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This Is The Last Thread For Vavavant's Sprits!!

Are they cool?

  • THEY ALL ARE REALLY COOL!!!!!!!

    Votes: 1 5.3%
  • THEY ARE COOL!!!!

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • THEY ARE OK!!

    Votes: 6 31.6%
  • Work on them

    Votes: 6 31.6%
  • This is ugly!

    Votes: 6 31.6%

  • Total voters
    19

vavavant

Gastrodon wanne be..
Alright. I make all exept the pre evo and the guy form team Galaxy. ARE They cool?

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LookinMap.jpg

Galaxysprits.png

JYNX.jpg

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Divers.jpg

Corsola.png

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The Edge

大明
Pretty cool. I love the kiwi.
EDIT: I just noticed the supposed jynx evo, it looks...o_0...Scary and pornographic.
 
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jakepwnsjoo

Pokemon Shaman
Your character sprites look a little akward (sp?) I can tell you switched heads and recolored, but some of your recolors are lacking shade and a good outline.
 

vavavant

Gastrodon wanne be..
I lvoe ur critic! I will work on them!;292; ;292;
 
C

Chip

Guest
EEEK!!!!!! The Jynx evo has returned........:p

Kamon even asked for that to be removed from his forums. Gee I wounder why? :p
 
C

Chip

Guest
That Jynx evo reminds me of something but I can't think what though, was it off a TV program of a computer game?

Well I'm sure I've seen something like that somewhere.
 

Shadow_Fox

Chaotic Dreamer
Well, some are okay, but I would highly suggest that you don't copy, paste and flip the image to make the other half. Anti-aliasing things like the sunglasses wouldn't be a horrible idea either.

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~Lati Master~

Play With Fire
The Kiwi and the Team Galaxy sprites are cool.
 

Vantage

I ain't witty, so no
O.K., you need serious help. Your sprites are awful.

Trainers:

Right. When you make custom trainers, you should always make sure the parts blend in. Take, for example, the swimmer mixed with May (First section, in pink). The head is too small, and the sunglasses look awful.

Speaking of the sunnies, they're a good idea, but not very well done.

Map:

It would be fine if you used a kit. There are two avalible, and I prefer the older one. Also, I suggest you perhaps read a tutorial or look at some other examples.

Scrathces:

No, no, no, no, no. They're too flat, have boring poses, are stupid concepts all bar the Chimecho evo, and have AWFUL, ALL BLACK outlines.

The Jynx evo looks like a hooker with a love-heart shaped head. Sorry, but it's true.

I can't really give you any advice, because I've never tried them, other than to stop scratching until you improve. Start out with recoulours, revamps and mixes, then move on.

Pre-evo and Team Galaxy sprite:

If you didn't make it, don't post unless you have permission. What's worse - You haven't given the person who made them credit!

File type:

Do. Not. Save. As. Jpeg.

Save them as PNG. ALWAYS! It will make them look much better, trust me.

Final words:

If you ever want some advice from me, please, PM me! I'm not a nasty person (even though it may seem like it), and I'm willing to help. Just to clarify, though, I'm not an expert by any means.

And remember - You will improve over time of you listen to people's advice. I hope to see you in a few months as a very improved spriter!
 

Wild Cherry

Magma Commander
I leave more personallity in my sprites in tightly coiled bundles in the toilet.

The sratches arent very interesting, the mixes need more work, and NEVER totaly use black outlines, it spoiled the pic.

The trainers arent great, some of their bodys are whack, heads too small, glasses are also outa place
 
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