied, a bit unsure of himself.
“Let’s go, my beauty queen!” Brock stated romantically.

Daisy sweatdropped. “Kay…”

“Let‘s get going May,” Dylan announced as he grabbed her hand.
“I’m right behind ya,” May answered.

Everyone approached the building. The slider doors opened carefully as the people stared at them all. Kristell and Lily were dressed as guys with their brown coats. They both wore hats that covered their long hair.

“This is embarrassing,” Kristell stated in a deeper voice than usual.
“Don’t worry about it, we’re all pretending.” Chelsea remarked.

Kristell’s eyes narrowed as Chelsea sweatdropped.

“Well, half of us are pretending!”

“Hi, we’d like to stay here with my husband!” Stacee affirmed with glee.
“Same here.” Kristell added with her disguise voice.

The woman looked at Lily and Kristell whimsically.

“It’s very hot outside sir, so you both might want to put your jackets off…”
“It’s okay!” Violet started.
“Yeah, our husbands get very cold easily so they wear a jacket!” Chelsea finished.
“I see…”

The others smiled nervously.

“We have five cabins for all of you-”
“Like, it’s no problem! We just need one cabin!” Daisy blurted out.
“Huh???” the woman questioned with confusion by her side, “Are you sure…?”
“Yes, it’s no problem at all! We’re all close friends!” Brock covered.
“O…Okay then! I‘ll be right back then!” the lady told as she turned around and walked into another room.
“Phew!’ everyone said in accord.
“That was close!” May told.
“Too close if you ask me…” Dylan added.
“It’s a good thing we didn’t get-”
“Uh, we have a cabin!”
“Urk!”
“For a second, I thought you sounded like a woman…” the woman observed while staring at Kristell.
“I-uh…I’m just choking!” Kristell announced as she pretended to choke by putting her hands at her neck. She started to cough, imitating a person chocking.

The others sweatdropped. The receptionist looked just as shocked.

“Are you okay dear? “ Chelsea questioned as she sweatdropped.
“I’m sure she’ll be fine, I mean, he’ll be fine as soon as he gets fresh air!” Stacee stated as everyone rushed outside.
“What strange people…”

~*~*~*~

“I thought we were toast!” Kristell uttered as she sighed. “This coat was killing me!”
“Like yeah, this is no way how I should live!” Lily complained.
“At least we got in,” Chelsea stated.
“Now we can get to Ash and Misty!” Tracey announced.
“Yay!” Stacee, May, Kristell, and Chelsea cried with joy.

~*~*~*~

“Is this it?” May asked.
“Guess so,” Kristell answered.

Everyone walked to the cabin door carefully. Dylan grabbed the handle and twisted it as the door creaked open.

“EEEEKKKK!” the Pokeshippers cried as they ran away.

~*~*~*~

“That was something we definitely didn’t have to see.” Chelsea said with fear.
“Have you ever heard of knocking?!” Kristell snapped.
“Sorry! I forgot,” Dylan replied with a sweatdrop.

~*~*~*~

“Hopefully this is the right cabin,” Tracey stated.
“Let’s find out.” Stacee added as everyone approached the cabin door.

May knocked on the door. “Ash? Misty?”

The door opened with a woman with short, bright, red hair with a small suitcase in her right hand. The others looked astonished. She wore a yellow tank top with her pink jacket, her blue shorts, and her red sneakers with a yellow line.

“Excuse me, but I have to go.”
“Are you…Misty?” Stacee questioned.
“Yes.”
“Oh my god! Can you believe this?! I’m actually seeing Misty in person!” Stacee squealed.
“Huh? Who exactly are you…?”
“Remember us?” Kristell asked.
“Hiya Misty!” Chelsea greeted.
“Yo.” Dylan added.
“Misty!” her sisters cried.
“You guys! Hi, what brings you here?” Misty interrogated with a calm face.
“We heard you and Ash were going through some problems so we came to help.” May explained.
“I’m sorry but we’re not together anymore.”
“WHAT?!”
“But what about your kids?” Dylan asked wit impatience.
“They’re over at Pallet Town with their grandmother.”
“What do you mean we’re not together anymore?” a voice questioned.
“I was just leaving but I can’t be rude to some guests!” Misty snapped.
“Is it the pizza guy?”

Misty rolled her eyes while the others sweatdropped.

“That’s Ash alright…” Dylan observed.

The others nodded. A man with black, spiky hair came in the living room. He had his original clothes on-his black shirt covered with a blue jacket with white on the sides, including a hood, blue denim jeans, blue and white sneakers, and a red hat with white in the middle.

“Do you ever think about anything else besides food?!”
“I do not only think about food!”
“Uh…”
“Maybe you guys need to take a walk,” Lily suggested.
“Fine with me,” Ash stated as he walked out of the door.
“Fine with me too!” Misty yelled back as she walked the opposite direction of Ash.

The others stayed behind.

“Everybody know who they’re going tot talk to?”
“Yup!”
“Let’s go!”

“Ash, wait!” Brock cried as he caught up to him, panting.
“Hi guys.” Ash stated with sadness.
“Why did you forget?!” Dylan scolded.
“I know I messed up this time…besides, Misty doesn’t even want to listen to me.”
“That’s why we’re here.” Stacee cried. “Oh that’s right! We haven’t met! I’m Stacee!”
“Hi.”
“Did you try saying you’re sorry to Misty?” May asked.
“I tried. She wouldn’t listen to me. Besides, I want to be alone for a while. I’ll meet you all back at the cabin later.” Ash stated as he continued walking.

~*~*~*~

“I planned this trip for weeks and he didn’t even remember our anniversary,” Misty told the others as she kept on walking. “I thought for sure he’d knew but he kept on focusing more on food and his battles…”

The girls looked down as Misty continued to talk.

“So I got angry at him today and…this happened.”
“I’m sure that he’s sorry for not remembering.” Chelsea comforted.
“Now he remembers because I yelled at him.”
“Don’t worry, I’m sure everything will be just fine soon!” Kristell affirmed.

Misty sighed as the light wind slowly blew her hair.

“Why don’t you all go back to the cabin? I’ll pick up some items for all of you.” Misty spoke.
“But-”
“I’ll be okay.”

The five girls stared at each other but then stared at Misty. They nodded as Misty smiled a little bit.

“I’ll be back later!”

~*~*~*~

“Didn’t work out either?” Dylan questioned.
“Yeah, Misty said that she wants to be alone for a while.” Chelsea told.
“They’re like, really disappointed at each other and themselves.” Lily spoke.

Everyone nodded. Kristell then yawned.

“I’m so sleepy…”
“You should go to sleep then.” May suggested.
“Yeah, good night everyone.” Kristell affirmed. “I’m going back to the other cabin.”
“Do you want us to go with ya? There are some pervs I‘ve heard about…” Chelsea warned.
“I’ll be fine with my secret weapon. Good night.”
“Night.”

Kristell walked out of the door with her bag bouncing on her shoulder.

