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Draconis

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Is this some kind of sick joke?! Seriously, this is pure, senseless, crap. There is no plot, the grammar is atrocious, and there is no humor at all. This makes dog vomit look like a bed of roses. You seriously need to listen to the critiscism you're getting, instead of adding more poorly made, nonsensical, sorry excuses for comics. I highly doubt any of this took you longer than ten minutes to slap together. What gives you the right to crit other comics, when you don't even listen to the comments your sloppy, senseless, ametauer comics recieve? I highly suggest you take the time to learn how a proper sprite comic is made, before making another half-arse attempt to make another comic.*

*Everything that is bold, and underlined is something you need to read.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Draconis said:
Is this some kind of sick joke?! Seriously, this is pure, senseless, crap. There is no plot, the grammar is atrocious, and there is no humor at all. This makes dog vomit look like a bed of roses. You seriously need to listen to the critiscism you're getting, instead of adding more poorly made, nonsensical, sorry excuses for comics. I highly doubt any of this took you longer than ten minutes to slap together. What gives you the right to crit other comics, when you don't even listen to the comments your sloppy, senseless, ametauer comics recieve? I highly suggest you take the time to learn how a proper sprite comic is made, before making another half-arse attempt to make another comic.*

*Everything that is bold, and underlined is something you need to read.
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Comic's by Draconis..none
Comic's by +Erin+..5 so STFU
 
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Tabby Catty

Courtney loves Ruby
+Erin+ said:
Comic's by Draconis..none
Comic's by +Erin+..5 so STFU
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Yeah 5 watered down comics listen to me if you can I actually have a somewhat decent knowledge of making comics because I'm the author of HMM the one and only and not to mention most successful tokyo mew mew and pokemon crossover on serebii I take a week of planning while you update every day so listen to Draconis he is a good rater and knows what he is doing.
 
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Draconis

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+Erin+ said:
Comic's by Draconis..none
Comic's by +Erin+..5 so STFU
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I don't have the time to attempt to make a comic, and if I did, I sure as hell wouldn't crap out something as horrible as your pointless eyesores. Like I said in your other thread, I have read a lot of webcomics, so I know what makes a good comic, but you obviously don't. Just because you crap out a poorly made comic, it doesn't give you the right to crit other people's work, which is far superior to your own failed attempts. You realy need to listen to the crits you get, and try to improve, although I doubt that's even possible for you. Just because you made five crappy, horrible, pointless, unenteraining comics, doesn't mean that they are good, they aren't even halfway decent. I'm positive a mentally challenged monkey could make a better comic than you.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Draconis said:
I don't have the time to attempt to make a comic, and if I did, I sure as hell wouldn't crap out something as horrible as your pointless eyesores. Like I said in your other thread, I have read a lot of webcomics, so I know what makes a good comic, but you obviously don't. Just because you crap out a poorly made comic, it doesn't give you the right to crit other people's work, which is far superior to your own failed attempts. You realy need to listen to the crits you get, and try to improve, although I doubt that's even possible for you. Just because you made five crappy, horrible, pointless, unenteraining comics, doesn't mean that they are good, they aren't even halfway decent. I'm positive a mentally challenged monkey could make a better comic than you.
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pointless..read NessMan
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Draconis said:
Why the hell would I want to read another of your comics? I highly doubt it's any better than anymore of your crappy attempts.
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meh..i'l work on it ok
 
ForeverFlame

ForeverFlame

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You have FIVE of these comics created? What kind of mad scientist are you? Really, you seem like some kind of sicko. You need to get slapped in your face hard to get reality knocked back into your brain.
Everything about your comics and style is so POINTLESS. Please restrain from using too much cussing, too, as it makes you look like some whacked-up druggy, and THAT'S saying something.
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
ForeverFlame said:
You have FIVE of these comics created? What kind of mad scientist are you? Really, you seem like some kind of sicko. You need to get slapped in your face hard to get reality knocked back into your brain.
Everything about your comics and style is so POINTLESS. Please restrain from using too much cussing, too, as it makes you look like some whacked-up druggy, and THAT'S saying something.
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Yep thats was close to what I was gonna say FF Erin you really need to step into reality and make a proper normal comic that people like that has effort put into it and without cussing or too much violance
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Chinese Teletubbie said:
Yep thats was close to what I was gonna say FF Erin you really need to step into reality and make a proper normal comic that people like that has effort put into it and without cussing or too much violance
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yeah...maybe you'r right
 
ForeverFlame

ForeverFlame

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yeah...maybe you'r right
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Finally, my days of running down a dark hall and never reaching the light is over! ^_^
Now then, I sentence you to work a half-hour on a nice and clean comic with some plot, and suitable backrounds. Case closed.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Chinese Teletubbie said:
normal one
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it is a normal one,whats wrong about it
 
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Chinese Teletubbie

Orange Champion
Well i mean wit back rounds and speech bubbles or at leats telling you who speaks. Meh I didnt read all the EPs so I could be wrong. Oh I read them all now so yeah what I said oh and not as much swearing
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Chinese Teletubbie said:
Well i mean wit back rounds and speech bubbles or at leats telling you who speaks. Meh I didnt read all the EPs so I could be wrong. Oh I read them all now so yeah what I said oh and not as much swearing
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if you dont like cussing dont view it then.
 
ForeverFlame

ForeverFlame

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if you dont like cussing dont view it then
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Excuse me, but that was very inpolite. You should atleast have warnings, as those "whatever-they-even-are"'s could offend some people. But I guess you couldn't care less about offending people, as you offended all of us in some way already. Please stop the cussing, it makes you look like an idiot. Comics in the newpapers don't have cussing, and they're the funniest things you could ever read.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
ForeverFlame said:
Excuse me, but that was very inpolite. You should atleast have warnings, as those "whatever-they-even-are"'s could offend some people. But I guess you couldn't care less about offending people, as you offended all of us in some way already. Please stop the cussing, it makes you look like an idiot. Comics in the newpapers don't have cussing, and they're the funniest things you could ever read.
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warning?..if it is a comic by me,you would be excepting cussing on it,but i'l put a warning
 
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Neopolis

Battle Pyramid Champion
Look here, cussing is okay, but randomly saying "****ing", "feck" and whatever the hell you make up in every sentence just to be cool... There's no point to that. Not at all. In fact, as Flame said, it makes you look like an idiot.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
eppy 17 is out,3 more to go
 
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