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The Weakest Link (Rating: M)

Zerodius

Eternally hating D/P
Rating: M

Summary: What is true power? One might be surprised to learn of who is strong... and of who is weak.

Notes: Well, it's finally done! This is the prologue for The Weakest Link, the story that I am writing with Legendary Arcanine.

Enjoy!

Author: Zerodius
Co-author: The Dark Evolution
Banner: Saffire Persian (down in a temporary basis because of a mistake)

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THE WEAKEST LINK

PROLOGUE: Awaken

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Nothingness... lack of thought...

There was... emptiness.

No feelings... no memories... no perceptions... nothing...

The consciousness stood on the edge of existence waiting to exist... yet, to say that it was waiting is ironic since neither time or space had any meaning to it.

Then... suddenly... a change.

Something changed... something appeared...

A desire appeared.

The desire became a thought... the thought a conviction.

Ready. The consciousness is ready... ready to exist.

CLANG!!!

A sound... there was a sound...

Its very first perception was glass flying everywhere... sounds of metal twisting and breaking, sounds of wires being cut... the sounds of machines...

The creature gasped for air as its instincts dictated it to inhale for the very first time... and as the air filled its lungs, the second perception was felt.

Liquid... and the wind.

It was wet, covered in something that it couldn't identify... and the air... so cold... so terribly cold.

A third perception...

Creatures stood around it, staring at it... strange creatures wrapped in white...

Its mind was awake now... and questions begun to flood in its young consciousness...

Who am I? Where am I? Why am I here?

Three questions... an echo... and it realized that its thoughts had reached the creatures.

It also realized something else... something about itself. Something about itself felt... wrong... and annoying. A tail... it had a tail... or rather two and the two just kept on colliding, non-stop, perpetually, continuously... and the tip of those organs being its most sensitive body parts, this caused its entire body to continuously twitch and sting.

"Who am I?" this time, it projected its thoughts to the creatures in an intentional way... and soon enough, ripples through the air were formed... voices...

"You are Mewthree." stated the creature closest to it.

Mewthree?... what kind of name is that?

"Give me the reports!" said the creature, turning to those similar to itself. The creatures nodded and gave strange white objects covered with black symbols to the creature...

"... Incredible! Truly, the experiment is a success!" Experiment? Mewthree wondered what experiment they were speaking about...

The creature turned to it, smiling... "Mewthree... you are the newest clone of Mew. You were created using DNA from your predecessor."

Mewthree raised an eyebrow. Clone? What was that about? "Clone? What do you mean by... clone?"

"You are an enhanced version of both the original Mew and the first clone." explained the creature, taking out a machine that displayed a picture of a strange creature... a cat-like, humanoid creature with white and purple fur... or maybe was it skin? Whatever it was, it seemed rather mean, tall, and powerful... "Your powers exceed the potential of both Mew and Mewtwo. Many fixes that made the first clone unstable were fixed as well."

"Why am I here? Why was I created?" Mewthree sensed its confusion grow... as well as a feeling of loneliness and emptiness...

"You are a Pokemon. You shall not ask yourself what is your purpose... but rather what purpose your master shall give you." Mewthree felt the cold wind... and it heard a voice that was vastly different from those of the creatures wrapped in white... a voice that awoke a feeling of fear within its heart...

"And... who is my master?" it asked this new voice.

One of the creatures approached it. He was covered in an orange stuff and his eyes were sharp, intensely threatening. As it stared into this creature's eyes, it felt tiny. No longer did its body twitch under the impacts of its two tails... it was only focused on that creature's powerful gaze.

"My name is Giovanni. You shall serve me. It is all you need to know." his voice was commanding and mocking...

So small... so weak... Did it have a mother? It sure wished for her to be here... its instincts, as a reaction to its fear, made it long for the loving embrace of the being who gave birth to it... although it did not know that such a being did not exist.