I hope Ash and Misty will be okay like they said they would…Kristell thought in her mind.

She continued to walk to her destination, the cabin. The water was now dark blue since night has come. The wind started to get windier by the second.

I better hurry up before things get worse!

Kristell started to run with her shoes stepping on the light sand carefully. Little by little, she looked up to the smoky sky where the clouds replaced the stars. She then felt a small drop on her left cheek. Kristell stopped and touched her cheek.

Rain!

Drops of water soon started to pour heavily on Kristell. She then kneeled down and took off her backpack that was on her back. There was an item she was searching for.

Where is it? Kristell thought to herself as her hand touched something. Here it is!

She took out a raincoat that was bright green with a hood. The young woman put it on herself, then replaced her bag and started to walk again.

Kristell then spotted a figure across the distance. She put her right hand over her forehead, trying to make out what it was.

Could it be? Kristell asked her thought to herself.

She then reached to her backpack. She looked up every couple of seconds. The person approached her as Kristell glared.

“Leave me alone!” Kristell screamed as she hit the person with her mallet.

The man had dizzy swirls and fell to the ground. Kristell then opened her eyes and gasped.

“Ash! I’m so sorry! I thought-”
“Who are you?”
“What do you mean who am I? I’m Kristell of course!”
“Where are we? What am I doing here?”

It just hit her, like lighting as her dark, brown eyes widened.

“What have I done…?!” Kristell asked herself. “Come on! We’re going back!”
“Is the sky falling?”

Kristell let out a sigh as she continued to drag Ash across the storm.

Great, everybody’s going to kill me…

~*~*~*~

“Do you think Kristell’s okay? There’s a storm out there.” Chelsea told as she looked out of the window.
“I’m sure she’s fine, sleeping already.” Dylan replied.
“Yeah, what am I so worried about?”

The door started to knock. Everyone was astonished to hear such a thing in the middle of a storm.

“I’ll get it,” Misty spoke as she got up from the couch and walked to the door. She grabbed the handle and opened it.

Everyone gasped.

“Kristell! Ash!”
“Hey, you’re pretty cute.” Ash stated as he pointed to Misty.
“Shut up.” Misty snapped. “Are you okay?”
“Why is it so dark?” Ash wondered.

Everyone sweatdropped.

“What’s with Ash? He sounds like he’s drunk.” Dylan affirmed.
“That idiot.” Misty added.
“What’s my name?”
“Don’t you go kidding around with me!” Misty scolded. “Snap out of it!”
“Your hair reminds me of carrots.”

POW!

“You know I hate carrots!” Misty yelled as she crossed her arms and headed upstairs. “Good night everyone. Sorry about him.”

Everyone nodded. Kristell looked unsure.

“What’s the matter Kristell?” Stacee questioned.
“We thought you were at the other cabin.” Chelsea remarked.
“Yeah, but…”
“What?”
“Ash has amnesia.”
“WHAT?!”
“I hit Ash with my mallet by accident, thinking he was a perv.”
“You’re, like, kidding right?” Daisy asked.

Kristell shook her head.

“Did you hit him that hard?” Tracey interrogated.
“It was raining, so I had no idea it was him…”
“What are you?” Ash asked out loud.
“I feel really stupid. I’m sorry guys. I guess I ruined everything.”
“I’m sure we can fix it.” Brock told.
“Don’t feel bad, I probably would have done the same thing.” Chelsea admitted.
“We’ll figure something out.” Stacee added as she turned to Ash.

Everyone sweatdropped as Ash started to randomly do the monkey dance.

“Do the monkey!” Ash shouted.
“O…okay,” everyone stated in accord.
“Why don’t we make a cake for Misty letting her know that Ash is sorry?” Dylan suggested.

The others brightened except Kristell, who sulked and left.

“That’s a great idea!” Brock stated. “I’ll get the recipe!”
“Like, wait a second!” Lily cried.
“Huh?”
“It’s too late to like, make a cake.” Violet affirmed.
“We can make it tomorrow!” Daisy told.
“Good point.” Tracey agreed.
“But we’ll need Misty out of here for a while to make the cake.” May uttered.
“We’ll take her shopping!” Lily cried with joy.
“Like, good idea Lily!” Violet replied. “I want to like, go!”
“Me too!” Daisy added.
“Then it’s settled! You can take Misty shopping!” Brock announced.
“Yay!” the three sisters squealed.

Everyone cheered except for poor Kristell, who blamed herself outside, sitting on the porch.

It’s all my fault! I’m such an idiot! Why do things always turn out like this when I’m involved?! Kristell asked herself in her thoughts. Oh well, at least the rain stopped so I can go back.

She got up from her place and started to walk back with disappointment on her mind.

~*~*~*~

Morning came as the sun shone brightly on Kristell’s eyes. She whined a bit before fluttering her eyes open. She got up from bed as she yawned. Kristell then sniffed the air.

“What’s that smell?” the young woman wondered as she quickly got dressed into her regular clothes. She left and headed downstairs. The wall was light yellow with a colorful, red carpet on the steps.

Kristell moved further to follow the pleasant aroma. She passed the living room and encountered the kitchen where everybody sat. The wall was a pale yellow with white cabinets. The hardwood floor shined a bright brown that anyone can find appealing. The colorless window was sparkling, showing that it must have been cleaned recently.

Brock was preparing pancakes as he wore his pink apron. He made another pancake flip as it gracefully landed on the frying pan. The others sat down at a round, light brown table with white daisies at the center inside a white vase. Everyone had a knife and a fork in their hands.

“You’re awake!” Stacee cried.
“Good morning, K-Chan!” everyone greeted.
“Morning,” Kristell replied quietly.
“You’re just in time for breakfast.” Dylan told.
“Pancakes!” May announced.
“Want some?” Tracey questioned.
“No thanks.”
“But you love pancakes!” Chelsea reminded.
“I know, but I’m not hungry. Thanks anyway.” Kristell rejected and walked away.
“I’ve never seen her turn down pancakes. She’s always the first to eat them,” Chelsea spoke.
“She must still be down,” Dylan observed.
“Poor K-Chan.” May stated.
“But this isn’t like her. She never sulks like this.” Chelsea told.
“Yeah but I would feel the same way if I did that to Ash or Misty. She loves Pokeshipping like the rest of us do but she really feels bad.” Stacee explained.
“That makes sense.” Tracey agreed.
“I should have known that all of you would be worried about me.” Kristell observed.
“AAAHHH!”
“K-Chan! We thought you left!” May cried.
“I was just in the other room…and, I was thinking.”
“Huh?”
“I guess I should stop sulking and just fix things instead of moping around. So I’ll do whatever it takes to get them back together!”
“That’s the spirit!” Brock encouraged.
“K-Chan!” Chelsea, May, and Stacee announced together as they ran up to her and hugged her.

Kristell happily smiled as she hugged her friends back.

“Now let’s get to that plan…right after I eat!” Kristell said excitedly as she sat down. “Bring ‘em on!”

