pokeplayer984
Banned
Before I made Misty's Miracle, I had made 5 different fanfics. 2 were put into one little series. This is a look back at the first two fanfics I made. See how I started. See what I did when I first created a story on the net.
Originally created at GameFAQs.com before the rules became serious there and fanfics were banned from being made at that website.
This was originally called The Pokemon Super Bowl, but now has been changed to The Trials of the Pendant.
Now, here it is for your viewing pleasure.
Note: Due to the charcter limit of 4096 over at GameFAQs.com, the chapters were rather short. So don't be too surprised by the length.
Note II: I created this before Ru/Sa came to Japan. So don't be too surprised by seeing a few moves or certian pokemon not being around. ^_^
Note III: When I created this, it was originally in script. I have remade it into non script for your viewing pleasure.
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"Hello everyone, and welcome to the First Annual Pokemon Super Bowl!" Said an announcer, with brown hair and glasses, from his place up at the top of the stadium. "I am your host, Jonathan. Coming to you live from the Indigo Plateu. We have gathered the strongest and most powerful pokemon in the world. The prize is this!"
He shows a mysterious black pendant.
"I found this rare one of a kind pendant when I was exploring with an archeologist. According to the carvings on the wall, this mysterious black pendant was made to hold a power that all the pokemon in the world fought over. It is also said that only the most powerful pokemon can weild its very power, so we have gathered the most powerful pokemon in the world, to compete for this power! They have come from all over the globe of their own free will." He said as he explained everything.
"Now, as a look for you fans who are watching this on your televison, he are the competetors who will be competing!"
A screen then shows up from behind the announcer.
"The pokemon have been split up into teams. On the Red/Blue/Yellow side is, Dragonite," A huge orange dragon appeared on the screen. "Zapdos," A large yellow bird with spiky wings appeared next. "Articuno," A blue bird that was the same size as Zapdos appeared. "Moltres," A huge red bird appeared. "Mew," A small pink pokemon with a cat-like head, a dog-like body and a silky flowing tail appeared. "and Mewtwo!" A six foot tall pokemon that had a near human face appeared. He was white skinned with a purple belly, and a tail that was long and purple appeared.
"And, on the Gold/Silver/Crystal side is, Raikou," A tiger pokemon appeared. "Suicune," A goat like pokemon appeared. "Entei," A dog like creature with braces on its ankles appeared. "Celebi," a green pixie like creature appeared. "Lugia," A giant silver colored bird with a fish like tail appeared. "and Ho-oh!" A giant phoenix that reflected the seven colors of the rainbow appeared.
He then turned back to the television screen.
"Here are the rules. The pokemon will be split up into one-on-one battles. There is no time limit. The pokemon who is left standing moves on to the next round. However, just because you are the last pokemon standing, doesn't mean you'll win the prize. Your overall team score will have to be more in order to win it. The point system works like this... For every successful hit you make, you get one point. For every win, you get seven points, and if there is any unsportsmanlike conduct going around, you will lose four points."
He then turned back to the screen.
"Now, by complete random, let's pair up the players!" The screen starts flashing all of the pokemon in different places. They all stop at the same time and the matches are chosen.
"So the matchups are, Zapdos vs Raikou, Articuno vs Suicune, Moltres vs Entei, Dragonite vs Celebi, Lugia vs Mew, and Ho-oh vs Mewtwo! Now, at complete random, the order of the matches will be chosen."
Once again, the pokemon flashed all over the screen. Soon, the order of the battles was chosen.
"The first match has been chosen folks. It's Zapdos vs Raikou! A match between two electric pokemon? This is going to be incredable folks! I suggest you don't miss it!"
---End Prolouge---
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Well, there it is, the remake of the Prolouge.
Originally, there was no discription of the pokemon or origin of where it was taking place.
It was also originally shortened with countless abreviations. (ie: RBY, GSC, and being &, etc.)(Not to mention the pokes were shortened to one letter after they were introduced.) ^_^; (And Mewtwo was originally Mew2/M2.)
Also, the announcer didn't have a name. I just barely gave him one.
So there it is, remade from script, the Prolouge.
What do you think?
Also, I have a little game for you guys, try to guess who will win the matchups. Remember, certian moves could make certian things happen.
