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The World of Bit: The search for Balance (PG15)

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Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
WARNING! Co-GM is Yami Ryu, she will have the ability to accpet and deny people who sign up. She will be in charge until I return from a trip I am currently taking. DO NOT WHIINE AT HER.

LM the GM



The World of Bit:
The search for Balance
Rated: PG-15

Three siblings stood in the heavens, the white holiness shining off all three as they looked down on a small planet. Two were small and child like, looking no older then ten while the one in the middle looked to be in his twenties. Each had pairs of wings, the smaller ones had different pair, the little boy insect wings much like a dragonflies and the little girls bat like wings. The young man holding the children’s hands had four bright white wings, two larger and two smaller.

“… This is our planet, my siblings.” The calming content voice spoke as he squeezed his younger siblings’ hands. They looked up with innocence though truly they were just as wise as the elder was before looking back at the planet was.

“…Its so small.” The little girl spoke up, “How can there be enough Death?”

“Is that all you think about?” snapped the little boy… cowering closer to his elder brother.

“I am Death after all, Rolon!” she growled at him sticking her tongue out.

“Did you forget I am life? I don’t want you killing them, Zera!” he shouted back. The two seemed about to get into a fight but when the elder brother let out a sigh they both fell silent. The four winged man bent down onto the ‘ground’ which was clear as they were surrounded by ‘holiness’ of the heavens.

“There is no ‘them’ yet.” He sighed as he hugged his pouting siblings to his side. “The world is in a perfect balance with out a sentient life form. Making it empty.” He smiled, “We will create a perfect balance by creating our own life forms. This is my gift to you, my little ones.”

The two children looked up wide eye at their older brother before looking down at the earth and smiled, one smiled with happiness, the other, with cruelty. Like a kid in a candy store…




In a reality that is much different then our own. Where the laws of gravity and physics bend to the very magic that exists in this world… there is a planet. It is a small planet, more like a small moon even. It is only two hundred miles all together (Give or take ten or so.) The planet is a warm place, never going higher then ninety degrees and never lower then seventy.

It is a lush green planet, with a mountain range on the very top and bottom, the north and south pool never get any snow as its never cold enough. The sea and lakes of the world are not very deep (That is why there is no ocean) and being controlled by special magic won’t ever get too salty. The large bodies of water and the mountains take up most of the space on the planet, leaving only about fifty-three miles or so of flat meadowland.

The forests of the world are not jungle but more of a tall oak and pine kind. The plants are far different developed and do have a sort of exotic look to them but to resemble normal trees found in colder climates. They do grow fruit year round.

The life on this planet is mainly small creatures, most are reptile or bird like but a few mammals and other species exist. Fish are common and are the main meat source as there is no large carnivores or herbivores on the planet. (Not counting the sentient life forms)

There are three sentient life forms, each are greatly different then the other and have different life styles, but use their differences to contribute to the small world. As the echo system of the world is very fragile… a simple selfish person could easily destroy it.

The three races are:


Yuukii: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y253/LollyMyuu/betterscannedzeke.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y253/LollyMyuu/PICT0850.jpg

A race with a prehistoric likes appearance. They have long necks and sometimes horn(s) on their heads. The color range from red oranges to dim yellows and grays. The rare colors are blues and violate and sometimes even green. They have two fingered hands (with a thumb) which are long and bony. The legs are canine built meaning they have a curved knee and they walk on three long toes.

They are a ‘switch gendered’ race, meaning they have the ability to change from male to female whenever. Making it where there is little sexual racism. The offspring are born genderless and are given genderless names making it where when they are mature and do take a gender it doesn’t matter if they switch genders later on. A mating pair will often switch genders after each child so that both sides can experience childbirth and taking off some pressure of one side of the pair.

They are the mountain race and are known for their skills with creating medicines and their great songs. They speak in bellows and toots that they produce using there strong airway and noses. Though they are capable of normal speech. They wear rich clothing of greens and blues and are herbivores; they can not digest meat.

