the ultimate journey

[smashbrosfan!]

This is my first fan fiction.
this is rated PG-13. It contains violence, strong language and suggestive situations.
Chapter 1.

A bright red truck was on the road, where it was going down a hill. Inside, a young boy named Yzak was sleeping inside the truck. Then suddenly the truck encountered a mysterious pokemon.

"Zigzagoon!" the wild pokemon appeared in front of the truck.

"Wahhh!!" The truck driver screamed as the truck fell off the road and tumbled down the hill and crashed into a tree.

"OW! What the hell?!" Yzak yelled as hit his head on one of the boxes in the truck. Yzak got off the truck, and checked out what happened. Then he saw truck driver, blood splattered all over the truck and on the chair.

"Oh my god! I need to call the emergency! aw damn it, where the hell's my cellphone?" Yzak Yelled. No time to waste, he called the emergency, only to find out his cellphone ran out of batteries. "****!" he yelled as he was angry about not moving to his new home. " Oh well, got to get going. I think my new home is just up ahead." Yzak said.

Yzak was a very loud boy. He was 10 years old and had white hair and a black bandana with a pokeball on it. He wore a black sleeved sweater and black trousers. He also wore red running shoes with an D sign on it. He was now walking for a few hours, and noticed that he was hungry.

"aw crap, now I'm hungry.." Yzak said with disbelief. As he was getting sleepy, he saw that there was a little town up ahead.

" Finally, is that the Littleroot town my dad was talking about?" He questioned to himself. After he arrived to littleroot town, he saw his mother and yelled.

"I'M HOME!" Yzak yelled loudly as he arrived to his house. "Mom, where's dad?" Yzak asked.

" He's not here, dear. Your father is a gym leader at the petalburg gym. You should've seen him. He was at channel 30 at 6:00PM." Yzak's mom answered.

"what time is it now MOm?" Yzak asked.

" 9:30. you should go to sleep. Your meeting proffessor Birch tomorrow." Yzak's mom said.

Yzak climbed up the stairs, not knowing about his now house looked around to see how his house was like. First he checked out the bathroom. He looked around until he noticed a glass wall at the shower room.

"ahh! what a weird shower room." Yzak yelled. "I'm going to sleep."

Then Yzak checked his bedroom, It had a sky blue bed and on the walls, closet were full of dolls.

" What the hell? I didn't know my room was full of dolls!" Yzak screamed.

"That's your sister's room. She's with her father at the gym. Your room's right there beside your sister's." Yzak's mom answered.

" You have to wake up at 7:30 in the morning." Yzak's mother told Yzak once Yzak was going to bed.

NEXT MORNING

"RRRIINNG!!" The ladybug alarm clock rang beside Yzak's bed.

" GOd dammit.. 5 more minutes.. zzzzz" Yzak said while sleeping.

" WAKE UP!! You're 30 minutes late! " His mom yelled at Yzak.

" Jeez, what time is it?" Yzak woke up and looked at the alarm clock only to notice that he was 30 minutes late.

"NO! I'm 30 mins behind schedule!!" Yzak jumped up, ran to the bathroom, washed himself and ran downstairs.

" Wow, I get to meet Prof. Birch.." Yzak said to himself while eating breakfast, a bowl of froot loops. After breakfast he ran through the door to meet Prof. Birch at his office.

" Mom, where is Prof.Birch's office?" Yzak asked.

" He's at the other side ot this town. You should find a big white building there with a pokeball on top." Yzak's mom answered.

" And you forgot your backpack." His mom said.

"Oh thanks." Yzak thanked mom for bringing his backpack to him.

Yzak ran outside, hoping to get his first starter pokemon today. He sprinted and stopped at a white building with a pokeball on top. He walked inside and saw many books at huge shelves. mostly 5 times taller than himself.

" Whoa, look at all these books. These must be over 2000 pages long." Yzak said.

" Hello, Yzak. I was waiting for you." A chubby bearded man walked beside a table of three pokeballs and introduced himself.

" You must be Prof. Birch. My mom told me all about you." Yzak said to Mr.Birch.

" Today, I'm going out to research pokemon in route 101. You should meet my daughter. She lives right beside you." Prof. Birch told Yzak.

" How do you know where I live?" Yzak asked Prof.Birch.

" I'm a friend of your father. He's the leader of the Petalburg gym. But I suppose you know that, right?" Birch asked.

"Yeah,.... When do I get my first Pokemon today Prof.Birch?" Yzak asked in an excitied tone.

" Well, How about I call you tomorrow to let you know?" Prof.Birch asked.

"Sounds fine! I'll come over tomorrow!" Yzak answered. Then he ran out of Birch's labratory.

" Don't forget to meet my daughter! She lives right beside your house!" Prof. Birch yelled at him loudly.

Yzak ran, hoping to see his new neighbour and meet them. But Yzak thought he'd get lunch first.


Chap.2 coming soon.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

Chapter 2

Yzak ran to find a good restaurant to eat lunch. Fortunately, He found a chinese restaruant and ran inside the restaurant.

" Put your hands up!!" a muscular guy with a shotgun yelled at the cooks in the restaurant, then the guy cocked his gun.

"gimme yo money! hehehe..." a shorter but fatter guy who was beside the muscular guy laid an evil smile.

Meanwhile...

" I'm starving! Let's go get lunch Lily." Yzak's father told his daughter.

" Sure! I'm hungry too!" Lily answered to her dad.

" Let's go then, The chinese food restaruant is close by." Her father answered.

The dad and the daughter went into the restaurant, only to find the tables bashed up and the walls blown to pieces.


Meanwhile in the corner of the restaurant,

"Aw ****ing hell, why the hell did gang members want to do with this place?" Yzak questioned himself.

" I heard something at the back! Keep the cooks busy." The chubby guy told the muscular guy.

" All right, but be right back." The muscular guy told the chbby guy.

"what do you want to do with us?" The cook asked in a nervous tone.

"SHUT THE F*CK UP!!" The Muscular guy screamed as he pointed his gun towards the cook.


In the restaurant tables, Lily found Yzak at the back of the boiler room. He was sweating because of the heat inside.

"Big brother!" Lily screamed at Yzak in a worried tone.

"Stay back Lily!!" Yzak yelled back at Lily.

" Hey little girl, come with me so I won't hurt you.. HEHEHE!" The fat guy asked Lily with a snicker.

" No! You leave the store or I'll call the police!" Lily yelled at him then did a raspberry at the fat guy.

" Arrgh! you little twerp! I'll kill you!!" The fat guy screamed, took out a knife and charged at the little girl.

"NOO! LILY!!" Yzak screamed thinking that his sister's going to die.

Then a fist was blown into the fat guy's face, causing him to fall backwards and splatter blood all over the floor.

" Leave my daughter alone, you fat *******!" Yzak's dad, Norman screamed ferociously at the fat guy.


Meanwhile in the boiler room, Yzak took out his cellphone, fully charged, then called the police.

"911, Is this the police?" Yzak asked with nervousness.

" The police here! What's going on?" The officer questioned with urgency.

" There's a gang mob here in the chinese food court and the cooks and the accountants are being held as hostage!" Yzak answered.

"WHAT!!" The Officer yelled, Urgent and surpried.

"I'm coming! Police! Let's move out!" The officer said in a strict voice.


" Aw thank god. The police are on their way." Yzak said.

Then Yzak had thought of a plan. He would get his father and his sister, and run while the muscular guy was turned around. But he had to free the hostages first. Yzak sneaked to the hostages, finding that the muscular guy was sleeping on the floor. He then took out pocket knife out of his pants and cut the rope that was tied to the hostages.

" Thank you, young sir. We will get out of this place right away." The cook thanked Yzak then ran away with the other members.

"I need to get out of here, and fast." Yzak said to himself in a serious tone.

Yzak then crawled out of the where the gang member was, then ran out of the store.

"Dad, Lily! Get out of the restaurant!" Yzak screamed.

"All right Yzak, we're going out." Yzak's father said to Yzak.

Yzak, his dad and sister ran out of the store, hoping that the muscle man doesn't wake up. Then the worst happened. Yzak was shot in the back with the shotgun. It was at a far distance, so it wasn't deadly, but It hurt Yzak a lot.

" Arrrgh!! OW! ****ing hell!" Yzak fell down front as his back had blood splashed on the floor.

" Yzak!! " His father screamed as he saw Yzak had fallen on the road, leaving blood trails.

"Father! I can't get up! You go on ahead!" Yzak yelled back at his father then suddenly,

" ARRRGH!! YOU FREED MY HOSTAGES! NOW YOU DIE! DIE BY MY SHOTGUN!!" The muscular man screamed at the 10 year old boy. He was about to shoot him once more in the back then suddenly,


" You're under arrest! " Officer Jenny yelled at the criminal.

"I'm not afraid of you, B*tch!" The muscular man screamed at the officer then charged at her, holding a sword in his hand.

"OFFICER JENNY!!" Yzak screamed as he saw that she was about to get slaughtered.

Then

"pshoo!"

It splattered on the floor.

 

[Jonouchi]

Ok, first. DO NOT SPAM!! No one will read your fic in 5 minutes. Wait a while and someone might read it.

Second. This is very similar to the R/S/E plot, except more violent. try to make the story a bit original than a few violent scenes. Also, I wouldn't think a crash would cause blood to splurt like that. Maybe a concussion, but not that much Blood.

Third, Description is decent, but try to describe a bit more. Actions, thoughts, and try to explain why each event is occuring.

Take any advice given and you'll improve

 

[smashbrosfan!]

I'm just at the beginning of my story. There's a lot more coming up.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

chapter.3

The blood of the criminal splattered over the road as he was hit by a magnum Bullet. The criminal than fell down on the floor, struggling in pain.

"Officer Jenny! Are you okay?" one of the Policemen asked.

"I'm fine Daniel, I was going to die until you saved me. Thanks." Jenny answered.


"GOD! I'm bleeding here! Take me to a hospital or something!" Yzak yelled.

"all right. That's enough for one day. Let's go home." Norman said.

So they went back to their house, hoping to get some rest.


TOMORROW:

"Wahhh! I'm late again!" Yzak screamed in panic, so he ran to the bathroom, washed himself, put on his clothes, ate breakfast, then Jumped out through the door.

Yzak had arrived to Prof.Birch's lab, and was greeted by Birch. Unfourtanetely, Yzak didn't expect it.