The creatures wrapped in white became less and less excited. It seemed as if Giovanni's presence had made the air so very heavy... so heavy it was unbearable. There was something about him that made everything seem worthless... an aura of corrosive selfish ambitions and cruelty...

"Leave us." Giovanni ordered to the scientists. The humans stared at each others, hesitating for a while... and then, they left, leaving the man alone with Mewthree.

Giovanni stared at the fruit of his efforts. He had been surprised, the day he found records of a certain Mewtwo... records of experiments he remembered nothing about. Indeed... it seemed as if he had been hunting the strongest Pokemon, Mew, for years and had created a clone of her. The clone, Mewtwo, went through artificial growth and was born as an adult... and then, Giovanni had attempted to control Mewtwo.

Mewtwo, however, could not be controlled. He was extremely intelligent... more than any human. Fiercely independent, he refused to become a common trained Pokemon and only agreed to work with Giovanni as a partner... and when Giovanni revealed his intentions, Mewtwo broke free... and the mightiest rival he ever had was awake.

Mewtwo was a surprisingly powerful foe. He used his powers and intelligence to develop incredibly advanced technologies and to make gigantic armies of enhanced Pokemon using DNA he gathered.

However, in the end, Mewtwo chose, for some reason, not to take over the world... and when Giovanni took the opportunity to attack Mewtwo's headquarters, he was defeated and had his memories and that of all of his troops removed.

Mewtwo could not be controlled... but this new experiment could.

It had been a mistake to make Mewtwo too smart and independent. It was also a mistake to make him be born as an adult.

By making this new Pokemon be born as a child, it would be easy to control it and shape its mind to his needs...

...

CLAC! CLAC! CLAC! CLAC!

Light filled the area as Giovanni activated the lamps of the arena.

Mewthree stood on one side, confused... "Why am I here?" asked the clone.

BZZZZT!

An intense surge of electricity went through Mewthree's body. It came from that strange collar Giovanni placed around its neck... and it caused pain in both the electricity shocking it and the tails which slammed against each others, hard, upon being filled with electricity.

"Obey." a single word, coming from the master...

"Why did... you hurt me?" the clone asked in confusion.

The terrible pain came again as well as the word. "Obey."

Its eyes stared sadly at the floor... at the cold, hard floor. Tears streamed down its cheeks as it stood, unable to understand the reason behind this pain...

A loud sound... and the roar of a scary creature.

Mewthree turned to see a humongous monster standing before it. The monster was about twice its size and was downright terrifying. Grey, rock-like hide... a drill-shaped horn... dull, empty, zombie-like eyes...

"Mewthree. Psychic." two words... and a commanding tone. An order?

The monster roared and charged forward. "Mewthree. Psychic." repeated the master.

Mewthree got on its four and started to run as quickly as it could, fear gripping its heart. That monster... it was going to rip it apart!

But then, the electricity stopped it in the middle of its tracks. It screamed both in pain and terror, the electricity coursing its veins and the monster charging toward it. It screamed in Pokemon language, screaming for its mother.

"OBEY! PSYCHIC!" the order came again...

BAAAAM!!!

Everything seemed to freeze. Mewthree's eyes locked in the eyes of the master... the angry master... eyes which shown only signs of cruelty and hatred...

Then, Mewthree rolled its eyes and felt both very wet and faint... as if its chest had opened and was emptying its content about... and cold sleep came...

...

Cold sleep... endlessly floating... and a vision... or rather, a feeling.

Air... a movement... wind...

Blinding light?... or blinding darkness? The vision is so bright and yet, the soul is shrouded in darkness...

The soul should be free... there are no boundaries and yet... everything is so bright and clear...

... and yet, the soul is crushed under an ominous feeling... and then, there is this strange feeling... barriers... invisible, oppressive walls that keep the soul trapped within a tiny box... claustrophobia striking while in the middle of the sky itself...

"You are not free." those words haunted the soul...

...

"She is awakening..." it heard the voice... and it awakened.