Brock handed her a plate of three pancakes with syrup and butter on top. There was also a glass of milk next to her. Kristell put her hands together with joyfulness, picked up her fork and knife, and started to eat.

“Mmm! This is so good!”

Everyone smiled at her as she continued to devour her breakfast.

INTERMISSION: Grab some ice cream or something. XD I had to make this into two posts. ^^;
 

~Mist~

revolutionary~
Intermission is now over. Please continue to read XD

~*~*~*~

Everyone sat in the living room which was a sea green color for the wall. The couches were soft green with brown side tables next to each. An enormous flat-screen TV was also in front of the couches a small distance away.

“So, what did you guys think of?” Kristell asked.
“Misty and her sisters are out shopping for the entire day so we can get to work with our cake!” May squealed.
“Cake?”
“D-Chan’s idea. We’re going to make two cakes, one for Ash and one for Misty saying Happy Anniversary.” Chelsea explained. “Tracey and Stacee are taking care of Ash so don’t worry about a thing!”
“We have all of the ingredients so we can start right away!” Brock stated.
“Okay then, let’s get started.” Kristell announced.

Everyone headed for the kitchen, ready to prepare a cake. They were all with their white chef hats and apron, except for Brock who wore his pink apron as usual, when it came to kitchen duties.

“Okay, I’m going to need flour, lots of flour.”
“Right!”

“How many eggs?”
“Twelve.”

“We need all of those canned milk too!”
“I’m on it!”

“Margarine!”
“Right here.”

“Don’t forget the vanilla flavoring!”
“I’m going to taste it!”
“But-!”

Dylan tasted the vanilla flavoring with one of his fingers and made a face. Everyone sweatdropped.

“Yuck!”
“You’re not supposed to taste it until it’s with the rest of the ingredients,” Chelsea remarked.
“Now they tell me.”

“Let’s see, sugar, lots and lots of sugar!” Kristell said to herself as she poured the entire pot of sugar into the cake mix.

After forty-five minutes, the two cakes were on the table, cooling down. Everyone was too busy taking a nap in the living room. Just then, a figure flashed out of its pokeball. It was the shape of a blue dragon.

Mmm, that smells good! Salamence told himself in his mind.

The dragon then stepped into the kitchen, smelling the sweet aroma. It approached the table, where the smell was coming from. The cakes stood delicately with great peace on the table. The wind blew them lightly since they needed to cool down. The two cakes were both a golden brown hue with some filling spelling out the words, ‘Happy Anniversary!’

What are these symbols? I wish I knew what they said. Anyway, it must be for me! I might as well give it a try!

He tasted it once and suddenly, his eyes turned into hearts. He started to devour both of the cakes with hearty enjoyment.

Yum, yum, yum!

~*~*~*~

“Dylan, wake up!” a voice cried.
“Wake up!”
“Huh…?” Dylan asked as he rubbed his eyes. “What is it? I was having such a good dream about-”
“You can talk about your dream some other time but we’ve got a problem!” Kristell interrupted.
“Take a look at the kitchen,” May told as she walked to the doorway.
“Or should I say the cakes…” Chelsea corrected.
“They had so little time to live!” Brock wailed.
“Huh?” Dylan questioned as he approached the kitchen. “AAAHHH!”

There sat his dragon, Salamence, on the floor licking the last bits of the cakes.

“It wasn’t for me…?”

WHAM!

“You idiot! Those cakes weren’t for you, it was for Ash and Misty!” Dylan snapped. “Come back here and clean this up!!”

“Make me! Is there more by the way? It was really good. Nice and salty!”

“Salty…?” everyone questioned with confusion.
“Huh? But I could have sworn I put sugar…” Kristell replied to herself.

Her eyes then widened and she gasped. She walked over to one of the kitchen cabinets and got out the pot.

“It says sugar right here!” Kristell stated.
“Wait a minute,” Brock uttered as he tried the white sprinkles that were in the pot. His face turned into disgust. “This isn’t sugar, it’s salt!”
“Wha…?!”

“No wonder it tasted so good!” the dragon said excitedly.

Its’ stomach starting growling with pain.

“I feel…sick…”

“Poor Salamence,” May stated.
“Now I’m actually glad you ate it,” Dylan muttered.
“Did you say something Dylan?” May questioned.
“Urk! Nothing!”

“Ooooh.”

“Why me?!” Kristell asked herself with disappointment.
“It’s okay, look at the bright side!” Chelsea started.
“What bright side?”
“At least Ash and Misty didn’t get sick!”

Kristell huffed a sigh.

~*~*~*~

“Like, what?!” the there sisters exclaimed.
“Your pokemon is like, sick from the two cakes that you all like, made?” Lily questioned.
“Yeah…”

Kristell put her right hand behind her head and laughed nervously.

“Anyway, we should think of something else since that didn’t work out.” Kristell reminded.
“Misty doesn’t know about Ash getting amnesia so how will we explain it to her?” Chelsea asked.
“What’s a misty? Is it a flower?” Ash densely asked.

Dylan rolled his eyes. “Can I please knock him out so he can get his memory back?!”
“It’s worth a try,” Tracey answered.
“Go for it!” Stacee encouraged.

Dylan approached Ash as he tightened his fist and smiled.

“Now stay still…”

WHACK!



Ash burst out laughing. Everyone put a face of amazement and were stupefied.

“Do it again!”
“Guess it didn’t work,” May stated.
“Idiot,” Dylan muttered.
“We have to remind him of Misty and his kids!” Stacee cried.
“How are you going to do that?” Brock interrogated.
“By showing him our classic pictures of Pokeshipping!”
“Great idea! Leave it to me!” Kristell squealed as she walked up to Ash. She held a picture of two people dancing with their kimonos. “This was when you and Misty were both dancing.”
“Who’s that guy? He looks like an idiot.” Ash told while pointing.

The others smirked as Kristell made a face at the clueless person. She then sighed, trying to calm herself. She held another picture.

“This is Pikachu, your first pokemon.”
“It looks like a rat!”
“No duh.” Dylan muttered.
“You received him from Professor Oak,” Kristell added.
“Oak, isn’t that a tree? So a tree gave him to me?”

Chelsea, Stacee, and May almost burst out laughing but covered their mouths. The others sweatdropped. Kristell smacked her face to her forehead and shook her head.

“Okay…this is a picture of all the badges you’ve got from every single league.” Kristell told while handing a picture of colorful badges in his hands.
“They’re shiny. Can you get me more so I can eat them?”

Kristell made a frightful face, shocking Ash.