"OHH! Yzak! are you all right? are you hurt?" Mr.Birch asked Yzak in a worried tone.

"I'm fine. My back, OWW!! MY BACK!!!" Yzak screamed as the pain overcame the young boy.

Soon, he was ready to pick his first pokemon. One of the balls contained a green gecko pokemon. It was called treecko. The other one contained a orange bird. It was called torchic. The last one had a blue mud fish pokemon. It was called mudkip.

" Ini mini miney mo. Last one to touch the toe." Yzak said in a repetitive manner as he was picking his first pokemon.

"Torchic! I pick torchic!" Yzak answered.

"Ummm..., Yzak, I was saving torchic for my daughter as a present. Can you pick something else please?" Mr.Birch asked in a polite manner.

"Sure, but I don't know which pokemon to decide. How about I just come back later?" Yzak asked.

"Sure, Your choice Yzak." Prof.Birch answered.

As Yzak went out of Birch's lab, he saw a purple pokemon. It had wings and It looked like a whale, no, more like a sea basin. It came by, and brought a downpour on Littleroot town.

"Prof.Birch! I saw a purple pokemon with wings and It was big as a house. It had a white belly and it was floating all over town. What was that?" Yzak asked in a frenzied manner.

"I don't know. But It sure looked amazing!" Mr.Birch answered.

"Prof.Birch, I still haven't met your daughter yet. Can I go visit her?" Yzak asked.


"Sure. You were to meet her yesterday. But I guess today's just as good." Prof. Birch answered.

Yzak walked out of Birch's Lab, thinking about what he saw a few minutes ago. He walked past the destroyed food court, the police station, and passed everything until he saw his house. He went to his neighbour's house and knocked on the door. A medium-aged woman greeted.

"Hello, Yzak. I was hoping to meet you. My daughter is upstairs." a mysterious woman answered.

"hello miss, how do you know my name?" Yzak asked.

" My husband told me all about you. You're the one who got shot with the shotgun." She answered.

"Is there a bathroom here, miss?" Yzak asked.

"MY name's Mrs. Birch. and the bathroom's upstairs." she answered.

Yzak walked upstairs. He wondered where the bathroom was. When he looked around, He saw that their house is similar to his house. He then went to the bathroom, opened the door, then....

"OH I forgot. Yzak, My daughter's having a shower right now!"

Too late. pshoo! blood dripped down to his nose and he saw the naked girl in the shower. The girl looked at him right back, making an angry look.

"Uhh, Hi. My name is.....

"WRRRRRAAGH!!!" A loud roar came from the bathroom.

"waaaHHH!! Help me!! I'm being chased!!" Yzak screamed in horror.

Then (punch and a bone crack.)

"WAAAHH!!" Yzak tumbled down the stairs and fainted, his body laying around. His nose was of course bleeding from the punch the girl gave him.

"Haaaiiii!!" The girl yelled as she was going to do the dive kick.

"HELP!!" Yzak screamed in terror. Then the girl stopped.

"hey, you're the guy who got shot in the back at the gang raid!" The girl said.

"yeah... I'm that guy." Yzak answered in a weak tone.


END OF CHAPTER 3.


note: The purple thing flying at the lab with the wings was a shiny kyogre

 

[Jonouchi]

The blood of the criminal splattered over the road as he was hit by a magnum Bullet.

.....Really now, that was, in no way, a chapter. Read the rules and Advice for Aspiring Authors, they will help you

Try again

 

[smashbrosfan!]

chapter 4

"My name's May. What brings you here to my house?" The girl asked.

"Prof. Birch told me that you live right next door, so I came to visit you." Yzak answered.

"Oh, before we begin talking, you might want to check down first..." Yzak added in one last comment.

(Psho!!)

(Crack!! Crack!!)

"OH MY GOD!!! WAAAHH!! MY Nose!!" Yzak screamed in a frenzied manner as he was flying and he finally landed on the TV.

"WHy the hell can't you put your eyes on someplace else?!" May exclaimed.

Yzak was not listening, because he got knocked out by May's punch and landed on the TV on the head.

A few Hours later..

"So, I wanted to say I'm sorry for knocking you out, Yzak." May said in a distressful tone.

"It's fine. Don't worry about it." Yzak answered back.

" I need to go, see ya May!" Yzak said.

Yzak arrived to his house, and realized that his family was eating dinner without him.

"So, How was your first visit to Prof.Birch's house?" Yzak's mom asked.

"Well, I had some minor problems, but it was okay.." Yzak answered.

" Oh, then let's eat. You haven't had lunch today didn't you?" mom said.

Meanwhile...

"backpack check, pokeballs check, potions check, I'm going to sleep. Tomorrow's my big day." May told herself.

At Yzak's house....

"Pokeballs check, potions check, MoM!! Where the hell are my pokeballs?!" Yzak yelled downstairs.

"Ask your father! He might have some!" His mom answered back.

Yzak went to His father's room.

"Father! Can you lend me some pokeballs?" Yzak asked his dad,Norman

"Yeah, sure. There's some under my bed." Norman answered.

"Thanks, goodnight." Yzak told his dad. (picks up the pokeballs)

TOMORROW MORNING

"GET UP!! GET UP!!" His mom yelled at Yzak's ears

"AHH! for christ's sake.. OH MY GOD!! I'm an hour late!!" Yzak screamed.

AH, the daily morning routine... Wake up, go to the bathroom, wash yourself, put on your clothes, eat your breakfast, and run out the door for the GODS SAKES!!!!!!!!!

Yzak ran out of his house, hoping that he was not too late to get his first pokemon.

"aw ****,, I'm an hour and 30 minutes late!" He said while running wildly to Prof.Birch's lab.

When he arrived to Prof.Birch's lab, people were lined up at where the three pokeballs were.

"Holy ****!! What the ****'s happening here?" Yzak yelled with disbelief.

" All of us are getting our first pokemon. We can't wait!" A girl with a red had said.

After the line has passed, it was about 5 hours. Yzak got tired of waiting and shoved off most of the crowd that was in front him.

"Hey, kid! don't linejump!" a young boy with a blue hat yelled.

"Shut up you ***!" Yzak yelled at the boy right back, then ran along.

"Prof.Birch! I'm here!" Yzak said to Mr.Birch.

"Yzak! nice to see you!" Prof.Birch said back to Yzak.

"So pick your pokemon! and make it quick... the crowd is getting complaint." Professor Birch told Yzak.

"all right! I pick.... crap. I can't decide." Yzak told Birch.

10 minutes later.

"I pick that yellow torchic! It's soo cute... aww.." Yzak said with excitement.

"Sure, my daughter didn't want it, so you can have it." Birch told Yzak.

"Thanks! Mr.Birch!" Yzak exclaimed.

As Yzak ran outside from Birch's lab, a voice yelled at his ear.

"Hey, dweeb! I want to battle you for that torchic! If I win you give me that torchic of yours!" The boy yelled directly at Yzak.

"All right, what do you want?" Yzak asked in an impatient manner.

"I wanted that Torchic! That torchic is shiny! It's not a normal torchic!" The boy told Yzak loudly.

" And I'll battle you! You will lose!" The boy yelled at Yzak.

"Yeah! Bring it on! little boy!" Yzak yelled back at the boy.

So, The first battle between Yzak and the boy began their first battle, each took out a pokeball and threw it. A grey, dog-wolf like pokemon came out ot the boy's pokeball.

"Poocheyena!!" The dog pokemon roared loudly.

"Go torchic!" a fire pokemon came out of Yzak's pokeball.

poocheyena:LV 3 VS Torchic:LV 5

"Go poocheyena! use tackle!" The boy yelled.

"dodge! torchic, and use scratch attack!" Yzak yelled right back.

The fire pokemon scratched the dog pokemon in the face, but the opponent still stood strong.

"grrrrr.." the dog growled and tackled Yzak's torchic.

"torchic!!!" the fire pokemon screamed in pain as he was knocked onto the wall.

"Torchic, use ember!" Yzak commanded torchic.

"Torchic!!" The fire pokemon spit little fireballs from his mouth, and flung them at the dog pokemon. It was a direct hit, and the dog pokemon collapsed and fainted.

"NOOO!! I lost!" The boy screamed with disbelief.

"better luck next time, kid!" Yzak told the boy.

"Thanks, that was a great battle!" The boy told Yzak.

"Great job! Yzak! That was a great first try!" Prof. Birch told Yzak.

"Well, I tried my best." Yzak answered.

A few hours Later in his house.

"So, This was Yzak's first battle. It ended up well, and Prof. Birch was really proud! I was proud of myself too!" Yzak told his father.

"Well, you earned that torchic! I know you will train it well." His father said.

After that, Yzak went to his room, and slept, knowing tomorrow would be a better bay that today ever was.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

Chapter 5

This is the day that Yzak goes on his journey. Right now, he's having his momentarily dream right now though. This is where the story starts.

"Unnnggh...."Yzak whispered in his sleep.

In his dream.
It was rainy outside. People were cheering in the colosseum. It was the final match between Yzak and an opponent.

"Go Kingdra! Use Hydro pump!" Yzak commanded.
The dragon pokemon charged up a vortex on its mouth, then it spat the vortex out and formed a massive stream of water

"Dodge! Blaziken and use sky uppercut!" The opponent commanded.
The blaze pokemon dodged the massive stream and punched the dragon pokemon's face.

"Kingdra!!!" Yzak screamed.

"kigngDRA!!" The dragon pokemon rose up.

"Huh! That was a critical hit! How is it still moving?!" The opponent asked with fear.

"NOW! Kingdra, use dragonbreath!" Yzak commanded.

The dragon pokemon roared, then spewed out boiling, green flames from it's mouth. Then the flame hit the opponent's pokemon, making it paralyzed and couldn't move.

"NO! Blaziken! MOVE!!" The opponent yelled at his pokemon.

"Blazi...ken." The fire pokemon groaned weakly then fell to the ground.

"THe winner of this Battle is, YZAK!!" The announcer yelled.

The crowd went cheering for Yzak, noting that he won the Hoenn league championships, Yzak yelled.

"YEAH!! This is the Best! I won! I won! I WON!!" Yzak screamed with excitement and joy. Suddenly then,

"WAKE UP!!!" His mom screamed.

"AHHH!" Yzak screamed.

"MOM! I was winning the hoenn championships! GOD!!" Yzak yelled at his mom.

"Yzak! This is when you leave the house. Get ready." His mom told him.