Mewthree slowly opened its eyes... but the light... the blinding light... it couldn't keep them opened... it wanted to shield its eyes from the light but the more it wanted to, the more frustrated she would become, causing its twin tails to sway faster and smack each others faster, causing its body to twitch more and more badly, each time the eyes opening wide open for a second causing much pain and extra frustration.

"The... the light... The... the light..." it sent its thoughts in a confused way, toward no one in particular.

"Sorry... It's my fault... sorry..." apologized the voice.

A shadow slowly appeared, shielding Mewthree's eyes from the intense light, allowing it to see where it was. A rather large, dragon shaped figure stood just in front of a source of intense light, protecting Mewthree from the light with its massive shadow... for the creature was about twice as tall as Mewthree and easily four times as large...

"News of your awakening traveled quickly. Welcome to the containment room." announced the hissing voice of the dragon figure.

Mewthree looked around, curiosity leading its mind... and it's then that its eyes locked on it.

A strange reflective surface, on the wall... a plate of a shiny material that sent back its image... or rather, her image.

Mewthree seen her own frame... and she printed into her mind her own physical appearance...

She remembered the hologram... the hologram of that "Mewtwo" creature... She was just a bit taller than half the size of that Mewtwo being. Just like him, her chest was armor-like... except that it was much more round, forming two curves which were the obvious signs that she had a pair of breasts. Her arms were about as thin and long as Mewtwo's but instead of three fingers, she noticed that she had five fingers, like a human. The fingers were large and round, like Mewtwo's. Her eyes were blue, sky-blue... and of course, there was those annoying tails which kept on colliding, causing constant twitching. Her lower body was kinda fat, which bothered her... although she was nowhere as fat as Mewtwo was. As a female, her hips were larger than Mewtwo's... although not too much.

An instinctive thought came to her... He is mature... she is not. Someday, she will be much more similar to him... although still different.

"I do not understand... This being... he said he the master... and he has hurt me..." she said, her heart filled with sadness at the memory of the pain...

"The master does not hurt those who obey." said the massive shadow.

"The master feed and protect those who follow his commands." said another voice.

"The master is kind. He protect and feed us... but he has no tolerance for weakness. He will not protect those who do not respect him." said a third voice.

A sudden sound... and the footsteps of three beings...

"SOMEBODY! GET THAT STUPID UMBREON OUT OF THE ROOM!" screamed the voice of the master, Giovanni.

More footsteps and then, the light disappeared and everything became so clear... and it was only then that Mewthree noticed that she was surrounded by many more beings than just the massive shadow. In fact, she could see now... she could see all of them...

A cat, a horse, a fox, two dogs, three dragons, a bird, a strange insect... so many new creatures which she could not identify... all of them, having a familiar aura... as if she had always knew them...

She remembered the cold sleep... the cold sleep of emptiness... she had felt other souls awaiting to exist... Were those creatures her brothers and sisters?

"So... this is Mewthree..." a being, wearing blue clothes and with a manly, deep voice, said this...

"Heh! This runt is the so-called ultimate Pokemon? What a joke..." a slightly higher pitched voice, coming from a being wearing red clothes...

"It may look weak for now... but Mewthree will become eventually become stronger than even Mewtwo! With it, the world will be ours!" said Giovanni, grinning evilly as he turned to Mewthree. Mewthree smiled nervously, hoping that it would make her master happy...

"Mewthree is worthless. It's nothing but a stepping stone for Groudontwo!" replied Maxie, staring at Mewthree as if she was just a common Rattata...

Archie reacted to Maxie's announcement. "Groudontwo? Kyogretwo will bring about the end of your worthless Groudontwo and of all continents! This world shall be one of oceans!"

Giovanni rolled his eyes. Team Aqua and Magma... such pathetic groups. He had been forced to cooperate with them however since Hoenn was their turf... and it was in Hoenn that Mewtwo and Mew were rumored to be. To get them to cooperate, Giovanni had been forced to promise them that the Mewthree project would allow them to clone Kyogre and Groudon. Ever since this fated day when the Orbs were shattered, the two Titans had fell asleep and the Teams' dreams had been shattered... unless the two Titans would be cloned.