Home: Mountains, they live in northen and south mountains, there homes are small hurts contrustected by an adult when they hit maturity. Not very good farmers they tend to trade for food with medicenes and other things they craft. The small villages are headed by a 'wise council' which means elders. Children are taught in small schools usually by the elders.

Marrige/breeding: Being a species that can switch gender, the child who hits maturity will have a small time to choose a gender they wish to be. It is like choosing if you want to walk or not and over time one will slowly evolve into that gender. It takes several tries for a young adult to switch gender from there original to another but once done a Yuukii may do it often.

Marrige is rather simple, when two Yuukii court it is usually a male and female courting though same gender courting has been heard of (as it wouldn't exactly be looked down upon since they can change gender) and after awhile, one of the Yuukii (usually the more outgoing) will ask the Yuukii in question to become his/her mate. The wedding is a simple blessing by the parents, note that a Yuukii can not be 'offically married' with out the parents consent. Yuukii's who marry outside of this don't count as married and offspring of a out of wedlock marrige tend to be frowned upon.

If a parent will not give their child a blessing but not give a reasonible reason for it, a Yuukii may take the case to the elders in which they will see if the Yuukii parents in question are being selfish or not. THey can then give permission for a wedding, though it is still not as great as having the parents. (If a Yuukii has lot thier parents then the elders give the permission)

Breeding is simple, if two Yuukii want to have a child, one will take the dominant female form and the other the male. It takes nearly a year and a half in normal time to produce a child and several years for the child to mature, if the couple would like another child the couple in
question will probably switch places. The one that was the female will become male and the male female.

Adult Height: (Mature at age: 12) 8-9 feet (can be 6-7 but thats short for them)

The God(s) they worship the most: (Rolon) Life and Ila (Earth)



Insocian: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y253/LollyMyuu/insicians.jpg

A race with insect likes appearance. They are actually a sort of living plant. They have hard exoskeletons and four legs. The females are the dominant sex while the males have developed into small child like appearance. Breeding is useless but intercourse still exists only for pleasure.

A powerful race that lives mostly underground. They have the ability to breathe underwater though are not strong swimmers. The females are warriors at heart and listen to the ‘queen’ who is a large female that is rooted to the ground, a part of the very plant that produces the pods that open to the grub like offspring of their kind. They are carnivores.

The males have become a sort of collection, the females decorate them, mate with them and trade them (The males don’t complain they are weak and frail like children and get taken care of.) It is an interesting society that while they love males do not believe any males (even other species) should be in any sort of power. They are sexist.

Home: Underground/bodies of water. The homes are much like an ant hill, long tunnels underground with large rooms holding various things these creatures need. Separate rooms for the different types of insocians. (Two types: Warrior and Worker).
This insect like race faces larger dangers then the land walking races, as the creatures that live in the earth are much larger and dangerous then the ones on the land or sea. Giant worms and other giant not sentient bugs and reptiles have made homes in the earth of Bit. It is why the insocians are so protective and warrior like.

Marrige/breeding: Being a race that is truely plants then insects. They do not marry or breed. The queen is the 'head' of the very importent plant that grows undergrond. The caretakers are carefully chosen by the plant and are actually males with the strength of the females (which is truely unheard of to the outside world and alot of the females)

the mother plant aka queen, is hidden deep down in the nest, it is something very well protected as if anything hapened to the plant, the race would die out. It is an immortal plant that is if no one kills it, it will not get sick nor will it ever die of old age.

But while breeding is impossible outside of this plant for almost everything. It seems the demi gods are en exception as Ren has had several crossbreeds of insocians when she recieved a male one as a gift. The males being small and childlike are quite the rage in the nest. The female warriors and workers just adore the child like appearence the otherwise useless males are and use them for a sort of hobby, in a way its for there monternal instincts to come out and protect something like a child since they can not have offspring of their own.

The males do not complain as it seems they evolved this way when it began to seem they were not needed truely, as breeding wasn't possible and females were just as strong as they. But still being able to commit intimecy with other females have been kept for more... personal pet reasons.