Yzak then got out of bed, washed himself, got on his clothes, then jumped downstairs where his mom was waiting.

"Mom, where's dad?" Yzak asked.

"Oh, he's at his gym now. If you've woken up earlier, you could've said good bye to him." Yzak's mom told him.

"Well, where's breakfast?" Yzak asked.

"On the table, I made it extra special!" His mom told Yzak with excitement.

"Wow! Scrambled eggs and ham and toast! Thanks mom!" Yzak said with joy.

After Yzak ate breakfast, He ran out of his house, to meet prof. Birch again. This time, he was going far away.

"Bye mom! I'll see you later!" Yzak yelled.

"Have a good time! I'll be waiting for you!" His mom cheered back.


In the middle of the road on his way to Prof. Birch's lab...

" I wonder what he'll say when I visit him?" Yzak questioned himself.

So, Yzak ran over to Birch's lab. When Yzak arrived there, Prof. Birch wasn't there. Yzak then asked one of the assistants at the table.

" Do you know where Prof. Birch is? " Yzak asked one of the assistants.

" Oh, He's doing pokemon research. He's at route 102. It's just past this town." The assistant answered.

" Thanks! I'll go visit him now!" Yzak said.

"Take care! oh, and by the way, here are some potions. You'll need em." The assistant told Yzak.

Yzak was now outside of Birch's lab. He's now going to look for Prof. Birch, so he ran through the street, until he found a patch of tall grass up ahead.

"Woa! I think this is where wild pokemon live." Yzak said.

Yzak walked in the tall grass patch, trying to find pokemon, until, he found a furry, raccoon pokemon with a bushy tail.

"zigzagoon!" The pokemon cheerfully yelled.

"Time for a battle, Go Torchic!" Yzak yelled.

It was a match between torchic and a wild zigzagoon. The zigzagoon then tried to tackle torchic.

"Torchic, dodge then use ember!" Yzak commanded.

The fire pokemon dodged and then spat out small, orange fireballs from it's mouth. The fireballs hit the wild pokemon, but the wild pokemon stood strong.

"Zigzagoon!" Zigzaggon then growled and then tackled Yzak's torchic, but it missed.

"Yeah! Torchic, leer then scratch!" Yzak commanded torchic once more.

The fire pokemon then made a glaring look, scaring the raccoon pokemon. Then it used sharp talons to scratch zigzagoon, making it faint.

"Yes! I did it." Yzak said with excitement.

He then walked around the grass, looking for pokemon. Eventually, he found many pokemon to battle with, so in a few hours, he and his torchic ended up in the pokemon center.

"Let's see what level my torchic is, LV 10. hmm!" Yzak told himself. He was glad that torchic was growing so fast.

" Nurse Joy! can you heal my pokemon please?" Yzak asked Joy.

"Sure. I'll take care of them for you. come back here in a few minutes." Nurse Joy told Yzak.

As he was about to go out, Yzak saw something that looked like a truck. The front of the truck had a skull symbol on it. The whole truck was blue, and it carried a few people on it. When he noticed, these were gang members that held guns. Yzak was in serious trouble.

" HIDE!! " Yzak screamed.

The truck came on its way fast, Yzak didn't know what to do and he hid himself in the back of the pokemon center. Yzak looked carefully through the back to see what the gang members were doing. He realized that they had guns, knives and chainsaws.

"****ing hell.." Yzak whispered with fear.

"Let's go and destroy this pokemon center! It's awesome to kill people, right!?" One of the gang members asked.

"hm, I don't care about kiling, and call me Archie!" The leader of the gang told the gang member.

"I've got to call the police, These ***gots are here again.." Yzak whispered.

"But what about my torchic? What the hell am I going to do?! god dammit!!" Yzak whispered in a serious tone.

Then one of the gang members sneaked behind Yzak and pulled a knife right to his throat.

"gotcha, kid!" A gang member snickered.

Yzak was in a serious situation here. Will he get out alive?

 

[smashbrosfan!]

chapter 6

"rraaagh!" Yzak roared then elbowed the gang member in it's stomach, causing him to vomit all aver the floor.

" Hey! Com Back!!" The gangster roared.

Yzak then kicked the gangster in the face, and did an uppercut on the gangster's stomach, causing him to get knocked out. Yzak then ran inside the back door of the pokemon center and tried to find his torchic.

"Torchic, I'm coming..." Yzak whispered.

Yzak then climbed into the vent and crawled until he found the healing machine. Yzak then Jumped down and took his pokeball, knowing that Torchic has been fully healed and was ready to fight.

"Torchic, come on out!" Yzak yelled.

"Torchic!!" The fire pokemon came out of its pokeball and chirped happily. It was fully healed and was ready to fight.

"Nurse Joy! Hey!" Yzak yelled as he was searching for Nurse Joy. Yzak then heard muffled sounds at the nursing room. When he ran inside, he saw that nurse Joy was being threatened.

"NURSE JOY!!!" Yzak screamed as the gang members were torturing her.

"What do you want? twerp! hahah!" One of the gang members laughed.

"Leave nurse Joy alone and be a real man!" Yzak screamed at the gangsters.

"HUH! If you win, I'll let her go. If you lose, I'll kill you!" The gangster screamed back at Yzak.

"fine with me." Yzak said.

The gangster threw his pokeball and inside the pokeball,a sharp fanged fish came out of it's pokeball. It was ready to attack.

"Carvanha!!!" The fish pokemon roared and crushed the healing machine with its fangs.

"What the hell's that? Let's see what the pokedex says.." Yzak said.

(Carvanha's strongly developed Jaws and it's sharply pointed out fangs give enough power to destroy hulls and ships.)

"Carvanha! Use bite!" The gangster roared.

The ferocious fish pokemon raised its fangs and charged towards torchic.

"Torchic! Dodge and use scratch!" Yzak commanded.

The fire pokemon easily dodged the fangs and scratched the fish pokemon with its sharp talons.

"Carr!" The fish pokemon struggled off the attack and made a loud roar.

"Carvanha! use water gun!" The gangster commanded.

The fish pokemon then charged up a ball of water and spat the stream of water to torchic.

"Torchic, dodge, focus energy, then ember!" Yzak commanded.

The fire pokemon dodged carvanha's stream of water, focused his mind, then spat out some fireballs to Carvanha. The fireballs landed of its face.

"Carvanha! No!" The gangster screamed.

"huh! I win!" Yzak said.

"NO! Guards! get the boy!" The gangster ordered the others.

The guards then took out their pokeballs and sent their pokemon out. One of the pokeballs, a furry, grey dog pokemon came out. A ball-like whale pokemon came out of the other guy's pokeball.

"Wailmer!" the ball pokemon cheered.

"poocheyena!!" the dog pokemon growled.

"Oh ****! 2 against one!" Yzak whispered.

"GO! Attack the boy's torchic!" Both gang members ordered their pokemon.

The ball-whale pokemon spat out a stream of water, and the dog pokemon charged its head against Yzak's torchic.

"oh no.."Yzak whispered in fear until both of the opponent's attack's were negated.

"Go treeko! use absorb!" a mysterious voice commanded.

The gecko pokemon charged up it's tail and then sucked the ball-whale pokemon's health, making the ball-whale pokemon faint.

"Did you miss me?" A girl with a green bandana asked.

" May! you came just in time!" Yzak answered back.

"Urrgh! I need some support!" The gangster yelled.

"They are called Team Aqua. The lower ranks are called grunts. like these guys." May told Yzak.

"Wrragh! I will crush you!!" one of the large grunts roared.

"GO Machop!" The large grunt sent out a fighting pokemon. The pokemon did a karate chop on the wall and the wall was shattered.

"Let's fight!!" The grunt roared.

"Already on it." Yzak answered.

"Let's go yzak!" May said.

Yzak's torchic:LV 14 VS Grunt's poocheyena:lv 13
May's Torchic:LV 13 Vs large grunt's machop: LV 15

"We're at a level disadvantage!" Yzak told May.

"Don't worry! We'll beat em." May answered back.

"GO MACHOKE!! KARATE CHOP!" The large grunt screamed.

"Poocheyena! use bite." The smaller grunt commanded.

"Dodge it! and use ember on poocheyena!" Yzak commanded.

The fire pokemon spat out little balls of fire at poocheyena, but the dog dodged it.

" huh! poocheyena! use bite!" The small grunt ordered.

The dog pokemon sharpened its fangs and bit the fire pokemon.

"tor!!!" the fire pokemon squealed.

"Torchic!! NO!!" Yzak screamed.

"Yzak! ahh! treeko!" May screamed as treecko was getting pummeled by machop.

"MAY!" Yzak yelled, but her pokemon was knocked out because machop pummeled the gecko pokemon.

"Torchic, use focus energy, and then use ember on both of them!" Yzak commanded.

The fire pokemon charged up, but it was knocked out before it can use ember.

"NO! Torchic!!" Yzak screamed.

"oh no.. we've lost." May sighed in disbelief, and started to cry because her treecko was injured.

"no, it's not over. IT"S NEVER OVER!! AHH!!" Yzak screamed in fear until his torchic was glowing, and it started to change form. Yzak was speechless and didn't know what was going on until....

"Combusken!!" The chick pokemon had evolved into a fowl pokemon. The pokemon was much taller now, with sharp talons and a beak. The fowl pokemon made a ferocious look against the grunts.

"No WAY......." Yzak whispered.

"Yeah!!! all right! You evolved!!" Yzak screamed of joy.

"I'm not afraid! It's still 2 against 1. You wont win!" The grunts yelled.

"we'll see." Yzak answered back at the grunts.

(Yzak's combusken:LV16 VS machop:LV 15)
poocheyena:LV 13

"GO! USE TACKLE ATTACK ON COMBUSKEN!!!!" Both of the grunts ordered.

"dodge, and use double kick." Yzak commanded.

"The fowl pokemon rose up in the air, then landed on the opponent pokemons' heads, and did fast stomping kicks and jumped back. Both of The opponent's pokemon fainted.

"NO! Our pokemon! runaway!!!" The grunts screamed in fear then ran away from the pokemon center.

20 minutes later

"That was really awesome! I can't believe your pokemon evolved!" May told Yzak.

"Oh, I was just lucky I guess. hehe.." Yzak said.

"Kids, your pokemon are healed! Thanks for waiting!" Nurse Joy told the kids.

"Thanks nurse Joy!" The kids thanked nurse Joy, then they went on their separate ways.