Giovanni didn't cared about their projects, however. Mew was superior to Kyogre and Groudon. Mewthree will be vastly superior to Kyogretwo and Groudontwo... in fact, once Mewthree will have reached full power, disposing of his "allies" will be his first priority.

But for now... he has to bear with their stupidity...

"Stop, my friends!" said Giovanni to the two other crime lords. The two stopped arguing and turned to the leader of Team Rocket, crossing their arms, frowning and burning with anger...

"Rather than argue... why not test our new creations?" asked Giovanni, grinning. The two other crime lords stared at the master, thinking... and then, came to a decision together...

"Well... he have a point. Let us test our creations, now..." said Archie, a grin replacing his frown.

Mewthree smiled, happy to see that the master and his friends were happy now. At least, she assumed they were his friend since the master was getting along well with them... although it seemed the two did not go together well.

It had also seemed that they had spoken about removing the oceans and the continents... what is a continent? She will ask later. For now, she see the master turning to her. "The master is kind. He protect and feed us... but he has no tolerance for weakness. He will not protect those who do not respect him." she repeated the words to herself...

"Mewthree!" yelled the master, pointing at her... "Suicunetwo!" he yelled, pointing to some kind of red dog with a blue mane.

Instantly, Archie and Maxie burst out laughing. Giovanni turned to the two, his eye twitching madly. Mewthree seen that the master was angry... was he going to hurt her? She begun to tremble and to twitch, the tails striking each others with great force, causing a painful jolt of electricity to go through her nerves each time. She gritted her teeth, enduring the pain for the master's sake...

"You call THAT a Suicune clone?!?" asked Archie, unable to keep himself from laughing.

"What a joke! It's just an Arcanine with a weird blue mane!" stated Maxie, who had almost fell down from laughing.

Giovanni couldn't help it. Not all clones were successful... and although the scientists had tried to make a Suicune clone by mixing fragments of Suicune's DNA with an Arcanine's DNA... it was obvious that the attempt was a failure. Mew's DNA had maybe been ancient... but it had been well conserved, in a hidden temple, safely hidden away from the elements and microscopic Pokemon who may have destroyed it. On another hand, Suicune's DNA had been found in the middle of the forest and ironically, although it was recent, the DNA had been much more damaged and fragmented than Mew's ancient DNA...

But well... Mewthree needed target pratice... and killing a failure will build up its tolerance toward death. All of its instincts must be suppressed to the point where if Giovanni asks it jump off a cliff to its death, it will do so. His control must be total.

"Mewthree! Use Psy Beam against Suicunetwo! Suicunetwo! Use Ice Beam against Mewthree!" yelled the master.

Mewthree's eyes widened. She turned to Suicunetwo, hesitant. "I... I..." she hesitated. "Whatever the master says go. Obey or else!" said the dog Pokemon before opening its mouth. Blue and red energy swirled inside the dog's mouth and then, Mewthree's eyes widened as a small blue thunderbolt was fired by Suicunetwo, the Ice Beam heading straight toward her!

"OBEY! Dodge it!" ordered the master.

The master wanted her to dodge it... "Whatever the master says go." she repeated the words to herself and tried to move... but found herself paralyzed with fear! Her eyes widened in terror as the beam flew toward her... "I... must... obey... THE MASTER!" thought the clone to herself, trying to overcome her fear for the sake of the master... and with one mighty effort, her body finally responded.

"MEEEEEW!" cried in sheer terror Mewthree as she forced herself out of the way of the Ice Beam, her tails slamming against each others causing intense pain to mix to her terror...

"Mewthree! Psychic!" the master's order came to her...

The pain... it made her head hurts... it made her entire body hurt... hurt so much... hurt so much... She wanted the pain to go away... she wanted for it to go away...

