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The Totally Awsome Adventures of Grandy and His Crew Of Retards Against His Evil Bro!

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Quackers

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The Totally Awsome Adventures of Grandy and His Crew Of Retards Against His Evil Homo Brother!
^Full Title, rest wouldn't fin in the title box^​

Ok, so here is the new comic from this orange, feathered fiend. It is basically what the title suggests. I was going to use a better title, but I couldn't think of any.

Well, heres the comics.

Issues:
Isssue 1: Its Time...

Current Issue:
1-ItsTime.png


Ok, as of now, I have two more made, and I will release one with each good review.
 
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Controller of Flames

Taking Care
For what reasons did you invert the 2nd pannel? It seems weird. I think it would be more funny for him to say "It's time..." in the 1st pannel then the creepy silence, but meh. I know that there aren't many comics that can do pokemon battle sprites but I'v seen what you can do and I think you could do it.

So very random keep it up :D
 
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Quackers

Draw.
I inverted it because... you'll find out later.

Ok, next issue as promised.

Issue2-Waiting.png

Issue 2: Waiting
 
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RushingTwilight

Guest
:D Good so far, I love the randomness and the mentions of TACOOOOS!
 
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Quackers

Draw.
Thanks, but the tacos will play a key role later.

Issue3-Itsabouttime.png

Issue 3: Its About Time!
 
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blueguy

used Metronome!
I'll be completely honest: I think your comic is pointless and empty. Randomness can be fun sometimes, but it shouldn't be the main thread to your comic, unless you want to base a creative work on a thread of idiocy. It looks as if you have put no effort into this at all. Try to spend more than a moment's time devising your next edition. Thumbs down.

EDIT - Also, it is immature to hold comics at ransom until you receive a good review.

EDIT 2 - Do you realize how completely inappropriate your use of the word "retard" is? I suggest it be changed, or you will face severe criticism from someone else, probably more kind than I.

EDI 3 - I didn't even realize that the full title included the word "homo". Do you realize how juvenille and offensive that is?
 
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