The queen adores these smaller males.

Adult hieght: (Mature age: 8) 5-6 feet female 2-4 male
Gods they worship: Zera (death) and Nina (fire)


Manimal: A humanoid race with the physical changes of animals. They are anthromorpths and are great farmers. They range from scales to wings to fur and are one for many rituals and traditions. They have the ability to cross breed with others (meaning they can have a mammal/reptile) and are able to adapt faster then any of the other two races.

Being on the smallest landmass on the planet they are the most few in population. They live in small farming communities with an elder as their leader. They trade with the Yuukii for medicines. They also trade with Insocian for special nutritions and herbs found underground. They are also a race that wants weapons in case of war but do not know how to use them properly.

Note: They are ‘furries’

home: Meadows/plains. The flatlands are just before the mountians of the northern part of Bit. They are mostly farmlands and small villages with only a few places still free to hunt. Being a small bit of the world, some manimals have been pushed into Yuukii territory but the Yuukii are very sharing race and enjoy the company of others.

Marrige/Breeding: Being the most human like race. When a male and a female Manimal have reached the point where they want to marry, they can announce this to their village/farming community and have a large wedding led by a town elder(who doubles as a priest to the gods)

Children out of wedlock are not only frowned upon, they are exiled. Sometimes along with the mother who does not want to abondon her offspring. It is a rituel type race and if a manimal does not follow the rules they will often exile or punish the manimal in question.

If a child comes out of a sinful act such as rape, the victem will not be exiled nor will the child. But the parent who commited the act will have the part of them that commited it removed. Be far warned that this race punishments are far harsher then the Yuukii or the insocian.

Adult height: (mature age: 13-15) 4-7 feet
Gods they worship: (Will) Balance, Era (wind) and Ren (Water)





The Gods:

The leader

God of Balance: William is the God of balance, he created the demi goddesses of elements and is the elder brother of Life and Death. He keeps the balance between the gods and demi gods and even the mortals and magic. With out him the world would have no true order and everything would turn on itself.

Appearance: A tall human man with a set of four white wings. One pair is much larger then the other. He has black hair and green eyes. Other important details such as clothing and physical changes very from time to time.

God of Life: Rolon is life itself, he created the ability to breed and reproduce for all things. He knows whenever something is born or created and is always filled with great happiness because of this. The sight of blood or death weakens him and he can’t stand the thought of war or destruction. If not for his elder brother, he would make sure anything ever died.

Appearance: A young man, looking to be in his teens. He has blonde hair that is long and pulled into a ponytail most of the time. His eyes are blue and he has long dragonfly like wings on his back. Other important details such as clothing and physical changes very from time to time.

God of Death: Zera is death, she loves it. She loves the sight of death and everything about it. She spends hours thinking up ways for things to die and how they could die. She isn’t one for watching a lot of pain (though she gets joy from it) if it is just pointless torture and there is no death. She is strongly against any sort of abuse such as rape or verbal as it doesn’t always result in death and thus it is pointless to her. If not for her elder brother she would always have things die.

Appearance: A young woman in her teens, she has dark tanned skin with white hair that has black streaks in it. Her eyes are a faded gray. Her wings are large and bat like, a black color. Other important details such as clothing and physical changes very from time to time.

The Demi gods: These Goddesses were created to keep the elemental magic in a certain flow. These beautiful and mortal loving gods are much like the fable nymphs and can take the form of what they belong too. They love mortals and are known to have flings with mainly Manimals are they are the easiest to attract.


Fire: Nina
Mortal offspring: Jade, Mikal and Dawn
Personality: A quick temper and even quicker ability to have a crush. She consumes herself in a quick fiery lust over whoever she currently has a crush on and if she can not have the man she wants she will burn him. This crush will quickly die over a short set of time. Hopefully the male she is in love with can survive until then.

Earth: Ila
Mortal offspring: Gaia
Personality: A meek mannered but strong woman. She knows much more about the world then her siblings and is constantly wondering about certain people’s lives, as she tends to keep watch over everyone on the planet thanks to her all Seeing Eye. She is very shy at times though and would rather just be left alone.

