Pokemanmaster
Whismaking Legend
The Travels Of The New World PG-13
Hello everyone who bothers to read this story.
I would just like to inform you that this is my first PROPER Fan-Fic (I did start an old one but I lost all of my drafts and gave up). I use a wordpad software and run my work through a spell check sit, it's not very good. I'm open to all sorts of criticism and hopefully it will be constructive criticsm. My story is about Pokémon entering a whole new world and having to deal with being split up but enough about that here is the prologue it is short but i will let you decide.
Prologue
It's been so long since I last saw my mum and dad; where did they go? Why haven't they come back yet? These thoughts came from a very young Turtwig cowering in a pitch black cave. You couldn't make out any detail in the darkness.
Turtwig had retreated to the cave when a freak strom had creeped it's way over the land, covering the perfectly blue sky.
"Ahhhhh!" Turtwig screamed as a thunderbolt came striking down from the sky.
Nothing like this ever happened on my home world, why did the humans bring all of us here? Why did they split us up and bring us to this new world? "Ahhhhhhh!" Another thunderbolt crashed into the ground causing a tremor. turtwig began to cry, he was so afraid. This Turtwig was only young but he had a lot to learn.
As Turtwig began to slip into a deep sleep a small birth mark on his shell began to glow. The mark was shaped like a cog, in the middle of th cog was two winding lines like a strip od DNA. As Turtwig fell futher into a deep slepp he withdrew his legs, tail and head into his shell and drifted off.
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As light crept across this unfamiliar land Turtwig awoke, slipping his legs, tail and head out he could now see what the cave looked like. He looked behind himself to seee the cave take a right and on that bend he could see Golem, Graveler and Geodude resting peacefully in the ground.
Trutwig looked forward to see a lushous green plain before him almost begging him to eat the grass that grew there. Turtwig turned to his sides and saw that the cave walls were just brown rock and small bits of crystal poking out of the cracks.
Turtwig brushed his birth mark with his leaves and walked out of the cave. Almost immeadiately a Dragonite came flying past blowing Turtwig into a nearby wall. When Turtwig regained concuisness he shook his head. What an idiot he's really got to slow down, he's going to kill someone. Turtwig's thoughts surprised even himself, he never thought he was that mean.
Turtwig was like any other Turtwig green here yellow there nothing strange apart from the birth mark. turtwig looked up at the sky for a moment seeing clouds shaped as Cyndaquil, well in Turtwig's mind. Turtwig stood up and walked away from the wall.
Hello everyone who bothers to read this story.
I would just like to inform you that this is my first PROPER Fan-Fic (I did start an old one but I lost all of my drafts and gave up). I use a wordpad software and run my work through a spell check sit, it's not very good. I'm open to all sorts of criticism and hopefully it will be constructive criticsm. My story is about Pokémon entering a whole new world and having to deal with being split up but enough about that here is the prologue it is short but i will let you decide.
Prologue
It's been so long since I last saw my mum and dad; where did they go? Why haven't they come back yet? These thoughts came from a very young Turtwig cowering in a pitch black cave. You couldn't make out any detail in the darkness.
Turtwig had retreated to the cave when a freak strom had creeped it's way over the land, covering the perfectly blue sky.
"Ahhhhh!" Turtwig screamed as a thunderbolt came striking down from the sky.
Nothing like this ever happened on my home world, why did the humans bring all of us here? Why did they split us up and bring us to this new world? "Ahhhhhhh!" Another thunderbolt crashed into the ground causing a tremor. turtwig began to cry, he was so afraid. This Turtwig was only young but he had a lot to learn.
As Turtwig began to slip into a deep sleep a small birth mark on his shell began to glow. The mark was shaped like a cog, in the middle of th cog was two winding lines like a strip od DNA. As Turtwig fell futher into a deep slepp he withdrew his legs, tail and head into his shell and drifted off.
********
As light crept across this unfamiliar land Turtwig awoke, slipping his legs, tail and head out he could now see what the cave looked like. He looked behind himself to seee the cave take a right and on that bend he could see Golem, Graveler and Geodude resting peacefully in the ground.
Trutwig looked forward to see a lushous green plain before him almost begging him to eat the grass that grew there. Turtwig turned to his sides and saw that the cave walls were just brown rock and small bits of crystal poking out of the cracks.
Turtwig brushed his birth mark with his leaves and walked out of the cave. Almost immeadiately a Dragonite came flying past blowing Turtwig into a nearby wall. When Turtwig regained concuisness he shook his head. What an idiot he's really got to slow down, he's going to kill someone. Turtwig's thoughts surprised even himself, he never thought he was that mean.
Turtwig was like any other Turtwig green here yellow there nothing strange apart from the birth mark. turtwig looked up at the sky for a moment seeing clouds shaped as Cyndaquil, well in Turtwig's mind. Turtwig stood up and walked away from the wall.
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