Her eyes locked on Suicunetwo's frame. She wanted the pain to go to him instead... and as if by magic, the pain slowly subdued as Suicunetwo was surrounded in a blue aura that begun to grow and grow and grow as her pain became lesser and lesser and lesser... then, Mewthree felt an instinctive urge... to finish the blast and send that clone flying...

"Finish it off! Kill it! Psychic!" Mewthree gulped as she heard the order...

Kill it? But... but... why?!? Why did she had to kill it? She must obey but... but the enemy is subdued! Why kill it?!?

ZAAAAAP!!!

"MEEEeeeEEEEEEAAAARG!!!" screamed Mewthree, her body shocked as Giovanni punished her.

The master is kind... but he does not respect those who do not respect him... those who do not obey. For him to love her... she must do as he says...

The pain was so great... The desire to be loved and to have the pain disappear became greater than her fear of killing... and her eyes glowed blue as she slammed the failed Suicune clone with a psychic blast, sending it flying straight into the closest wall.

Suicunetwo's eyes widened one last time and he opened his mouth... but no sound would ever come out. The sheer power of the psychic force surrounded him was unleashed as Mewthree blasted him into the wall and the overwhelming force applied an incredibly high level of pressure on Suicunetwo's body... and instantly, his chest caved in, causing him to cough a red slime of sort... a red goo which used to be his heart, lungs, and all other inner organs. Then, his paws and tails exploded, blood flung out of the exploding tips... and finally, the head was crushed against the wall, a white and red mixture leaking from the opened sides of the crushed skull and splattering all over the wall.

The gruesome death scene replayed itself once in Mewthree's horrified mind... then twice, at a slower pace... then a third time, even more slowly... then a fourth time, even more slowly... everytime, the look of sheer terror and pain becoming more and more evident on Suicunetwo's face...

"I... I... I killed him..." she repeated to herself, sweating all over, her legs trembling...

Red liquid splattered everywhere... She had ended a life... she had destroyed a soul... for the sake of the master...

She was... a murderer.

"Excellent! Good job!" she barely heard the master's voice... all that she seen was the memory of the Suicune clone's eyes as he was being crushed into the walls... a look of sheer terror...

She would never forget this traumatizing, nightmarish sight... never...

"See? Did you see its power? Imagine what its power will be once it will have matured! The ultimate Pokemon!" said Giovanni.

Archie and Maxie stood there, not believing it. A mere baby Pokemon, blasting an Arcanine with enough power to splatter it over the wall like a Caterpie, causing an earthquake because of the sheer strength of the impact...

This attack... to equal such a powerful attack, it would normally take a dozen of full experienced Alakazams and Gardevoirs and now, this little baby Pokemon does this so easily...

Archie and Maxie slowly got over their shock... This Mewthree was a stepping stone to Groudontwo and Kyogretwo. Considering how strong this stupid cat is... they could barely start to imagine just how crazy strong their own clones will be!

The three crime lords stood there, all three staring at each others, planning to betray each others...

...

Somewhere else, two figures sensed the powerful psychic shockwave... and two pairs of glowing eyes opened themselves.

"Time flow like a river... and history repeats..." stated sadly one of the voices...

"Maybe it does... until someone take advantage of it, at least!" replied the second voice.

=TO BE CONTINUED=
 
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Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
First of all, this is a very, very bland fic. The plot, is shallow. How did they get the other genetic material for the pokemon? Like Suicune, for 'Suicunetwo'. Or Groudon and Kyogre? And why would Magma team up with Aqua for clones when they are arch rivals and want to destroy the land or oceans for their own goals. Someone was right in pointing out a while back, that Magma and Aqua are more like petty gangs while Team Rocket is the true evil.

Why would Giovanni team up with them in the first place anyways? Are they pawns in his scheme for dominating the pokemon world? And a female Mewtwo named Mewthree. Like no one wouldn't see that coming.