Water: Ren
Mortal offspring: Shi, Den, Lok, Jayce and Pik
Personality: A very determined goddess, she keeps herself constantly busy with her duty of water flow. She always wants to work over play though somehow finds the time to fall in love. She unlike her fire sister will remain with her lover(s) until he dies of old age and then will continue on with her life.

Wind: Era
Mortal offspring: none
Personality: A very bubbly spirit, she doesn’t like to stay still just because she is having far too much fun. She loves to just play with her wind and fly about. She is the only one who wont take the time to find a lover as she is far to naïve and innocent to even realize men exist.


Note: the offspring of the gods do not know they are offspring and may be grown up and have children of their own. The ones that are listed are the ones that are direct from the goddesses and have strong magical powers over the element their mother was. They are very much mortal. Those who have carried the goddess’s bloodline are known to become strong mages. The only way to become a mage is to have the bloodline of a goddess in them.


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The planet known has Bit has existed for nearly two thousand years. A very young planet the powerful gods roamed it freely in mortal form for some time before retreating to the heavens to relax. They left the demi goddesses who loved the world in charge.

It was a peaceful planet, only having four days out of a week and it always rained the perfect amount of water on the third day of the week. The world was flourishing and while there is always a bit of crime and anger, war never broke out and famine was just a myth.

It was an Eden. But with all Eden’s there is always that fruit of temptation that someone has to pluck.

No one foresaw it, as the gods never thought it would happen to him or her. Never even knew it was possible. But as the two younger siblings were busy one day arguing over life and death…the two noticed how quiet their elder brother had been. Finding him in the ‘heavens’ of their sanctuary he was withdrawn and tired…

They knew something was wrong. But they could do nothing to help as William the god of Balance battled within himself. Because balance can’t exist with out its counter… and its counter didn’t like being hidden.

Death let out a scream of fright as Life nearly fainted. Balance had vanished… right before their eyes. They searched for him; they had the goddesses’ search for him.

But the God of Balance, the leader of the world of Bit… had vanished.

Zera and Rolon did not know what to do. They were lost with out their guide; William knew how to keep the world in order, at a perfect balance. Time began to pass with a strange uneasiness; it was messed up and chaotic. Strange things began to happen on the earth. Creatures were appearing; creatures Zera and Rolon hadn’t created.

And they knew that William would never create such beasts.

The strange skilled lizards, no more then lizards… dragons, ranged in size and knowledge, some being nothing more then dumb brutes. Others being humanoid like and brilliant… but cruel.

At first Zera grew a liking to them, they enjoyed killing and destroying, but when she realized that when what they killed began to walk after death… she knew that balance was truly broken. It seems when death comes before life; there is neither life nor death… just a walking body that consumed everything.

Zombies, undead, monsters… things that should not exist.

The dragons consumed and killed and took whatever they wanted. The smaller ones just wanted the wild untamed magic of the world. As with out balance it became chaos magic. The elder and wiser dragons would take other things along with magic, livestock, gold, silver or anything that shined… and even take the sentient species for unknown reasons.

Then one day a few years into the madness neither Zera nor Rolon could stop…

The goddess of fire went missing and her youngest sister, Era soon followed. Now the two sibling gods were in a panic, as they were using the demi gods to help them try and get order back on the world… with out them the balance would truly be lost. But they knew the goddesses were still alive, as fire still burnt and wind still blew.

The remaining goddesses went into hiding, both hiding with the most powerful race. The Insocians. Years began to pass; the goddesses seemed safe still.

Zera continued to search for the missing two while Rolon did his best to protect the other races. He even took on a mortal form and lived among his chosen race and the manimals that had moved in with them.

But they could not prevent the war, the war against the dragons. The undead were a pest and only in large groups were they dangerous… but the dragons… they had become more sentient and controlled. Orderly almost, working together to slowly drain the chosen races resources…

A war had finally started, and it did not look bright for the gods.


