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Here is a normal comic forum heres the charicters if you want to know wo they are.

Heres Epi. (Episode) 1.
http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=epi17zv.png

 

[Pokefan26]

Yet another journey comic.......
Good Job.

 

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Thanks. My first try.

 

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some comics will be shorter than others

 

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episode 3

 

[blueaquadog]

Please don't double post. Why is your comics so short?

 

[Tenten]

Your comics are so short, not to mention cliche, since you are using a "Pokemon Journey" type plot. Your comics SHOULD be more than one panel. Where is episode 2? You just went from episode 1 to 3...

On a side note...Laura is a girl, right? So why are you using overworlds of Edward Elric? And speaking of Edward Elric overworlds...are you giving credit to whoever made them? I'm absolutely positive they're not yours.

 

[blueguy]

Don't triplepost, unless you actually have to...

Anyways... Your comic is really quite bad... There's bad grammar, the map looks empty, and the plot seems dull... Also, more than two panels would be better.

 

[Nick Mckenzie]

I'm too tired to really take the crap out of this one, but I'll say one thing:
The other critics said it all.

 

[Sora]

And you stole a sprite from SCM.

 

[Furizaa]

I don't want to sound mean, but....

Way too short.
Landon looks like an old man.
Those three people really creep me out, appearing out of the middle of nowhere is not such a good thing.
Seems too cliche.
Did I mention it's too short?

It's a good comic, and has potential. You have pretty good sprites (just look strange) and your grammar isn't bad either. Just when you make an episode, try to add more than 2 pannels for each episode... Imagine how long The Pokemon Journey would be if Beco used only 2 pannels for each episode.

 

[Beco]

I like the sprites...
Landon looks a bit like einstein...
Maybe you should make the episodes a lot longer.

 

[Controller of Flames]

I like the sprites...
Landon looks a bit like einstein...
Maybe you should make the episodes a lot longer.

You might like them but guess what....

There not his. Do you know how how hard Bushamantic and I worked on that, it is true that Bushamantic made that overworld sprite, but I worked very hard on the trainer sprite for him, and I don't like it when you steal my stuff.