“Calm down, keep trying.”
“Here’s a picture of you. Your name is Ash Ketchum.”
“Ash Ketchup?”
“Ketchum!”
“Ash Ketchum,” Ash told himself.
“That’s right, say it again.”
“Ash Ketchum, Ash Ketchum, Ash Ketchum.” Ash repeated.
“What’s your name again?”
“Ash Ketchum!”
“You did it Kristell!” May exclaimed.
“You helped him remember what was name was!” Stacee added.
“Yeah, I guess I did!” Kristell agreed proudly. “This is a picture of your family! Misty, Evelyn, Robert, and Nami.” Kristell explained. “You’re here too.”
“I have a family?”
“Yes, a family!”
“Really?”
“Really. Now, repeat the names of your family members again…” Kristell stated slowly.
“Uh…”
“Why don’t we just take him to a hospital already?!” Dylan questioned with impatience.
“He does have a point. It’ll take us forever to teach him everything.” Stacee agreed.
“Guess so.” Kristell understood.
“We better get going before Misty finds out,” Tracey told.

~*~*~*~

“Doctor Proctor! Can you please help us?” May questioned.
“Ah, what lovely young ladies!” the doctor exclaimed. “May I ask your names?”

The women sweatdropped as Dylan, Tracey, and Brock slapped their foreheads with annoyance.

“Oh brother!”
“Listen you, they’re not here for you to flirt with, we’re here to help us cure him!” Dylan snapped.
“Right, understood. Who’s the patient?”
“Right here sir.” Kristell replied as she held Ash with her right hand.
“His name is Ash Ketchum.” Chelsea told.
“Ah, I remember he was with the young lady with red hair…she was incredible, yes she was…” Doctor Proctor daydreamed.

SLAM!

“Stop it!” Dylan yelled.
“Sorry!”

He’s lucky that Ash has amnesia or else who knows what could have happened? Chelsea wondered in her thoughts.

“Anyway…he has amnesia.” Stacee added.
“So, can you help him?” May finished.
“Hmm…I’ll see what I can do.” the doctor told. “Now, we’re going to do a couple of x-rays to see the spot that has been injured so everyone will have to step out of the room except Ash so he can change into a special robe for x-rays.”
“A-B-C-D-E-F-G…H-I-J-K-.” Ash sang as Dylan shut his mouth.
“Please, not now.”
“His head must have been affected greatly by whatever hit him.” Doctor Proctor examined.

Kristell sighed with disappointment and looked down to her yellow shoes. The doctor seemed to have a question mark over his head.

“Was it something I said?”
“She accidentally hit him with a mallet,” Brock whispered.
“A mallet? No wonder he practically forgot everything!”
“Can we go now?” Stacee questioned.
“Of course!” the doctor stated with glee as everyone left. “Now, I’ll have to go to another room to get the machine started so it’ll take a couple of minutes, okay?”

Everyone nodded as the doctor strolled down the hall, going into another room. They all sat in the waiting room. There were many blue seats with a few TVs, showing a Spanish novella.

“Por favor! No me dejes, te lo suplico!”
“Lo siento, pero tengo que hacar esto para nuestro paiz.”
“Te puedes morir!”
“Yo se, pero lo hago tambien para nuestro amor!”
“Si, tienes razon. Por favor, tenga cuidado!”
“Por supresto mi tesoro!”
“O Antonio!”
“Flor, simpre vas a estar conmigo! Nuestro amor nunca var a terminar!”
“Si, besame una vez mas!”
“Tu eres mi mundo!”
“O Antonio!”

“Por favor, no te olvides de mi!”
“Te lo prometo!”
“Adios!”
“No digas adios, di hasta luego!”

“Isn’t there a TV not showing any Spanish novellas?!” Dylan shouted. “Where’s the sports channels anyway?”
“That was beautiful!” Brock cried as he wiped away a tear.
“It sure was! It was so romantic!” Kristell added with joy.
“That was really cute but I feel bad for her.” Chelsea observed.
“Yeah, wasn’t that great Tracey?” Stacee questioned.
“I liked it.”
“I give up.”
“Hello, everyone!” a voice called.
“Doctor!”
“How’s Ash?” the women asked.
“He’s fine. The scans didn’t show any injuries according to the pictures.” he replied as he held a folder in his hands.
“Wha…?”
“I still can’t seem to find anything wrong with him, except for the fact that he completely forgot everything.”
“This is terrible.” Kristell stated with concern.
“If Misty found out about this, I think she would flip out.” Tracey affirmed.
“Before I find out what?” a voice interrogated.

Everybody gasped at the young woman with red hair, putting an angered face.

“Misty!”
“Do you mind telling me what’s going on here?”
“Misty! My, do you look astounding! How about we go out right after I assist you?” Doctor Proctor questioned romantically.
“I’m married.” she stated coldly.
“You did? That’s wonderful to hear…I guess.” he sulked. “She’s married...”
“I married that idiot!” Misty yelled as she pointed to Ash.
“You married Ash?”
“You bet I did but now I would like to know what’s going on here.”

She eyed Ash carefully as she noticed his strange behavior.

“What’s with Ash?”

Kristell gulped.

“Uh, I accidentally hit him with my mallet during the rainstorm we had…” Kristell mumbled.
“What…?”
“I didn’t mean to. I thought he was a pervert since I couldn’t see well in the rain!” Kristell explained. “So, he got amnesia. I’m sorry to have caused all of this.” she stated as she looked down.

Misty then smiled and started to chuckle. Everyone had question marks on their heads.

“Ha ha! Don’t worry about it Kristell!” Misty announced with a big smile on her face.
“Huh? Now I’m confused. Why are you…smiling?”
“Ash often gets this all the time whenever I smack him with my mallet! It’s no problem at all!”
“Wha…?”
“So this is…normal?” the doctor questioned with confusion.
“Sure is and I know exactly how to cure this!” Misty uttered as she winked. She reached into her bag where she held a mallet.
“You aren’t going to hit him with that, are you?” Tracey questioned.
“That’s the plan.” Misty responded as she approached Ash’s head.

Ash sniffed her.

“You smell pretty.”
“Now you stay still…”

WHAM! THUD.

“Don’t worry about him, he’ll be okay.” Misty told everyone while they were stupefied.
“Uh…”

~*~*~*~

“Huh? What…happened?”
“Glad to see you up and running at last.” Misty observed.
“What’s that supposed to mean?!”
“He’s back everyone.”
“Huh???”
“What are we doing here?” Ash wondered.
“You fell off a tree.” Misty answered.
“I did?”
“You were trying to rescue a cat.”
“I was? I don’t even remember that…oh well!”
“Ash, don’t you have anything to say to me…?” Misty interrogated sweetly.
“Oh yeah! Happy Anniversary! I’m sorry I forgot before so will you forgive me?”
“Sure.” Misty answered as she gave Ash a kiss.
“Aw!” the women cooed.
“Women,” Dylan muttered.
“Can we eat now?” Ash asked.
“Do you ever think of anything else besides food?!” Misty snapped.
“But I’m hungry!”
“Stop whining and go get changed! We’re all going to the beach!”
“Fine.” Ash stated as he headed upstairs.

~*~*~*~

Everyone sat on a long and wide picnic table with their bathing suits on. Misty wore her two piece bathing suit, the top a yellow bikini top and her yellow boy shorts that matched. Ash wore his blue shorts, Brock wore his brown shorts, Tracey with his green ones.

