Housyasei-san said:
oh wow! these are really good! I like them alot!
The first is my favorite and also the cutest! But I think the third is your best one, and also extremely cute!
Critz. (oh what? He's critiquing(sp?) them?
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Mooneglo: well done with most everythinespecialy the background. The hand nearest you is abit odd-looking or flat, and her, er, breasts, not exactly proportional. Her right one is a bit too pointy. And her right eye is a bit too low and small.
Foxglove: Pretty good. Her head looks a bit out of proportion (too big). And her, er, breasts, again, a bit to small and pointy. Also her sleeve seems to widen out way too much at the bottom. otherwise, good job.
Beautiful Hana-san: check title "beautiful", I totaly agree. It's extremely cute and well proportioned. only problems are, the hands aren't exactly right, and her leg seems to thin out too much. I love the chibi-sort-of pic behind her. its really cute too. (and the breasts well done and perfectly proportioned. ^^; )
Cosmo and Tails: nice setting, (and good shipping,whatever the shipping's called) The backgound here is very well done, and well blended. But the two figures aren't as well blended, they seem to stand out, like they were cut and pasted from another picture. Everything's smooth except for them, the outlines stand out too much. As for the figures, Cosmo's breasts again aren't well proportioned, they're too small and pointy to flow well with her body. Tails' fur seems to look too pokey, not as soft as it would seem to need to be, and his ear is a bit too pointy too. Otherwise pretty good.
I'll bet you spent alot of time on that one, but I'm sorry there's so much I can see that doesn't look quite well with it...
But you are really improving. Keep it up. I hope to see more of this quality work sometimes. If you really work hard on your pics being the best they can, they'll be spectacular works of art.