Then we move onto the abuse of the … . A FEW of them are fine. Abusing them like you do to try and make something dramatic make it boring and well, dull, because you skip out in what could be used to piece together scentences for something more dramatic. And yet you fall back onto the flood of the periods, and end up with something akin to William Shatner as Captain Kirk throwing out his 'dramatically' paused lines which was one of the reasons I hated him. He paused at the wrong times.

Like you are doing.

I also remember you saying how you hate perdictable and crap about Mewtwo and Mew, yet I see the same things in all your fics. I'm sorry, but you are not as great as people try to make you out as. You're characters lack depth and a real feel of something, tangible and great to them. Your plots are crude and shallow. Your description is tacky at best in places for emotional scenes and dramatic parts. You don't even seem to try and get better, no matter how many times someone points it out to you.

I don't even feel sympathy for Mewthree. She comes off as something akin to an Angst Sue.

There's also spelling errors that could have easily been avoided. I mean they aren't even ones for COMPLEX words, or long words. It just helps add to the unsmooth, chunky, angsting emo block of Mewtwo shallow story-ness you got going.

Oh, and gore, is not horror. Going into such detail over the Suicune clone litterally exploding from the psychic energy the Mewthree used on him was a bit, well, tacky. It made me think of a two bit 'horror' slasher movie. Like Halloween or Jason.
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Ren did not flame you. Don't tell someone to leave when they were speaking from what they saw. That is not a flame. I've seen you do worse.

You do not make insults at person because she never made insults at you, just what she thought about your fic.

~*~

Ok, well, lets see. You do abuse the ... as pointed out. Its very annoying. please finish your sentences and not just add ... all the time. Its not dramatic.

You know, you really do use odd names for things. Really. Suicunetwo looks awkward. Only reason Mewtwo works is cause mew is a smallter word and it sounds fine. Suetwo might have worked or cunetwo but suicunetwo just sounds iffy.

Horror is suppose to invoke fear in me. But I didn't feel any fear, this should be gore. As thats all I saw was blood and torture. Thats gore and maybe tredgedy. I may be changing my fics rating to gore later instead of horror as well.

anyway...

I don't mind people using cliche ideas like trainer fics and mewtwo clone fics, but they need to do it right. So far this doesn't feel right nor does it make much sense among the pokemon world.

Magma and Aqua working togather? forced to work togather? haha... ooc for them. Don't see why they would want to clone. Groudon and kyogre two? why bother making them when there original goel was to capture them and use them? How did they get the dna if they can't even accomplish that.

Once again you tried for character devolpment and once again it just didn't cut it for me. Mewthree is just a simple angyst-two. Characters feel ooc to me as well and well... its shallow so far.
 

Zerodius

Eternally hating D/P
Uh... sorry for the previous posts. They're deleted now. Can we please leave further commenting until the next chapter? I hope it'll change your minds because I'm putting a lot of stuff in there that'll explain many of the points you noted as dubious.
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Zerodius, your new post actually made me a bit happy. As you didn't snap at us or anything but just asked us to hold off our judgement tell the next post. That makes me want to respect you and give this another chance.

So my only suggestions atm then would be to lay off the ... atm in time. As its a bit overly used and would make things easier on the readers if it was used more dramaticly at dramtic times then just using it to try and throw it in.

I suggest you get a beta, as you do make simple mistakes that could easily be corrected and give the fic more quility(sp). I may not be a harsh reviewer but I am a bit harder on you because of how you handle reviewers and criticing.

You need to understand I am just trying to give some suggestions as to how to improve certian things.

Now I'll leave the plot and characters alone tell later. Though I do suggest you think about certian names as while mewthree is fine, suicunetwo just sounds iffy still :p maybe cunetwo?

You like to use alot of emotion and you try very hard to be original and I respect you for that. But I would like to see you show a bit more respect for other peopels ideas.

Keep up the writing and always try to improve. Listen to the advice no matter how harsh it is and learn. Because I think you do have good original ideas just need to listen a bit more.

Thank you for being respectful and not mocking us.

