tips on this cusomt sprite

[Shack]

its suppose to be a Seviper Evo that looks like a Naga. I think the head looks awkward. How does it look and what should i fix?


*EDIT*: Here is the new sprite.... so how is it now?

 

[Comis Patronus]

More effects and realistic gestures. Kinda feels bumpy on top and incomplete. I know Naga but that doesn't seem to be a bit like a fusion. Effects- some things that could help him stand out more but never mind, it's not necessary.

 

[Shack]

what do you mean by effects? i see the bumpyness, i wanted the head to be someone pointy

 

[POKErUsAm]

It is very scary....
Not in a bad way but try to make it more smoother and not as tall.
Plus, it might look better if its nails were white.

 

[Shack]

i made it shorter and white claws

they kinda throw off the color scheme

i had them red to be omore like the tail

 

[Comis Patronus]

I think red was better; just the bumpiness a bit and the muscle structure that needs work.

 

[POKErUsAm]

The nails I think are better now and his hight but he does need more muscle.

 

[MAJINX24]

the second looks really impressive
dont like its face much but still cool.. other suggestion.. make a new shape for on'm (the yellow circle things with the dot in them).. when most things evolve, designs on the creatures alter ever so slightly and rarely stay the same..

 

[Shack]

i wanted the arms to be long not big. Is the arms what makes it look bumpy?

i figured its suppose to be kinda quick and stuff so it shouldnt be all jacked

 

[POKErUsAm]

To avoid bumpyness, you see lines that make a 90 degree angle and that makes it look pretty bad.
Second: The tail is a little fused with the body and you might wanna fix it.

 

[Shack]

yea i know, i checked the sprite and there r no right anlged pixles.

Ill edit it tomorow or later tonight

thx for the input

EDIT: check my first post for the most recent update

EDIT: Any Feedback?

 

[Shack]

bump.... someone

 

[Nevermore]

i think it should have a bit of a neck... at the moment, it's head looks really squished into it's body. it's good though, this would make an awesome evo! maybe you should make a nagini version too, for male and female?