"One last thing! I want to meet you at the pokemon stadium after we get all the 8 badges! We'll see who's better!" May yelled out.

"Sure! Consider it done!" Yzak yelled back at May.

and Yzak was on his way to get his first gym badge.

 

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I can easily tell you're not using a word processor of ANY kind. I suggest you do use that next time. It's much better than posting an unfinished chapter in a short time

 

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Chapter 7

Yzak had seen the nearest city beneath his eyes. It was huge, about 10 times bigger than Littleroot town. Yzak decided to run as fast as he could to reach the city called Rustboro. But Yzak was hungry.

"I'm hungry....." Yzak groaned.

Pretty soon, Yzak was almost out of consciouness until he saw a fast food restaurant. Yzak jumped is happiness and ran like crazy to go to the fast food restaurant. Soon, he was already there.

"Aw man! i'm starving! let's eat!!" Yzak said.

Yzak then walked up to the ac****ant and ordered hamburger and fries. Pretty soon, the food he was ordering came.

"OH MY GOD! I haven't eaten in days! So good!" Yzak told himself in glory.

"You need to pay for that sir."The accountant told Yzak.

"Oh, I forgot. thanks." Yzak said.

Yzak then headed out of the store after lunch, to find Rustboro city. Yzak was sure it was close by, and walked for a few hours. Unfortunately, Yzak saw a huge, red pokemon that had sharp fangs and tough skin. The pokemon roared loudly and rammed its head against the mountain, causing it to split in half. Then the pokemon roared again. This time, the temperature became hotter, and the ground was starting to catch fire.

"HOT!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!" Yzak screamed as he ran wildly through the open road. His hair caught fire and he was starting to feel nauseous. Suddenly, Yzak had found a sloped hill and slid down the huge hill, only to get his pants burnt out by friction.

"WAAHHH!!!!!!" Yzak screamed in pain because his pants and his hair were on fire. He was about to get burnt out because of the mysterious pokemon's sunlight, until he found a small lake to jump in.

"JUMP!! GRRAAGGH!!" Yzak screamed in more pain as he jumped in the lake. The lake had turned the fire on his head and pants to smoke. Yzak then floated on the lake for a while. He then swam out of the lake, and walked for another 4 hours until he found Rustboro city.

"Wow, this city is huge. I better go check it out." Yzak said.

When Yzak had arrived to the city, he wondered what the huge building was for, so he checked it out. It was called the Devon Corps. Yzak knew this place in an instant. He went to this building when he was a little kid. There was a lake nearby of the gym building that Yzak didn't notice, so he'd check the lake out first. When he arrived to the lake, suddenly...

"Horsea!" the mysterious water pokemon squealed.

"NO way! A horsea!" Yzak yelled with surprise with what he saw.

"Go combusken!" Yzak yelled.

(Combusken LV 18 VS horsea LV 12)

a pokemon battle at the lake began with combusken VS horsea. Yzak attacked first.

"combusken! use double kick!" Yzak ordered.

The fowl pokemon jumped and did a twirling kick that hit horsea two times in the face. The water pokemon struggled, but it managed to shrug off the pain and blew out a stream of water. The water gun hit combusken, but the fowl pokemon shrugged the pokemon as well.

"Go! Combusken! use peck!" Yzak ordered.

The fowl pokemon then put its beaks out and charged at the water pokemon, but the water pokemon dodged and used water gun. The fowl pokemon countered with a double kick and kicked horsea two times in the face.

"horsea!!" the water pokemon squealed. Horsea was almost out of energy, so Yzak was given the chance to catch the horsea.

"GO! Pokeball!" Yzak yelled as he threw the pokeball. The pokeball landed on top of horsea and it dropped to the ground. The ball made funny beeping noises that horsea was struggling to get free. Eventually, it was caught.

"YES! I CAUGHT A HORSEA!" Yzak yelled out at the crowd with excitement.

"hmm, nice battle." a mysterious voice appeared.

"Who just said that?" Yzak wondered.

"I'm the gymleader of Rustboro city, since you showed me such an impressive battle, how about we have a gym battle next week?" The gymleader asked.

"Sure. Next week." Yzak answered, hoping it will be good.

"What's your name?" Yzak asked the gymleader.

"Name's Roxanne, I know what your name is. It's Yzak." The gymleader said.

"huh? how do you know my name?" Yzak questioned.

"You know, we used to go to school together. I was the one who put you into that locker, remember." Roxanne told him.

"You mean, you're.." Yzak asked.

"Yep, I'm the exact same girl." Roxanne answered back.

"ummm...." Yzak hummed.

"Yzak, what's the matter?" Roxanne asked.

10 minutes later....

"WAAAHH!!!" Yzak screamed and then ran away as far as possible.

"Wonder what's wrong with him?" Roxanne asked herself.

Yzak had known this girl. She used to go to the same school with him, but she was 3 years older than Yzak. Yzak had remembered the day that Roxanne stuffed Yzak in her locker about 4 years ago. This was the story.

"Wow, my first day of elementary school.. How nice," Yzak said to himself.

When Yzak walked inside his new school, a couple of girls greeted him.

"Hey, you're so cute...! What's your name little guy?" One of the older girls asked.

"Umm, my name's Yzak. What's yours?" Yzak asked.

"MIne's Roxanne. Nice to meet you." Roxanne said.

Roxanne had pink ribbons on the side of her braided hair. She wore a one piece casual long-sleeved sweater and short skirts. She had white-black striped stockings and pink runners.

"nice to see you, four-eyes. Hahahah!!" Yzak told Roxanne.

"hmmp... Take that back!!" Roxanne yelled with anger.

Roxanne grabbed his legs, opened her locker, carried Yzak and swung him around.

"WAAH!! HELP ME!!" Yzak screamed as Roxanne was spinning Yzak around.

Roxanne then threw Yzak up, and kicked him through her locker.

"Lose the temper.. Roxanne." One of the girls said.

"Who cares? The boy called me four-eyes." Roxanne answered and then walked away.

"Oh no..." Yzak said while he was squished on top of all of Roxanne's stuff.

That was why Yzak was scared of Roxanne, momentarily.

"Let's train!" Yzak yelled.

"Go! Combusken and Horsea!" Yzak exclaimed.

So They began their training for the week.

A WEEK LATER AT THE DAY OF THE GYM BATTLE.

"Man! I can't wait for this gym battle! It feels awesome!" Yzak said with excitement.

Yzak then checks out his pokemon, but he also caught another pokemon. It was green, and looked like an electric puppy.

Combusken:LV 21
Horsea: LV 16
Electrike: LV 16

Finally, He was ready for his first gym battle. He ran as fast as he could to the Rustboro gym, and opened the large, wooden gate that was in front of him. Inside, it revealed a rock stadium and Roxanne standing on the end platform.

"You've came Yzak!" Roxanne cheered.

 

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Chapter 8

The announcer had came. She climbed to the middle platform outside of the stadium and announced.

"THis will be a 3 on 3 battle match! No exceptions! The last one to reach out of pokemon wins. Now fight!!" The announcer exclaimed.

Yzak VS Roxanne
combusken:LV 21 geodude:LV 17
horsea:LV 16 graveler: LV 19
electrike:LV16 Nosepass: LV 21

The fight begins with Roxanne choosing first.

"Go! Geodude!" Roxanne yelled as she threw her pokeball. Inside came out a solid ball of rock with arms and a face.

"GEODUDE!!" The rock pokemon made a deep, bold cry.

"Go! Horsea!" Yzak yells out as he throws out his pokeball.

"Horsea!" The water pokemon squealed as it was floating on air.

"Geodude! rock throw!" Roxanne commanded.

The rock pokemon put its arms to the ground, pulled out large pebbles on the ground, and hurled them at Horsea.

"Dodge! Horsea! then use water gun!" Yzak commanded.

Horsea dodged the hurled rocks from geodude and spewed out a stream of water at geodude. The rock pokemon didn't have time to dodge and got hit by the water. Geodude was knocked out in a single hit.

"return, geodude." Roxanne said.

"Go Graveler!" Roxanne yelled out. She tossed a pokeball and it came out a bigger boulder pokemon with two hind legs and four arms. It was as tall as Roxanne herself.

"Horsea, use water-gun at Graveler!" Yzak commanded.

Horsea charged up a ball of water, then spewed out the stream of water at Graveler, but the boulder pokemon easily dodged the water.

"Roll-out attack! Graveler!" Roxanne commanded.

The boulder pokemon then rolled around and around until it formed a spinning ball, then charged at horsea.

"Horsea! dodge!" Yzak commanded, but horsea was too late and got flattened by the incoming roll-out graveler. Horsea fainted.

"Not so tough now, are you?" Roxanne taunted Yzak.

"AHH! Take that back!" Yzak yelled at Roxanne.

"Go combusken!" Yzak roared as he threw another pokeball and it came out combusken, the fowl pokemon.

"Combusken!" The young fowl pokemon shouted as it was ready for battle.

"Graveler, roll-out attack once more!" Roxanne commanded.

The rock pokemon rolled around faster and faster, then charged at combusken lightning fast, and slammed combusken to the side of the stadium.

"oh well, your combusken's knocked out." Roxanne replied.

"Don't be too sure." Yzak answered.

"Combusken!!" The fowl pokemon roared without a scratch on it.

"Roll-out attack!" Roxanne ordered.

The boulder pokemon rolled, then charged at Coubusken with full force.

"Jump over the graveler, focus energy, then use double-kick." Yzak commanded Combusken.

Combusken jumped over the rolling pokemon, focused, and landed on the rock pokemon and kicked the rock pokemon two times in the head. The rock pokemon fainted at the moment of impact.

"NOO! Graveler!" Roxanne screamed and ran over to her pokemon.

"Gravelerrr..." The pokemon groaned weakly and fainted.

"hmm. My next pokemon. Go Nosepass!" Roxanne yelled and threw her last pokeball. It came out a semi-cone shaped rock with a red nose.

"Bring it on!" Yzak roared.

"Combusken, use double kick!" Yzak commanded.

"Dodge, and use thunder wave." Roxanne ordered.

Nosepass's red nose charged out a tiny bolt of lightning that hit Combusken, making the fowl pokemon paralyzed.

"Combusken! Break free of the paralysis!" Yzak ordered.

"It's no use. Your pokemon is paralyzed until you take it to a pokemon center." Roxanne explained.

"Nosepass, use rock slide!" Roxanne commaned.

