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the twystick mysteries

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twystick

Guest
this is my new comic.
rated I for immature.
twystick mysteries
case1: beginnings
file#1 intro
file#2 mark
file#3 wyvern
credits
to spriters resource for sprites.
 
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Pokefan26

Woot! SSB!
Not so good.
Drawings are bad.
Rayquayza coming out form the clouds looks terrible.
 
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shinz

Guest
This is one of my favorite sprite comics KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!
 
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Capt.Miko

Flapjacks!
The concept is good, but the spriting and effects really need some work.

1.Your scratch sprites have all black outlines. It doesn't fit it with the spriting style of the games.

2. The scratch sprites also have no shading.

3. The wormhole thing. There is no depth to it and it just looks like a big red dot on the clouds.
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
So, was this supposed to be humorous?
As the others said, spriting needs work.
Back to the humor...
Think hard on your humor. Heck, I got a sticky note pad at the side of my bed. If you get a thought of humor, jot it down. Even if it's the middle of the day or night.

_BC_
 
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kapslock

Well-Known Member
This is one of my favorite sprite comics KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK!
Click to expand...
erm your kidding me right?
no backgrounds
text bubbles are terrible
Rayquayza coming though the clouds is BAD
Next time, use game backgrounds
 
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blueguy

used Metronome!
Wow... That was just... really bad... really, really bad... O_O

"i'm a exxpurt on StUPidollogy!" WTF?

Not funny. Not good. Bad grammar, and why did that qualify as a comic?
 
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P-Man

Guest
Wyvern is very VERY bad. You mixed a pokemon with a trainer, which is bad enough, but mixing ZERO with her? SCHTUPID.
 
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