Well, see ya later.
;151; - *enjoying her honeymoon.*
Originally created at GameFAQs.com before the rules became serious there and fanfics were banned from being made at that website.
This was originally called The Pokemon Super Bowl, but now has been changed to The Trials of the Pendant.
Now, here it is for your viewing pleasure.
Note: Due to the charcter limit of 4096 over at GameFAQs.com, the chapters were rather short. So don't be too surprised by the length.
Note II: I created this before Ru/Sa came to Japan. So don't be too surprised by seeing a few moves or certian pokemon not being around. ^_^
Note III: When I created this, it was originally in script. I have remade it into non script for your viewing pleasure.
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Prolouge
"Hello everyone, and welcome to the First Annual Pokemon Super Bowl!" Said an announcer, with brown hair and glasses, from his place up at the top of the stadium. "I am your host, Jonathan. Coming to you live from the Indigo Plateu. We have gathered the strongest and most powerful pokemon in the world. The prize is this!"
He shows a mysterious black pendant.
"I found this rare one of a kind pendant when I was exploring with an archeologist. According to the carvings on the wall, this mysterious black pendant was made to hold a power that all the pokemon in the world fought over. It is also said that only the most powerful pokemon can weild its very power, so we have gathered the most powerful pokemon in the world, to compete for this power! They have come from all over the globe of their own free will." He said as he explained everything.
"Now, as a look for you fans who are watching this on your televison, he are the competetors who will be competing!"
A screen then shows up from behind the announcer.
"The pokemon have been split up into teams. On the Red/Blue/Yellow side is, Dragonite," A huge orange dragon appeared on the screen. "Zapdos," A large yellow bird with spiky wings appeared next. "Articuno," A blue bird that was the same size as Zapdos appeared. "Moltres," A huge red bird appeared. "Mew," A small pink pokemon with a cat-like head, a dog-like body and a silky flowing tail appeared. "and Mewtwo!" A six foot tall pokemon that had a near human face appeared. He was white skinned with a purple belly, and a tail that was long and purple appeared.
"And, on the Gold/Silver/Crystal side is, Raikou," A tiger pokemon appeared. "Suicune," A goat like pokemon appeared. "Entei," A dog like creature with braces on its ankles appeared. "Celebi," a green pixie like creature appeared. "Lugia," A giant silver colored bird with a fish like tail appeared. "and Ho-oh!" A giant phoenix that reflected the seven colors of the rainbow appeared.
He then turned back to the television screen.
"Here are the rules. The pokemon will be split up into one-on-one battles. There is no time limit. The pokemon who is left standing moves on to the next round. However, just because you are the last pokemon standing, doesn't mean you'll win the prize. Your overall team score will have to be more in order to win it. The point system works like this... For every successful hit you make, you get one point. For every win, you get seven points, and if there is any unsportsmanlike conduct going around, you will lose four points."
He then turned back to the screen.
"Now, by complete random, let's pair up the players!" The screen starts flashing all of the pokemon in different places. They all stop at the same time and the matches are chosen.
"So the matchups are, Zapdos vs Raikou, Articuno vs Suicune, Moltres vs Entei, Dragonite vs Celebi, Lugia vs Mew, and Ho-oh vs Mewtwo! Now, at complete random, the order of the matches will be chosen."
Once again, the pokemon flashed all over the screen. Soon, the order of the battles was chosen.
"The first match has been chosen folks. It's Zapdos vs Raikou! A match between two electric pokemon? This is going to be incredable folks! I suggest you don't miss it!"
---End Prolouge---
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Well, there it is, the remake of the Prolouge.
Originally, there was no discription of the pokemon or origin of where it was taking place.
It was also originally shortened with countless abreviations. (ie: RBY, GSC, and being &, etc.)(Not to mention the pokes were shortened to one letter after they were introduced.) ^_^; (And Mewtwo was originally Mew2/M2.)
Also, the announcer didn't have a name. I just barely gave him one.
So there it is, remade from script, the Prolouge.
What do you think?
Also, I have a little game for you guys, try to guess who will win the matchups. Remember, certian moves could make certian things happen.
Well, see ya later.
;151; - *enjoying her honeymoon.*
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