Nosepass then put its hands to the ground, took out huge rocks off the ground, then hurled at the young foul pokemon.

"Combusken! Break those rocks with your double kick!" Yzak ordered.

Combusken kicks the rocks that are hurled and breaks most of them, but one rock lands it in combusken's face and knocks him out.

"Combusken!" Yzak exclaimed.

" Go electrike!" Yzak then threw a pokeball. It came out a green, lightning dog. It glared ferociously at the enemy nosepass.

"Nosepass! use rock slide!" Roxanne commanded.

Nosepass then puts its hands in the ground again, takes huge rocks off the ground, and hurls at the green, electric pokemon.

" Electrike, dodge and bite Nosepass's nose!" Yzak ordered with a serious tone.

Electrike then dodges all the rocks and bites Nosepass's nose. Making the rock pokemon spin around and around until it crashes into a wall and gets knocked out.

"NO! Nosepass!" Roxanne squealed.

" Yes!! WE WON! " Yzak shouted loudly across the whole gym.

" That was an awesome battle!" Roxanne told Yzak.

" Thanks! you were awesome!" Yzak told Roxanne.

" Here, the official stone badge. You've earned it." Roxanne said.

"Hmm. Thanks!! I got my official first Badge!!" Yzak screamed in happiness.

A while later, Yzak leaves Rustboro city, until the Team Aqua members shoves Yzak and he falls.

"OW! What the hell!?" Yzak shouted.

"Move!!" A grunt screamed.

 

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chapter. 9

One of the grunts pushed Yzak and ran away. But Yzak noticed that the grunt was holding a piece of paper when he ran away. A man in a grey shortly came after.

“Hey! Come back you *******!” The man yelled, but to no avail.

“What’s going on? And what was that piece of paper the grunt was holding?” Yzak asked.

"It was an important research data! I must get it back! Please help!" The man in grey begged.

" Yeah yeah! Come on! We have to catch that guy!" Yzak told the man in grey

"Sure! I'm coming!" The guy in grey yelled.

Yzak and the man in grey is chasing another grunt right now. The man in black said that the grunt was holding an important research data and needed to get it back, so they're now ended up in a cave with a sealed hole.

"*uck! How the hell do we catch him now?"

"There's an alternate route at the top of the cliff." The man in grey told Yzak.

"I'm on it. You wait here!" Yzak told the man in grey.

Before Yzak began climbing the cliff, a strange old man came and tried to tell Yzak something.

"Young lad, The grunt stole my Peeko! Please help me to get back my wingull, please?" The old man asked.

" Sure, old man! I'll get that wingull for you!" Yzak answered.

Yzak had now started to climb the cliff, but a lot of troubles were happening on the way to the top of the cliff. The rock slide was the first of his problems.

"holy *hit! That was f*cking close!" Yzak exclaimed in surprisement.

When he reached the top of the huge cliff, Yzak ran inside the cave, only to find that there were a lot of whismurs on that area. He tried to find an exit to this horrid cave, until he found a mysterious, blue egg that was left on the ground. He wondered what the blue egg was for, but he picked the egg up anyway.
He later found a large hole up in the ceiling, and climbed up the hole until he reacked the top. He then saw the grunt on the top, waiting for Yzak. But the grunt was wearing a special, different uniform. Maybe he was a special member.

"Hey Grunt! I need that paper back!" Yzak exclaimed at the grunt!

"Huh! This useless piece of ****? Sure! but you have to battle me first."

"Yeah! let's go for it! Grunt!" Yzak yelled with excitement.

" How dare you call me a grunt? I'm an admin! For that you'll pay!!" The Admin Roared.

"Bring it on, FREAK!!" Yzak taunted the admin, making him mad.

"ARRGH! NOBODY CALLS ME A FREAK!! YOU DIE!!!" The admin roared harder!

The battle against Yzak and the Admin was under way. Who will win and who will lose?

Yzak VS Admin
combusken:LV27 Golem: LV 32
horsea: LV 24 doduo: LV 22
manetric: LV 27 skarmory: LV 28

"GO! Golem!" The admin roared as he sent out a huge boulder pokemon on the field. It showed no mercy.

"Go! horsea!" Yzak yelled as he hurled his pokeball up in the air.

It was horsea against Golem, a major evolution disadvantage, or not. The admin attacked first.

"Golem! use earthquake!" The admin commanded.

"horsea! dodge, then use water pulse!" Yzak ordered.

The admin's golem jumped and stomped its feet onto the ground, making a massive shockwave that destroyed the ground, but horsea dodged and blew supersonic stream of water from its mouth directly onto the boulder pokemon, fainting Golem in a single hit.

"NO! Golem! return!" The admin called back his golem.

"Go doduo!" Then the admin sends out doduo, a two headed ostrich pokemon.

"return, horsea! Go manetric!" Yzak yelled.

It was now manetric against doduo. It was a major disadvantage, but the admin was confident.

"Go doduo! return!" The admin roared.

"manetric, use thunderbolt!" Yzak ordered.

Doduo charged its beak against manetric and tried to attack manetric, but it was destroyed by Manetric's thunderbolt.

"good job Manetric!" YzaK exclaimed happily.

"NOO! DAMN! GO skarmory!" The admin screamed.

The battle was now manetric versus skarmory. Skarmory is a steel and flying pokemon, so Yzak thought manetric was good for this battle.

"Skarmory! Use drill peck!" The admin commanded.

"Skarr!" Skarmory roared and charged towards Yzak's manetric.

"Manetric! use thunderbolt!" Yzak commanded.

Manetric charged up a big electric current, and blasted the lightning bolt to skarmory. The steel-flying pokemon got hit by the electricity and fainted.

"NOOOO! I LOST!!" The admin screamed.

"Give those papers back! They're not yours! and the wingull too." Yzak told the admin.

"NEVER!! YOU'LL NEVER CATCH ME! HAHA!" The admin yells out loudly and runs away.

"manetric, use thunderbolt." Yzak commanded one last time.

"rrooo!" Manetric howled then blasted out a massive electric current, frying the admin that was running away.

"There we go! the research papers and the wingull, you're safe!" Yzak told wingull.

"wingull!" the seagull pokemon chirped cheerfully.

After Yzak climbed down the mountain, he gave back wingull to the old man and the research papers to the man in gray.

"Thanks!" The man in grey said to Yzak.

" Thank you young lad! I need to pay you back, but how?" the old man questioned Yzak.

"Old man! do you know anything about a blue egg that was in the cave?" Yzak asked the old man.

"hmm, nope, but my name is Briney. What's your name young lad?" The old man asked Yzak.

"Yzak sir." Yzak answered the old man's question.

"Come on! We've no time to waste!" The man in grey exclaimed.

" coming! bye Mr.Briney!" Yzak cheered.

"You be careful! Yzak!" The old man cheered back.

"I have a good feeling about that boy... Could he be?" Mr. Briney thought.

At the arrival to Rustboro city,

" We've got to hurry! My boss's gonna start complaining!" The man in grey told Yzak.

" I'm on it!" Yzak answered back.

 

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chapter 10.

Yzak and the man in grey are now heading back to Devon corps building. They finally arrived in Rustboro city, where the man in grey needs to hand the research sheet to his boss.

"My name's Michael by the way." The man in grey said.

" Yzak. " Yzak told Michael.

" You work for the Devon corporation right?" Yzak asked.

" Yeah, but I'm about to get fired if I don't hand the research paper in." Michael told Yzak.

"Oh? I'm sure your boss won't fire you." Yzak said.

They now arrived to the Devon Corps building. Yzak and Michael walked inside the building. But Yzak was surprised about what he sees.

"Nice! This is like a huge company building!" Yzak exclaimed.

" This is a company building, idiot." Michael said.

They now head upstairs and meet the boss.

"Mr.Stone! I got the research papers!" Michael told the boss.

"Good! And who's this young lad?" Mr.Stone asked.

"My name's Yzak, Mr.Stone." Yzak told Mr.stone.

" Can I get my promotion now?" Michael asked Mr.Stone.

" Yes, you may. Your salary's increased by 1000 dollars. (100 in real dollars.)

" YES!! Thank you!!" Michael yelled with excitement.

"And Yzak, I want you to have this." Mr.Stone said.

"Thanks! What is it?" Yzak asked.

"It's a Pokenav. It shows informations about your pokemon and the Hoenn region." Mr. Stone told Yzak.

" Thanks a lot Mr.Stone." Yzak told Mr.Stone.

"Wait! Can you hand this letter to Steven Anderson? He's my son in law." Mr.Stone asked.

"Sure, what does he look like?" Yzak asked.

"He has grey curved hair, and has a red jacket and pants. He apparantely wears blue runners." Mr.Stone told Yzak.

After the conversation between Yzak and Mr.Stone, Yzak goes out of Rustboro city to find the next gym to battle in. He checks his pokedex, and finds that the next gym is right across the lake beside him. He then finds a sign that says PORT on it. Yzak then walked inside the building.

"Yzak! how nice to see you!" The familiar old man greeted.

"Mr. Briney! Hello!" Yzak greeted back at Mr. Briney.

"Can you take me to Duford town?" Yzak asked.

"Sure! " Mr.Briney answered.

Yzak and Mr.Briney then went into the boat and started going to Duford town. But suddenly there was trouble ahead soon enough.

"RRAGH! I'll destroy you!" The big grunt roared as he jumped out of the water.

"Craudant!" The crab pokemon jumped out of the water shortly after and grabbed Yzak's are with its huge pincers. Blood then splurted from Yzak's arm.

"grr!" Yzak growled as his arm was injured by the crab pokemon.

"YOU WILL DIE!!" The grunt roared.

"we'll see." Yzak said.

Yzak took out his pokeball and hurled it on the air.

"GO! Manetric!" Yzak yelled.

"rrooo!" Manetric howled and gave crawdant a fierce look.

"Your puny dog against my Crawdant? Hah!" The grunt laughed.

"don't be too sure." Yzak told the grunt.

"FIGHT!!!" The grunt roared.

" Let's get started. " Yzak said.

Manetric:LV 27 VS crawdant:LV24

"Crawdant then charged manetric with its sharp pincirs, but the electric pokemon dodged Crawdant's attack over and over again.

"Crawdant! Use water pulse!" The grunt ordered.

"Manetric, dodge and use thunderbolt." Yzak commanded.

