Thunderstar's sprite thread, v3

[Kalavinka]

No lipstick Wobba for you

(Alright, my Scizgon edit STILL won't show up, no matter how many times I try to upload it. This is as close as I can get to actually uploading it: http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/2530/scizgoncomparisonfd0.png)

Revamps:

Pixel-overs:

Shadows (view them at):

http://s136.photobucket.com/albums/q177/MeteoricSwarm/Shadows/

Mixes:

Scratches:

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[pnoiboi]

Are they just recolors? Im too lazy to check....but I like them.

 

[Kalavinka]

...they're revamps. Did you not read what was above the sprites?

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[pnoiboi]

Theyre good. How do you do WBG?

 

[~Lucario Master~]

All of them are very good. All I can say is that Lapras looked like you used mostly a black outline instead of shading the outline.

 

[Amaisan Axis]

The outlining on Bellsprout is pretty shaky. There are 3 or 4 pixels of the lighter outline where there should be the darker outline color on the head. And I think the stems should be outlined all the way, even though they are so thin.

 

[spareux]

The revamps really strike my interest. They're not bad at all, particularly the Lapras, and it's nice to see people other than myself trying some D/P shades.
However, there area few things I have to bring up.

On Ho-Oh's head, on it's yellow curled body parts, the closest one to us has a black outline down it, when personally I think it should be the gold outline colour. The other two should be left as are. The green sections of the wing's outline seems somewhat dotty to me but I'm not entirely sure. The beak also seems a tad to big, but mabye it's just me.

One mistake you have made on Lapras (but don't worry I do this all the time) is that you have not recoloured the G/S/C black outline with the darker D/P outline.

And there's a bit of yellow outline at the back of Bellsprout's head that touches the darker brown outline of the stem, making it contrast too much imo.

Overall, pretty good. I'll be watching this thread for updates =D

 

[Kalavinka]

Thanks, I'll edit my sprites when I get the time.

And the reason why I didn't redo the black part of Lapras' outline is because the sprite I was using had a COMPLETELY black outline (as in, Red=0, Blue=0, Green=0).

New sprite:

Yes, I'm aware that the belly and outline is messed up.

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[pokeboy sarab]

well these are great revamps but bellsprout legs are not properly outlined imo

 

[Kalavinka]

My threads always die ;_;

New sprites:

Both are pixel-overs.

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[POKErUsAm]

I think the Dratini could use more dark shadeing on the tail because it is beind it. Unless it is curling to the side but I know it isn't doing that.

 

[Kalavinka]

New sprites YAY (specifically shadows):

http://s136.photobucket.com/albums/q177/MeteoricSwarm/Shadows/

There's a large amount already, so I'm not going to be able to fit all of them in my first post once I REALLY get the ball rolling (so to speak).

~TS ;405;;392;

 

[TiagoGR]

The Bellsprout needs better outline, but the rest is great.

 

[Poke doll]

tell me how to white be gone things. Anyway nice job fixing bellsprout.

 

[kapslock]

Well, not bad at all chum. your revamps are good, and gosh sorry if i can't say anymore. your the first real good spriter here. So uh, i guess i should leave before i start to spam >_>. *As stated though, your Lapras sprite's outline isn't shaded, or so it looks like. then again, I'm still not used to D/P shading >_>

 

[pnoiboi]

You removed the outline in the recolors..

 

[Kalavinka]

No, I just made an all-colour outline seeing as a black outline would look out-of-place.

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[Firebird306]

Revamps: They're great, the shading on Lapras is excellent but Bellsprout's outline looks a little shaky as previously stated.

Pixel Overs: Flawless from what I can see.

Shadows: The colouring is amazing, the best looking one is Kyogre IMO.

Keep going! ^____^

 

[Kalavinka]

Okay, you can ignore the initial Scizgon, I edited it a bit when I realised I forgot some shading (the quotes still hold true though):

(Aaaand...my first sprite for the new year (and my first GOOD mix in ages, incidentally; Flylotic was kinda rushed):

Tail is completely scratch (with the exception of the pink part at the end), and so is the head 'crest' (I don't know what to call it). The crest is very messy IMO, so help on it would be nice.

And a mix I made for the Fusions contest:

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[TiagoGR]

The first fusion on your last post has too much black outline. And the second one is good, though the hair in front of eye isn't nice.