It was a windy day, a very windy day. Rolon stood among some of the manimals and Yuukii. He had a hand on his head to keep his long blonde hair from flying into his face. He was richly dressed in robes and such as the mortals kept their heads low in his presence.

“Era… what is wrong?” he whispered, knowing full well that such a strong wind meant that the goddess of it was in trouble. He was greatly troubled as he could not find her and help her. She was William’s creation, in a way his daughter and he could not protect her.

Rolon felt so helpless.

“Oh I do hope the little goddess is alright.” Whispered a small fox manimal, she was a child and stood close to the God. Rolon looked down at her with concern before looking up, watching the trees bend in the wind.

Then as soon as the wind had started so strongly…

It stopped.

Just stopped.

The air was perfectly still.

“… No.” Rolon whispered, “NO!” he roared his wings fanning, his body shining as the mortals withdrew unable to handle his holiness. Suddenly they heard a sob as the God hid his face in his hands and began to cry.

“… Lord?” whispered a tall Yuukii.

“… The Goddess of Wind… is no more.”

It was then that Zera returned, the two gods discussed and quickly realized that whatever had taken the goddesses, was up to something. There was a true evil behind this… whatever it was.

It had probably taken the God of balance to.

It would be another several years before they would find any sign of what had taken the goddesses and William.

Zera stood, clothed in black and held the leash of a steed made of bones only. She had been tracking the dragons for a long time, finding where they are coming from. Strangely for such a small planet the leader of these beasts hid well.

But today was her lucky day.

The goddess watched as she saw a strange child chasing after a small wingless bird. The bird glittered and shined, as it was a male in breeding season. The little girl with a strange unnatural appearance giggled happily.

“… A dragon.” Whispered the goddess of death. She held out her hand and a long sword appeared. She slowly began to make her way towards the child and grinned wickedly at the thought of killing something so easily. She did not care of age as long as it died and didn't become a zombie.

Zera knew the dragons could not become zombies.

The little girl giggled as she nearly grabbed the bird, the bird didn’t feel truly threatened by the child but when it saw Zera it quickly bolted away leaving a near crying little girl. Finally the small girl with a dragon appearance turned around to look up at the white haired Goddess…

The eyes grew wide and she reached up seeing the shiny sword. “Shiny!”

“Yes, shiny.” Zera laughed and brought the blade down to slaughter the little girl in cold blood… but the entire blade hit was dirt.

Zera the goddess of death was cast away and slammed into a tree. Her body ached with mortal pain before she realized she was a god. The pain vanished and she stood with dominance. She faced her enemy strongly, even though her mind was filled with fear.

The man was tall, cruel… and had a strange look of familiarity. He had black hair with dark yellow eyes; his four wings of feathers were black and very large. He wore body army on his chest and torso, even his legs. His arms were bare and had scales running up them, bellow his eyes were some scales and he had two large horns on his head. His tail was long and coiled around the strange little girl.

“Hello Death.” He snarled at her. The goddess blinked before realizing something quickly.

“… William? Oh by the heavens… what happened to you?” She stepped forward, the look of a loving sister on her face.

“William is dead. I am Amadeus, god of chaos…” he raised his hand and a black weapon appeared, it was a staff with a sharp curved blade on the end. “And if I ever catch your pathetic morbid hid near my offspring again, I will kill the other goddesses in my possession.”

Death’s eyes grew wide, she was so confused but she knew exactly that that threat was very real. “You killed Era!” She roared.

“I thought you liked killing.” He chuckled as he shifted his daughter a bit in his tail.

“Yes but not the gods!” She growled before pausing. “… Other goddesses?”

“Oh yes, I have Nina, Ila and Ren now as well.” And he gave a cruel grin, “Ila is expecting.” With that, Zera could not take anymore and she lunged at the God of chaos… but found herself alone as he vanished into smoke, taking his daughter with him.

With a loud roar of anger, the goddess of Death left quickly as well, she had much to tell her brother.