Kristell was in her red bikini top along with her red boy shorts. Chelsea was in her striped blue-green bikini top along with her boy-shorts, the same color of her top. Dylan was in his blue-black trunk shorts that had a Hawaiian flower print on it. He also had with blue cap as usual. Stacee had her blue bikini top with purple steaks decorating it and May had her pink bikini top and bottom, happy.

Max was there too, with his dark green shorts. Violet, Lily, and Daisy were with their light blue bikinis. Robert had his red shorts with him, Evelyn with her one piece white bathing suit while young Nami was in her a bathing suit like Evelyn except it was yellow with pink flowers around.

“Three cheers to Ash and Misty’s anniversary!”
“Hip, hip, hooray! Hip, hip, hooray! Hip, hip, hooray!”

Everyone started to devour the cake right away that the Pokeshippers had prepared.

“We shouldn’t eat alone! Let’s make our pokemon have some fun too!” Kristell cried.
“Great idea K-Chan!” Chelsea agreed.

After a minute, there were several pokemon on the beach, playing with one another, eating, or napping. The children after eating, played with the pokemon. Ash coached his pokemon, training them for their exercise.

“Now, what have we learned…?” Dylan questioned.

“Not to eat any more of your cakes.” Salamence answered.

“Exactly.”
“Dylan, would you like to go take a walk with me?” May asked while blushing a bit.
“I uh!” Dylan gulped as he stared at his friends.

They gave him a thumbs up.

“Sure.” Dylan stated as he grabbed May’s hand. They walked towards the water together and started to stroll by the ocean.

“Tracey! My love! We haven’t gotten to spend any time together! Why don’t we spend some time now?” Stacee asked as she gleamed at Tracey who sweatdropped. “Please???”
“Of course. Maybe I could sketch a pokemon.”
“And I can sketch with you!” Stacee said with joy.

Tracey blushed. “That works too.”
“Really? Yay!” Stacee cried. “You’re the greatest!”

Tracey smiled sweetly. “Then let’s go look for some pokemon!”
“All right!” Stacee agreed. “We’ll be back!”
“Have fun!” Kristell and Chelsea told.

Kristell then turned to Misty.

“Uh, Misty. Can I ask you something?” Kristell asked.
“What is it?”
“How come you told Ash that he fell off a tree?”
“Oh, that. He doesn’t even know that he gets amnesia so I leave it that way.” Misty replied with a wink.

The Pokeshippers sweatdropped.

“It works every time!” Misty exclaimed with joy. ‘Hey Ash!”
“Huh?”
“I didn’t see an anniversary present this year! Where is it?!”
“Uh oh…” Tracey uttered.
“Uh…ta da! This is your present!” Ash replied with a sweatdrop.
“I expected better than this!”
“What?!”

They continued to argue while everybody else sweatdropped.

“At least Ash got his memory back.” Kristell observed.
“Yup,” Brock answered.
“I love it when they argue over things like this!” Chelsea gleamed.
“That’s why we love Pokeshipping!”

“Oh Ash…!” Misty cooed. “Look what I’ve got…!”
“Yikes! Get away from me! Help me!” Ash cried as he ran.
“Come back here!” Misty yelled as she continued to chase him with her red mallet.

The Pokeshippers stayed behind, eating the last of the cakes.

“Well, everything’s back to normal.” Chelsea spoke.
“Yup,” everybody else replied with agreement.

WHAM!

“Uh oh.”
“Again?”
“Yup, I’ll get his memory back…in a little while,” Misty spoke as she winked.
“Misty, can you teach us a few lessons about your mallet?” Kristell questioned.
“We’d really like to know the secrets of your award winning mallet!” Chelsea added.
“Sure but we’re going to need a victim…” Misty said while staring at Brock.
“Not me!” Brock wailed.
“Rule number one! Make your victim afraid, very afraid!” Misty uttered as Brock started to run.
“Stop it!”
“Come back Brock!” Chelsea cried.
“We need to hit you!” Kristell added.

Misty, Chelsea, and Kristell chased the poor man as he waved his arms around.

“No, please! Don’t do it!”

WHAM!

“Yay! I got him!” Chelsea squealed as she jumped for joy.
“Nice hit!” Kristell complimented.
“That was fun!” Chelsea cried.
“Great job! Now let’s go get Ash!” Misty said.
“All right!”

Misty’s sisters sweatdropped along with the children and Max.

“They’re all crazy.” Max observed.
“They’re Pokeshippers.” Evelyn added.
“The ultimate obsession.” Robert told.