I'll check out hte next chapter. But remember.

-watch out for too much ... (I use to use that alot too)
-maybe get a beta
-think about characters a bit more and how the games and anime portrays them when you use canon.

thats all.
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
... (On the comments.)

Nice beginning, I guess. Odd explanation for Suicunetwo, but at least it was spared having to die in a couple of days - rather, it was justfully exploded.

Cool.
 

Kutie Pie

"It is my destiny."
Ooh...

Exciting! A Mewthree fic... I think that's the first time I saw one here, but I don't know...

You're doing okay on your... third fic it looks like... yeah. And you added Maxie and Archie to the story. And they're teaming up.

Oh my gosh, Groudon and Kyogre were cloned?! Along with Suicune?! Dang Zerodius! You must really like doing this! And of course, Suicune became a failure... and was murdered... *mauls Giovanni*

At first, I thought Mewthree was a boy. Seriously, I did. When I saw a few Mewthree fics on other sites, they were boys (or was one a girl in one...) so I figured Mewthree to be one. I was wrong...

Well, doing okay so far. I'm really going to keep my eye on this to see how it turns out. (Oh boy. More clones. You are serious about cloning here.) And the only thing that made it rated 'M' was the murder of Suicunetwo. Is it just really heavy gore and violence or something else?

And you teamed up with Legendary Arcanine... no wonder there were more clones... Well, since I did mine to Zerodius, I'm doing so to Legendary Arcanine...

Looks like you and Zerodius planned heavily for this fic. It's doing okay (The Umbreon clone was your idea and the cloning. CLEVER!) for the prologue. The only excitement was the murder. (You planned it, didn't you?)

So it looks like you and Zerodius are taking turns... but I wonder how this'll work out? Looks like a story with twists and turns from two different authors! Just what I like, a story with different plans, but the same plot! And this fic'll keep us guessing until the very end. I'll NEVER get the mystery solved until I read it due to the different ideas...

Very clever! So cloning must have something to do with the plot... Well, Mewthree has been cloned by Mewtwo so... Maybe... there's something inside her that may be the whole plot... I don't know. All I got so far is Mewthree being Mewtwo's clone. (Wonder if there'll be a battle. Whoop!)

Well, congratulations both of you for your first prologue! *hands each cake and hugs* Like I said, I'm keeping my eye on this fic and see how it goes. (At the end, though, is it sort of a spell? It rhymed there.) Well good luck to both of you! *superglues self to thread* There! Now I'm going to be a fan!

~~~~~~~~~
♥Kutie Pie♥ Please be kind to midgets!
 

Psychic Umbreon

Well-Known Member
Looks like you and Zerodius planned heavily for this fic. It's doing okay (The Umbreon clone was your idea and the cloning. CLEVER!) for the prologue. The only excitement was the murder. (You planned it, didn't you?)

No, actually, I didn't plan the death... that was Zerodius's idea. The Umbreon clone was originally going to die first, but he changed to the Arcanine clone.
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
About his fics... it's actually his tenth or so *HERE*, although he hasn't written many chaptered ones here.
 

Demy

Well-Known Member
I like this fic keep it up Zerodius.
When do you think the next chapter is coming up ?

Demy
 
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The Smore

Coral Eye Trainer
I quite like it. It's quite unoriginal in the mewthree (just thought of mewtwotwo lol) but I think that it works. Some people are complaining of maxie and archie working together but I think that you explained the forced conditions well. Can't wait for the next chapter - and I still think that it could be better

btw why is zerodius banned ?
 

Seijiro Mafuné

Diogomainardista!
I can say it, but due to the manner of things, I won't.

Rather, I'll just say it was by something that makes no sense to me and leave it at that.
 

Demy

Well-Known Member
Are continuing with this fic Zerodius it has been 2 months since you have last posted here.

Demy
 

Demy

Well-Known Member
I am getting annoued .
It has been 3 monthssince Zerodius had done the prologue.

Demy
 
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