The incident put fear into the races still in hiding; the dragons roamed the earth more then the true species as they hid underground or in the mountain caves. The war wasn’t going very good…

It took fifty years to slay a dragon, fifty years for the Gods and the races to figure out the weakness. It seemed those with the bloodline of the goddesses, with the ability to use magic could slay the dragons with the magic, why? Because it was tamed controlled magic… and the opposite of chaos is order.

A weakness has been found.

Zera and Rolon, in fear of losing anymore of the goddesses, quickly sent ward to the other hiding places of the races and told them to send the best mages to them. They didn’t care if they had one of each type, just have as many as possible. The gods had no power over the elements and wanted to help those who did learn to use them.

They set up a place for the mages to be to come; it was in the meadows in a still surviving village of farmers. The gods had been protecting it so that the villagers could grow crops. They want the mages to come here so that they could defend the only food source and learn to use their powers.



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Sign up:

Name:
Age:
Gender: (If you are a insocian, you have to be female)
Race: (if you are a manimal, please place what kind (Wolf, bobcat, gecko ect)
Description: (Think medieval peasant clothing for maminals. Insocians wear paint and markings but not really clothing. Sometimes jewels. Yuukii’s wear robes and ponchos.)
Personality:
Magic:


Elements:

Fire: You have the ability to create fire at will but only small sparks for now, if larger fire is created from these sparks you can control where it goes but it takes a lot of effort to put it out.

Water: You can not create water but can use any near by water sources and move the water at will. You can move small amounts at first but with practice can do much more; someday you may be able to freeze it.

Earth: You can move rocks and cause small earth shakes. The more you practice the bigger the rocks you can move and the stronger the shake. You can sometimes bring rocks up from the ground.

Wind: you can move the wind at will, causing small breezes or strong guests. You can blow things away from you or pound them into the ground with it with practice.

~*~

When you create a character, if you have questions about the species just PM me and I will give a more detailed explanation about them.

Basic RPG rules apply. Please have some rpg experince before you join.
 
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Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
Name: Ryver
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Race: Yuukii

Description: Ryver is a drabish looking colored Yuukii, as he is a dull grey with some earthy brown/black markings. He's tall, but not as tall as possible, maybe just reaching six feet at the most. And well, he's nothing out of the ordinary as the pics you gave out Myuu can describe my character- even if it's not Ryver, way better than I ever could XD so sorry. Anyways his clothing consists of dark and rich green robes- though on Ryver it makes him look like a walking stone statue.


Personality: Ryver can come off a bit shy and timid, even though he's not. It's just he likes to observe first, before leaping to conclusions. He leans more towards a thinker than a do-er. He also can't stand by the sidelines and watch someone suffer, even if he doesn't like the being, and will try to offer assistance in any form he can- in reason that is. He can be very sympathitic, though it's usually a trait left to real healers, as Ryver isn't knowledgable in all areas, but he does know quiet a few.


Magic: Earth

.. Ryver sucks XD

Name: Seya
Age: 50something, though looks and acts about 16
Gender: Female
Race: o.o forgot what she was supposed to be exactly XD *pokes Myuu*

Description: Seya is around five feet, and a few inches. But hight doesn't matter really, anyways. She is humanoid in build- as in looks nearly human. If it wasn't for the fact she has two wings which are feathered, colored black with firey neon blue markings upon them. Her hair is nearly simalur in color- black with blue streaks. Her eyes are a bright amber-gold with blue flecks in them. Her tail is long, black scaled and striped with light, sky blue markings, all the way to a bone like club/spike growth at the end. Along her arms, legs and neck, light blue/black scales pepper her skin, also on her forhead, between her eyes, and onto her cheeks.

Personality: Seya is a bit niave about some things, and very imature at times. She's mostly carefree, but she does have an attitude, and she's a 'daddies little girl', meaning she's nearly spoiled but not exactly. Though easily distracted by shiny things, she usually tends to stick with something, unless she gets bored of whatever it is and decides to go do something else. And while she may act like a flake- she's not. She'll do just about anything to make her father happy, or the rest of her family. Even if she likes stealing from them.