Crawdant charged up a giant water ball and hurled it at a really fast pace, but the electric pokemon dodged and blasted the crab pokemon with a massive electric current. The crawdant fainted.

"NOO! CRAWDANT!" The grunt screamed, then dove back into the lake and swam away from the boat.

"Good Job young lad." Mr. Briney complimented.

"Thanks!" Yzak happily exclaimed.

"There's Duford town. This is where you have your gym battle, right?" Mr.Briney asked.

"Yep. I need to get off now." Yzak told Mr. Briney.

"Take care!" Mr. Briney yelled from a distance.

Yzak was now finally at Duford town where he will have his next gym badge, but he must deliver the letter Mr.Stone gave him first. Yzak then walked inside the cave, and climbed downstairs. It was dark, and Yzak needed a flashlight. Fortunately, Yzak bought a flashlight at the Rustboro city store.

"Wow.. This looks amazing." Yzak whispered with awe and then.

"Larvitar!" A tiny rock pokemon with a large horn appeared.

"WOW! a larvitar! my dad said these were rare." Yzak said.

The rock pokemon then charged Yzak with full force but Yzak dodged it.

"Go! Horsea!" Yzak yelled as he sent out his horsea.

"Horsea! use water pulse!" Yzak ordered.

The water pokemon shou out a supersonic stream of water, and hit larvitar, but larvitar survived. The rock pokemon then rammed horsea with its horns, but horsea dodged it and spat out water at larvitar one more time. The water hit larvitar and the rock pokemon was now really weak.

"Go! Pokeball!" Yzak yelled as he threw a pokeball at the rock pokemon. The pokeball wiggled and wiggled, but it was eventually caught.

"YEAH! I caught a larvitar!" Yzak yelled with excitement then ran around in circles and crashed in a wall.

Yzak kept going deeper into the cave and found a bunch of small steel type pokemon. These were arons and Yzak loaded them in the pokedex. Yzak then kept going and going until he found a unique cave where a man with red clothes and grey hair was waiting.

"Hey! Are you Anderson?!" Yzak shouted.

"Yeah! I am! How did you know my name?" The man in red shouted back.

"Your father in law, Mr.Stone told me to deliver this letter to you." Yzak told Anderson.

"Thanks a lot! What's your name?" Anderson asked.

"Name's Yzak." Yzak answered.

"Nice seeing you! and by the way, the gym doesn't open in two weeks." Anderson told Yzak.

"Thanks for the info!" Yzak thanked Anderson.

Anderson then runs out of the cave and jumps over the huge gap that was on the way to the exit.

"Whoa! that must've been like a twelve meter jump!" Yzak said with shock.

"Well, we have two weeks. Let's train." Yzak said and began training for the gym battle.

Two weeks have passed since Yzak met Anderson, and Yzak was ready for his gym battle. He was mostly training his larvitar though.

YZAK
combusken:LV30
horsea:LV26
manetric:LV30
larvitar:LV27

"I'm ready!" Yzak shouted.

Yzak then ran over to the gym, and opened a solid metal door that was at the front. Yzak then searched for the gym leader, but the gym leader was not there. Yzak wondered until he heard a loud yelling noise. He decided to check it out.

 

[Dilasc]

Okay, not many people have been reading this, but I'm come out and say it. This story isn't so good.

First and foremost, your description is lacking. It's rare and uninteresting at that, leaving me very little feel for the story itself.

Next, your grammar and punctuation are very off as well. Every so often, you'll skip a space after the first quotation mark of the dialogue, sort of like " this," which is bad. FIX IT!

Numbers should always be written out. Thus five, not 5, and twenty-six, not 26, and one million three instead of 1000003... okay, well maybe there's a point where it is okay to use the numbers, but certainly until at least one hundred.

Finally, your tendency to bump with one line is a bad habit. Either post the next thrown together piece of misguided literacy, or don't post. If you do post, then it's spam, pure and simple!

You should try writing this out in MS word and not in the reply box. You'll get more literary help if you do. I also suggest you go read stories that writers and revieweres write up. ou can learn a ton by reading our well written stories.

Anyway, good luck.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

Chapter 11

Yzak ran outside the gym, and tried to find out what that was. Yzak then saw the sign called Duford Beach. He ran as fast he could and saw people surfing on the other side of the beach. Yzak decided to check the beach out and decided to surf on the waves for a little while. Yzak asked the surfboard shop to borrow a surfboard.

"I need to borrow a board!" Yzak asked the owner.

"eighty dollars please." The owner asked Yzak.

"Here. Take one-hundered dollars and keep the change." Yzak told the owner.

"Thanks." The owner thanked Yzak.

Yzak then ran out of the shop and ran into the waves. Yzak was confident because he had surfed at Johto about a year, Where he lived until he moved to Hoenn.

"Sweet! This is awesome!" Yzak yelled out as he was surfing on the waves.

"Hey dude! wanna race?" a strange man asked.

"Yeah! Let's go!" Yzak answered loudly.

Yzak and the strange man started to race to the beach, with no one giving out an inch, but suddenly, a huge wave came crashing down on Yzak and sent him flying over and landed him on the sand.

"Sweet! You won!" The strange man told Yzak.

"Oh man! My head hurts.." Yzak groaned.

"My name's Brawly. I am the gym leader of Dewford town." The strange man told Yzak. He wore an orange T-shirt, blue shorts, and leather sandals. His hair was spiked and was blue.

"Mine's Yzak." Yzak said to Brawly.

"Shall we have a gym battle then?" Brawly asked.

"My pleasure!" Yzak answered.

Yzak and Brawly both returned their rental boards back to the owner and each got a can of soda. When they started to walk back to the gym, Yzak saw a familiar person lying on the beach.

"May!" Yzak called out.

"Hi Yzak!" May called back. She wore a light-green two-piece swimsuit with flowers decorated on it. Looking at May with her swimsuit on, Yzak started to blush and couldn't keep down on his swim shorts.

"Is she a friend of yours?" Brawly asked.

"Well, sort of.." Yzak answered.

"Oh, looking at that blush on your face, I think you like her, don't you?" Brawly asked with a snicker.

"NO!! I mean sort of..." Yzak answered loudly.

"Anyhow, let's go back to the gym. We're having our gym battle." Brawly told Yzak.

When they walked back to the gym, They walked up to the two platforms on either side of the stadium and the announcer walked up to the middle.

"Each trainer will use 2 on 2 pokemon. The last one to run out of pokeballs wins!" The announcer announced.

"Shall we?" Brawly asked.

"Let's go!" Yzak answered with a smile.

YzaK VS BRAWLY
Combusken: LV30 hariyama:LV 26
Manetric: LV30 machoke: LV 28

"GO! Combusken!" Yzak yelled as he sent out his starter pokemon.

"Go! Hariyama!" Brawly yelled as he sent out a huge, fat fighting type pokemon.

"FIGHT!" The announcer exclaimed.

"Combusken! Use sky uppercut!" Yzak ordered.

"Hariyama! dodge and use arm thrust!" Brawly commanded.

The fire pokemon grinded its fists and tried to punch Hariyama's face, but the fighting pokemon dodged and did multiple thrusts on combusken's face. The fire pokemon was sent flying back to the stadium wall, but stood up shortly after.

"Not bad!" Brawly told Yzak.

"So are you!" Yzak told Brawly.

"Go! Hariyama! Use earthquake!" Brawly ordered.

"Combusken! dodge, focus energy, and sky uppercut!" Yzak commanded.

The fighting pokemon jumped and created a huge earthquake that shattered the stadium floor, but the fire pokemon jumped, focused its energy, then dived down on hariyama's face. Hariyama was flown onto the stadium wall and fainted.

"Hariyama!! Return!" Brawly yelled.

"Go Machoke!" Brawly yelled as he sent out a muscular humanoid pokemon.

"Machoke!" The muscular pokemon roared and got into its battle position.

"Go combusked, flamethrower!" Yzak ordered.

"Machoke, mega kick." Brawly commanded.

The fire pokemon charged and blew out a huge stream of fire, but the muscular pokemon kicked the flame that was headed for machoke, and sended to deflected flame back to combusked.

"COM!!" Combusken screamed.

"Combusken!!" Yzak screamed.

"Machoke, cross chop!" Brawly ordered loudly.

The muscular pokemon leaned backwards, charged up its fist, and smacked it against the fire pokemon. The fire pokemon crashed into the stadium wall and fainted, blood coming out from its face.

"NO! Combusken!" Yzak yelled and ran over to his pokemon.

"Combusken. You'll be fine. Return!" Yzak exclaimed.

"GO! Manetric!" Yzak yelled. An electric dog pokemon came out of Yzak's pokeball. The electric pokemon gave Machoke a ferocious look.

"Go machoke. Use cross chop!" Brawly ordered.

"Dodge, and use thunderbolt!" Yzak commanded.

The muscular pokemon charged up its fist, and tried to smack it against the electric pokemon, but Manetric dodged and gave Machoke a thunderbolt.

"Maaa!! Choke." The muscular pokemon endured the hit, and was still standing, looking a little bit fazed.

"Manetric! use bite!" Yzak ordered.

"Machoke! grab the dog's head and throw it against the wall!" Brawly commanded.

The electric pokemon charged against machoke but machoke grabbed Manetric's head and hurled the electric pokemon against the wall, but the electric dog pokemon landed on the rock beside the stadium.

"Now! give the machoke a charged thunderbolt!" Yzak yelled.

"Machoke! Use mega kick!" Brawly ordered.

The muscular pokemon bent its knees, and charged with all its might against the electric pokemon, but Manetric charged up a massive electric current up its head and launched it at the muscular pokemon. Machoke was hurled against the wall, and was knocked out.

"Machoke!! NO!" Brawly screamed.

"Yes! we won! great job manetric!" Yzak cheered happily.

"Good job! Yzak! Here's your Knuckle badge." Brawly told Yzak.

"Thanks a lot Brawly!" Yzak answered with excitement.

"Good luck on your next gym battle!" Brawly shouted out as Yzak was leaving the gym.

" I will! You too!" Yzak shouted back at Brawly.

Yzak had won his second gym badge. He's now leaving for his third gym badge, but will he ever succeed? Find out in the next chapter.

 

[Hoenir]

Okay, not many people have been reading this, but I'm come out and say it. This story isn't so good.

First and foremost, your description is lacking. It's rare and uninteresting at that, leaving me very little feel for the story itself.

