The wild adventures of greeny

[+Erin+]

join the great greeny and his freinds in his adventures to teach you about freindship and peace
PG13 Contains swearing and violance

EPISODE 1
EPISODE 2
EPISODE 3
EPISODE 4
EPISODE 5
EPISODE 6
EPISODE 7
EPISODE 8
[URL="http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a67/therocktripleh/fvd.png"]EPISODE 9[/URL]
EPISODE 10
EPISODE 11
EPISODE 12
EPISODE 13
EPISODE 14
EPISODE 15
EPISODE 16
http://www.serebiiforums.com/EPISODE 17

 

[Neopolis]

B is so cool.

Anyway, are the crappy special effects with holes in them purposely? Because if not... Doublejoo tee eff. The King of the Portal has black boxes around him, the language sucks, and there's holes in the text. Make the background white first, then add text. Overuse of swearing is not cool either.

 

[+Erin+]

B is so cool.

Anyway, are the crappy special effects with holes in them purposely? Because if not... Doublejoo tee eff. The King of the Portal has black boxes around him, the language sucks, and there's holes in the text. Make the background white first, then add text. Overuse of swearing is not cool either.

yep B is class

 

[Tabby Catty]

woah need work if this is some kind of joke your really pulling my leg the second episode wasn't even an episode, I don't like the grammar in the first as well with the holes in the letters are not cool unless they are on purpose if and I don't not get the plot at all remember randomness is good just make sure you don't overdo it. Again if this done bad on purpose then tell me if not you need a LOT of work

 

[+Erin+]

woah need work if this is some kind of joke your really pulling my leg the second episode wasn't even an episode, I don't like the grammar in the first as well with the holes in the letters are not cool unless they are on purpose if and I don't not get the plot at all remember randomness is good just make sure you don't overdo it. Again if this done bad on purpose then tell me if not you need a LOT of work

Episode 3 e 4 is 0ut

 

[+Erin+]

Episode 5 e 6 is finaly out after 16 hours of hardwork

 

[Tabby Catty]

16 hours? That quality looks more like 16 minutes I think that your comic will be dead any time soon unless you put some effort into it as well as grammar because it isn't funny with only swearing and hardly anything else so work on it like I said

 

[zuloon]

16 hours? That quality looks more like 16 minutes I think that your comic will be dead any time soon unless you put some effort into it as well as grammar because it isn't funny with only swearing and hardly anything else so work on it like I said

Yeah seriously.

 

[Infinity]

Every uber comic around here has something in it that makes it succeed, a successful comic has style. When someone embraces their artistic style here they can becoem a decent comic author. Quite honestly crude, immature humor doesn't work too well here. Do well in a comic and people will remember things from it and you'll have running gags such as: Emo ghost, Dragonvee's lack of medication, Link the n00b, Rock Lobstah, Sponge being a bloody pervert, perverted Abra, portals, etc.

Remember these crucial things:
1. Target audience
2. Unique style
3. Planning out the comic

I'd also suggest you visit the Academy.

 

[+Erin+]

Every uber comic around here has something in it that makes it succeed, a successful comic has style. When someone embraces their artistic style here they can becoem a decent comic author. Quite honestly crude, immature humor doesn't work too well here.

double update'EPISODE 7,EPISODE 8

 

[+Erin+]

Sorry no update today because i'm busy with homework

 

[Avegaille]

Is this some kind of a joke? Seriously, if you're going to make Sprite Comics, you might as well make them the best one you had... This one is simply crap, IMO...

Listen to Infinity, Tabby Catty and Neopolis, they pretty much explained everything that there is for you to know...

 

[+Erin+]

Is this some kind of a joke?

fiftuplo update EPISODE 10/11/12/13/14

 

[Tabby Catty]

Listen to Infinity, Tabby Catty and Neopolis, they pretty much explained everything that there is for you to know...

Yeah besides we are pretty experienced ourselves we have had our ups and downs and believe us we know

 

[Silver Salamence]

You know, you just keep updating, totally ignoring the people trying help.

 

[Abraace]

You know, you just keep updating, totally ignoring the people trying help.

Leave him...If this is what I think it's meant to be; a satirical outlook upon the numerous newbie sprite comics(hell, I started off that bad(yeah I used sprites once upon a time)) that plague the internet, it's good. Unusual but good.

Otherwise it's kinda bad. But you got to admire the will power to continue despite all the put down comments.

 

[Tabby Catty]

But you got to admire the will power to continue despite all the put down comments.

your right I'll give you a thumbs up for that but yeah it takes a lot of that because I have had put downs in my comics and if I took them seriously and stopped then HMM would be history now its basically a comic that my two major fans pegasus and myuvirucon who support me can have something to read and sometimes I do have people who give me a little advice here and there as well but yes you gotta admire the will power

 

[Pokefan26]

I have to agree with Infinity, Tabby Catty and Neopolis.

Listen to constructive critism. Or keep on getting 'crit that wants you to improve...

I see you 'crit other people's comics, they listen, so why don't you listen to 'crit yourself?

 

[Tabby Catty]

I see you 'crit other people's comics, they listen, so why don't you listen to 'crit yourself?

Yeah he actually 'crit HMM saying that episode 2 was messed up but didn't really explain what and didn't really tell about my other episodes but yeah you do and I took time to listen

 

[+Erin+]

'crit yourself?

hu..whats this one doing,anyway episode 15 is out