Everybody then laughed, smiling at each other with joy as another day would come, another day will go. Their fun always lasted forever with Pokeshipping.

~~~

Yay! It's done, at last! XD Well, I'd like to thank all of the following:

Hoshiko
Pokeplayer984
DragonMaster13
Stacee


Thank you all for all of the help you all gave me! A big thank you to you all! ^^

And of course, here's the translation to the Spanish novella that everyone was watching earlier at the hospital XD

"Please, don't leave me! I'm begging you!"
"I'm sorry, but I have to do this for our country."
"You could die!"
"I know, but I'm also doing this for our love!"
"Yes, you're right. But please be careful!"
"Of course, my treasure!"
"Oh, Antonio!"
"Flor, you'll always be with me! Our love will never end!"
"Yes, kiss me one more time!"
"You are my everything."
"Oh Antonio!"

"Please, don't forget about me!"
"I promise!"
"Goodbye!"
"Don't say goodbye, say so long!"

Well, there you have it. XD Anyway, please review and don't forget to rate! ^^
 

Cap D. Blue

ボルトチェンジ
*falls off chair from laughing* K-Chan, once again, we did it! ^^

I was in a bad mood, but once I got your PM, I started shaking! XD Still am, but this is hilarious! XD

I'm gonna read it again, because it seems so short! ^^;
 

EXP:282

Is Back!!! For now.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA er
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA


That was some seriously funny stuff.


“Tracey! My love! We haven’t gotten to spend any time together! Why don’t we spend some time now?” Stacee asked as she gleamed at Tracey who sweatdropped. “Please???”
“Of course. Maybe I could sketch a pokemon.”
“And I can sketch with you!” Stacee said with joy.

Tracey blushed. “That works too.”
“Really? Yay!” Stacee cried. “You’re the greatest!”

Tracey smiled sweetly. “Then let’s go look for some pokemon!”
“All right!” Stacee agreed. “We’ll be back!”

I'd probably do that too! XD

I say, its goodio! 9/10! (the same rating i got for making the pudding today) XD
 
Wow! One of the few 50,000+ charcters one-shots out there! :)

This was well worth the wait as it was both long and funny. ^_^ And I thought Ash couldn't get even more dense. :D

I especially found this part funny...

“This is Pikachu, your first pokemon.”
“It looks like a rat!”
“No duh.” Dylan muttered.
“You received him from Professor Oak,” Kristell added.
“Oak, isn’t that a tree? So a tree gave him to me?”

XD. Oh Ash! For some odd reason, a dense Ash just doesn't work in my fics. -_-

Great job! You espcially did well with my charcter. It would indeed be like me to get the top Pokeshippers on the job and have a hard time explaining. ^_^

If you come up with a third one, expect me to read it. :)

See ya later.

Oh, and Stacee, how's that download I sent you months ago going?
 
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Guest
*Standing Ovation* That. Was. Infinityx 100 CUTENESS! :D I was laughing at that part where Ash got amnesia and even more to that part when Misty revealed that she's the one who usually causes it with her red mallet. No wonder they make-up every so often. Ash forgets the quarrels! XD But..is it just me or is Ash more dense when he gets amnesia?? o_O Just a thought.... SCARY THOUGHT! Ironic thing is..what if the contradicting happens? What if he gets smart everytime he gets amnesia..XD Sorry..spur of the moment..since I'm usually such a random girl.. Anyway..back to the review..

Salamence and Altra was the cutest pair of dragons I've ever seen! XD!

Something has been bugging me...
Kristell smiled as she stared into space, daydreaming at the cerulean sky.

“Kristell?”

Chelsea waved her hand in front of her friend.

“Hello in there! Kristell! Earth to Kristell, this is Chelsea, over.”

“Is she daydreaming?”

“I guess so. I wonder what she’s daydreaming about…”

“Beats me.”

“Hello! Kristell!”
“Huh? What?” Kristell asked with confusion.
“Finally! We were starting to get worried about you!”
“Oh sorry.” Kristell apologized as she sweatdropped.

“What were you daydreaming about?”

“Pokeshipping,” Kristell answered in a zombie voice.

Chelsea and Altra sweatdropped.

“I thought you were daydreaming over a guy!” Chelsea stated.
“Huh?” Kristell asked.
“Stop playing you tricky thing, now tell me!”
“But I was not!” Kristell demanded.
“I know that look on your face! You give that look to Drew now you must have dreaming about some guy!”
“But I was thinking about Pokeshipping!”
“Start talking.”
“Okay, I was thinking about my ideal guy. Are you happy now?!”
“No, not yet. Tell me more.”

“Are you both done?”

“Well, he‘s got to be…smart, handsome, dreamy, caring, romantic…” Kristell told as she blushed.
“Wow, he sounds hot, like Drew!” Chelsea mentioned. “But really, who’s the guy?”
“Nah, his name’s not important.”
“Tell me, K-Chan! Please, I’m begging you!”
“All I can say is that we met…a long time ago. We haven’t talked in a very long time,” Kristell admitted.
“About how long ago are you saying?”
“Six and counting.”
“I’m sorry.”
“It’s okay, I got over him. I’ve got more important things to think about.” Kristell stated as she turned around, facing a different view.

Poor Kristell. Love really must get to her, Chelsea thought.

This particular moment. Kristell, daydreaming about who-knows-what or who-knows-who(snickers XD) should have come to unravel itself, at a particular point, as the storyline unfolded., IMO, anyway. By interjecting this moment with one of the main characters, it should have been responded by the plot. Besides, it seems that this problem really mattered to Kristell and it'll only be fair if ever it was reprocated, in a way. Err..do you see what I mean? XD I'm confused, myself..I'm not very good at expressing my views anyway..^_^'

WAIT...does this leave another door for a third installment? XD (a random thought again!) And besides..what ever happened to Dylan and May's blossoming love affair? *Is curious once again* But, I'm sure you made DM13-kun a very ecstastic boy once again! :D Yup..I could picture him this moment, with light and feathery butterflies zooming across him..smiling every so often, chuckling about, dreaming of his sweet May.. :D

AND ON TO QUOTING! (Sorry, another Random me XD!)


Brr! It's cold!" Kristell shivered.
"Yeah, I'm freezing!"
"Sisses." I laughed.
"What did you just say?" Kristell questioned as she pulled his ear.
"OUCH! Sorry. I've been building a resistance to cold since I was ten!" I explained. "This is nothing!"

The two girls put up a blank face.

"What?"
“Nothing.” Chelsea answered.
"C'mon in!....Wait....is that....no, it can't....guys...is that...."
"Huh?" Kristell questioned.
"What?"
"Over there!" he pointed. "That woman with the brown hair.”
"It's...May!"
"I knew it by the look on your face."
“MAY!!!”

I was a bit confused with this part.. Was it Chelsea being implied as "I"? If so, maybe, "I" should be Chelsea so it would be consistent. And this isn't a ist person POV story, is it? Sorry...jiust pointing this one out..XD
“It works every time!” Misty exclaimed with joy. ‘Hey Ash!”
“Huh?”
“I didn’t see an anniversary present this year! Where is it?!”
“Uh oh…” Tracey uttered.
“Uh…ta da! This is your present!” Ash replied with a sweatdrop.
“I expected better than this!”
“What?!”

I wonder what Ash's present to Misty was? I hope you described whatever his gift was..just add a little detail to this one, I think...

ALL and all..I just want to say that MM89-chan, you have a knack in writing a good dose of "friendship factor" in your fic. XD Err..I hope you know what I mean.. I'm sure that it mirrors your relationship with your amigas and amigos. XD

*claps once again"
 

Cap D. Blue

ボルトチェンジ
WAIT...does this leave another door for a third installment? XD (a random thought again!) And besides..what ever happened to Dylan and May's blossoming love affair? *Is curious once again* But, I'm sure you made DM13-kun a very ecstastic boy once again! :D Yup..I could picture him this moment, with light and feathery butterflies zooming across him..smiling every so often, chuckling about, dreaming of his sweet May.. :D