Next, your grammar and punctuation are very off as well. Every so often, you'll skip a space after the first quotation mark of the dialogue, sort of like " this," which is bad. FIX IT!

Numbers should always be written out. Thus five, not 5, and twenty-six, not 26, and one million three instead of 1000003... okay, well maybe there's a point where it is okay to use the numbers, but certainly until at least one hundred.

Finally, your tendency to bump with one line is a bad habit. Either post the next thrown together piece of misguided literacy, or don't post. If you do post, then it's spam, pure and simple!

You should try writing this out in MS word and not in the reply box. You'll get more literary help if you do. I also suggest you go read stories that writers and revieweres write up. ou can learn a ton by reading our well written stories.

Anyway, good luck.

I heard that after 101 you can start writing numbers>letters.

-----

Also, one thing about this story (in addition to what Dilasc said) is the swearing. Ten year olds would not be saying damn and the likes. I know that when I was ten, I said crud, and that was it. ALso, a 10 year old would NOT have white hair. And if there was an emergency and he couldn't find his cell phone, he wouldn't just say "oh well." ANyone would run for help.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

I'd thought that maybe the main hero, Yzak would look like Ruby or Brenden from the pokemon manga. May would look like the original May from the show.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

Chapter 12:

"Mr. Briney! I need to borrow your boat!" Yzak yelled from a distance while running.

"Hello! Yzak! I was just waiting for you! How did your gym battle go?" Mr. Briney asked.

"I won my second badge! Now I have to go to my next badge!" Yzak said.

"Sure! How about going to Slateport City first? There's a lot of shops and a pokemon contest building there." Mr. Briney asked Yzak.

"Yeah. I love to!" Yzak answered.

"Then let's go." Mr. Briney said.

As Yzak was going on Mr. Briney's boat, He checked his pokenav to see where his gym battle was. Then the boat started to head for Slateport city.

"Mauville gym, just a little bit up from Slateport." Yzak said to himself.

The boat then travelled on the long run until it reached the dock of Slateport city.

"This is where you get off. Be careful." Mr. Briney told Yzak.

"Sure, I will." Yzak answered.

Yzak then got off the boat and looked around the Slateport city. Yzak was shocked by what he saw.

"Wow! Huge buildings everywhere!" Yzak shouted with surprise.

Yzak then walked at the Slateport City to check some shops out. One shop sold shoes, and the others sold CDs and other entertainment systems. Yzak then first went to the Entertainment center. He walked inside and saw huge shelves of CDs, DVDs and video tapes everywhere in the store. Yzak decided to buy one at this store, until he saw the adult section at the corner.

"Sweet..." Yzak said to himself and walked up to the adult section, but a man stopped him.

"No. You can't go in there! That section is for adults only!" The man told him.

"Whoops, sorry." Yzak told the man.

"Don't do it again! Young fellow!" The man scolded. Then the man walked back to the registration counter.

"Damn, so close." Yzak said. He then walked out of the store and decided to check out the museum. When he arrived to the museum, there was a full line there. Yzak wondered what was going on, then suddenly,

"Move the F*ck over!" A grunt yelled ferociously was he was driving a jeep. The jeep then crashed into the museum wall and the grunt ran inside the museum.

" You need to pay!" The woman at the entrance told the grunt, but the grunt shoved her to the floor.

"F*ck off B*tch!" The grunt yelled at the woman and then ran upstairs.

"What the f*ck was that all about?" Yzak wondered. He then ran inside the museum to check out what was happening. Unfortunately, Yzak didn't expect anything like this. Yzak then heard a gunfire at the upstairs of the museum.

"Get off!" The grunt yelled.

"Whoa what the hell was that?" Yzak wondered with urgency.

Yzak ran to the upstairs to the museum, wondering what was going on at the upstairs of the museum. What he saw was unexpected and made him angry.

"Where is the old sea map?" A grunt yelled at a scientist.

"I don't know sir.." The scientist answered nervously.

The grunt then punches the scientist in the face and kicks him in the head. He then spits on him and walks up to the other grunts. The grunts try to break open the glass cage that contains the old sea map, until Yzak came.

"Bunch of ***gots! What the **** are you doing here?" Yzak asked rudely at the grunts.

"None of your business kid! Go home to your mommy!" The grunt taunted.

This made Yzak angry. Yzak then challenged the grunt to a pokemon battle.

"Hmm! You want to face me?! You little Wimp!!" The grunt taunted at Yzak.

"Just leave the people alone!" Yzak exclaimed.

"No Way! We want to get the sea map! Boss's orders!" The grunt yelled at Yzak.

"So be it." Yzak said.

Just then...

"Stop." The mysterious man said.

The mysterious man wore a blue bandana with a skull on the forehead. He also wore a tight suit made of black leather and a black jacket. He was about two times as taller as Yzak was. The man then asked Yzak a challenge.

"You're the kd who defeated my two admins. I'm impressed." The man said to Yzak.

"Just who are you? Are you another one of those admins?" Yzak asked the man rudely.

"I forgot to introduce myself, My name is Archie." The man told Yzak.

"Mine's Yzak. You wanted a battle? I'll give you a battle." Yzak yelled.

"A battle it shall be." Archie answered.

The battle between Yzak and Archie started. Yzak was strong, but Archie was confident. In fact, Archie must be a really good battler. The battle then went underway.

YZAK VS ARCHIE
manetric: LV 31 golbat: LV 33


"GO! Manetric!" Yzak yelled as he sent out manetric. The electric pokemon then howled.

"Not bad. Go golbat!" Archie sent out a large bat pokemon flew across the museum, making screeching noises.

"Go manetric, use bite." Yzak ordered.

"interesting.. Golbat, use air cutter." Archie commanded.

The electric pokemon charged at the bat pokemon with its fangs, but the bat pokemon dodged and sent out air disks that looked like knives to the electric pokemon. The electric pokemon got hit, but it shrugged off the hit with ease.

"manetric, use thunderbolt." Yzak commanded.

"dodge, and use sludge bomb." Archie commanded.

The electric pokemon charged out a massive electric current at the bat pokemon, but the bat pokemon dodged out of harm's way and spat out a massive ball of sludge.

"Now! Bite its head!" Yzak ordered.

"unngh." Archie growled.

The electric pokemon then bit golbat's head, making the bat pokemon scream in pain. The bat pokemon tried to shrug it off, but it was too late.

"Thunder!" Yzak ordered.

The electric pokemon then gave golbat a massive lightning bolt that crashed both golbat and manetric. The bat pokemon fainted, seeing that it was to strong.

"Golbat return! Wow. You really are a good trainer." Archie said.

"You're pretty good yourself." Yzak said back.

"Capture the boy!" A grunt yelled out, then threw a net at Yzak, but Archie caught the rope.

"What are you doing boss?" A grunt asked.

"No need to capture the boy." Archie answered.

"Why are you doing this? What are you trying to acheive?" Yzak asked Archie.

"It's none of your business, and don't interfere with us ever again." Archie answered in a serious tone, then walked out of the museum with the rest of the grunts.

"Thanks. Now help me up." The scientist said.

Yzak then helped the scientist up, and wondered what Team Aqua was truly after. He then asked the scientist.

"What is Team Aqua after that you were guarding so badly?" Yzak asked.

"It's an old sea map. Legend says that it shows a road to the mysterious and unknown world." The scientist then answered.

"Uh, right." Yzak said.

"This map is very important. It shows us all the regions that man cannot acheive while on land." The scientist told Yzak.

After the conversation between Yzak and the scientist, Yzak goes downstairs and outside of the museum to find his next gym badge. Just then, the blue egg in his backpack wiggled and wiggled faster. Yzak then opened his backpack and saw that the egg was cracking open. Yzak wondered what it was, and decided to take the egg out of his backpack. Just then, it hatched. A small, blue pokemon with two wings and symbols that looked like the pokemon that he saw at the Littleroot town. Just then the pokemon chirped at Yzak and jumped on top of Yzak's shoulders.

"kyogre!" The small blue pokemon chirped.

"Aw wow! What is this?" Yzak wondered with surprise.

The pokemon was no more than the height of upto Yzak's knees. It had large blue fins with symbols on them and a white belly. It chirped over and over again, as the blue pokemon was chewing on Yzak's backpack. Then it chirped again and rain clouds were coming on everywhere. The blue pokemon then chirped happily.

"Don't hehehe..." Yzak asked the kyogre to stop in a friendly manner.

Yzak then searched the pokedex, and found its definition.

"Kyogre, the sea basin pokemon. This pokemon was one of the pokemon that fought a calamystic fight with the god of land. It took sleep after fighting with Groudon, the god of the land. This pokemon also saved people from terrible droughts. It is a water type.

"Wow! This little thing saved people from droughts?" Yzak wondered.

"Kyo! Kyo!" Kyogre chirped again happily and went on top of Yzak's shoulder.

"Hey.. Stop.. You're pretty heavy for a baby pokemon." Yzak told kyogre, and the water pokemon jumped down of Yzak's shoulders.

"It's good to see you! Let's get going!" Yzak happily told his new baby Kyogre.

"Kyogre!" The water pokemon chirped happily again and climbed Yzak's shoulders.

"Kyo? (Where?)" Kyogre chirped at Yzak with curiosity.

"To win my next badge!" Yzak told Kyogre.

"Kyo! Kyogre!!" Kyogre chirped happily.

"Let's go." Yzak said.

"KYogre!" Kyogre chirped happily and sprayed a powerful current of water in the face.

"huffffgh!!!.." Yzak yelled while he was being sprayed with Kyogre's water gun.

"Kyogre!" Kyogre chirped happily and went inside Yzak's pokeball.

(Kyogre:LV 5)

When he walked out of Slateport city, he encounted an another grunt.

"I saw it. The legendary water pokemon. Give it to me!!" The grunt yelled.

"F*ck off! It's my kyogre and I'd rather get shot in the head instead! F*g!" Yzak yelled back at the grunt rudely.

"GO! Mighteyena!" The grunt yelled.

Yzak was about to send out his manetric until his baby kyogre came out.

"Kyogre!" The water pokemon chirped happily when it came out.

"So tiny! You have no use for that pokemon little runt!" The grunt yelled at Yzak, but Yzak refused.

So, a battle between Yzak's baby kyogre and the grunt's mighteyena began.

Mighteyena:LV 20 VS Kyogre:LV 5

"Go mighteyena! Use crunch!" The grunt ordered.

