The Under Tournament

[.Bright Side.]

Gabriel, a random kid who needs money for $300 ticket to travel to Orre, has accindently been invited to an "Under Tournament" on Birth island.It seems that Team Rockett is involved with it, but he does not no much more than that.

Wanna be in the Torunament?
No more characters ATM

Episodes:
1)Invitation
2)SLots
3)Chase
4)Battles and Cliches
5)3rd pokemon!
6)Quainte
7)Pink Temper
8)Dining Experience
9)Aura?
10)Magical Flute
11)Cramped
12)Blue Hatted Sh0w off


Crit and help aprecciated

SPrites:
Fred
Spriters resource
Pokemon elite 2000

POST AND MAKE WITH THE CRITISISM

 

[Nixx]

Try adding more variety to the panel layouts, zoom-wise. Also, connect word bubbles to the speaker.

 

[.Bright Side.]

1)Explain the panel Zoom wise
2)Its obvious where the bubble is coming from, so What ever.

Also, do you wanna be a character?

 

[Nixx]

It's not obvious. Hence, the purpose of a trail. Plus, it makes it look better.

 

[The Slow King]

Nice. The bubble is obvious to where it goes but still connect the bubble to the speaker. I'll be in it.

What sprite:
What pokemon: Charizard, Jynx and Marowak
Image: I'm glad you can make my sprite for me because I wouldn't be able to. Do you want me to give description of my character or will he just be an ordinary trainer

 

[.Bright Side.]

It will be one focusing around it.
Ok you character shoudl appear in the next or after that episode.

 

[The Slow King]

Good. Thank you.

I suggest a good dose of humour

 

[Typhlosion Dude]

Seems like a good comic so far so I'll join.
What sprite:
What pokemon: Mudkip , Nidoking , Charizard
Image: I'll pm you the sprites later. I'm almost finished.
And also for the Mudkip Sprites. I'll pm you the MD sprites of it later.

 

[Timmie]

What sprite: An MountainHiker...
What pokemon: Pikachu, Machop and Charizard


Can you make the things?

Not sure if Machop is under 125...

 

[.Bright Side.]

Sorry, comics are coming out slow, Im currently spriting the characters

 

[Pokemon King 2006]

What sprite: I am Mewtwo the best j/k Ig I can that would be cool. If not here you go:

What pokemon: Blastoise, Electabuzz, Alakazan
Image:You can make it cant you

 

[.Bright Side.]

Alright Ill get started.
In the mean time:
Pink Temper

 

[.Bright Side.]

No more characters.

 

[Timmie]

I give another? xD

 

[.Bright Side.]

No, only 1 character per person.

 

[.Bright Side.]

8 and 9 and 10 are out!

 

[Jackson]

hey those are my brother fred's car sprites you should give credit.

It's a good comic it didnt have much jokes but still good.

 

[.Bright Side.]

Sorry about the cars, Ill give credit.

 

[Jackson]

I just talked to him he said he didn't realy care he's most likly done with spriting. (what he said.) but still he said thanks for the credit.

 

[.Bright Side.]

The next couple comics will coem out slow because I need to sprite the under.