*sweatdrops* Er...e-heh...Stop spying on me! >_>;

Anyways, I hope we can get a third part up and going, with some more participation from me & Hoshiko. ^^
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
MistyMix89 said:
Kristell waved at the girl. Dylan had hearts floating around him while Kristell and Chelsea’s eyes narrowed. They both snickered to each other. Kristell and Chelsea pinched the hearts away with annoyance. Dylan then looked left and right for the hearts.

“Where’s my hearts? My love mood is gone!”
>,<

Could not stop laughing at this. It's like he broke through the fifth wall of anime; noticing the sweatdrops/depression lines/tic marks/etc. exist. Like the lightbulb gags pulled in comics. ^^

A hilarious sequel to the hilarious original. I very much enjoyed the story.

Also...*takes mallet* *thwacks self* I am so stupid sometimes...nevermind what about.
 

Chelc

Well-Known Member
XDDDDDDDDDD!

I seriously LOVED this! It kept me occupied for like an hour! XD! Once again, a job well done! I especially liked the funny things Ash said like about Misty's hair reminding him of carrot, and do the monkey XD Plus you thinking he was a perv and hitting him...LOL. I also loved Misty's Mallet Secrets, heh. ^^ 10/10! :D
 

~Mist~

revolutionary~
DragonMaster13 said:
*falls off chair from laughing* K-Chan, once again, we did it! ^^

I was in a bad mood, but once I got your PM, I started shaking! XD Still am, but this is hilarious! XD

I'm gonna read it again, because it seems so short! ^^;

Yay! XD It was 30 pages...evem longer than the first one! XD I'm glad that bad mood shaked off. ^^ That's what comedy is for. ^^

Stacee said:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA er
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA


That was some seriously funny stuff.



“Tracey! My love! We haven’t gotten to spend any time together! Why don’t we spend some time now?” Stacee asked as she gleamed at Tracey who sweatdropped. “Please???”
“Of course. Maybe I could sketch a pokemon.”
“And I can sketch with you!” Stacee said with joy.

Tracey blushed. “That works too.”
“Really? Yay!” Stacee cried. “You’re the greatest!”

Tracey smiled sweetly. “Then let’s go look for some pokemon!”
“All right!” Stacee agreed. “We’ll be back!”

I'd probably do that too! XD

I say, its goodio! 9/10! (the same rating i got for making the pudding today) XD

Yay! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much! ^^ Thankies again! ^^

pokeplayer984 said:
Wow! One of the few 50,000+ charcters one-shots out there!

This was well worth the wait as it was both long and funny. ^_^ And I thought Ash couldn't get even more dense.

I especially found this part funny...

“This is Pikachu, your first pokemon.”
“It looks like a rat!”
“No duh.” Dylan muttered.
“You received him from Professor Oak,” Kristell added.
“Oak, isn’t that a tree? So a tree gave him to me?”

XD. Oh Ash! For some odd reason, a dense Ash just doesn't work in my fics. -_-

Great job! You espcially did well with my charcter. It would indeed be like me to get the top Pokeshippers on the job and have a hard time explaining. ^_^

If you come up with a third one, expect me to read it.

See ya later.

Oh, and Stacee, how's that download I sent you months ago going?

I'm so happy that you found it so amusing! XD

Maybe there could be a third one. ^^ Since I now have school to deal with, it'll be a little more harder for me to make another one-shot, until...hm...X-mas Vacation.

(I'm also working on TAOY 2: The Sequel, which I'll most likely make Ch. 4 on this weekend so look forward to that! XD)

I guess I can people dense since I know so many people who are just as dense as Ash, including myself at times. Thankies so much for reviewing! ^^

shtupnlstn said:
*Standing Ovation* That. Was. Infinityx 100 CUTENESS! I was laughing at that part where Ash got amnesia and even more to that part when Misty revealed that she's the one who usually causes it with her red mallet. No wonder they make-up every so often. Ash forgets the quarrels! XD But..is it just me or is Ash more dense when he gets amnesia?? o_O Just a thought.... SCARY THOUGHT! Ironic thing is..what if the contradicting happens? What if he gets smart everytime he gets amnesia..XD Sorry..spur of the moment..since I'm usually such a random girl.. Anyway..back to the review..

Salamence and Altra was the cutest pair of dragons I've ever seen! XD!

Something has been bugging me...

Kristell smiled as she stared into space, daydreaming at the cerulean sky.

“Kristell?”

Chelsea waved her hand in front of her friend.

“Hello in there! Kristell! Earth to Kristell, this is Chelsea, over.”

“Is she daydreaming?”

“I guess so. I wonder what she’s daydreaming about…”

“Beats me.”

“Hello! Kristell!”
“Huh? What?” Kristell asked with confusion.
“Finally! We were starting to get worried about you!”
“Oh sorry.” Kristell apologized as she sweatdropped.

“What were you daydreaming about?”

“Pokeshipping,” Kristell answered in a zombie voice.

Chelsea and Altra sweatdropped.

“I thought you were daydreaming over a guy!” Chelsea stated.
“Huh?” Kristell asked.
“Stop playing you tricky thing, now tell me!”
“But I was not!” Kristell demanded.
“I know that look on your face! You give that look to Drew now you must have dreaming about some guy!”
“But I was thinking about Pokeshipping!”
“Start talking.”
“Okay, I was thinking about my ideal guy. Are you happy now?!”
“No, not yet. Tell me more.”

“Are you both done?”

“Well, he‘s got to be…smart, handsome, dreamy, caring, romantic…” Kristell told as she blushed.
“Wow, he sounds hot, like Drew!” Chelsea mentioned. “But really, who’s the guy?”
“Nah, his name’s not important.”
“Tell me, K-Chan! Please, I’m begging you!”
“All I can say is that we met…a long time ago. We haven’t talked in a very long time,” Kristell admitted.
“About how long ago are you saying?”
“Six and counting.”
“I’m sorry.”
“It’s okay, I got over him. I’ve got more important things to think about.” Kristell stated as she turned around, facing a different view.

Poor Kristell. Love really must get to her, Chelsea thought.

This particular moment. Kristell, daydreaming about who-knows-what or who-knows-who(snickers XD) should have come to unravel itself, at a particular point, as the storyline unfolded., IMO, anyway. By interjecting this moment with one of the main characters, it should have been responded by the plot. Besides, it seems that this problem really mattered to Kristell and it'll only be fair if ever it was reprocated, in a way. Err..do you see what I mean? XD I'm confused, myself..I'm not very good at expressing my views anyway..^_^'

WAIT...does this leave another door for a third installment? XD (a random thought again!) And besides..what ever happened to Dylan and May's blossoming love affair? *Is curious once again* But, I'm sure you made DM13-kun a very ecstastic boy once again! Yup..I could picture him this moment, with light and feathery butterflies zooming across him..smiling every so often, chuckling about, dreaming of his sweet May..

AND ON TO QUOTING! (Sorry, another Random me XD!)

Brr! It's cold!" Kristell shivered.
"Yeah, I'm freezing!"
"Sisses." I laughed.
"What did you just say?" Kristell questioned as she pulled his ear.
"OUCH! Sorry. I've been building a resistance to cold since I was ten!" I explained. "This is nothing!"

The two girls put up a blank face.

"What?"
“Nothing.” Chelsea answered.
"C'mon in!....Wait....is that....no, it can't....guys...is that...."
"Huh?" Kristell questioned.
"What?"
"Over there!" he pointed. "That woman with the brown hair.”
"It's...May!"
"I knew it by the look on your face."
“MAY!!!”