Magic: None? XD


oh man my sign ups both suck XD I don't deserve to crit newbs anymore ahahaha XD
 

Tiana_M

Espeon Hybrid
Name: Tinyna (pronounced tee-nigh-na)

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Race: Manimal (Lion)

Description: Tinyna stands at an average height of 5’9 with a fairly slim, but muscular build. The fur all over her body is the same tawny gold as a lion. Her lion ears ride high on her head, poking through the bushy golden hair that flows down to her waist. Her large eyes are almond gold in color and while she can see in color like a human her night-sight is much better. Her front teeth are pointed like a lion’s and her canine teeth are proportionately longer. The rest of her face is altogether human. Tinyna’s hands seem a tad large for her slender frame, and sport retractable claws instead of fingernails. Tinyna’s legs, like a lion, have reversed knees and powerful thigh muscles and instead of feet she has paws. Tinyna wears a hooded, leaf-green cloak with a golden, no-sleeve tunic and light brown trousers that only reach her knees, these trousers have a hole in the seat for her tail to go through. Because of her padded paws, Tinyna wears no boots, nor sandals.

Personality: Tinyna is self-confident and patient, very much her own Manimal. She does not anger quickly and does not usually pick fights, but if she ends up in one you can be sure she’ll finish it. Tinyna is fairly opinionated and views her own race as being far too caught up in rules and rituals, many of these she finds to be just plain silly, but those that she respects she takes a deep pride in and follows religiously. She can generally make friends easily no matter the race, but she feels most at home with the gentle Yuukii and enjoys singing as much as they do.

Magic: Earth

Other: 1) Since Tinyna was primarily raised with the Yuukii, she can understand most of the dialects spoken by them and can even imitate many of their calls and with her lion-like ability to roar, she can also imitate their bellows. Thus she can speak their language, although to most of the Yuukii it sounds very heavily accented.

2) While her normal stance is upright, Tinyna can fall to all fours and run as fast as a lion.
 
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Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
Yami Ryu: I can see where you had trouble at, but I know how you can round off the characters a bit.

The first ones fine as its a wee bit hard to explain Yuukii, but all you needed was skin tone, height, details and clothing (gender too) for Yuukii as they all look the same other then the way the horns point and the gobblers.

For Seya, well her species should just be 'Demi God' as she is a sort of one. Her design is just fine otherwise, she may have power of a certian element you all ready know is part of her haritage so yeah.



Tiana_M: you are sooo close and yet so very far away. Did you not see my sign up? because it seems you added to it with out permission, I didn't ask for a history so I really can't accept it. You could have pmed me and asked to do a history.

There is a reason why I didn't ask for one though, as because the world is rather hard to explain, I thought it would be easier on everyone to make a history with out posting it. As most do that when a history isn't required.
I am also not sure about the history as this war has been going on for a long time, a lioness and her cub should not be wandering about unguarded when zombies and chaos dragons are about. They would probably just stay with the Yuukii if exiled.

Also, the manimals don't have skin, at least not human skin. A lion would have the lion fur all over her body. She isn't a hybrid (a human with animal ears or tail or things like that) but a furry or an anthromorph meaning she is a wee bit more animal then human. Humans don't exist in this world anyway.

Denied for now, but you are awfly close so I am going to allow you to make corrections.
 

Tiana_M

Espeon Hybrid
Alright I fixed my sign-up form.
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
sorry for the long wait Tiana_M, this is accepted. Sadly I wont be doing this rpg, I am finding the members of these forms less and less interesting in what I have to offer. (Mainly at the lacking of rpgs I know and the income of new rpgers still learning)

Sorry, I really was pleased with your edit and I wish we could have rped, but this rpg calls for more then two players.

If you are interesting I have one last try rpg, which you could edit this character a bit to work in it, as it is about an anthro species to fit into.

anyway, this rpg is closed due to small intrest.
 
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