"Oh no... My kyogre's gonna die." Yzak was scared that his newly hatched pokemon was going to be murdered, but surprisingly, the water pokemon glowed in an aura that deflected the mighteyena's crunch.

"How??" The grunt wondered with fear.

"Go Kyogre! Use water pulse!" Yzak ordered.

The water pokemon then charged up a blue ball up in its mouth, and blasted it at the mighteyena. The mighteyena fainted within the impact.

"NO! WAHH!!!" The grunt saw his fainted pokemon and ran away like a coward.

"Good Job Kyogre!" Yzak congradulated.

"Kyogre!" Kyogre chirped happily and hopped on Yzak's back.

Together, they travelled and trained when necessary. With Yzak's surprisement, Combusken evolved into a blaziken while training. Also, Kyogre grew a lot and learned new moves. Yzak was happy then, how happy he will be when he would be the next champion? They now arrive to Mauville city, where he will face his next gym battle. But a boy with green hair with his father was standing at the door of the Mauville gym. The boy turned around, and asked his uncle if he wanted to warm up first.

"Dad! Please! Can I face that guy?" The boy asked his uncle.

"But you just recovered from a very deadly diesease. How are you able to fight?" His uncle questioned.

"Is the gym leader here?" Yzak asked the boy's uncle.

"The door's locked. I was wondering, can you face my nephew in a pokemon battle young lad?" The boy's uncle asked.

"Sure! a bit of warm up isn't going to hurt." Yzak answered.

"Now! GO Ralts!" The boy yelled. The pokemon was small, and had two pink fins on each side of its head and a small, white body.

"GO! Kyogre!" Yzak shouted as he sent out his water pokemon. The pokemon then brought rain clouds onto Mauville city.

"I'm not scared! Let's battle!" The boy yelled with excitement.

Kyogre:LV28 VS kirlia:LV20

"Go kyogre! use calm mind!" Yzak commanded.

"kirlia, use confusion!" The boy ordered.

Yzak's Kyogre gave a colorful aura. It deflected the confusion from the boy's Kirlia, and stared at the pokemon.

"Use surf!" Yzak ordered.

The water pokemon then launched a huge wave that crashed on the boy's Kirlia. Ralts fainted at the moment of impact.

"Kirlia! NO!" The boy cried and ran over to Ralts.

"Good battle!" Yzak told the boy.

"NO! LEAVE ME ALONE! My Kirlia fainted and it's all your fault!" The boy yelled at Yzak.

"Enough! Wally!" The boy's uncle scolded.

"Yes uncle." Wally obeyed his uncle.

"I never meant to make your son cry. I'm sorry." Yzak apologetically told Wally's uncle.

"Oh it's okay! Wally never had faced a tougher challenge before. It's his first loss." Wally's uncle answered.

"You look like the guy that passed by a few weeks ago, but you're a bit taller. My name's David." Wally's uncle told Yzak.

"My name's Yzak." Yzak introduced himself to David.

"What did the boy that came here look like?" Yzak asked.

"He had white hair, and had a black bandana with a green pokeball on it. He wore a sleeveless shirt and an orange vest, and grey shorts. He was nice, and battled against my nephew, but he lost." David told Yzak.

"Did he have a pokemon called Kyogre?" Yzak asked.

"Nope, but he had a marshtomp." David answered.

"Did you get his name?" Yzak asked.

"I believe his name was Brendan." David answered.

"And he was hanging out with a girl with a brown hair and a green bandana! The girl's name was May, I think." Wally told Yzak.

Yzak was ticked off. He was mad because May was hanging out with some weird kid that he didn't know. Yzak was now ****** and kicked a wooden box hard, only to hurt himself in the process.

"ARRGH! MY FOOT!" Yzak screamed as he ran around in circles wildly.

"But the way you battled, you can beat Brendan I think." David said.

"Oh, I guess." Yzak replied.

"Anyway, your skill is good enough to beat Wattson, the gym leader here. In fact, You're even good enough to beat the Winstrates." David said.

"Who's the Winstrates?" Yzak asked.

 

[smashbrosfan!]

chapter 13

Yzak asked David, Wally's dad about the Winstrates. David told them that they were strong trainers and they beat anyone that dared to visit their house.

"Huh? They're that tough?" Yzak asked.

"Uh huh. Brendan lost to them two times already. He's starting to get worried." David answered.

"I need to face the gym leader here, so good bye David." Yzak said.

" Yeah! see you later and visit our house sometime!" David answered.

"I will!" Yzak answered back.

Yzak was wondering that the gym wasn't open, so he decided to check the situation. Unfortunately, it was Yzak's worst nightmare.

"WHATT!!" Yzak screamed as he saw the note in front of the gym.

Two weeks was what the sign said. Yzak was ticked off that the gym leader was not going to be availible for two whole weeks. But Yzak was happy because he had the two whole weeks to prepare for the gym.

"Come out everybody!" Yzak called as he threw everyone of his pokeballs.

"Kyogre!" Kyogre chirped as it came out of the pokeball.

"Blazi!" Blaziken roared as he came out of the pokeball.

The rest of his pokemon, pupitar, seadra, manetric came out of Yzak's pokeballs.

"Listen up! We're going to train for two weeks because the gym leader's gone! So let's make the best by spending time in training!"
()=pokemon translations

"(Yes!)" Blaziken cried.

"(okay...)" Pupitar buzzed.

"(YAY! I LOVE TRAINING!)" Kyogre chirped happily, noting he was still a baby.

"(hmm.)" Manetric howled.

"(yes!)" Seadra roared.

"You all want to train? Let's train!" Yzak yelled out loud and began their two week training. Yzak and his pokemon encountered lots of tough trainers and pokemon, but they won their way through it. Yzak was so happy that his pokemon were growing stronger, but the thought of who the hell this Brendan was still lingered on his mind. They have now trained for a week and a half, with Kyogre growing faster than ever, soon enough, Kyogre was a bit taller than Yzak himself.

"Everyone! We're going to find a guy named Brendan and battle him!" Yzak told his pokemon. Yzak then gave manetric a piece of a grey shorts that was ripped in the woods to sniff Brendan out.

"(Why are we finding a guy named Brendan?)" Blaziken asked.

"(Because if I find that Brendan, I'm gonna beat the f(u)ck out of the guy! He stole Yzak's girlfriend!)" Kyogre screamed.

"Manetric!" Manetric howled as he found the scent to Brendan.

"This way!" Yzak yelled out as he pointed his finger to the direction of a large, beautiful lake.

Yzak and the pokemon then ran out to the lake, only to find that May was talking to Brendan, a trainer with the exact hair style that Yzak has. He also wore the same grey shorts that Manetric sniffed out. He also wore an orange vest. May and Brendan were sitting on a wooden bench, talking to each other. Yzak was steamed, but he found a mysterious red egg on the floor. He decided to pick it up and see what kind of pokemon it was inside.

"Arrgh! I can't believe that May dumped me for that f@ggot trainer!" Yzak whispered with madness.

"kyo.(look.)" Kyogre whispered to Yzak.

"what?" Yzak asked.

When Yzak saw Brendan and May about to kiss, Yzak blew up like a bomb. He jumped crazily out of the woods, dived down on the lake and swam to where May and Brendan was.

"What was that?" Brendan asked.

"Nothing." May answered his question.

May wore a tight indigo shorts, an orange sleeveless shirt, a green bandana, and white and green running shorts. She wore black-white gloves.

"BRENDAN!! YOU LEAVE MAY ALONE YOU F@GGOT!"Yzak screamed as he ran out of the water, soaked.

"What do you want?" Brendan asked Yzak.

"You leave May alone, or else!" Yzak threatened Brendan.

"What are you gonna do? B!tch?" Brendan taunted Yzak.

"UH! Grrr! I challenge you to a pokemon battle! Challenge you for that green egg you have!" Yzak snorted.

"Yzak! Leave him alone! He found that egg! He deserves to keep it!" May yelled at Yzak.

"Oh, so you're defending him now? Pfft!" Yzak rudely asked May.

"I had enough of this! Pokemon battle!" Brendan yelled.

"Yes! let's go!" Yzak yelled with excitement.

The battle between Brendan and Yzak has started. Yzak had more experience than Brendan, but Brendan looked confident.

Yzak VS BRENDAN
blaziken:LV 43 Shelgon:LV 33
manetric:LV 43 swampert:LV 36
Kyogre:LV 45 breloom:LV 33
seadra:LV 39 green egg
pupitar:LV38 zangoose: LV 44
red egg: altaria:LV 36

May's team
grovyle:LV 29
swellow:LV 26
seviper:LV 24
swablu:LV 21
pikachu:LV 25

"Let's get this battle underway!" Brendan yelled.

"With pleasure." Yzak answered back.

"Go! Zangoose!" Brendan yelled as he sent out a white pokemon with red scars with sharp claws. It looked like a combination of a bunny and a bear pokemon.

"Go! Blaziken!" Yzak sent out his Blaziken onto battle. It made a loud roar as it was ready for battle.

"Zangoose! Use slash!" Brendan ordered.

"Blaziken, dodge and use cross chop!" Yzak commanded.

The bunny pokemon charged at blaziken with full power, but Blaziken dodged its oncoming attack, charged up its fist and smacked the huge red glow at the bunny pokemon's head.

"ZAANNGGGOOSSEE!!!" Brendan's Zangoose screamed as it was in serious pain.

"Blaziken! Use flamethrower!" Yzak ordered.

"Blazi!" Blaziken obeyed Yzak's orders and spewed out powerful white and orange flames from its mouth.

The bunny pokemon got hit by blaziken's oncoming flame and fainted.

"Return, zangoose. Go Shelgon!" Brendan yelled.

"Return blaziken, go Kyogre!" Yzak yelled.

Brendan's pokemon, Shelgon was a thick ball with four legs and a hidden face. It moved slowly for its battle position. However, Yzak's pokemon, Kyogre was huge, powerful and had huge fins and a blue body. Kyogre was stronger, but shelgon didn't move an inch.

"Go Shelgon! Use double-edge!" Brenden commanded.

"Kyogre, stop it in its tracks with ice beam!" Yzak ordered.

Brendan's shelgon charged at Kyogre with full speed, but Kyogre dodged of harm's way and blasted a cold beam at shelgon. Shelgon was motionless from the impact the ice beam was hit.

"Shelgon!" Brendan screamed as he ran to shelgon and tendered him.

"Giving up?" Yzak mocked Brendan.