I was a bit confused with this part.. Was it Chelsea being implied as "I"? If so, maybe, "I" should be Chelsea so it would be consistent. And this isn't a ist person POV story, is it? Sorry...jiust pointing this one out..XD

“It works every time!” Misty exclaimed with joy. ‘Hey Ash!”
“Huh?”
“I didn’t see an anniversary present this year! Where is it?!”
“Uh oh…” Tracey uttered.
“Uh…ta da! This is your present!” Ash replied with a sweatdrop.
“I expected better than this!”
“What?!”

I wonder what Ash's present to Misty was? I hope you described whatever his gift was..just add a little detail to this one, I think...

ALL and all..I just want to say that MM89-chan, you have a knack in writing a good dose of "friendship factor" in your fic. XD Err..I hope you know what I mean.. I'm sure that it mirrors your relationship with your amigas and amigos. XD

*claps once again"

Oh, thank you so much for reviewing! :D I should have those mistakes. I'll correct those. ^^; Sorry about that.

The me part you were talking about...ah, yes! Well, this goes into a completely different thing. Oooh, I should have gotten more into that topic. ^^; Maybe I should include that for a new fic but basically she was mentioning what she likes in a guy XD But...*laughs nervously* I mean, there is guy she once knew and she liked him but things didn't turn out like she said. That reminds me...maybe I should make a tiny fic about that. ^^; I don't know what to think for fics since I have so many ideas in that head of mine! XD I'm so sorry if I brought that confusion up!

gladdecease said:
Kristell waved at the girl. Dylan had hearts floating around him while Kristell and Chelsea’s eyes narrowed. They both snickered to each other. Kristell and Chelsea pinched the hearts away with annoyance. Dylan then looked left and right for the hearts.

“Where’s my hearts? My love mood is gone!”

>,<

Could not stop laughing at this. It's like he broke through the fifth wall of anime; noticing the sweatdrops/depression lines/tic marks/etc. exist. Like the lightbulb gags pulled in comics. ^^

A hilarious sequel to the hilarious original. I very much enjoyed the story.

Also...*takes mallet* *thwacks self* I am so stupid sometimes...nevermind what about.

All of these reviews are making me happier by the minute! ^o^ I loved that quote too. XD Yup, I would have imagined this in anime version so that's where the sweatdrops, etc come from. ^^ Thankies so much for reviewing! :D

Hoshiko said:
XDDDDDDDDDD!

I seriously LOVED this! It kept me occupied for like an hour! XD! Once again, a job well done! I especially liked the funny things Ash said like about Misty's hair reminding him of carrot, and do the monkey XD Plus you thinking he was a perv and hitting him...LOL. I also loved Misty's Mallet Secrets, heh. ^^ 10/10!

Yay! XD I couldn't resist but to make Ash randomly dance the monkey and the A-B-C song! XD I am oh, so happy that you loved it. ^^ Thankies H-Chan! ^___^
 
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Guest
Oh, thank you so much for reviewing! I should have those mistakes. I'll correct those. ^^; Sorry about that.

The me part you were talking about...ah, yes! Well, this goes into a completely different thing. Oooh, I should have gotten more into that topic. ^^; Maybe I should include that for a new fic but basically she was mentioning what she likes in a guy XD But...*laughs nervously* I mean, there is guy she once knew and she liked him but things didn't turn out like she said. That reminds me...maybe I should make a tiny fic about that. ^^; I don't know what to think for fics since I have so many ideas in that head of mine! XD I'm so sorry if I brought that confusion up!

OOOOOOHHH, I see. :p

Anyway, no problem! Honestly, if anything..those mistakes are less conspicuous because of the comical hysteria this fic is bursting out! :D

Oh and DM13-kun..did I mention that I was a stalker AND I live next door to your house? MWHAHAHAHAHAHa! :D

Kidds-ing! j/k j/k j/k :p
 

Cap D. Blue

ボルトチェンジ
Maybe there could be a third one. ^^ Since I now have school to deal with, it'll be a little more harder for me to make another one-shot, until...hm...X-mas Vacation.
No need, K-Chan. I've got a third installment in the works. :D

Oh and DM13-kun..did I mention that I was a stalker AND I live next door to your house? MWHAHAHAHAHAHa! :D
>_>; Har-har, but there are no people around my age in my neighborhood. (I know it's sarcasm, BTW.)

EDIT:
Salamence and Altra was the cutest pair of dragons I've ever seen! XD!
Yes, well, they're happily married, and have an egg that will hatch in December this year! ^^ They're my Pokemon, so they're in good hands. ^^

DOUBLE EDIT:
Brr! It's cold!" Kristell shivered.
"Yeah, I'm freezing!"
"Sisses." I laughed.
"What did you just say?" Kristell questioned as she pulled his ear.
"OUCH! Sorry. I've been building a resistance to cold since I was ten!" I explained. "This is nothing!"
Okay, let me explain;
We first started this on IM, so I did my part in first-person. K-Chan must've forgot to change it. Same thing happened in the first one, too. --'
 

~Mist~

revolutionary~
^You're too kind! ^^; Thank you so much since I seriously need a small break from everything. 11th grade keeps ya busy a lot. Thankies D-Chan! That would help a bunch for me since I have many big exams for this year... :(

Out of topic: This is a very funny story. Yesterday, I went to the school's computer and tried to log on but I forgot the name of my password XD (I always log in at my house automatically) So they emailed me at my hotmail account but I couldn't log in ><

So, in conclusion (wow, I sound like a science teacher XD) my advice is to log on typing everything so no one goes through the same thing I do ^^

I could end up making up a new one-shot (but it doesn't have anything to do with Pokeshipping, the closest thing to it that I'll be writing is TAoY 2: The Sequel which I am working on the chapter. ^^) This one shot will go into the secret so called love life of Kristell, (that means me btw ^^) if you would guys like me to, if not, it's okay. ^^ So, you guys could do the decide that for me. ^^
 
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metallic_pikachu

Guest
I hate Pokeshipping, but this was awesome! Uh is this a one shot?
if not, I would like to see the next chapter.
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
It's a one-shot sequel to a one-shot, with a possible one-shot sequel in the making.

So no next chapter, but maybe a next story!
 

~Mist~

revolutionary~
metallic_pikachu said:
I hate Pokeshipping, but this was awesome! Uh is this a one shot?
if not, I would like to see the next chapter.

Wow, it surprises me to see another shipper reading this! Thank you metallic_pikachu, it really means a lot! ^^ This proves that even though you don't like Pokeshipping, you can still get a good laugh from this story!

DragonMaster13 is writing the the next continuation so look forward to that soon. (You can PM him about it, if you'd like.) Thanks for telling gladdecease! ^^
 

Cap D. Blue

ボルトチェンジ
I gotta warn you guys, "The 4 Stalkers" isn't really Pokeshippy.

It's mostly about getting guys for Kristell and Chelsea. ^^ As you know, they both like Drew, so I'm stuck. *sweatdrop*

Wow, it surprises me to see another shipper reading this! Thank you metallic_pikachu, it really means a lot! ^^ This proves that even though you don't like Pokeshipping, you can still get a good laugh from this story!
Yep. XD But it's even better if you are a fan of Pokeshipping.
 

gladdecease

Master Coordinator
Cloned Drew? [/weirdidea]

Good luck with it. And you're welcome, MM89.
 

~Mist~

revolutionary~
^XD! That would be funny in so many ways. XD

Ohh, very cool DM13! ^^ For me, it doesn't really matter who I end up with as long as the guy's cute and...I already mentioned what I liked in a guy in this fic so maybe that will give you an idea XD
 
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